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Home»Fan Fiction»When gangster fall in love…. (part-3)
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When gangster fall in love…. (part-3)

Shonaa...By Shonaa...August 22, 2016Updated:August 22, 201621 Comments7 Mins Read
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Episode starts

Kunj’s mens kidnapped twinkle….
They take her to a warehouse typ place… many boxes r der… twinkle is sitting in chair her hands nd legs r tied with rope… tape in her mouth… lucky calls kunj nd tells all diz…

Kunj(angrily): wht…. whts d need to kidnap her…. can’t u do a small work properly…. useless…. she is not lyk other girls…. if she came to knw we r following her for a purpose…. god knws wht will happen….

Lucky(gets angry but doesn’t show): she doesn’t knw who r we but she tries to run…. we need to catch her…. nd don’t worry she is just a girl…. she can’t do anything….

Kunj(double angry): i told u she is not lyk other girls…. can’t u hear dat…. i see her fighting…. she is great martial arts player…. tie her as much as hard u can…. otherwise she alone will kill u all wd ur own guns….

Lucky(looking at twinkle angrily): yes sir….

Kunj: i m coming der nd don’t create any mess again…

he cuts call nd leaves from his house…..

Lucky angrily throws d cell… twinkle is looking here nd der struggling while he looks at her…. thinks “kunj sir yelled at me…. first tym…. just bcoz of her…. y r we doing all diz…. it’s better for kunj sir to rape her nd throw her away…. yaa diz is best revenge for any girl…. don’t worry kunj sir…. i’ll do ur work” he opens twinkle… she starts hitting him…. he comes close to her but she push him he falls nd gets hurt…. now in anger he holds her tightly…..

Lucky: u think u r vry smart haa…. i will make ur state worst…. u won’t be able to show ur face to d world….

He holds her mouth tightly… nd tries to kiss her.. twinkle cries…
Nd dn kick him.. he now with double anger holds her neck hard… nd tries to remove her top… twinkle tries hard but he tornes it from shoulder… she pushes him… he falls nd gun comes out from his pocket.. twinkle immediately takes it…

Twinkle: aage mt aana goli chla dugi… (don’t move forward…. i’ll shoot u otherwise)

Lucky: to chlana dra kisko rhi h…. kunj sarna ka right hand hu me…. tujhme himmat h jo tu mujhe maregi….. (shoot me naa…. m not scared from u…. m right hand of kunj sarna…. no one has dare to kill me not even u)

Saying diz he comes closer to her…. nd in fear twinkle presses d trigger… dhiskyauu…. dhiskyauu…. dhiskyauu…. he falls on her… she holds him nd sees his blood on her hand… she leaves him nd he falls on d floor.. she sees goons are coming… as all d goons went out after tying her…. she runs from der… goons comes nd sees lucky lyk diz.. sm of them calls kunj(on d way)…

Goon: sir dat girl shooted lucky sir…. don’t knw he is unconscious… or dead….

Kunj: what… m coming…. check him if he is alright nd also go behind her…. he cuts d call…

Kunj: i won’t spare u twinkle…. u shoot my man…. no one has dare to do diz…. i’ll not leave u….

When sm1 comes on his way…. he stops d car with jerk…. he comes out of d car….

Kunj: what d…. tu…. (ofcourse none other dan twinkle)

Twinkle comes to him… teary eyes messy hairs torne sleaves breathing heavily “plz help me sm goons r behind me plz” he sees her state nd her hands….

Kunj: blood…. u… u killed sm1…. u r a criminal…. murderer….

Twinkle: n…noo..i..i..di..didn’t… kill…him.. i… didn’t… kill… any1… da…dat…. b…blood….

She looks here nd der…. acts lyk an insan… rubs her hands hard to remove blood… kunj looks confused…

Kunj: ho..hold on hold on… umm…. u didn’t kill any1 dn y r u running.. (thinks nd say) okay let’s go to d police station they will find truth….
Saying diz he holds her hand… she jerks away….

Twinkle: i didn’t do anything wrong y would i go….

She starts going backward in middle of street.. kunj sees a truck is coming at high speed…

Kunj: truck is coming…. don’t go backward… come here…

Twinkle(doesn’t listen): i didn’t do anything wrong…. believe me… i didn’t kill him…

As truck comes more near…. Kunj runs to her nd pushes her with him… both rolls on street nd stops at side…. kunj over twinkle both share n eyelock…. kunj breaks nd both stands up…

Kunj(yelling): crazy girl…. mrna h to esa bol na… me hlp kr duga…. (crazy girl…. if u wanna die dn tell me i will help u)

She (crying) starts to leave…. kunj holds her wrist nd pulls her towards him…. her hands on his chest…. nd he places his on her waist…..

Kunj: u didn’t told me whom u killed at mid night…. (leaves her) u r telling me or i should call police…

Twinkle(loudly): i told u i didn’t kill any1…. look at my state….

She holds his collars….

Twinkle: u still think “I” kill anyone

Kunj: leave my collar..

She tornes his shirt… his six packs nd body is seen…

Kunj: what d hell…..

Twinkle(loudly): i didn’t kill him…. he was trying to rape me…. i was just defending myself…. he comes close to me…. i don’t knw how i pressed d trigger…. he got shooted…. i didn’t shoot him deliberately…. i will die but i won’t go police station…. i didn’t do anything wrong…. defending yourself is not a crime…. i m not a criminal….

Kunj is hearing all diz with a shock…. when his phn rings… he goes far from twinkle nd receives…

Goon: sir luckily lucky sir is alive…. we r taken him to d hospital….

Kunj: what….. ummm…. no…wait..

He puts his hand on his forehead…. nd thinks…. while goon continues….

Goon: sir…. u wanna say smthng….

While kunj looks at twinkle’s state….

Kunj: listen…. i wanna say dat….

He again stops thinking wht to do or wht not…. wht is right or wht is wrong….

Goon: okay sir…. we r taking lucky sir to hospi…. (kunj cuts)

Kunj: nooo…. don’t take him to d hospital….

Goon: sir…. he will die here….

Kunj: do one thing…. shoot him now…. i want him dead….

Goon: wht…. sir…. but… sir…

Kunj: i m ur boss u r not my boss understand… kill him otherwise i will kill u….

He shoot him nd he died…. kunj hears all diz from phn call…

Goon: s..sir… he…he is dead now… i shoot him….

Kunj: gud… vry gud…

he cuts d call nd turns but finds twinkle nowhere…. he sees she is leaving nd runs behind her….

Kunj: twi…. Oo maharani ji…. ruk jaa… (stop)

He holds her hand…. twinkle jerks it…. kunj ups his hand….

Kunj: okay i won’t touch u…. but where r u going….

Twinkle: my home….

Kunj(laughs): Jalandhar to amritsar… by walking wow…. u r great….

Twinkle(frustrated): whts d thing to laugh in diz…. i will manage by mine… no one is following me now…. i will go on my own….

Kunj stops laughing nd says “i hope u knw d way from jalandhar to amritsar”

Twinkle(hesitating): ofcourse i knw…

kunj turns her nd says….

Kun: dn u r going on wrong track amritsar is here from where u came… not der….

Twinkle: i.. i knw… i was going to d bus station….

Kunj: dn also u r going wrong bus station is also in diz way…. i hope u have money to buy ticket….

Twinkle: money…. actually i missed my train i don’t have anything….

Kunj: oooo poor girl…

Twinkle(tashan me): Ooh plzzz…. m not bechari typs…. nd i am vry rich…. i m THE twinkle taneja….

Kunj(says immediately not realizing): nd i m kunj sarna….

Twinkle: wht…. wht did u jst say kunj sarna…. u r kunj….. sarna…. vo GANGSTER….

————–
Sorry for late update…. will post nxt soon….
How’s d episode….?
Good/bad….?
U lyk it….?
Whts nxt….?
Wht will kunj answer her….?
Think think….?
Love u all…. ??

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    21 Comments

    1. Priya_ on August 22, 2016 5:21 pm

      great..
      loved the episode.. waiting for the next shot..
      ur dp is cool..

    2. SIDMIN-daamini on August 22, 2016 5:27 pm

      Hey shonaa??????
      Yaar u just nailed it
      Mast!!!!!!
      It was amazing Loved it
      Aur main toh pagal ho ri hun twinj k coming up scenes dekhne k liye
      I know u r so amazing so u must have kept something in ur mind for us
      Muuaaahhh!!!! ???????

    3. rashiverma2199 on August 22, 2016 5:32 pm

      Wow…shona…..episode was fab….too awesome….

    4. Jennifer on August 22, 2016 5:41 pm

      Ausm shona keep it up

    5. Monica on August 22, 2016 6:05 pm

      It was amazing! loved it so much! write soon x

    6. SidMin on August 22, 2016 6:25 pm

      Shonaa Loved it they way Kunj was angry on his men when they kidnaped Twinkle and when he (Lucky) Tried to rape Twinkle he (Kunj)asked his men to kill him Loved it waiting for the next part 🙂

    7. thanmy on August 22, 2016 6:46 pm

      Awesome I was waiting for this amazing pls post next one soon

    8. kruti on August 22, 2016 7:40 pm

      Superb epi shonaa …..just loved it
      The.way kunj was getting angry on his men when twinkle got kidnapped….just amazing

      Post d nxt one asap

    9. Sameera on August 22, 2016 7:56 pm

      Wow shona amazing epi yaar
      Loved it

    10. Sayeeda on August 22, 2016 9:49 pm

      Amazing episode…. Awesome..
      Shona Mona… Loved it….. Remember I’m still angry with u…. ???…
      But still I love u??

    11. Shefali on August 22, 2016 10:01 pm

      Wowww such an intresting episode….. nyc one..

    12. Aksa(SidMin's and the ff writers die hard fan...) on August 22, 2016 10:08 pm

      What an epi yaar…u nailed it…It was soooo gud….I was waiting for it like hell ke kab shona di post karegi…n there u go…I knw I’m commenting for the first tym on ur ff…u r a fab writer di…post ASAP:)

    13. SidVee on August 22, 2016 10:08 pm

      Wow superb epi.. it’s becoming more and more interesting.. do cont soon ?

    14. Joonakanksha on August 22, 2016 10:50 pm

      Amazing epi shona

    15. Romaisha on August 22, 2016 11:48 pm

      Yayy finally you’re back !!
      I was thinking about your ff yesterday only yaar 🙂
      And today’s episode was damnn good!!
      Please post ur next epi soon !

    16. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 23, 2016 1:14 am

      awesome amazing fabulous epi

    17. baby on August 23, 2016 1:44 am

      omggggggg shonaa di
      amazing wooww
      cnt w8 fr nxt post asap di
      luvd it 2 d core
      luv u diiii

    18. Angita on August 23, 2016 7:56 am

      Awesome

    19. sujina on August 23, 2016 4:10 pm

      wow nice piece of writing…
      hope there’ll twinj nokjhoks in nxt epi…
      bt tw found k 2 b gangster…exicited 4 nxt so plz post asap….

    20. Sana(sanu) on August 23, 2016 9:07 pm

      Lovely shona……

    21. Sonali sidmin fan on August 24, 2016 11:07 am

      Please post the next episode soon. Luvved it muaahhhhh. I was a silent reader… but I can’t control myself after reading your ff

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