Welcome back guys …this is trisha with a new OS ….thankyou for all your valuable reviews that means a lot ….so let’s start …..!
Veer’s POV…
“Wow…after whole 1 year I found this place decorated …yeah right I am talking about SDCH…decorated ..!! This word doesn’t mean joy …thts just decoration …outer decoration ….” and that too bcz today is my Mom’s savitri devi’s bday thts it ……this hospital was always had been a place of worship work happiness and put lot of memories are linked with this ….I have completed 2 years of internship and remaining left ….I am sure I will also do that soon….and yes …”memories” I agree with this ….when we interns joined this hospital ..and now …nothing is same at hall …
Or I can say ….happiness has no connection with this place now ….not bcz of medical facilities and mentors ….we have very good doctors each patient is treated well still this is not same anymore …”
I can see Isha and Pragya going towards their duties ….
“Hey Isha ,Pragya …hope you both r fine ”
I can listen them saying “yes ”
But if you wanna know the truth nothing is fine here …even our dr kabeer they are not the same hitler type…he is more arrogant now more workoholic….never leaves a single mistake ….never fails to give punishment …!!!
And yes there is a topic …”saachi ” about her no one wants to talk about …and today …this was the day decided for saachi and dr kabeers marriage…
Actually she “was” the new soul of this hospital ….” …but as I said happiness ….it never Lasts …””
I still remember that day …..that day we lost her for forever in front of all of us …still we didn’t did anything …..actually it would be better to say “she didn’t left us” we let her go ….
In that 6 months she made a special place in this hospital ….everyone was so attached to her and specially dr kabeer …both were most famous couple of this hospital …but yes destiny had some other plans they were engaged by that time ….both loved each other madly ….yes I agree !! Isha Pragya me we too loved her but as frnds …as best friends …!! She never thought ill of us …always just about us …!!
Even today it’s been 1 year she is gone …still I can’t believe she is no more …in fact no one is able to accept this truth …!!
FLASHBACK–
After kanchis engagement –
Kabeer – come in
Veer ,Isha ,Pragya ,saachi – (making puppy faces)
Kabeer – now what you all want …
Veer – sir we want nothing just your two days off only. …
Kabeer – r u getting married veer ?
Veer – sir !!! Thts not fair …we little students just wanna enjoy a little on your engagements happiness …
Kabeer – I guess you all attended the engagement party right !
Veer – sir ! Think something who had thought that you would be engaged some day …now pls just two days…
Isha Pragya – yes sir pls
Kabeer – ok just two yes
Saachi – yes just two days of enjoyment and one day going to hills and other coming back …
Kabeer – tht means four or five day not fair I am not going …
Veer – hmne to Suna tha saachi tumhara mngetr promise nhi todta…huh(we had listened your fiancé don’t break promises huh)
Let’s leave guys …
Kabeer – ok ok fine …let’s go !!!
During their sight seeing …veer – wow ish Pragya look kabeer looks so cute in this pic…
Pragya – yes really…
Kabeer – (shouted)-saachiii…
All theee ran towards the cliff …
(Saanchi was trying to help a little cat to get up …in that she lost her balance and now she fell in the deepest pit of Himalayas…)
Veers POV
We all broke into tears ,shouted ,cried ,asked for help ,got down the pit with the help of police…still we were not able to find her…someone told us this is the deepest pit no one can live after falling into this pit filled with jungles…
Kabeer just wanted to step down it was very difficult for all of us to stop him:..destiny played the game…we trio even handled the stress but kabeer …he broke down …after all seeing your loved one dying in front of your eyes was not easy….he didn’t spoke a word for next one week…that saachi who made him a normal person was no more…but for her wish ..to see this hospital reaching skies…he again started and this time he was more arrogant …and broken from inside…
In this hospital …everyone still remembers her but never expresses but eyes..!! Eyes can’t lie I can see that…dr kabeer still hopes …he still prays inside to destiny just to play one more game and get him his saachi back…
Now in this hospital there is no saachi aggarwal just her memories are alive…her wishes are alive…all say she must be dead…still dr kabeer carries a small ray of hope inside him…may be she is still with them”””
He even denied to put flowers on her photo frame ….I hope if our miss golgappa is somewhere around us then pls come back …many lives depend on her …and specially dr kabeer …he is alive for this hospital but is not living anymore …saachi we all miss you …
“Veeer!! Where are you lost come outside there is a big surprise for all of us”garv shouted….”you will be so happy to see that”….
“Happiness ! Whtever …I am coming ” I replied …(she took our pranks and dr kabeer innocence with her…)
PRESENT…
Veer went downstairs and his eyes were just filled with tears of happiness …he saw saachi !! Their saachi hugging kabeer….All veer Isha Pragya and others rushed to her …kabeeer – where were you all the time …if you were alive don’t you think you need to tell us…
Saachi- ssh…calm down…I was in coma just woke up one day back…a priest saved my life ….
So the destiny finally played a new game that gave us our saachi back….veer thought…
Kanchi got married that day only….❤️
I hope you guys liked the OS …keep commenting it encourages a lot …
47 Comments
wow it so super…while reading first part i feel sad fo kabir..and the climax twist is super
its really awesome..queen of os
you nailed it
Thankyou for all the praise sundari…this means so much to me as I was a little nervous during writing this one …but you cleared my doubts
It’s super and lil bit emotional
But I love it
Thankyou
wow…..excellent…there are no words left to describe how nice this os is…..
thank u dear ,for posting this os and waiting to hear from u more
Thankyou so much janu..for the praise ..this really means so much to me
So emotional part u made me cry
So sorrry ashnita
Aww in begining of os i feel bad n really i m crying don’t knw why but atlast the twist make me happy thank u 4 amz os
Thankyou niyaa…its good to know you liked this os
Superb yaar.All the kanchi story writers have magic in their hand.I really respect ur ideas yaar .keep writing ????
Thanks a lot dear …this means a lot
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee os super duper hit fantastic i need to ask this are u a professional writer or what i mean u write such wonderful ff and os’s brilliant work and pl. update the next part of your ff asap…..
I am so happy you liked it erica…your comment made me jump …Nd yes sure I will try to update as soon as possible dear
Yes it’s just … means nothing to say.
Destiny’s game is so good.
Happy for kanchi as they become one finally.
Thankyou so much .Glad you liked it
Wowwwwww… Just wowwww❤
Thankyou ❤️
Wow loved it can you please write an OS where saanchi takes another janam and comes back something like that if you can please
Thankyou mahira…yes I can write that as an OS …I will try dear
I liked this os for a moment I though she really died happy she is alive ? N they live happily ever after…
Glad you liked it ?
Its awesome the shock that I get while reading and am stuck for 5 mints …really amazing yaar gd work…
I am so happy you liked it prema…
awesome trisha .
end was fantastic
Thankyou alia
Wow!just amazing. What an emotional shot. Awesome climax. U r awesome trisha………
Thankyou so much sandhya …glad you liked it
Nice yaar bt it was too short?so pls nxt time give a update lil long with lots of love and also romantic scenes of sabir?
Sure Chandni and thanks a lot
Superb as usual.
Thankyou
Sorry for the late comment
I m a silent reader of all ur os and ff……I hv been loving all ur os
I can’t understand how can you weave such a beautiful story…..
Ur os was mind blowing……a bit emotional at first…which almost made me cry…….
The climax was super cool….with all that sanchi coming back from coma and a priest saving her life….
I wish I had such a beautiful writing sense I could have scored full in Eng composition writing…..but poor me I got 3 marks less
I do hv to study as my exams are going on but ur writing is too good to let me study
Thankyou so much sia …for all your praise …you don’t know I was about to jump when I read your comment …I am so glad you liked it …and yes this means a lot siya so thankq once again
While reading the first half I felt bad…but was really happy when Garv said there is a surprise…loved it Dr…
Thankyou Ishan
It’s isha* so sorry for mistake
TRISha trisha you are just making me mad with ur writings …it’s was so emotional and tooooo goood just lovedddd. IIttyt !!! And love you too ?…
Thankq
The story is nice after some time I fill bed for all and much kabeer and veer. But last Sean’s is superb.
Thanks a lot
It was a perfect combo of emotions…. From love to sadness….. From tears to smiles…….. Loved it soooo muchhhh……. And ur idea of veer to be the narrator was superbbb…….. Trishu u nailed it!!!
Thankyou so much abhilasha ….this means so much to me ….it boosted my confidence …thnks a lot
No words to say bestest OS u always surprise us with your writing .keep it up dear ? .we all will be waiting for next Os
THANks a lot Neera
sorry for late comments trisha dear, today u really made us cry, first when sanchi left(just thought how can destiny become so rude & let that happen, kabir that too without sanchi, this thought really sounds so terrible, how could he be facing this,all this time), & when sanchi returned, it was just like tears turned to real joy………………wow, our sanchi is back……………really trisha, ur writings r so incredible that even if we know its completely a fiction,we get so much attached to it………..the credit goes to u dear……….u r just an amazing writer………….
ITs absolutely fine ria ….thankyou so much for all the praise …your comment made me to jump and increased my confidence up to 100 times ….