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Home»Fan Fiction»Gustakhi maaf kar de….(part-1)
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Gustakhi maaf kar de….(part-1)

taasfiaBy taasfiaJuly 4, 2017Updated:July 4, 201741 Comments5 Mins Read
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“Ab bohot ho gaya annika didi,ab mujhe lagtahe tumhe SSO ko Maaf kar hi dena chihiye.”(Now this is enough annika didi,I think you should forgive SSO now.)”
“SSO ke chamche,aaj badi SSO ki tarafdari karrahe tu,bata konsi rishwat diyahe tujhe,(sidekick of SSO ,tell me what bribe he has given you?)”
“Cheese Pasta and milkshake,”innocent answer from sahil.
Now this is enough and unbearable for annika.what can she do?How could she tell shivaay that she is not angry with him.
….…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
“Get out Annika,I have made a mistake to make you my wife.I have signed this divorce papers and GET OUT NOW”.
Shivaay was reminding the words that he told annika that day.And only two weeks before he came to know from omru that she is innocent,though he doesn’t know the fact that why she did that.But he felt no urgency in knowing that.If annika did that,there might be a grave reason,but that was not necessary.Now what matters to him the most,is his Paanika.
Annika,thinking about her,a smile crept on his face.
“Mere annika didi me bare me such rahe na aap?(thinking about my annika didi?)”
“How do you know?”
“My name is sahil.Sahil CHATURvedi,you were smiling so I understood.”
“Toh bats champ,kya haal hai?voh maani?(then tell me champ,what’s the situation? DId she agreed or not?)
“Haalat to abhibhi bohot hi gambhir hai kyunki voh to aapka nam sun bhi nahi sakti,maaf karna toh bohot hi door dikhayi de rahahe(the circumstances are not in your favour as annika didi is not even ready to hear your name.)”
“Time to do some ….ha ha ha,”shivaay laughed mysteriously
“Jiju,why are you laughing in this way???it is making me frightened.”
“Because now it is the time for SSO to do some action.”
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“O my maata,kyun mera shivaay Uss cheap larki me pass jaake behtha hai…kab vaapas ayega mere pass meri heera beta(why is shivay wasting his time on that cheap girl??when will he come back to me?)”
“Bura mat manna dhoti ma,lekin shivaay ko aap hi khoya hain vo bhi sirf or sirf aap ki khud ki gaalti se.Its entirely your fault.and even we support shivaay in this.so,You should not have any problem with annika bhabi.Kyunki aaj nehi to kaal ghar ki bahu ko that toh vaapas aanahi gain(soon or later the daughter-in-law of this house will come back,”Om told her with a sarcastic smile.
“This all happened because of you,why did you told….’
Pinky was cut off by Rudra,”What do you mean choti maa?don’t we know about your doings for ousting annika vabi,still we didn’t tell anything to shivaay .We only told him that Annika is innocent.But why she did so we haven’t told her yet.You should be grateful to us and even to annika bhabi…understood?”Rudy said in a calm yet angry voice.
Saying this ,they both left the spot.Pinky was speechless. Her inner self was killing her.Was she really wrong?
……………………………………………………………………………..……..…….. ……………………………..
Annika was cooking in her kitchen and suddenly,”Suno suno Mumbai vaasio,Is ghar mein rehti gain merit biwi Annika.Lekin voh mujhse naaraz gain,mujhse milna hi nehi chahti.Toh main,Kaanji aankhon wala baagad bills aaj aapna Jaan dene wala hoon,Goodbye.goodbye(listen you Mumbai people,In this house my wife annika lives.But she is angry with me.So I am giving my life.Goodbye goodbye)
“Shivaay,”Annika ran outside her home and saw a huge crowd in front of her house.
“Annika didi,SSO is giving her life by cutting his nerves.Stop him.”Saahil said in a notorious voice.
Annika was about to stop shivaay suddenly she noticed the eye wink given by shivvay to saahil.
“Ooh ,ye Sab ek mazaak hain.Aab dikhati hu bacchu,mazaa kisse kehtahe..(.ooh so this is all a prank,now I will teach you lesson,”thinking this she went inside.
“Why isn’t she coming outside?Aab kya karoon,varna usse manane ki chakkar mein ye Jo drama shuru huwa vo toh dangerous mod lene vala hain(Now what to do,while convincing her,I think I have to lose my life..)
“Annika,baahar as jao main Jaaan de dunga Jaan de dunga(Annika,come outside ,otherwise I will die)”,Shivaay said in a dramatic voice.
“Bhayiya toh accha khasa drama karraha hain,mujhe toh yakeen gain ki is frame me baad to bhabi that mein aa hi jayengi(Bhaiyya is doing a great drama,I think after this,bhabi has to return home..”Rudra said.
“I also think so,”Om told him.
Omru were standing amongst the crowd while watching the drama while shivaay was pondering why annika didn’t come yet.
Suddenly annika came out.”I knew it.I knew that you will come.You love me a lot.Where is your bag?”Shivaay exclaimed with joy.
“Nehi,main toh aapko ye chakku dene aayi this.Is chakku Maine nayi nayi kharidi hai.Toh aagar aap issue aapna haat kaatenge toh aaramse upar pohuch jaayenge(No,I came to give this knife.If you cut your nerve with this,You will die at once,”Annika said while controlling her laughter seeing shivaay’s expression.
“What???????”Shivaay shouted.
Omru cupped his face with a shocking expression.
“Aab kya karoon?yaa phir maroon??”(Now what to do?or die?)
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Done with this chappy.Tell me how is this and tell me about your gav part in the comments.I will love that.And I want many comments and only after that I will post next part.Good luck

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    41 Comments

    1. Shreya on July 4, 2017 5:14 pm

      Awesome too funny but I really love this one you nailed it Haan ?????please do next soon dear????

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 6:48 pm

        Thank you

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 6:49 pm

        Thanks for this sweetest comment of yours

    2. Dwet on July 4, 2017 5:23 pm

      Wow! Di it’s awesome. Please please please post next ASAP. ?

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 6:51 pm

        Thanks.But don’t call me di.maybe I am younger than you.I am only 16

    3. Sairish on July 4, 2017 5:33 pm

      i totally loved it …amazing chappy

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 6:53 pm

        Thanks for loving it

    4. Anju on July 4, 2017 5:47 pm

      Awesome

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 7:01 pm

        Thanks for reading,commenting and encouraging.

    5. Archisha on July 4, 2017 5:50 pm

      Awesome

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:33 pm

        Thanks for commenting

    6. nikita_jai29 on July 4, 2017 6:41 pm

      It is awesome dear

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:34 pm

        Thanks for reading and commenting.I love to read comments

    7. Sairan on July 4, 2017 6:51 pm

      Fabbbbbbbb ?
      Lovelyy with a Greattttt twist

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thanks dear a lot for commenting.It encourages me

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:39 pm

        ??????

    8. SeyZu on July 4, 2017 7:00 pm

      I really lol aftr anika said no I came to give this chakku ….. too much funny & cute

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:45 pm

        ???????????☺☺☺☺

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:45 pm

        I am on cloud 9after hearing your comment

    9. Sagithya on July 4, 2017 7:16 pm

      Aww it was awesome yaar… Excited for the next part.. post it soon

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:44 pm

        Thanks dear.Will try to post the next part asap

    10. pooja26 on July 4, 2017 7:21 pm

      kitna bada natak h yeh shivaay…….
      haayyee mai toh maan bhi jaati uski kanji aankhe dhek kr 😉 😉
      fantastic part…….
      post asap……
      tc…..

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:42 pm

        I too like his kanji eyes.thanks for such a sweet comment

    11. alekhika20 on July 4, 2017 7:25 pm

      Superb update

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:40 pm

        Thank you very much sweety

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thank you ???????

    12. UF on July 4, 2017 7:40 pm

      AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC FUNNY??? OUT STANDING SUPERB??????

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 8:39 pm

        Thanks for so many compliments dear

    13. Banita on July 4, 2017 11:20 pm

      Wow!!!!!! AMAZING nd FUNNY one dr…. sso became nso#nautanki singh oberoi# hahaha…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…

      • taasfia on July 5, 2017 12:18 pm

        ?????

    14. Arpita on July 4, 2017 11:22 pm

      Fantastic dear , plz plz post next part ASAP. .and if i can’t comment. .ten don’t worry i wil be silent reader…

      It is really really funny. Continue it….

      • taasfia on July 5, 2017 12:47 pm

        Thanks for reading and please keep reading like this.It motivates me

    15. Annika51 on July 5, 2017 10:03 am

      Amazing dear..
      Loved the past part when Anika give him knife..
      That was too funny and Shivaay Sahil part was also amazing..
      Update soon

      • taasfia on July 5, 2017 12:46 pm

        Thank you so much dear for your encouragement

    16. Ankita27 on July 6, 2017 11:39 am

      Amazing update… loved it…

    17. taasfia on July 6, 2017 2:42 pm

      Thank you dear.keep reading

    18. Arthi on July 6, 2017 11:20 pm

      Sorry for late comment Shivay became a big nautanki…..and omru always cute oly…..and this part was superb.

      • taasfia on July 7, 2017 1:38 pm

        Thanks dear.happy reading

      • taasfia on July 7, 2017 1:41 pm

        No need to say sorry.You commented and liked this part this is a matter of great enjoyment of me????

    19. salma on July 8, 2017 11:43 am

      Cute…..???plzz update

      • taasfia on July 8, 2017 2:44 pm

        ???????

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