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Home»Fan Fiction»A Gift -Mmz =The birthday surprise (OS)
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A Gift -Mmz =The birthday surprise (OS)

BhabyaBy BhabyaNovember 7, 201623 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey rossy di Happy birthday day. Tame aaj fullto enjoy Kara . Aaji Tamara birthday re mu gote OS lekhu chi.
_________________________________________________________________________Neil shouted at Radhika,”Lazy bones get up much preparation are left to be done”. At this moment Sam-Arjun both chuckled. Radhika was fast asleep and got up hearing Neil’s voice.

Arjun said getup, prepare first before princess wakes up , we have to complete the decorations.

Radhika frowned at this and said,” you guys are very bad. You broke my sleep.”

Sam slightly slapped her forehead and said ,”Radhika tomorrow is your lil sister Rossy’s birthday right,wehave to prepare fast.”

Realization dawned on Radhika. She got up and with full enthusiasm they decorated the house.

At this time Aaryaman (Arjun’s twin lookalike brother and our rossy di’s hero) Radhika who gotconfused in both of them and the him to be Arjun he said what are you doing standing still. Some time ago you were scolding me what happened to you?(Rads doesn’t know that Aru has a twin bro)
Aaryaman asked,”when did I scolded you miss?

Before Radhika could say anything Arjun came and introduce both of them to each other and know Radhika gave Aaryaman a sheepish grin.

He said to Arjun,”Bhai where is Gulabo”(Aaryaman calls this to rossy di to tease her) . Radhika gave him a glare and said “she is rossy not Gulabo understood”in threatening way.?

Aaryaman gulped down looking Radhika all furious , Rossy was all different a sweet ,sensible and beautiful girl. He loved her smile a lot.

Aaryaman was lost in his thoughts when Sam hit him and said ,”Arjun don’t stand like a statue “. He said ,”I am Aaryaman and Arjun is standing with Neil” . He pointed his finger to the beautiful wall having photos of rossy di. One of the cutest was one in which she was wearing a yellow crop top and Black pathani dhoti style pant .Her long brown silky hairs moving in the air
And her honey brown eyes speaking a thousand words. In the picture she was looking at the butterfly who was sitting on her palm.
Her lips curved into a beautiful smile to die for.

Aaryaman looked at the photo his breath became uneven and his heart beat was beating faster. He was lost in her smile . When Sam waved her hand he came out of his trance.

Neil Arjun and Radhika also noticed the expression on Aaryaman’s face. He was all pink(rossy di kya effect hai aapka bande pe).

Neil teased him and said,”what will happen to you when you will see her as person. Aaryaman said he had met her many times as person and nothing will happen to him.

Aaryu was wrong he was in deeply and madly in love with Rossy di.

Whereas in rossy di’s room she was tossing and turning around her bed. She wanted to know whether her family has planned any surprises for her not. She took a deep breath and got up from the bed. She drank a full bottle water kept beside her bed. She looked at the watch which showed 11:05. She decided to sleep.

She laid down and closed her eyes. Aaryaman’s face crossed her face. She was confused why? Rossy was very close to Arjun and knew Aaryaman b4 cause both went to same sculpture art school.

Bhubaneswar’s cold wind came inside her room through her window. She got up and stood nr window and thought about Aaryaman.

Whereas downstairs everyone did all the things really fast by 11:45 everything was done . Everyone sighed a heavy relief. Cake decorations gifts everything was done only b’day girl was supposed be brought down. While upstairs rossy listened some foot steps and quickly went and hide herself from head to toe in her comforters.

It was 11: 50 Aaryaman was given the task to bring her down. Aaryaman entered her room and worked Rossy up. She was all confuse who was he whether aru or Aaryu . Aaryaman quickly blind folded her and said not to make any noise and to move down quickly with him.

At down stairs rossy came down with Aaryaman he opened the blindfold. Rossy was all surprised to see the decorations and specially her photo . The hall was beautifully decorated with her fav color flowers.

She snapped her eyes to the voices where her whole family was singing birthday song to her. Everyone gave her gifts. Now it was Aaryaman’s turn. He quickly went on his legs and took out a blue sapphire ring with diamonds studded forming petals. He said,” Will you be my life partner Gulabo.” To this rossy piked her tounge out. He smiled and continued U don’t know when I fell for you
But today I recognised what you are for me when I listened uncle aunty talking about marriage proposal for you. I realised I can’t see any one else claiming you as their. I love you to the end” . Everyone clapped rossy was in tears. She nodded in affirmative and said this was the best surprise in life.After that they lived happily ever after.??????
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To dear rossy di sorry for the morning message , I mistook it as that your birthday was yesterday but today I compensated it. Love you di hope you liked it . May you have a brightening year ahead and you achieve what you want to become ??????????????

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    I AM A STORYTELLER.I LOVE TO DISCOVER ABOUT PEOPLE AND THEIR STORIES. EVERYONE HAS A STORY TO TELL,SOME SHARE AND OTHERS CONFINED IT IN THEIR HEART WITH ITS MEMORIES.

    23 Comments

    1. rossy on November 7, 2016 8:54 pm

      Lol…thank u sooooo much bhabu….god u r the first girl who portrayed me as sweet, smiling n chirpy…different…mu really bahut Khusi heigali tam update dekhiki…ame pura regional bhauni…mor aji janmadin…tame ebe kouthi…bbsr???? Cute cute n sweet sweet story my dear…thanks for making my day so special…?? ? ? ? thank u very much

      • Bhabya on November 7, 2016 10:40 pm

        Thanks di , actually samaste in fact reality re tame action minded but for me you re sweet . Did I mu abe Surat re Maun papa bbsr re aachanti up down de masu Ku thare karanti siye?

    2. arti viswanathan on November 7, 2016 9:03 pm

      Excellent episode and rossy dear many many happy returns of the day may god bless u…..

      • Bhabya on November 7, 2016 10:40 pm

        Thanx arti di

    3. Brin on November 7, 2016 9:13 pm

      I absolutely love it, you nail it, well done. 🙂

      • Bhabya on November 7, 2016 10:41 pm

        Thanx brin di

    4. manha on November 7, 2016 9:25 pm

      hey awesome one shot and a very cute birthday gift for the gulabo girl. rosie when did you become all sweet sensible and soft huh???? lol. bhabya awesome work. loved it. radz n rose sisters. rosie ke liye ek arjun. hayeee.that too twin. she will be on clouds now. loved it . the confession just superb. beautiful lines. rose happy birthday my dear.

      • Bhabya on November 7, 2016 10:42 pm

        Thanx manha di????. Love you

    5. dipika on November 7, 2016 11:10 pm

      Bhabya cutieeee its soooo marvelous darling.. I throughly enjoyed it.. Love u lots ? ? ?

      • Bhabya on November 8, 2016 9:15 am

        Thanx deepika di

    6. Jessie on November 7, 2016 11:13 pm

      Bhabya…so cute love story ya…The photo part beautiful..Rosie. itne pyaari and Aryu itne pinky seeing Rosie..Awwwww.. sweet…Rosie hides inside comforters listening foot steps…Dramebaaz!! Love it bhabya…Rosie..once again happy birthday..

      • Bhabya on November 8, 2016 9:19 am

        Thank you Jessie di

    7. we on November 8, 2016 8:53 am

      Very well done dear. Keep it up!

      • Bhabya on November 8, 2016 9:20 am

        Thank you?

    8. Shree on November 8, 2016 9:29 am

      This was so cute!! Awww..

      Love you baby ??

      • Bhabya on November 8, 2016 10:39 am

        Thank you shree di. Love you big sissy????

    9. Sathya on November 8, 2016 10:57 am

      Fantastic..cute and very adoring OS it is. Superb Surprise bday gift for Rosie…awww she is really a gulabo only. Thank u so much Bhabhya for surprising us making Rosie as so sweet and charming…lol we all made her an action herione but u r the one made her softy softy…superb writing. Keep it up

      • Bhabya on November 8, 2016 1:23 pm

        Thanks Sathu di Actually i was very nervous first to show her like this but your comments are making me happy! Thank you.

    10. subha on November 8, 2016 11:44 pm

      amazing…lovely os

      • Bhabya on November 9, 2016 11:32 am

        Thank you subha

    11. Gauri on November 9, 2016 10:57 am

      Amazing Bhabhya lucky girl Rossy

      • Bhabya on November 9, 2016 11:31 am

        Thank you abha di!!!

    12. Roma on November 15, 2016 12:03 am

      Wowwww bhabya my sweeeeeet darling sissyyyy. …..very cuteeee n adorable shot. …it was lovely fresh n very sweet
      ..rosieee so lovelyyyyyy chirpy n her aryu…so handsome n smart…Rosie’s pic with butterfly was gorgeous. …loved the cute proposal….keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug 🙂 😉 ♡♡♡♡

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