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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»The guitar player a SHRAMAN OS “neeto ki birthday special” ( ek duje ke vaaste )
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The guitar player a SHRAMAN OS “neeto ki birthday special” ( ek duje ke vaaste )

MarieBy MarieNovember 1, 20166 Comments6 Mins Read
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Heyoooo guys!!!!!
Sprry sorry I wanted to post this early gains but due to fainting couldn’t able to so I hope ke its get publish before 12 ……
As u all know that it’s our cutipie neeto also known as leeti (late+neeti) birthday……so HAPPIEST BIRTHDAY DARLING!!! ????
MAY UR ALL DESIRES COME TRUE MY PRINCESS!!!??????
SO ON THIS HAPPIEST DAY I WROTE AN OS SPECIALLY FOR MY GAL AMD YES FOR ALL U GUYS!????

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT…..,
So let’s begin:
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Story starts with…….a girl POV…..
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“Hy m suman….suman khurana….my friends calls me sumo…..”
She was standing in her room which is full with guitars and its posters…..
“*laughs* now u know that I have a craze of guitars well u r right I do…..n in past 2 months……I found a great guitar player…..I don’t know how bs I found….actually m a bad guitar player….but he. ❤️ Ufff…..he plays it so well…..Ooohhh I forgot to tell u where did we meet…..???”
“Well I usually go to cafeteria to meet my friends….one day I was sitting then a heard someone playing guitar….after somthing he started to sing also….I was shocked.lost in his melodious voice??
It was somthing I never ever heard before…….I was just listing for atleast half an hour an then…..he went with his friends….after that I always go to cafeteria to listen his voice….to listen the guitar tune…….but foolish me I never ask his name…..he also never saw me….cause I never met him……but one day……I got courage from my friends…..they said…..go n meet him….atleast onece ask him to teach u also…..I said ok….n went to him……”

Now the POV ends here…..
Sumo goes to the boy…..
S: hey…..
They boys is already sitting with there more friends….
B: who me…?? Hy
S: hey actually u play guitar very well…..
B: well thank u so much fr the compliment…..
S:umm actually…………wo………….Mai……….
She looks towards her friends who signals her to say…say…
B: umm wo Kia??? Wanna tell me somthing???
S: no…yes…wo actually….I want to ask what’s ur name…???
The boys (friends of the boy) starts laughing….
S gets embarrassed…..
Boy laughs too…..
B: yr it’s just a small thing n u were asking like….I thought pata na Kia pooche gi…..???? well my name is Shr….Shr malhotra….what’s ur ?!
S: it’s suman khurana……
Shr: I see…nice name btw
S:urs too…..
Shr: thanks acha why don’t u join us…???
S: no actually my friends are sitting there……so gotta go…..
Shr: oh ok ……by
S: by
Sumo goes n sits with her friends nervously…..
One: what did he said….??? What’s his name….
S: Shr…..
Two: wow n did u ask him abt teaching u!!!?
S: no yr!!!! Abhi Nai…!!!
Two: ok ok……
SHRAMAN looks at eachother n smiled……

POV
“Hmm that’s was the….umm…happy…no no no happiest day…finally I met him…ask him his name…..”
After that sumo usually some to the cafeteria so does Shr….n they became good friends…..also exchange there num…..
They also asked minor questions…..
S: how old are u…???
Shr: 24…n u….???
S: 22…..
Shr: wow! Younger. ? Chalo koi Nai…..
S: well what’s ur hobby….??
Shr shows her guitar….
This……
S: hahah I knew it…
Shr: what’s urs…???
S: same……
Shr: what really…??????
S: hmm…..
Shr: yr that’s actual Mai very great plzz play it….
(He gives her his guitar…)
I also want to hear ur voice…..
S: no no I can’t…..
Shr: no no no u have to ok no prob I will teach u….
Sumo gets happy…..
Shr comes to her n teaches her…..n she plays it very well….
But in bw this they came closer to eachother…..
Spboth share a cute eyelock…..
Shr: ahhh m m sorry….
S: no it’s ok…….
Shr smiles….

U played it very well….
S: thank u!!!!
Shr: but still u r weak at some points ……..
S: Hahahah then u will teach.me….
Shr: why not…..
(They both smile)
Pov:
“Hah that was an amazing day….I spent with him….ahhhhh yrrr I wish that day sho.f never end….but it had…..bus after that I decided to tell him that I loved him….yes yes yes!!!! I loved him since the frst day I saw him…I heard him…..”

“But I didn’t met him after that….n it’s been two days….i was sad… But I got heart broken…..when my mom told me that she fixed my alliance with her friend son….”
“I was shocked…..didn’t know how to react…..”

“Then an idea came in my mind…I msged Shr….to tell him that I loved him…n if he loves me too….then I will break..this marriage…I msged him n asked ‘where r u?’
He replied the same that his marriage is fixed with his fathers friend daughter….I was ready to die at the moment….”

“I cried whole night……..n next day…….I get ready in a casual dress the boy was but to come with his family”
POV ends…..
Sumo was walking down through the stairs……..
Neeto her sis comes…..
N: DI…..yr jiju is so handsome…….
S: hmmm……
(She was upset)
N: yr DI r u ok??
S; Han I m….
Priya sumo mom come to her…
P: sumo u go to garden…..I will Sent Shr there…….
(Sumo didn’t notice the name…..n goes)
Sumo was standing…..when she heard a melodious voice from behind…..
Sumo……………
Sumo was shocked……
She turned back……..n what she was thinking was true……so true……it was her Shr…..
Shr also get shocked afters seeing his lady love…….yes he also loved her…
S: Shr tum…………….
Shr: sumo………
(Tears rolls down from SHRAMAN face)
S: starts to go……
Shr stops her…..
Shr: Sumo plzz don’t go….
S: I hate u ……u didn’t even think abt me….n want to do a marriage???
Shr: who was ready????
Sumo Luked at him in shock……
S: what…????
Shr: Matlab ye ke….I came here to say no to gal I wanted to tell her that I loved somebody else……
S: n who is she….????
Shr: she is someone very special to me…..why whole I tell u…???
S: Shr!!!
(She hits him playfully!)

S: when……??
Shr: when I first saw u………
Sumo blushes n looks down……
Shr makes her look at him
Shr: DO u also feel the same???
S: can’t u see…?? U dumbo!!
Shr: Hahahah me dumbo!!!! Now u show u
He lifts her in his arms happily…..
S: Hahahahha Shr…..
Shr: no I won’t leave u
S: Hahahha when did I say….?????
Shr comes closer to her…….
S: don’t ever go again…,
Shr: I won’t……
Both hugged…..

—————–HAPPY ENDING——————–
Hah so I m done with this one hope u all liked it if no then I m also ready fr tomatoes chappals n eggs?????feel free to throw them
N again HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY SWEETO PRINCESS NEETO!!!!!!!!
❤️. ❤️
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❤️. ❤️
Hope u like my mehnat!!!!! ?????????????????????
Love u my darling muahhhhhhhhhhh????????

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    6 Comments

    1. ufaaq on November 2, 2016 1:33 pm

      hey whats up love???
      bola tha khud ko kbhi to serious le lia kro pr tmhein r=to mere sunnini nae naw kro apni marzi
      the os was ammmmmmmmaaaaaazzzzziiiiiiiinnnngggg
      i mean too gud liked it loved it
      awesome
      keep rocking like thia
      take care

    2. Fatimagulesarfraz on November 2, 2016 1:36 pm

      Maria !!!! Awwwwwwesome one yar ???????????????????????????????

    3. Prettypreeti on November 2, 2016 4:34 pm

      Maroooo meei sister I loved it thoroughly it was great bday gift too good.
      Amazingaaaa.
      Post moreee.
      Love u

    4. Fatarajo on November 2, 2016 4:57 pm

      Wow nice and unique one shot ???

    5. Zainab on November 2, 2016 10:01 pm

      This was just so amazing. I loved it so much ?

    6. Ariana on November 4, 2016 6:34 am

      Marooooooooooooooo twinniiieeee
      I’m glad to read ur os after ages! Sry for a very late comment but I loved it!!!
      k I need to leave so bye for now
      tc

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