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Home»Fan Fiction»Her gangster his scary rat (Devakshi Two shots) first shot
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Her gangster his scary rat (Devakshi Two shots) first shot

SriyaBy SriyaJanuary 6, 2017Updated:January 6, 201734 Comments5 Mins Read
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Phew! Sorry for making you wait. You know I’m so lazy person that I always give late updates. So you have to bear me! Have Fun!!!!! I am not getting any ideas for ff. So I’m planning to write two shots. Here is the first one.

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A girl is shown playing with kids in an orphanage. She was having fun with them. When some goons came there. The head of the orphanage signed kids to go inside. ‘Hey you girl raise your hands! The leader of goons said. ‘Hey mr I am not scared of you! The girl spoke in high tone. ‘How dare you! No one spoke in high tone to me do you know who I’m? The leader said. ‘I don’t care who are you mr attitude! The girl said. ‘I am Dev Dixit the heartless don of this city! He said. ‘So what? I am Sonakshi and I live in this orphanage! She said. ‘Hahaha! Must say you have so much guts to talk with me like that he said. ‘Thanks for compliment but no thanks! Sona said. ‘Foolish girl arguing with you is a waste of time so shut your mouth! Dev said. ‘Who are you to order me? Sona said. ‘Acha then be ready to die! Dev said. ‘No don’t you dare to that! Sona said. ‘So what you will do? Dev said. ‘I will call…. Call the police! Sona said stammering. ‘Oh so call I am waiting! Dev said. ‘Don’t think I am joking I will really call Sona said stammering. ‘Oh so call I’m waiting I know you are just a scary rat you can talk big big words but can’t do anything! Dev said. ‘Mr Dixit you can’t insult me like that uff Sona said. ‘Why can’t I ? Scary rat Anyways , I’m leaving you for now. Next time don’t dare to mess with me or you all will be dead Dev said smirkingly. ‘Uff what he thinks of himself ? Khadoos idiot monkey donkey! Maan toh kar raha ki cow dung dal du iske upar Sona said cursing him.

___________Dev PoV________________

Why I left that girl? Dev Dixit never spares anyone why I gave her second chance? And how come she is not scared of me while the whole town becomes scared on listening my name ? And she had so much guts to stand in front of me and speaking to me in high tone ? How? Anyway , why I’m thinking about that scary rat ? Who is she to me? She will pay for talking to me in high tone. You have to pay Sonakshi for messing with Dev Dixit.

_________Dev PoV ends______________

The next day ;

Sona was coming back from the market with vegetables and fruits, when she listens a bullet sound. She goes to check and saw Dev pointing a gun towards a man he was begging but Dev didn’t paid any heed before he could shoot. ‘Stop! Sona shouted. She ran towards Dev and gave him a tight slap. ‘What do you think of yourself mr Dixit ? What are you trying to prove ? Don’t you have any mercy on that man he is begging for his life and you? What if in his place your brother or father was there ? Don’t you care about there feelings ? Sona said in a breath. ‘How dare you ? To involve my family in this? Who gave you rights? Dev said. ‘So? Who gave you rights to kill that man? Ha what you think of yourself? Cheap person like you can’t think about others! I know very well about you selfish and heartless people I hate you mr Dixit and leave that man or the next moment you will be behind the bars? Understood. Sona took that man with her leaving Dev alone. He was too numb and shocked to see Sonakshi’s anger. He closed his eyes in anger. Sonakshi ‘s words were echoing in his ears.

At orphanage,

Sona reaches there in angry mode. She saw everyone were watching tv in that Devakshi’s fight was being shown. Everyone in the orphanage clapped for her braveness and for saving a person’s life. She felt happiness and hugs all the children’s. They cut the cake and enjoy.

On other side;

Dev goes to his home and opens a locked room. He goes inside, and saw his family’s pics and breaks down. He cries and shouts ‘why you left me in small age! When I was 6 I faced the cruel society alone! I don’t have anyone! Living alone in an orphanage and then I grew as a heartless don! Why you left a 6 year old kid alone in this world didn’t you think of me? How will I know what is wrong and what is right in small age? Why? Do You know how much it hurts when there is no one beside you to support or care for you? Ha answer me? Dev said. He slept whole night crying.

____________The next day___________

Sonakshi was leaving to office, when some people came and take her in jeep and tied her mouth with a cloth and legs and hands with rope.

To be continued***********

Phew! So done with first shot.do tell me your reviews.

Hopefully you liked it ????
Love ❤️
Sriya,
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    34 Comments

    1. Riddhi on January 7, 2017 12:05 am

      Interesting loved it

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:02 pm

        Thanks ????

    2. Manya on January 7, 2017 12:09 am

      Awesomeeeeeeeeee sriya❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Post soon
      Love love???

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:04 pm

        Thanks Ayushi ???? your dp is sooooooooo awestruck ?????
        Love you!!❤️

      • Manya on January 7, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thanks❤️

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:30 pm

        You are breaking the rule of friendship again no thank you and no sorry ?

    3. rj12 on January 7, 2017 12:24 am

      Wow loved it?????
      Please post soon?

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thanks ????? sure

    4. priya12 on January 7, 2017 12:46 am

      Di, superbbbb ….awesomeeee ….nice story line ,,……post it soon

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:07 pm

        Thanks???? sure will post soon!!

    5. Alka on January 7, 2017 1:11 am

      Perfect ya ??????

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:27 pm

        Thanks ??

    6. Priya on January 7, 2017 7:33 am

      Too good..Post soon

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:27 pm

        Thanks ???

    7. Aarti32 on January 7, 2017 10:34 am

      Awesome..it’s like goli maro to panga aankh maro to pyaar?

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:28 pm

        Thanks ??? right

    8. Princess on January 7, 2017 10:37 am

      Brilliant plzz post the next episode soon

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:28 pm

        Thanks ???

    9. Asmita... on January 7, 2017 11:25 am

      I can easily imagine bold Sona…. but it next to impossible to imagine Dev as a goon… He is too cote to be a Don…

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 1:29 pm

        Yes you are right ???

    10. Heshine on January 7, 2017 1:41 pm

      Hey Sriya…!! The shot was juz awesome….!!???????i juz loved it…!!! Pls post the next shot asap…!! Amazing dear…!! I hope u will also come up with more ss, ff, os….!! Wonderful again..!!

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 2:07 pm

        Omg itni tareef btw thnxxxxx ???? will come up with more ss,ff and OS love you!! ?

    11. Maleeha on January 7, 2017 3:45 pm

      Superb and marvellous….. Loved it….. It was entirely different and awesome…. Waiting for next….. Post soon
      Love,
      ❤❤❤

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 4:03 pm

        Thanks ????
        Love you!! ?

    12. Urmika on January 7, 2017 10:22 pm

      It was amaaaaazi g..Loved it to the core..

      • Sriya on January 7, 2017 11:47 pm

        Thanks ???

    13. Niki645 on January 8, 2017 7:06 am

      It was superb!!!!!!

      • priya12 on January 8, 2017 9:56 am

        Di, when will u post it depends on my family….post soon di

      • Sriya on January 8, 2017 11:59 am

        Thanks sweety?

    14. Anjali333 on January 8, 2017 2:11 pm

      Amazing update
      Continue soon

      • Sriya on January 8, 2017 2:15 pm

        Thnxxxx sweety?

    15. simplesweety1 on January 8, 2017 7:56 pm

      Awsm Ya! Update Soon!

      • Sriya on January 8, 2017 8:03 pm

        Thnxxxxx sweety? Will try?

    16. Ngkrishnakumari on January 8, 2017 11:21 pm

      Nice story dev in don character is difficult to assume him because he is so cute
      Post soon waiting

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