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I AM A GIRL BUT I DO HAVE A LIFE part-6

administratorBy administratorDecember 21, 201516 Comments5 Mins Read
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Mmmm…. Here’s what nitya saw….

She tried hard peeping in to look at them… And finally she saw it….!!

Aaawwwwww….. Madhu tied a rakhi(raksha bandhan) to abhi and regarded that from today onwards u r like my brother….

Nitya was jumping in happiness….

And then came back to everyone and standing as though she knows nothing…

Actually everyone knew about it except nitya… She even now doesnt know what had happened last night and what all she did and told…!!

Even now she was pretending to hate abhi…

But abhi stayed all silent and didn’t even say a word…. He was smiling as usual and was normal….

Then it was the second day of their trip… They visited many temples and finally by afternoon they went to beach… Played in the waves and were enjoying like they were in a paradise…

Especially nitya..!!
Coz who knows she might not get another chance like this even in her life time…
So she didn’t even miss a single chance to enjoy play… She was all like a kinder garten kid… Abhi saw her and felt Happie….

He was thinking… From how long u were waiting for such a day in ur life my angel…. I didnt even had a guess that u have so much of pain in ur heart…. Though I know a part of it… I’m feeling so sad…. But u have gone through it…

Enough… Whatever has happend is happend… No matter what ever may come… I’ll make sure that u r always Happie… I’ll do anything for ur hpapiness… I’ll always keep u Happie….

Abhi looks at nitya and nitya sees him…. He calls her…
She goes to him and asks…
What…??

Y can’t v be friends like b4…
I’ll never cross my limits and will just be a good friend to u… Plz forgive me and talk to me nithuuu… I can’t stay without talking to u…
Plz don’t say no…. Then nitya agrees..

Okay abhi… V r frnds like b4….
And thinks to herself….. Even I can’t stay without talking to u abhi.. But I don’t want to take any wrong decisions bcoz it might affect both of our career and future…. I don’t want anything like that to happen….

Then… After coming from beach it was already late and everyone were tired and they slept…

Next day morning it was the last day of their trip…. They visited few more temples and waterfalls and started towards their way back home…. On the way… Nitya feels like throwing up and once for all she becums Ill….

All r worried for her….

When they r midway the bus halts at a dhaba… And all have their dinner…. While abhi rushes to a nearby stores and gets medicines for nitya… He goes and gives it to her and takes care of her… She gets emotional by seeing his care towards her… Even her parents used to do the same… They used to take care of her…

And she slept in his arms…

Before everyone could come into the bus…
Abhi placed nitya properly on the seat and he went back to his place….

Next the trip came to an end…. All bid goodbye and parted ways…

Nitya and Sanju hugged each other and cried…

And nitya was searching for abhi… But he wasn’t there anywhere…
He had left… He went without even informing me… Nitya was feeling heart broken…
Y did he do so….
She missed him a lot….

Nitya wasn’t using mobile phone so she couldn’t contact abhi…. And during each and every day of her holidays she used to think only about abhi… But she didn’t have any info about abhi..

Finally she joined for MS pu college(name changed) it was one of the top colleges at that time……

It was the first day of her college…
She spoke to her heart.. Abhi today is my first day of college… Wish me good luck.. Hope I see u at least once… Wherever u r please come in font of me once… Do u atleast remember me…

She thought these as she was stepping inside the college….

She choose science as ahe was interested to becomw a doctor…..
As soon as she went inside her classroom she was surprised…. Amused delighted…. She saw abhi there…. She was having butterflies in her stomach…

Abhi smiled at her casually as though he knew everything that she would join the same college…

Aaawwwww……

Next is nitya’s college life… Which takes a turning point to her life…

Will update it after 4 days since I’m busy now… And so this long update for u people… Hope ur enjoying my story… Sorry for the errors… Keep reading…. Luv u all a lot….

And I’m sorry I’m not able to reply to ur comments as I’m busy …. Plz don’t mind…

Luv u all… Keep supporting me… Ur comments will inspire me to write note and more…!!

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16 Comments

  1. Ananya on December 21, 2015 2:10 am

    Really good story. Love it

  2. Esha on December 21, 2015 2:18 am

    Superb loved it

  3. nishu on December 21, 2015 2:49 am

    wow super my guess is right

  4. Lakshmi on December 21, 2015 3:33 am

    Nice story.

  5. Hayathi on December 21, 2015 6:20 am

    Abhi was an awesome person yaar

  6. manisha on December 21, 2015 6:52 am

    wow! its just amazing

  7. Jwala on December 21, 2015 8:53 am

    luv it ………….superb epi ………….

  8. chinnu on December 21, 2015 10:39 am

    Friends I’m coming to an end of this story… Only 2 more parts left… Hope u like it…

  9. Devi on December 21, 2015 10:45 am

    Awesome

  10. ? Ameena ? on December 21, 2015 10:55 am

    I’m totally loving ur story…..it’s amazing….I like the way you write….it’s amazimgly amazing…..I love this story as you said it’s real story based on girl and freedom. A girl can be daughter, a sister, a mother, a sweetheart, a house wife than what about her life. She tries her best to do in everything and in return when ppl do this…is absolutely wrong….I have been through but I can feel the pain….And I’m totally against it…..that’s y I love ur story sooo much…..hmmm 4days wait…..honestly I can’t wait for second but I will wait….may god bless you my dear…..and thanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful story with us…..love u 4ever….???
    One lovee?

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • ? Ameena ? on December 21, 2015 10:56 am

      Ohh sorry I mean I have not been through this but I can still understand and feel the pain of the girls who r going through this limited life…..

    • chinnu on December 21, 2015 12:12 pm

      Thnq ameena…. Ua words are valuable…. After reading all ur comments I feel worth writing this story taking so much time in my busy schedule…!!
      And this would end in another part or more… Bcoz the past unfolds and comes to the present life of nitya… And I just can’t imagine her life… So just setting an example about how a girl should stand for her freedom… At any situation…

  11. Alia on December 21, 2015 11:45 am

    Awesome story……

  12. Nive on December 21, 2015 11:51 am

    its really nice yaar…

  13. advaita on December 21, 2015 12:06 pm

    very beautiful story . thanks for writing. keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

  14. Neelima on December 21, 2015 12:27 pm

    Cant wait for next episode. Super story…

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