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Home»Fan Fiction»I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-22)
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I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-22)

Komal123By Komal123December 23, 201627 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey dearies!
I’m posting this chapter rather soon because everyone have been asking about the precap about twinj fight and all!
So here I present the next chapter to you!

CHAPTER-22
(Note: I’m re-introducing Kunj’s pov in this chapter)

KUNJ’S POV

Usha Mom: You naughty head! If you want to hold your girlfriends or I should say would be wife’s hand you can hold it in front of us!

Me : Ok Maa!

I smiled a cheesy smile saying this!
I looked at Twinkle passing me death glares and she went away getting angry!

Me: Twinkle..Twinkle.. Twinkle.. listen Twinkle! Listen! Oh god!

I heard giggles and turned around to see Maa and Papa giggling at me!

Usha: Go kunj,now go and manaofying him!

Manohar: Yes Kunj go!
******************************************

As I entered the room I saw Twinkle standing in front of the mirror with a frown!

Me: Its not going to be easy!
I murmered!

I went near her and back hugged her!
She pushed my hand away and went away from there to the washroom!

Me: Kunj now what? You have to do something!
******************************************
As Twinkle came outside the washroom I had switched off the lights!
I blindfolded her and took her to the terrace of the room!

You gotta go and get angry at all of my honesty
You know I try but I don’t do too well with apologies
I hope I don’t run out of time, could someone call a referee?
Cause I just need one more shot at forgiveness
I know you know that I made those mistakes maybe once or twice
By once or twice I mean maybe a couple a hundred times
So let me, oh let me redeem, oh redeem, oh myself tonight
Cause I just need one more shot at second chances

(I opened her blind fold and I saw her smiling, I know my plan is working! I had decorated the terrace with balloons, red roses and orchids and ordered for Twinkles favourite black forest cake)

Yeah, is it too late now to say sorry?
Cause I’m missing more than just your body
Is it too late now to say sorry?
Yeah I know that I let you down
Is it too late to say I’m sorry now?

(I bend down and sat on my knees in front of Twinkle holding me ears!
Me: I’m sorry Twinkle please

She just smiled!)

I’m sorry, yeah
Sorry, yeah
Sorry
Yeah I know that I let you down
Is it too late to say I’m sorry now?

I presented her the red roses while she also sat down on knees and hugged me!

Me: I’m sorry twinkle!
I knew I was not right!
What can I do to change it!
But seriously you are my girlfriend so I can do whatever I want know?

She just smiled and stared at me!
******************************************

(Note: I’m re-introducing Twinkle’s pov from here)

TWINKLE’S POV

Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

Main jeeti hoon mere paas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

Mera hasna pagal jaisa
Mera rona badal jaisa
Sab lagta hain mujhe khaas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

I wasn’t really angry on him but what he just did made me feel more special!

This is the thing about love, Its hard to put in words!
My love for Kunj can’t be put into words!

The greatest happiness of life is the conviction that we are loved; loved for ourselves, or rather, loved in spite of ourselves!
And we are loved for ourself, life has turned magical since I have met kunj and I want it to turn more beautiful since each passing second!

We stood their in each others embrace sinking in the feelings of love!
******************************************
(Note: Kunj’s pov re-introduced)

KUNJ’S POV

I woke up next day and saw Twinkle sleeping next to me!
She looked just like an angel who stepped on earth just for me!
The best and most beautiful things in this world cannot be seen or even heard, but must be felt with the heart!
I felt this love from heart on the very first day I saw her!
I quickly kissed her forehead and went to get ready!

When I returned back I saw Twinkle already awake with a smile shown on her face, a smile that reached her eyes!

Me: What happened, someone is smiling a lot today?

Twinkle: Nothing kunj you got ready?

Me: Yes, you too go and get ready!

Twinkle: Hmm I’m coming in just 15 minutes, don’t go down and wait for me!

Me: Ok sweetheart as you say!

With this went to get ready!
******************************************

We went down and greeted Maa-papa!

Usha:Twinkle beta how are you?

Twinkle: I’m fine Maa!

Me: Somebody ask me about my well being too?
I said making a pout while Naa and Twinkle giggled!

Manohar: Kunj how are you? Is it fine now?

Me: humph!

Manohar: Ok lets go out now!

We went out to do some shopping for ourselves!
******************************************

Usha: Kunj I wan’t to gift something to Twinkle of her selection so would you mind if I take her with me?

Me: No mom you both go to ladies section while me and Dad choose something for ourselves, then we will meet at the restaurant!

Twinkle: Hmm perfect, lets go Usha Maa!

With this we went and did the tasks in hand for the day!


Precap: Kaisi Yeh Judai Hai
Aankh Bhar Meri Aayi Hai
Mera Dil Doob Raha
Isse Bas Ab Doobne Do!

Phew, guys I know todays episode is a bit short but I’ll try posting the next chapter soon!

Note: not proof read, avoid mistakes!

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    27 Comments

    1. Anayaali on December 23, 2016 2:23 pm

      Amazing….?cant be described in words….luv u ?❤ plzzz post next asap….

    2. Jiya_Ani on December 23, 2016 3:06 pm

      Amazing!!!.. Next is PRECAP!!!..hayee..I hope the ends gonna be happy, firstly.. And 2ndly..I hope ….You rock the next epi ?

    3. Purvi128 on December 23, 2016 3:12 pm

      Hi Komal .. I m commenting first time … Ur ff is so awesome … And today’s episode … U just nailed it …. Post next soon …
      Love u …
      I m writing an ff YOU MADE ME LIVE AGAIN .. it’s of Twinj …plss read that ..

    4. Purvi128 on December 23, 2016 3:13 pm

      Hi Komal .. I m commenting first time … Ur ff is so awesome … And today’s episode … U just nailed it …. Post next soon …
      Love u …
      I m writing an ff YOU MADE ME LIVE AGAIN .. it’s of Twinj …plss read that ..
      Love u dear

    5. Anam_sidhant on December 23, 2016 3:18 pm

      Abey yaar why your precap is always scary?!??? anyways you posted so soon komli!? Now Will post my os though you have already readed it!? Coming to the episode, it was wonderful Kunj is so cute man!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️ I am falling more for him after reading your ff? It was bliss reading it!? Post next soonxx!? Loads of love!?

      • Komal123 on December 23, 2016 4:48 pm

        Mere pati pe bazar mat rakh chudail

    6. kruti on December 23, 2016 3:20 pm

      Hey Komal
      The epi was cute
      Continue asap

    7. SidMin on December 23, 2016 3:53 pm

      Loved it ?
      Why do you do this ha why ?????
      The precap always looks scary par the episode always turns iut to be sweet ?
      Loved the way Kunj said sorry to Twinkle ?
      Loved the bond between Usha and Twinkle ?
      Love you ?
      Post soon ?

    8. Presha on December 23, 2016 4:03 pm

      Hey komal its awesome amazing

    9. Adya on December 23, 2016 6:17 pm

      Omg ..
      I was too scared ! I thought the fight would be scary and look , it turned out to be so romantic… Woahhhhhh…
      I’m in love with it…
      So plsss post soon … Plsss…
      Loads of love

    10. Chiku on December 23, 2016 6:40 pm

      Precap is scary??????❤️?
      Episode is very lovely!!!! Soo cute!!! I loved it??????kunj is so swwet.
      But its soo small??post a big one dude
      Love u?

    11. Ramya on December 23, 2016 7:45 pm

      Komal amazing
      Twinkle manao mission was cute .Lovely
      Loads of love keep smiling

    12. Cp on December 23, 2016 9:15 pm

      Wohooo …..nicee rather good episode?
      But precap phir suspenseee mein choda diyaa komuu dii(hope you don’t mind me calling you komuu dii)

      • Komal123 on December 23, 2016 10:25 pm

        Not at all you can call me just komuu instead of di ?

    13. Suni on December 23, 2016 10:39 pm

      ANOTHER LOVELY CHAPTER! WRITTEN VERY BEAUTIFULLLLYYY!?????
      LOVEDDDD ITTT KOMALLL!??❤❤
      SUCH A *SUSPENCE QUEEN* YOU ARE!???
      POST NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!??

      • Komal123 on December 24, 2016 1:49 am

        Nice names you are guving me first BD now SUSPENSE QUEEN!???
        I’ll try posting soon!

    14. Simiyy on December 24, 2016 12:30 am

      It was super cute
      Post soon
      Loads of love

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on December 24, 2016 2:18 am

      awesome amazing fabulous cute epi

    16. SidMin23 on December 24, 2016 2:28 am

      Awesome episode but precap hope twinj don’t get separate

    17. SidMinTwiNj on December 24, 2016 8:38 am

      Hey kom
      This epi is so cute… I love how Kunj said sorry to twinkle… I so love the bound twinkle usha and manohar share… Kom can u provide me the link of is it too late to say sorry song… I tried downloading it but I couldn’t download it… Post next soon…

      Love you❤

      • Komal123 on December 24, 2016 9:42 am

        http://musicpleer.cc/#!61d08b3d2df8db887b5dc354c30dac0d

        You can go on this site and download the song by right clicking on download and then save link as! ☺

      • SidMinTwiNj on December 24, 2016 9:49 am

        Thank you kom ?

    18. Monica on December 24, 2016 10:10 am

      Okay, I’ll surely kill you one day! Like your precap to the previous chapter was their fight! Darling, this isn’t called a fight okay? ? Anyway, this was amazing! This song is never going off trend right? ? Loved the way Kunj asked for forgiveness. Moreover, the way Twinkle describes her love for Kunj is so adorable! Post asap alright? Waiting for the next eagerly!

      Lovess! xx

      • Komal123 on December 24, 2016 12:05 pm

        Lmao suspense dena banta hai ???

    19. Ria on December 24, 2016 7:46 pm

      Hey Komal,
      This update was marvellous! TwiNj fight was actually Twinkle’s nakhrebaaz??? Next Wale update mein I guess Twinkle’s gonna return back to where she stays which I don’t remember ??

      Post the next one soon.

      Love,
      Ria.

    20. Aanya_pandey on December 25, 2016 6:48 pm

      Hayyee.. really good episode yrrr

    21. baby on January 4, 2017 3:04 am

      Ohhh god komal di
      It was 2 cute
      Hayeee mene socha tha pata nhi kya hogya har baar itne darawne precap kun dete ho di
      Mein toh sch mein mar hi gyi thi haha
      Bt srsly loved it sooo mch
      It was soooo cute
      Loved it
      Love u lods
      Or ab yeh precap is scaring me or iss baar sch mein kuch siyaappaa lag raha hai hope everything gets perfect asap
      Loved it n hope end is happy…
      Love u lods post asap di…

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