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Home»Fan Fiction»I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-12)
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I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-12)

Komal123By Komal123November 6, 201643 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello lovelies!
How are you all! Hope everyone is doing fine!
First of all wish you a very belated happiest birthday zuha!
Though I dont know anyone from you guys except chiku, tara and lovely whom I interected few days earlier I would like everyone to introduce yourselves i my comments today!
So yeah!
Lets begin the chapter you guys have been waiting for!

Chapter-12
(Note:the entire ff will be in kunj’s pov, if need be i will introduce twinkle’s pov later)

KUNJ’S POV

Today I’m going on my first ever date in my whole lifetime with Twinkle!
Maybe I’m not in love with her, but certainly I’ve started feeling something which is beyond love!
This feeling altogether is strange and new for me but it is worth it!
Because the girl is tremendously cyte, innocent, sweet, loving and what not?
I can’t describe how happy I’m to have made a site on SHAADI.COM
After all it is only coz of the site I came across Twinkle!
Hurry Kunj you have to go on a date!
I wore a white shirt with a black jeans and then a brown blazer overcoat, a perfect dress style for the first date!

( https://goo.gl/images/yIzXpj )
Hope the link works!

So now I’m already for the date!
It was 7:30 and I was waiting for my lady in the reception area!
We all know girls take a lot of time to get ready but Twinkle surprised me she was on time! It was 7:45 and she was walking down the stairs of Hotel! I can’t stop but get mesmerised by her looks and adore her!

She was wearing a red middi dress with white pearl neckless and bizarro black boots!

( https://goo.gl/images/BKYVbk )
Hope this link works as well!
Look for dinner date dress, the 2nd one!
***********************************

She was in front of me and I cant stop staring her!
In reaction she was all blushing!
My heart just told me to keep adoring and looking at her, but certainly we have to go on a Date and she was all mine today, so I can do the staring session later on too!

We descended toward the parking area and took the car towards The Umrao’s !
It is one of the bestest date hotels in Delhi!

Here have a look! ☺
( https://goo.gl/images/glepVR )
Hope it works as well!
***********************************

We had arrived at the Hotel, and me like a very gentle man opened the car door for twinkle, and I can see many boys staring her!
I can’t control but get angry on them for staring MY TWINKLE!

I took her hands in mine and she blushed crimson red!
Awwww! She looks so cute while blushing, I swear I can’t control my harmones!
I wanna kiss her then an there!
We both headed towards the hotel, and I had already booked a date suite for us!

( https://goo.gl/images/31auhH )
Have a look at the date setup, I wish this works as well!

I like a very gentlemen pulled the chair for Twinkle and as she seated down I took my chair!
**********************************

I can’t stop admiring my beauty!
We odered for the delicacies and started talking randomly, so that we can get to know about each other!
After like half an hour when we were satisfied, with all the question and answer sessions, I asked her about the question that has been strinking my mind!

Me: So how do you liked the date?

Twinkle: This is amazing, and especially the date setup you choose is beautiful! I don’t liked but loved it!

Me: And what about this?

Twinkle: About this? ?

Me: I mean about this relation about US?

Twinkle: Umm, You are a very nice person a very genuine person, and i would say the truth I really like you, BUT!

Me: BUT? ?

PRECAP: SO WHAT IS TWINKLE’S DECISION!

To know stay tuned to I Too Had A Girlfriend!
Only on Twlly Updates channel! ?

Aaj fir suspense pe shod diya par kya karu mujhe bahut maza aata hai ??

And I know its a short one, but its intentionally kyunki agle chapter ka mazza hi tabhi aayega! ?

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    43 Comments

    1. paavu on November 6, 2016 5:04 pm

      Het komal I jst cant stop smiling on rwading it dats awesome pretty aeesome lovely and so u neeed intro:
      I m paavu and my real name is.. (srry yaar csnt reveal here) and I m on tu from a year firstly I was a silent reader then I started commnting too nw I write 3 ffs ine of which is posted today below urs dey are
      I WAS ABOUT TO FALL IN LOVE….
      YOUR LOVE TAUGHT ME THE MEANING OF LIFE

      • paavu on November 6, 2016 5:09 pm

        Srry I wrote het komal its hey anx ya my 3rd ff is GAME PLAYED BY DESTINY GAVE ME YOU

      • Komal123 on November 6, 2016 10:25 pm

        Hey paavu your ff’s are amazing I love them ?

    2. Ria on November 6, 2016 5:16 pm

      Heya Komal di,
      This is Ria. Erm..idk what shall I tell you about myself! PM me may be?!

      Anyway, this update was amazing lekin, rula diya na!! Aisa koi karta hai kya? ?? Please, post the next part at the earliest as I’m damn excited.

      Loads of love.❣

      • Komal123 on November 6, 2016 10:23 pm

        Ahahah lolz btw i love ur ff, its amazing haan

      • Ria on November 6, 2016 10:37 pm

        Thank you so much!!❣

    3. Purnima.agrawal30 on November 6, 2016 5:29 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi

    4. Anam_sidhant on November 6, 2016 5:42 pm

      Y u always leave it in suspense???
      btw I love the date setup yaar, hope tujhe bhi koi aisi hi date par leke Jaye only if tune next update jaldi post ki?
      ??
      love ur writing skills man!
      POST next one asap❤

      • Komal123 on November 6, 2016 10:24 pm

        Nhi karungi kya karegi? ??

      • Anam_sidhant on November 7, 2016 1:18 am

        Tujhe exams time pe bhi itna irritate karungi beta ki tu fail hojayengi! Vidwa kahi ki??

      • Komal123 on November 7, 2016 11:49 am

        Or mein net hi on mhu karungi tab ???

      • Anam_sidhant on November 7, 2016 12:25 pm

        Mein call karungi!!??

      • Komal123 on November 7, 2016 12:58 pm

        Mein tera no. block krdungi ?

      • Anam_sidhant on November 7, 2016 6:27 pm

        Mein mummy ke phone se call karungi??

      • Komal123 on November 7, 2016 6:51 pm

        Mein apna hone switch off krdungi lagi rahi ??

      • Anam_sidhant on November 7, 2016 10:21 pm

        Pagal aurat? mein tera khoon krke teko swargwasi banadungi?

      • Komal123 on November 7, 2016 10:59 pm

        Fir ff kon likhega ??? chal shukar hai swaragwasi hi banayegi narakwasi to ni ??

      • Anam_sidhant on November 8, 2016 3:42 am

        Yaar I mean narakwasi hi? woh toh yaad nahi tha isliye swarg boldi? btw u deserve ” hell ” as heaven is made for ppl like me not like u?

      • Komal123 on November 8, 2016 7:48 am

        Hell for people like you! Kitna acha joke mari hai! Tu heaven mn gayi to sari devi devtaye bhag jayenge waha se tujhse dar ke hi! ???

      • Anam_sidhant on November 8, 2016 9:03 am

        Komalllliiiiiiiii I will kill uuuuuuuuuuu!!?????????? aur haan beta mere se toh Devi log bhage ge na. tere se toh hell ke log bhi bhag jayege?

      • Komal123 on November 8, 2016 10:56 am

        Wo iss liye bhagege kyunki heaven ke devi devtayo.se sabhi hell wale bhagte hai na

      • Anam_sidhant on November 8, 2016 1:49 pm

        Ahhhhhhhh!!!!! Nahiiiii tere se darr ke bhagege?

      • Komal123 on November 8, 2016 2:57 pm

        Haan to mein deviyon mein aati hun na tabhi baghenge ?????

      • Anam_sidhant on November 8, 2016 10:55 pm

        Pgl aise mat bol deviyan suicide krlengi??

      • Komal123 on November 8, 2016 11:48 pm

        Mein itni sundar jo hun jealous ho jayengi vo ???

      • Anam_sidhant on November 9, 2016 12:22 pm

        Ahaan, btw u r mistaken woh log suicide isliye karege ki itni menhnt krne ke baad woh log Devi bane aur ek churailo ko head aake apne aap ko devi bolri hai.toh gusse mein suicide karenge!?

    5. Sohi on November 6, 2016 7:06 pm

      Aah fir se suspense plz post next episode soon and today’s episode was fabulous

    6. Zuha Fatima on November 6, 2016 8:10 pm

      Thanks for wishing dear…Well this is Zuha 🙂 now u indeed know my birthday 😛 A short introduction of mine…Mad…Jhalli…Stupid…Sweet… extrovert. ..Friendly…Lively!!

      So can we be friends??

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      • Komal123 on November 6, 2016 10:23 pm

        Sure we are friends already ???

    7. Ramya on November 6, 2016 8:19 pm

      Hii komal awesome loved it lekhin aaj suspense at d time where atleast I can’t wait fr next one dear plsss asap really can’t wait loved it n love u

    8. Chiku on November 6, 2016 9:57 pm

      Wowwww its awesome lovely komuuuu. I hate suspense woh itna zyadaa. Jaldi upload karna. Loved it
      Komu u knos me from one year not from few days before?? its been one year of me asking u silly questions??????. I really think the best one was about twinkles pregnancy ???
      Biee
      Love u

      • Komal123 on November 6, 2016 10:24 pm

        Oh sorry meri mature kid galti ho gyi ??

    9. Manvi on November 6, 2016 10:36 pm

      Hey amazinggg episode☺☺☺☺☺…but yr suspense me chod diya??????

      Welll i m a silent readr of ur ff….. i read all the episodes of ur ff from the begining…. but today i could not resist myself from commenting☺
      Nd ya try to post next asap!!!

    10. SidMin on November 6, 2016 10:55 pm

      Why did you stop Twinkle ke but ka reason tho bolna that na 🙂 Post soon 🙂 Loved the part 🙂

    11. SidVee on November 6, 2016 11:51 pm

      Superb epi.. but again a suspense??plz post soon I can’t wait to read the next part ❤❤.. umm, my name is Yashvee, m 19 n I’m not from India.. sorry, can’t reveal much 🙂

    12. Simiyy on November 7, 2016 4:04 am

      it was really good…. i cant wait till the next one 🙂

    13. Lovely on November 7, 2016 2:43 pm

      Heyyyyy ???..Komal di!!…hello…1stly sorry for commenting late.. padh kal hi kiya tha but maths exam tha naa so I din got d time to comment…shollllyyy…maaph kaldo baby shreyu ko…
      Haan…toh epi toh…bhai kya bolu??…hamesha se thoda zyaada amazing tha????

      I loved it…too good di!..
      Aur apne baare main much bataun??…kya bataun??..aap hi baata do…??

      • Komal123 on November 7, 2016 6:47 pm

        Kuch bhi bata de

      • Lovely on November 7, 2016 7:22 pm

        Thik hai…
        Lo Jaan lo aap…
        ‘Kuch bhi…’
        ????????????
        Main dekhna chahti hoon mere kuch bhi batane se aap kya kya jaan gyi..hahahahahaha

      • Komal123 on November 7, 2016 9:42 pm

        Mein jaan gayi ki tera kuch bhi bahut funny hai or tu bhi ???

    14. Monica on November 7, 2016 5:09 pm

      Hey komal,
      Firstly, I am really sorry for commenting late but I was a lil busy. Anyway, coming to the chapter, it was fab, as usual! But girl, why again? SUSPENSE! I am dying now ? Like dude WHY? Whatever now, please try uploading the next one soon as I am really curious.

      Well, about myself. Let’s chat privately? I would love to have an addition in my friend’s list ☺️ Will be waiting! x

      Lovess! xx ?

    15. dreamer...arundhati on November 8, 2016 1:38 pm

      Komal…lovely epi

    16. baby on November 15, 2016 2:11 am

      ohhhhhhhhh god komal di osm lovd it soooooo
      cute episode but dis but is ugghhh well loved it abhi m going on nxt 1 kunki m nt left wid suspense naa… 😀 ♥♥♥
      love u lods…..

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