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My Gorgeous Bride (RagLak-SS)- SHOT 5 (Last Shot)

Hi guys this is Soundari bidding you all adieu with my last shot of the ff. I’m not sure whether I’ll be back. May be this can be my last work too.. anyways let’s see what’s in store for me..until then take care and be happy..
As far the previous shot concerned I have read all the comments in it and I;m totally overwhelmed by it. Thank you so much for your comments and I;m really very sorry that I couldn’t reply you back but I read each and every comment . thank you so much for it. Here goes the last shot of this ff. hope you like

Recap (a brief of whatever happened from start) : l

aksh proposes swara in front of ragini . ragini decides to sacrifice laksh for swara. Sanskar truth out. Sanskar’s feelings for ragini. Swara drug addict. Ragini helps out swara from her situation. Swara ran off ditching laksh in mandap. Everyone blame ragini for laksh condition. Ragini forced to marry to laksh. Sanskar heartbroken ( hope you could revived your memory about whatever happened)
After the marriage is over ragini goes to get blessings of her parents and dadi but no one blessed her except sumi. They all looked at her with disgust while ragini is pained to see all this. Laksh who was watching all this felt bad for ragini but he couldn’t do anything as he himself is heartbroken now. Ragini’s bidaai takes place but it was more like they were throwing out of the house. Out of all these commotions one heart is still bleeding witnessing all this which is none other than sanskar’s . once again his love has been snatched away from him and even this time he couldn’t do anything. He weeped silently and keeps telling to his heart to forget ragini as he is his brother’s wife now. After all the post marriage rituals are over ragini is made to sit at the middle of the bed for her suhaagraat but she is behaving like a statue kept for decoration on bed. Laksh tried to convince his parents that it’s not time for all this as he is already broken but they didn’t budge. Sighing loudly he enters his oops their room and found ragini sitting a doll on the bed with her face covered with gunghat. He slowly walked to her and sat at the corner of the bed and whisper calls her name
Lak : ragini
Ragini who was nervous from the moment he came inside the room raises her head up to look at laksh
Lak : please change into something comfortable and come while I wanna discuss something with you and the washroom is over there.
Ragini who was expecting for a furious laksh is confused by his behavior. So she took a simple salwar suit from her bag and left to change. After coming back she looks at laksh who was in deep thinking. Feeling her gaze on him laksh looked up to find ragini and asks her to sit beside him. She sits hesitantly beside him while laksh starts speaking..
Lak : I know ragini you are not at fault anywhere here. You just tried to help your sister but everything got collapsed. But only one thing which upsets me is why didn’t you trust me enough to tell the truth to me? Did you think that I won’t accept it? Didn’t you trust your friend even that much.
Ragini was more surprised because he was questioning all these to her as if she is the one who he was about to marry.

In this whole convo he didn’t even mention the word swara or how she is or what will she do now.he speaks as if it’s her responsibility to explain everything more than swara.
Laksh who found her lost shakes her lightly to come back to reality. Ragini jerked and looked at laksh and he asks,
Lak : what happened ragini? Why are you not answering? Where were you lost?
Rag :w..wo… la..laksh.. I already asked swara to inform you whatever happened and she said that she will but only today I got to know that she didn’t
Laksh chuckles sadly and wiped the tiny drops of tears formed on his eyes and said,
Lak : k ragini.. it’s late..u go and sleep.. I’ll sleep on couch..
Saying so he was about to take a pillow but ragini’s sweet voice stopped him.
Rag : but laksh.. is that all you wanna talk about?
Laksh gets surprised and says,
Lak : haan .. what else?
Rag : wo.. don’t you wanna know about swara? Don’t you wanna find out how she is? Aren’t yo upset that she has hidden this from you?
Laksh smiled gently at her and keeps a hand on her head and says,
Lak : nahi ragini.. till yesterday she meant the world to me.. but not anymore.. whether she wanted to trust me or inform me or not is not my concern anymore has her opinions now holds no value to me. I just want to know whether my wife trusted me or not and you did that. That’s enough for me. And as far her safety concerned yeah I do worried of her as she is my wife sister and it’s my duty to take care of her. So tomorrow her jeeju is gonna lodge a missing complaint on police station and will definitely find her back. So you don’t worry about her and sleep peacefully now.
Ragini who was dumbstruck all this while as he even forgot to close her mouth
Rag : is she dreaming or what?
She couldn’t understand anything.it’s been past 12 and still she is struggling to get some sleep. She was simply closing her eyes but sleep doesn’t bless her with its magic. Within a day her whole world has become ulta. She doesn’t know whether she wanna give her marriage a chance or not. After sometime she woke up to drink water and found that even laksh has not slept a wink and is simply staring at the ceiling in deep thoughts.
Ragini smiled gently remembering his speech a while back. She is very happy to hear the word wife from his mouth and was shocked to hear him referring himself swara’s jeeju. She blushed a little as she remembered how he kept his hand on her head.
Rag (in mind) : I know laksh.. even though you are acting well.. I very well know how much pain you are being through now as once I have been into the same.. but still you said those words to me.. till you entered the room I was fully prepared to talk about our divorce to you as I thought that there was nothing worth in our relation to save for but after listening to that mature speech of yours I can very well say that there is a lot more to save in this marriage…
Thinking so she again laid down and all three (RagLakSan) had a sleepless night tahtr day.
Next day morning:
Ragini arranged all the items for laksh for his office and went to prepare breakfast. As it is her first day as per ritual she cooks the food for the day. Laksh who was getting a royal treatment from morning is now getting a feast in the name of breakfast in the morning. He wondered how could someone be so perfect when he can’t even do his own work.

After breakfast laksh came to his room to get his bag and while leaving he gently hits ragini and when she was about to fall he hold her by her waist. That’s when he noticed how beautiful and intense his wife’s eyes are. He felt himself to be lost in those black and white oceans. He slowly brought his face nearer to her while ragini is breathing heavily who was already nervous with the intimate action. Laksh came dangerously close to her with his cheeks touching hers and he slowly whispered on her ears,
Lak : you look beautiful wifey…
Saying so he made her stand straight and winked at her and left for his office. While ragini blushed like a full riped tomato.
Sanskar who was watching it all from a distance felt like someone was stabbing his heart but also realizes that it’s always laksh who is meant for ragini and he should move on..
Days passes by,
Raglak became more close to each other and was happily spending their married life with healthy flirting and cute morning romances. Both are head overheels in love with each other but are afraid to propose the other one. Sanskar has finally moved on from ragini and is spending all his time only on business to keep him busy and to forget the past.
One fine day :
Laksh was very happy that day as he somehow convinced ragini’s family to forgive her and after a long apologise section they too forgave her, thanks to laksh’s efforts. Ragini is still not aware of it as laksh has planned it a surprise gift for her after his proposal. Yes that evening laksh decided to propose ragini
Laksh was leaving for the office when he gets a call from sanskar from office who left early for a meeting. Laksh answers the call while sanskar asks him to bring a file which was kept on his table drawer as he forgot it and it’s important for the next meeting. Laksh cuts the call goes to sanskar room and searches for the file. When he found the file he was about to close the table drawer but suddenly a piece of paper which seems to be some letter falls on his feet. ( yep your guess is right .it’s the same letter sanskar wrote to propose ragini after swalak marriage). Laksh opens it and reads and his eyes were filled with tears and his hands began to shake. He felt like someone is stabbing him continuously. He falls on the floor crying and atlast somehow composed himself and left the place. He reached his office and does all the works absentmindedly.
Lak (in mind) : sanskar’s loves ragini? But how? Why? Why does this happens to me always? Already I was guilty of the death of sanskar’s first love now without my knowledge I have snatched his second love too. Why? Why am I born to snatch only my brother’s love? Should I give ragini to him as repentence?no no no how can I even think that? She is my ragini. My wife . now my life. How will I see her with someone else. But did ragini also loved sanskar? No I don’t think so..

Like this the whole day he spent confused and pained. At evening laksh reaches home and finds sanskar already at home. He is not in a mood to talk with anyone right now. So he simply leaves to his room and takes a quick shower and goes to sleep.
From that day onwards laksh started avoiding ragini and always kept a distance from her. Ragini who was leading a blissful life all these days thought that laksh loved but his sudden change in behavior leaves her confused. She doesn’t know what to do..one side she was happy that atlast her family forgave her while other side she is sad due to laksh ignorance.

One fine day :
Ragini who was on her way to kitchen slips and was about to fall when sanskar caught her by holfing her arms. Ragini thanked him and was about to leave when she found a furious laksh standing at the doorway witnessing it. He furiously drags ragini and locks her in his room from outside and goes to sanskar and started beating him blue and black. Sansakr who was not expecting this asks him what is wrong with him while laksh pours out all the frustration he had which he had bottled up all this while and falls down crying. Sanskar understood laksh condition and felt pity on him.he slowly moves towards laksh and keeps a hand on his shoulder and says,
San : laksh, it’s true that I loved ragini but it was always one side. I thought after your marriage with swara I would propose her but ragini is not aware of any of these things. Her heart mind everything is filled only by you laksh. Even a blind person can see that then why can’t you? The moment you got married to her I forgot her and from then she is only my brother’s wife. How could you doubt such a pure relation laksh?
Sanskar asked disgusted while laksh hugged him and cried
Lak : I’m sorry bhai.. please forgive me.. please bhai … please
Sanskar(smiling lightly) : achcha chalo.. now go and pour all your emotions and romance to ragini and not to me.
Laksh looked gratefully at him and left to look for his angel while sanskar smiled satisfied.

@ragLak room:
Ragini kept banging the door as she was afraid as she never seen laksh so furious before. She doesn’t know what happened to him. Then suddenly the door opens with a loud noise where comes laksh as tired as well ashandsome as ever.
Before ragini could anything to him laksh slammed his lips on her and raini stood froze. All the feelings he has been bottling up all this while comes out in that form of a kiss. It was such passionate one that both were lost in it. The wild passionate kiss somehow turned to a gentle one and laksh bites her lower lip askin for entrance which she obeyed without any resistance and their tongues were fighting fo dominance. After what felt like ages both raglak broke the kiss and both started breathing heavily due to lack of oxygen. Laksh merged his forehead with hers and spoke panting,
Lak : I love you ragini
Ragini blushed at it and also whispers : I too love you laksh
Lak: please forgive me ragini..
Rag (confused) : but for what laksh?
Laksh slowly narrated whatever happened and ragini had tears in her eyes.
Rag (cupping his face) : it’s k laksh . whatever happened is not yours or anybody’s fault. It’s just the stuation. Lets both whatever happened till now as as of now only our love matters to us.
Laksh looks lovingly at her and takes her to a bone crushing hug. After that he lifted he up in bridal style and places on their bed.
At that night those two beautiful souls became one. (huh.. u naughty guys.. don’t expect hot romance always.. I will include hot romance only once in awhile as u r all small children.. k now get back to the story)

Morning time :
Ragini is lying naked on laksh’s bare chest who has encircled her in his protective arms without letting her go . there was a peaceful silence between them while both their hearts were jumping in joy. Their peace is disturbed by a phone call placed on their bed side table. Laksh takes it and looks at the caller id and frowns..
Lak : hello… yeah inspector.. is it.. k I’m coming soon.. please hold on..
Saying so he looks at happily at ragini and says “they have found swara”
Raglaksan reached the police station where they find swara in a most depressed way. She was simply staring at a blank space while ragini ran to her and cried hugging her. The police informed them that swara has undergone physical abuse by her lover rajat who was constantly using her by drugging her. One day unable to tolerate it anymore she herself killed rajat and surrendered herself to the police. Since rajat is a criminal the court forgiven her crime stating it has an act of self defence. She has been treated all this while and doctor suggests her to undergo a rehab treatment. They thanked the inspector and took swara to home.

2 years leap :
The whole mm is decorated for the wedding . raglak came downstairs with laksh holding ragini’s hand as she was 7 months pregnant. They came near the mandap and looked smilingly at swasan who was about to tie the knot. After joining rehab center it was sanskar who took care of swara and helped her to overcome her addiction as he felt that both are undergoing the pain due to their loved ones. After two years swara is completely cured and the family also forgave her. Later swasan announced that they want to get married and everyone was very happy.
Rag : laksh, see na how pretty swara is looking. She is the most gorgeous bride I have ever seen.
Lak : what ? but I can’t see anything such. There was only once I witnessed a the world’s most gorgeous bride and that’s on my wedding day. From that day onwards I couldn’t find anything more gorgeous than my princess.
Saying so he kissed her foreheadwhile ragini had tears in her eyes. She keeps her hands on her bulged belly and her head on laksh shoulder and smiled contently.

The End
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