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Home»Fan Fiction»GAURIKARA Three Shots : RIDDLES OF LIFE TURNS 2 RHYTHM OF LOVE PART 1 [By Renima]
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GAURIKARA Three Shots : RIDDLES OF LIFE TURNS 2 RHYTHM OF LOVE PART 1 [By Renima]

RenimarenjuBy RenimarenjuMarch 9, 201712 Comments5 Mins Read
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GAURIKARA Three Shots : RIDDLES OF LIFE TURNS 2 RHYTHM OF LOVE
PART 1 [By Renima]

Hello dil-e-ishqies…..This is renima with a work on new pair….gaurikara or rikara …..u can name it in ur own way…..I just got a half an hour leisure time and thought 2 write a love track on gauri and omkara…..2 refresh myself…..So check it….and pls this not an ff…just an article of three shots….only…..Hope u will enjoy it………Pls comment……guys…
Gauri and Omkara are a married couple , but omkara is not ready 2 accept gauri as his wife since their marriage happened on a complicated situation only, just like the show…..But omkara’s marriage video gets leaked and every one in oberoi mansion asks explanation from Omkara….Dadi pressurize omkara 2 bring gauri 2 oberoi mansion since she is her bahu…..Omkara goes 2 barely……

Scene – 1 {@ Barely, sharma house}
Gauri’s maa : Daamad ji….would like 2 have a cup of coffee……{she coughs and omkara understood that her health is not well}
Omkara : Maaji…..i think u should take rest…[omkara hold her hands and managed her 2lie down on her bed ] Maaji….pls take rest….I will make ginger tea for u …. …u will feel better….
Gauri’s maa : What!!! Beta u are our guest….And how can u do this ?? Gauri will be coming soon, I will …..{she again coughs}
Omkara : Maaji……maaji pls….u have called me as beta……So it’s my duty 2 take care of u….
Gauri’s maa : But..beta…
Omkara : Maaji…..I will make it……don’t worry…..[ omkara smiles and goes inside the kitchen}

Scene – 2 {@ Shivji’s Temple}
Gauri’s view
“Hey sankar ji…..my husband has arrived…..I lied 2 my maa that my jathadari hippy husband is very sweet and caring…..Due 2 some urgent work he returned 2 mumbai just after the wedding only and whenever maa will ask when daamadji will come and take me with him, I will lie her that soon he will come……But I can’t believe that harharayike he will arrive suddenly??? Am scared whether he will tell my maa that our marriage is nothing just a drama only…….Pls….” {gauri was unable 2 convey completely her worries as she gets a phone call from bunty, a small child who is very close 2 her… }
On phone…
Bunty : Didi, where are u ?? Jatadhaari jiju is waiting 4 u….Come fast…..
Gauri : Haa….harharaike , I will be coming there shortly……
{She cuts the phone and rushes 2 her home]
Scene- 3 { @ Sharma House}
Gauri : Maa….am sorry, actually I was attending the aarti on temple that’s why I came late….I will make tea for u…
{Mean while omkara enters the room with a cup of ginger tea for gauri’s maa…gauri gets surprised 2 see her husband like these…..He makes her 2 drink the tea ….Gauri smiles and stares omkara……}
Maa : Daamadji…..I think now u should go and take rest…..U will get train for Mumbai tmrw early mrng only…..Beta gauri…..go and ask him whether he need any help…..
Gauri : Ji maa…..[she turns 2 omkara]
Omkara : Thanks….i will manage myself……{omkara leaves}
Gauri : Maa…..are u feeling better now ?{gauri sits beside maa}
Maa : Am fine, daamadji is really a nice person…..And why are u sitting near me ?? Just go 2 room…..Just talk with him …..

Gauri : Mm….Maa….i will be going with him tmrw 2 my sasural only….then what is the need 2 go and talk with him right now…..I am going 2 spend whole night with u only……
Maa : But beta…..
Gauri : Pls maa….
Maa : Beta…..its ok….u can spend time with me….But he is ur husband…@ Least go and talk with him……
Gauri : Is it necessary 2 talk with that jatadhaari ??
Maa : What ??
Gauri : I mean my husband….omkaraji……
“Exactly….jatadhari jiju looks strange…..I think he doesn’t smiles…..I don’t like him”Gauri turns behind snd finds that it was said by none other than the naughty boy bunty only…..
Gauri : What do u want 2 say ?
Bunty : I wonder how u will manage urself with him…..He won’t talk much and u are nonstop bolti harharai express only…….
Gauri : U called me as Bolti Harharai express ……Wait I will tell u what I can do…
Bunty : No didi…{bunty runs fast revolving every corner, gauri tries 2 catch him…..but she was not succeeding in catching him….finally bunty jumps from window and gauri comes closer to window….and she touched on omkara’s shoulder from behind as she was breathing too fast after the long running process……Omkara turns 2 her and stares her….. Gauri also stares omkara……}
Omkara : If ur running games are over , then pack ur things and sleep well……Tmrw early mrng ‘s train we have 2 go mumbai…..

{Omkara walks from there and lie down on bed and covers himself with a blanket …..gauri feels sad…..she sits on the chair which was placed beside the room and takes dresses and packs it….When the packing was over, she placed a carpet on floor and lie down on it…..Omkara was just pretending that he was sleeping only, he was disturbed with certain thoughts ….He gets up from the bed and finds that gauri was sleeping on floor…..he finds that she was shivering due 2 cold….He came closer 2 her and covers her body with blanket…While he was placing blanket on gauri, her face turned towards omkara….Omkara finds some curly hairs which were fallen on her eyes….he slowly turns them and gauri slowly open her eyes and stares omkara in surprise….they share an eyelock……”Tu hoga zara paagal tu ne mujhko kyun chuna…kaise tu ne ankaha, tu ne ankaha sab suna……tu din kaa hai, yaa raat aana donon, mil jaaye shaamon ki tarah….yeh moh moh ke dhaage” {film- dum lagake haisha} plays……

PRECAP : FEELMY LOVE……..

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    Sun always rises and spreads light, but sun flower expect sun to lime light and may be sun is not able to do it. But sun will show care through twilight.True love will succeed

    12 Comments

    1. nikitajai on March 9, 2017 4:07 pm

      It is awesome dii… Waiting for the next update.

    2. Lilly on March 9, 2017 4:27 pm

      Awesome…

    3. Renimarenju on March 9, 2017 5:06 pm

      Guys…this is based on dbo and by mistake they have posted it in IB fan fictions page….Sorry for inconvienence

    4. Shrutika on March 9, 2017 5:13 pm

      Wow. Amazing.

    5. Janani on March 9, 2017 5:20 pm

      Awesome update the next part soon

    6. Yashu on March 9, 2017 7:46 pm

      Awesome loved it di waiting for nxt episode post it asap

    7. san on March 9, 2017 7:47 pm

      Awsome

    8. Uf on March 9, 2017 7:52 pm

      SUUPERB.??

      Waiting for NEXT PART.

    9. pinkyyy on March 9, 2017 9:15 pm

      Awesome ???

    10. Nithu on March 9, 2017 9:28 pm

      Di post here also….i loved it…pls snd me the link of your nxt epi ..whn you post it

    11. Kehkasha on March 9, 2017 9:34 pm

      Wonderful di…
      I liked this shade of ur story….
      Plz try to post the next soon…
      Tc..

    12. Mrunal on March 14, 2017 7:09 am

      amazing update…
      something new…
      loved it…

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