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Home»Fan Fiction»GENUINE – Part 2
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GENUINE – Part 2

Naz_TemishBy Naz_TemishApril 25, 201751 Comments4 Mins Read
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You guys are lovely…I don’t know why I started writing this…Honestly I don’t even have a story line…I was writing something I read on different stories and what I m feeling at the moment.I read similar stories so much and you can say I m addicted to these type of works…So if you feel it’s useless or lagging you are free to ignore this…..But truly the response I got shocked me….tired of pinching??? U GUYS ARE AWESOME n your suggestions are welcomed…Do comment how you want this to be..I ll try from my part………?????

I was numb…I m staring at the tall form of Lakshya..My eyes travelled to his hands which is holding Rohan..His knuckles turned white..His long fingers shaking..

“What the hell you think you are doing?”Lakshya demanded glaring at Rohan..I touched my lips which is swollen by now because of that idiot’s assault..little bruised..He kissed me hard than I realized.

Lakshya’ black orbs met mine and I saw his features soften a little..His eyes travelled to my lips and without a second thought his fist fixed on Rohan’s face..Rohan let out a cry as Lakshya punched him on his stomach…

“Don’t dare to show your moron face anywhere near her…Save this” .Lakshya gritted his teeth and leave him…Within seconds he is on my side…He hold my hand and pulled me out of the car.Eventhough it was a little harsh his touch creates tingling sensations in me.

He examines my whole length to check whether I m hurt..I took this time to examine him..How can someone be so handsome…His black orbs,shaped nose and that jaw which is clenched now..I resist my urge to run my hands through his hair..

“You ll regret this”..I snapped out of my trance as I hear Rohan said in a painful tone..Fantastic…Idiot..Now I want to punch him…I feel Lakshya stiffened beside me..Without waiting for Lakshya’s response he drove his car away…

“Are you okay”asked Lakshya concernfilled in his voice..” Yaa,I m ok”…He was about to place hands on my shoulders…”I m fine” I whispered…I do this shit to stay away from him and this is pouring water over everything….I can’t afford this proximity…I should maintain a distance or else only regret follows my action….He must have sense my nervousness,without saying anything he walked towards the house and I followed him gazing at his broad shoulders..He ll workout daily I think….Again checking him out….How can’t I?? He is my favorite flavor of ice c……Stop it Ragini…..Change it…..

“Where is Sanky?”I asked… “He go out to pick janki maa from yoga class” He chuckled… Oh maa!!!!you started again..Who else other than my crazy maa do yoga at freaking 10 pm…According to her It’s her ‘prestige issue’ to look more skinnier than pummy aunty who happened to be maa’s cousin and a beauty pageant winner…Note this it’s 12 years back…But Maa can’t take that till now……silly maa……She vows to make her figure as Shilpa Shetty….yaa yaa

“Are you sure you are okay?” He asked breaking the silence…I nodded. “You should be careful with men around you Ragini..How can you be so stupid to be out with him at this time” Oh now the savior is blaming me..yaa ‘ Mr.Lakshya Ahuja’ I know I m stupid,that’s why I fall for you even after knowing that how messed you are!!!!

“He was not like this.I don’t know what happened today..It’s just…just..I didn’t see it coming”. Yaa it’s because of that shadow.. who was that?? Because of that only I lost a grip on me and rest of all happen…Oh no!!!! Who else it would be??There is no one here other than The Hot Lakshya himself….another shot…

“You are defending him, seriously?” He said anger dripping in his voice… “It wouldn’t have happened if you gotten out of the car sooner..He shouldn’t have tried this then..What’s the need to glued in it for 15 minutes??”…..So, this is my fault….perfect just perfect…Now he got the idea of how idiot I m…Wait how he know that I m in the car for so long…exactly 15 minutes

“You were watching?”..He nodded and muttered something in his breath…Really?But why…Is he jealous??? No, definitely not.still……….

“Why were you watching??”….I can’t help but ask….I saw him tensed…What??? Is that what I m thinking…..My mind is doing Salsa moves….Ehh Is it possible that mind can dance?? But I didn’t attend any Salsa classes so how come my mind knows that….STUPID GIRL….perfect time for your nonsense thoughts……Give a break to your damn brain and concentrate on him now…..What would he say?? “Ragini,I don’t like you roaming with another men….Dare to do it again….” Something like that….I m happy to oblige that then……SAY LAKSHYA SAY……..

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    51 Comments

    1. lovely7 on April 25, 2017 9:31 am

      Wow
      Waiting for the next part

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:05 pm

        Thank you..I ll try to update it soon

    2. Sindhura on April 25, 2017 9:31 am

      Awesome

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:06 pm

        Thanks dear

    3. Saghi on April 25, 2017 9:33 am

      Amazing…loved it to the core!

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:06 pm

        Thank you so much saghi..

    4. Berdilla on April 25, 2017 9:58 am

      Superb dear friend i loved it continue soon dear friend

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:07 pm

        Thank you Berdilla…..??

    5. Dolly on April 25, 2017 10:55 am

      Nice

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:07 pm

        Thank you?

    6. nymisha281 on April 25, 2017 10:55 am

      Omg …so nice ..plz continue ?

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:09 pm

        Thank you so much…I m seeing you for the first time…mayb I have missed….??

    7. Follybraverl on April 25, 2017 11:13 am

      Awesome so cute

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:09 pm

        Thank you folly???

    8. Rakhi on April 25, 2017 11:17 am

      Awesome

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:10 pm

        Thanks you so much??

    9. AimRagLak on April 25, 2017 11:25 am

      Wow its good.Can’t wait for the next part?

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:10 pm

        Thank you???…little wait??

      • AimRagLak on April 26, 2017 12:19 am

        How long???? ????

    10. Ammu on April 25, 2017 11:27 am

      Outstanding episode and loved Raglak scenes. Waiting for more Raglak scenes. Plz post next part ASAP

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:11 pm

        Thank youuu…There is Raglak Raglak n Raglak ????

    11. Rehna on April 25, 2017 12:09 pm

      Waiting for next part

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:11 pm

        ????

    12. Ankita on April 25, 2017 12:16 pm

      It’s really amazing story

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:12 pm

        Thank you??

    13. avika on April 25, 2017 12:23 pm

      Nice

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:13 pm

        Thank you ?

    14. Arjuna on April 25, 2017 12:51 pm

      AWESOME

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:13 pm

        Thank you ???

    15. Ashnoor on April 25, 2017 2:00 pm

      Amazing dear…..you know I was waiting for this part .

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:14 pm

        Thank you ashnoor…Hope it’s worth waiting

    16. Bela on April 25, 2017 2:16 pm

      Lakshya ??????????
      This guy is as messed up as my weight ??

      And I love that Ragini Mom v/s Pummy Aunty part, it was comical?

      A good episode, overall. Now what has me excited is why Laksh is doing that. Does he like her??

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:16 pm

        Thank you so much bella….It was somehow my amma herself….messed as ur weight it’s lol???….Maybe he likes her….????

      • Bela on April 25, 2017 5:37 pm

        If he likes her then balle balle???
        If he doesn’t, then kat le, kat le???

        And yes, my weight is really messed up. Ask Ria, she gonna tell you.

        And my only suggestion to you is that since this is your first FF, be at your own Liberty. Write what you wish to. Once you fall short of ideas, we are all Willing to help. But take reins of your own story, it is your first. Enjoy this experience ?????

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 7:29 pm

        Thanks bela…yes I ll definitely need your help

    17. IME on April 25, 2017 2:23 pm

      Awesome!!
      loved it!!
      post soon!!

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear…..yaa it will be soon

    18. aleeza on April 25, 2017 3:01 pm

      Awesome

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thank you ?

    19. shrilatha on April 25, 2017 3:04 pm

      awesome ‘super girl’

      • Naz_Temish on April 25, 2017 4:18 pm

        Aww Shri teasing huh????….Thank you so much???

    20. dharani on April 25, 2017 5:41 pm

      awesome

    21. Asw on April 25, 2017 6:14 pm

      Amazing yaar keep going

    22. IQRA222 on April 25, 2017 8:30 pm

      nazu di the episode was superb
      yes lucky hurted that rohan serves him right
      and lucky possessive and concerned good progress
      can’t wait for the next part

      • Naz_Temish on April 26, 2017 9:41 am

        ????

    23. Fats on April 26, 2017 5:50 am

      Just read both parts and they were fab. Loool Ragini’s crush is so hormonal teen like but still I love it ❤️. Can’t wait to read more ?

      • Naz_Temish on April 26, 2017 9:42 am

        Thank you??? We can’t underestimate teenage crush ????……..

    24. saranya on April 26, 2017 9:58 am

      Awesome dear

    25. tëìtō kUn on April 27, 2017 12:36 am

      Awesome….

    26. asra on April 27, 2017 10:20 am

      fabulous dear….loved it alot…

    27. A.xx on April 28, 2017 11:19 pm

      amazing and superb love ur style xx

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