I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-18)~ The Rain Kiss

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Hey people!
How are you all!
I hope everyone is doing fine!
First thanku to all who found time to comment on my ff but the number of comments have reduced!
Guys it take a lot of effort and time to write when you are busy with exams!
Please guys do drop down your comments whether positive or negative!
It means a lot!
Back to the ff! Here is the next chaprer of my ff!

(Note:the entire ff will be in kunj’s pov, if need be i’ll introduce twinkle’s pov later)


I couldn’t really form words! I was left speechless for the first time in my life!
This was something never expected from Twinkle I couldn’t help myself! A constant and a big smile playing on my lips! I was short of words at the moment! It felt really special! It felt beyong something that can’t be expressed and explained! It felt like the emotion of loving and being loved! It felt like finally the motive of my life is completed! Finally I can share my salaries with someone! Finally I could pamper someone! Finally I can shower all my love on someone! And yes FINALLY I CAN LOVE SOMEONE THE MOST!

I was in my own world when I heard Twinkle saying something!

Me: Haan what?

Twinkle: Where are you lost kunj? I’ve been sitting on my knees from so long! Answer me would you like to accept me as your future partner!

Me: What are you saying Twinkle? This isn’t possible!

And I saw her face turning pale!

Twinkle: What.. What.. do you mean by this isn’t possible?

Me: Twinkle no.. no.. you took me wrong! I mean this isn’t possible! I didn’t knew this shade of yours! This is commendable! This date setup! All this! Everything is beyond what I can express!

And I saw her expressions changing from worry to relief! I continued!

Me: And About my answer, you already know it twinkle! But just wait a minute over here I’ll be back im just 5 minutes!


I hurriedly ran towards my car and took out a box from it!
I came back as fast as possible because I don’t want twinkle to be waiting for me!
I saw her standing at the same place!
Now I was standing in front her and I started

Me: I’ve something for!

Twinkle: For me? What it is?

I opened the box i had brought from car and it had a ring with a star on it!

Link for the ring!


And if it dont work!
Another link


Here expressions was worth the time I spend in selecting the ring!

The only word that escaped her mouth was WOW!

I didn’t took time and just sit down on my knees to propose her because I don’t want to waste further more time!

Me: Twinkle I had already selected this last night but I only wanted to show it to you at the right time! Now that even you love me I don’t want to waste more time and just wanna make you wear this to mark you mine!
Would you like to become the lifeline of this ever so silly boy who always start drooling over how cute you are and just can’t control his happiness when you are in front of him?

I saw tears of happiness in her eyes while she nodded her head in a yes!
I made her wear the ring and we immediately hugged each other!
The hug was full of LOVE that we have for each other, the hug was full of PASSION, it was full of HAPPINESS and JOY that we both have someone to love and care for who in turn will always stand by our side!

We stood there in each others embrace not wanting to waste a single second to feel each other, to feel this new love we have found, to feel the surrounding enjoying the hug with us, the soothing wind embraced us to congratulate on this new relation!
This feeling we kept inside us from so long is out now, this feeling called LOVE which everyone craves for is now here between both of us, embracing us together!
I hadn’t felt this happy since ages, sure I’m happy since I’m with Twinkle but this feeling, this two love birds feeling is something new that we just discovered and had never come across!
We stood there for don’t know how long when I heard snifflings of someone crying!
I broke the embrace to look at Twinkle!
She was cryin’
Panic took over me! I didnt wanted her to cry, it aches, it aches here in my heart to see tears in her eyes!

I cant keep it and asked her out the reason why she is crying!

Me: Twinkle look at me, see look at me, did something happened, tell me did I said something wrong! You are scaring me twinkle please stop crying I can’t see you in tears!Please Twinkle stop crying!

( where fullstops are used imagine twinkle trying to speak while crying)

Twinkle: Kunj.. no its nothing like that.. you didn’t did something wrong.. infact I’m so happy today! I’m so happy.. to have you in my life! I’m so happy that someone cares about me a lot… This day is the best day in my life! I’m so happy to have found you! Thank you so much for coming in my life! I’m so lucky to have you kunj!

I  wiped the tears that tried coming out her eyes and spoke

Me: Twinkle its not you who is lucky infact I’m lucky to have found you! Thank you for coming in my life and to brighten it the way the stars twinkle in the sky! Thank you for giving me the love I deserve! Thank you so much Twinkle! And please don’t cry I can’t see my Twinkle crying! I hate to see this tears! I hate tears Pushpa!

I tried lightening the mood! And she smiled the smile I love the most and smacked my Arm!

Twinkle: That was so cheesy kunj!

I rubbed the back of my hairs and passed a filthy smile!

Me: I know a cheesy one!
By the way! While you were with me the whole day how did you managed this date setup!

Twinkle:  Actually Mahi and Yuvi helped me in this! We three had made this plan! I told them that I want to confess my love to you in a special way and they said that I should propose you! And this all setup was their idea! Infact they did all this I just instructed them about lights and flowers!

Me: Oh! So this was planned by you too and I didn’t even had a hint about it! Great masterminds! They both are already so evil in these games and now you are also a team with them! I’ve to be very careful from you three!

Twinkle: No kunj! Now we both would be in one team and they both in one!

Me: Oh! So we both will be in one team! Someone is being so desprate to become one team now!

Twinkle blushed:  Naughty you! ?
Itni mohabbat karo na
Main doob na jaaun kahin
Waapas kinaare pe aana
Main bhool na jaaun kahin
Dekha jabse chehra tera
Main toh hafton se soya nahin

( I asked for her hand so that we both can have a dance together)

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

(I twirled her around and kissed both her cheeks, we were going with a flow)

Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele
Khawabon mein aaya karo
Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main
Mera tum sahara bano
Ik tumhe chahne ke alaawa
Aur kuch humse hoga nahi

(I twirled her and hugged her from back, I started kissing her shoulders, then up her neck and then up her jawline to her ears)

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

( Again I twirled her and It started raining! We were facing each other and started reaching out! With each passing second we both inching closer!)

Hamari kami tumko mehsoos hogi
Bhiga dengi jab baarishein
Main bhar kar ke laaya hoon
Aankhon mein apni
Adhuri si kuch khwahishein
Rooh se chahne wale aashiq
Baatein jismon ki karte nahin

(In no more time our lips met, wet with the already raining water,it became more wet with our kissing, we kissed to eternity, till we were out of breathe)

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
( My lifes best moment was captured by me! Yes, I clicked a picture of us kissing to keep it as a life long memory! Our first kiss after confession)

We were lost in each others eyes! I don’t want this moment to end ever! Never ever! I want the time to freeze here, Me, My love over here in each others embrace! She held a deep ocean inside her eyes where now I reside!
I reached over her forehead and kissed her there!
The moment freezed for both of us! Everything cease to exist only she and me!
This date is the best ever date in my life! Its 26th October,2016! The day I really found my love! I can’t thank Twinkle enough for coming in my boring life and filling it with her love!


It was too late at night and we decided to move back to hotel!
No sooner in 15 minutes we reached the hotel  and we went off to our rooms biding bye to each other!

As soon as I entered the room I saw Yuvi having a look ” How was your date man?”
Before he could bombard me with his questions I interrupted him and told him to wait here while I go and change in something comfortable!

I changed myself into my night dress and sat beside Yuvi while he bombard me with so many questions!

Yuvi:  How was your date? Did twinkle confessed?  Did you liked the setup? What was your answer? Did you guys enjoyed? I want each and every detail of your date!

Me: Yuvi its personal things how can I tell you about it and Twinkle has asked me not to tell anyone!
And I giggled softly so that he cant hear me!

Yuvi: Haww kunj! Now you will do this with your bestie cum brother! And its impossible that Twinkle ask you not to tell me anything as I helped her out in the date setup!

I cant stop laughing with the kind of face yuvi made on my answer!

Me:  Relax yuvi! The date was amazing! I enjoyed a lot! And yes Twinkle confessed me and I even made her wear the ring I bought yesterday night! We danced and we even kissed!

I heard sounds of giggling! I looked up and saw Mahi standing at the door and beside her was Twinkle! While Twinkle was blushing, Mahi and yuvi were giggling and didnt left a single chance to embarass us!
I could see Twinkle turning all red beacuse of their continous embarassing comments!

Like this we spent the whole night talking, laughing and blushing while yuvi and mahi didn’t left a chance to embarass us out of situation!

Phew thats all for today!
Guys the next chapter will be posted on 16th december because till then I’m writing exams continously
I hope you guys understand and support me!

Precap: Kunj’s parents calling him and Twinkle meeting them!

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  1. Anam_sidhant

    Haayeeee?? so romantic!?
    It was splendid?
    This episode was as cute as u are??
    Just loved it to the core?
    Now I can’t ask you to post soon because of exams,but you have to post a long one after you’ll finish it❤❤

    Love you loads,small kid!??

  2. SidMin23

    This was super cute and twinj first kiss and just love it each and every part of the scene. And do post next part soon Komal ???

  3. Simiyy

    I loved it Di
    Post soon

  4. Hi i m silent reader ur ff…… This ff is very good and awesome…..love to the core…..twinj proposed,, confession,,dance and kiss was superb.. Mind blowing….plsss ending it a happy note……will u accept me as ur frnd……post next epi soon coz i m waiting……. Love uuuu lodsssss…tc…byyy….

  5. Presha

    awesome epi nd all d best for ur exams

  6. Kritika14

    Hey Komal,
    This chapter was brilliant. I loved it. The date, kiss, hug, dance, everything was just amazing! Can’t be saying to post soon but surely will be waiting for 16 december for the next update. Moreover, good luck for your exams!

    Lovess! xx

  7. Chiku

    Hey komu,
    This chapter was brilliant. Loved it to the core. ??????everything was just perfect. Loved it
    I am waiting for next one. Post soon
    Love u??

  8. Hallo komal…this episode is amazingly amazing…loved each and every bit of this episode…waiting desperately for 16 Dec…

    All the best for exams…rock the exams and come back soon…

    #love ❤❤

  9. Aanya_pandey

    Finally twinkle n kunj are together.. that makes me happy to see.. awesome epi dear

  10. Awesome komal amazing loved it all d best fr exams

  11. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi…loved it

  12. Sohi

    The episode was soo romantic I really liked it the Romance was good do continue

  13. Loveleen

    Ohh tht ws so sweet one….btw I request nt to give this stry a sad ending as ur title says dat I TOO HAD a girlfriend ….keep writing…love u

  14. Adya

    Komal di…firstly sry for late comment nd not commenting on previous one..
    Well that was soooooo cute…the kiss was awesome….it was soo Romantic….loved it…
    Well go nail ur exams…all the best
    Love u…

  15. SidMin

    Just loved it 🙂 Awesome the proposal and the kiss 🙂 waiting for 11th December 🙂

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