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Home»Fan Fiction»Good morning jaanu by ayushi OS
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Good morning jaanu by ayushi OS

ManyaBy ManyaApril 9, 201757 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey all!!ayushi is back!!with yet another short and sweet OS?!!i hoe u all enjoy and Haan plzzz do comment!!nhi toh mera ❤️ toot jaayega???plzzz??
Dev is sleeping
Sona:Dev get up!!
Dev:5 mins Sona!
Sona:I am going to the kitchen !!when I come back u should be up!!
After she comes back
Sona:DEVVVVV!u r still sleeping
Dev:5mins Sona!!

Sona:no more 5 mins get up now
Dev:hmmmmm…..
Sona:Mr Dev Dixit!!i said get up now!!
Dev:sonaaa(pleasing tone)
Sona:agar tum ab nhi uthe toh main tumhe iss Duniya se uthya dungi!!(if u don’t get up now!i will wake u from this world!)
Dev:hmmm……
Sona:ok!
brings a bucket full of water and pours it on him!!
Dev:Sonaaaaa!!?
Sona:what??
Dev:apne pati Ko koi aise Uthata hai(does anyone wakes his hubby like this)
Sona:toh kaise(then how?)
Dev:jaanu wake up!!!babu!!!good morning!!i love u!!
Sona:ohh……….ok next time aise hi uthanugi(next time I will wake u up like this)
Dev:next time kyun?(why next time??)
Sona:toh kab(then when)
Dev:abhi(now)
Sona:u r awake now!!

Dev lies down and closes his eyes!!
Dev:now I am asleep!!
Sona:Dev!!!what is this??get up!!
Dev:no!!!wake me up nicely!!
Sona:Dev tumhe Kisi ne bataya nhi(Dev didn’t anyone tell u?)
Dev:what??
Sona:that u r a complete idiot!!
Dev:bola tha Kisi ladki ne!(yes one girl told me)
Sona:who??(jealous)

Dev:abhi toh kaha tumne(u only said now)
Sona:very funny
Dev:I know that I am funny ab tumhe kiss bhi Karni hogi(now u have to kiss me also)
Sona:Dev!!! Kis Khushi mein(for what??)
Dev:for delaying so much!!
Sona:DEV!!
Dev:pretends to snore
Sona:ok fine!
Dev:that’s my wifey!!
Sona:good morning hubby!!!jaanu wake up!!!
Dev:pretends to sleep
Sona:get up now??
Dev:something is missing

Sona:what??
Dev:my kiss
Sona:URGHHHHH!! Ok fine
And kisses him on cheeks!!
Dev:good!!
Sona:ab utho!!(angrily) nautanki
Dev:Sona!!!tum krpkab wali Sonakshi se beyhadh wali Maya kyun ban gyi???(u became maya of beyhadh from Sonakshi in krpkab)

Sona:Tum Uth Rahe ho(r u getting up now?)
Dev:ok fine!!
Sona:nautanki!!?
Dev:u know my wife is a jalaad!!)
Sona:oh really!!!apne pati ki vajah se bani hogi Bechari!!bahut hua nahand jaao
Dev:Sona!!main Akele Naha Naha Kar bore Ho gya hoon
Sona doesn’t say anything
Dev:main tumhari khamoshi ka Kya Matlab nikalo??
Sona picks up a stick

Sona:bahut Ho gya !!subah se tang kiya hua hai!!ab main batati hoon tumhe!!
Dev:sona?apne pati Ke saath koi Aisa karta hai Kya??
Sona:nahi karti hoon
And after some running Dev runs into the bathroom!!sona was about to Leave the room when the bathroom door opens
Dev:ek baat toh main kehna hi bhool gya!!
Sona:Kya
Dev:I love u!!
Sona:I love u too
Dev:aayhaaye ab Mera man nhi Kar raha!!
And was about to come out
Sona:U!!
Dev:arey!!

In the bathroom
Dev:khunkaar!!
Sona:I heard that!!
Dev:I love u jaanu!!
Sona:Idiot!!
Dev:I heard that!!
Sona:I love u too jaanu!!!
So this is it guys!!
How was it??

Will post the ff……………I don’t know??whenever I will get time!!
And Haan guys!!

GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS!!!i know u love these one shots!!
So give me suggestions!!So that I can write more!!
Give me suggestions how u want to see DEVAKSHI?
Love u all

Ayushi
And Haan plzzz don’t forget to comment❤️?

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    57 Comments

    1. Ritika on April 9, 2017 12:18 am

      awesome. tumhe itni asse idea kaha se ate hai. post soon…

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:03 am

        Thanks Ritika??
        Ab dimaag mein aata hai and main likh deti hoon???
        Will post the ff soon?

    2. Aarti32 on April 9, 2017 12:29 am

      Awesome..It was damn cute..Lovely..U shud try n write an OS on Sonakshi’s pregnancy..Funny wala u know!!

      • akshita on April 9, 2017 1:04 am

        I agree with you sonakshi’s pregnancy is one topic I always think abt ki agr Dev uske saath hota toh life kaisi hoti???…

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:06 am

        I too wanted them?
        I will write a few shots from the first day to the delivery?

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:04 am

        Thanks??
        And will surely write the OS and yeah agar main likhungi toh woh funny hi hoga?

    3. Vaishaali on April 9, 2017 2:04 am

      Try and write one os on sona and ishwari drunk scene….both of them in full too talli mode…???

      And yup…this os was cute…and niceee….
      Naughty mr.dixit and khoonkhaar mrs.khargosh…??

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:24 pm

        Ishwari?
        Chal koi Na I will try?But I guess sirf Ishwari talli Honi chahiye!!apne saare kaam Bol de and phir Dev use Dhake mar Kar bahar nikal de??

      • Vaishaali on April 9, 2017 7:42 pm

        Ha toh aisa kar kete hain…koi dikkat nai hai..????

      • Vaishaali on April 9, 2017 7:44 pm

        Aisa karna ke ishwari aur sona dono talli ho jaae aur make dev handle both of them…????

        Dev ka toh jindagi baraad ho jaaego…??????

    4. Ishankrpkabian on April 9, 2017 3:51 am

      Nice taught perfect story and match ups with their nok jhonk’s in the serial but i like this more bcoz there is no negativity

      And still u are watching beyhadh ???

      But nice to mix up both serials

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:26 pm

        I don’t watch beyhadh it was just a dialogue?
        I will try to mix both the serials if u want!!
        If u like no negativity then read my 3OS u wil love them?And I write an ff too?Ae dil hai mushkil(ff)
        Oh it’s ur bday
        Haapy DEVAKSHI happy family
        I love u

    5. Aana on April 9, 2017 4:50 am

      Again brilliant one yr..ballad seriously.?? Lol ..loved it yr…
      And abt suggestion go for OE emotional one..u kn something alag…will definitely enjoy it…

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:26 pm

        Hmm…….will think about it?
        Thanks a lot aana?

    6. Rekhadhir on April 9, 2017 7:08 am

      No ishwari no bijoy no radharani

      Perfect just perfect
      Cute wala ❤️

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:27 pm

        Ikr???unke Bina mausam itna Suhana Ho jaata hai??
        Thanks??

    7. Riti1107 on April 9, 2017 7:12 am

      KRPKAB ki sonakshi se beyhad ki Maya?????
      Dev has gone in full nautanki mood ….. Eakdum impossible ????
      Even I would love to read an OS on Sona’s pregnancy

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:28 pm

        Thanks a lot riti??
        Ya will surely post FS on Sona’s pregnancy?

    8. lizaa on April 9, 2017 8:57 am

      Perfect… Just perfect??????

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:28 pm

        Thanks a lot lizaa???

    9. darshana on April 9, 2017 9:56 am

      OMG…itna unique idea na sirf tera hi ho sakta hai..
      good morning really awesome..os ne meri morning good bana di..hehe..and sab se jayada to tab hasi aayi jab..woh dailouge
      “sona tum krpkab sonashi se behaydh ki maya kab ban gayi”????????..
      ya I love these one shots..and ff u have to post soon..ok fine plzz..ab toh jaldi post kar dena…
      love u?

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:29 pm

        Thanks a lot Darshana??
        Glad ki Teri morning good Ho gyi?
        Will post the ff soon??
        Love u more❤️

    10. Princess. on April 9, 2017 10:19 am

      Awesome

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:30 pm

        Thanks a lot princess?

    11. Heshine on April 9, 2017 10:28 am

      Wow Ayushi…. This was such a cute os…..!!❤❤❤???????❤?❤???????????????????????????????????????????????????
      Such hilarious…!! Hahah…!
      Their morning talk was ….????????????????????????????
      Pls post some other thing soon…dear…!
      An “os queen”…??????
      Lovely…!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:31 pm

        Thanks a lot heshnie❤️❤️
        OS queen??
        Will try to post other such one shots❤️
        Love u❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???❣????

    12. nikkita0194 on April 9, 2017 10:36 am

      Tariff karu kya uski jisne tuihe banaya
      Chalo kr hi deti hu tarif
      Ayu u r going to be busy from tommorow my best wishes are with u zindgi Ka bada darad bhara mod and wala hai
      Luv u janu (hr ff me janu likhti hona)?
      Chalo ab aj jitna chil marna hai maro fir toh tumhari pared hai

      • nikkita0194 on April 9, 2017 10:37 am

        *and-aane

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:32 pm

        Oho??
        Pata hai?But I am excited too??
        Luv u 2…3…4…jaanu?❤️

    13. Riya Bansal on April 9, 2017 12:48 pm

      It’s so sweet loved it ????

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:33 pm

        Thanks a lot Riya??
        Do read my other OS then?

    14. Niki645 on April 9, 2017 1:27 pm

      It was sooooooo cute??
      I loved it!

      Pls post more like this!
      Love?❤️

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:34 pm

        Thanks a lot niki??
        Will post more like this❤️❤️
        Love❣

      • priya9876 on April 9, 2017 6:06 pm

        Nd whn u will post ur ff ????

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 6:44 pm

        Jald hi??

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 6:45 pm

        Niki ke taraf se hai??

    15. ShrutiP on April 9, 2017 2:35 pm

      Awesome yaar…loved it..??

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thanks a lot Shruti❤️❤️

    16. Soumya85 on April 9, 2017 2:49 pm

      Awesome ayushi..loved it..love u???

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 2:51 pm

        Thanks a lot Somu❤️❤️❤️
        Love u more❣❣

    17. aamu on April 9, 2017 4:07 pm

      Heheheheh??????
      Amazing yaar…
      Idea achcha tha…
      Nautanki??Was amazing
      N ‘tum krpkab wali sona se behad wali maya kyu bn gayi’ was hilarious?????
      Likha karo isi tarah

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 4:10 pm

        Ok ma’am?
        Thanks a lot Aamu??

    18. priya9876 on April 9, 2017 5:54 pm

      Areyyyyyyyy wahhhhhhhhhhh !!!!
      ????????? 4 u

      Kya OS likha hai……..
      Innaaaaa. Cute wala ????

      Mazaaa aa gya

      ????
      Sonakshi se Maya ?
      Aayehaaaye ab to mera nahane ka man hi nhi kar raha ❤???????
      Jalaad ???

      Fultoo enjoy kiya…

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 6:17 pm

        ?????4u❤️❤️❤️❤️
        Thanks a lot mere pehle wale OS Padhe??nhi Padhe toh Padho?
        Oh it’s ur bday
        Happy DEVAKSHI happy family
        I love u?

      • priya9876 on April 9, 2017 9:25 pm

        ha sara padh liya tha but commnt nhi kar payi..

    19. SamayraRaghavKashyap on April 9, 2017 8:43 pm

      Haaye mera cuteness ka bhandaar….??
      Aayushi…..????
      Teeno OS padh liye….saare super cute hain….feel good OS!??

      Tu 10th mein hai na??
      Bhai Jis bacchi ki 10th mein itni jabardast imagination hai….uski married life toh Badi romantic hogi..???

      Sona ki pregnancy pe ek mast sa os likha…..love you baccha.??

      • SamayraRaghavKashyap on April 9, 2017 8:45 pm

        *likhna

      • Manya on April 9, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thanks a lot samayra??
        Haan main 10th mein hoon and married life??ek baat batau I don’t believe in true love?
        And 4 OS hai?Agar 4th wala nhi pada toh padlo
        Happy DEVAKSHI happy family
        Oh it’s ur bday
        I love u
        And agar aur chahiye toh ek ff bhi hai ae dil hai mushkil DEVAKSHI are actors in it?
        Love u?

      • priya9876 on April 9, 2017 9:19 pm

        Bikhul sahi pakde hain

        super romantic hai ye to bachhi

    20. Shaina on April 10, 2017 3:21 am

      ThAt was fantabulus….. I read ur all OS’s n they all r soo cute n sweet… U should write more sweet cute n romantic OS’s

      • Manya on April 10, 2017 7:22 am

        Thanks a lot shaina??
        Will definitely write more such OS❤️

    21. Kriti on April 10, 2017 6:50 am

      Too cute and Krpkab wali sonakshi Dr beyhadh wali Maya kyu bangyi ??

      • Manya on April 10, 2017 7:46 am

        Thanks a lot Kriti??❤️

    22. Shaani on April 10, 2017 7:29 am

      Nice yaar.. I love ur work…. Super awesome… Waiting for more OSs…. Keep writing. …

      • Manya on April 10, 2017 7:50 am

        Thanks a lot shaani?❣
        I have posted the 1st part of Sona’s pregnancy it will be posted soon?

    23. V.V.harshita on April 10, 2017 1:12 pm

      Awsome ayushi sry fr the late comment

      • Manya on April 10, 2017 3:09 pm

        It’s okay??
        Thanks❤️

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