Hi readers! Me, Pui is here with a Naamkaran ff. It is a different story as compared to the ongoing track although it may have references from the serial. I would really like to know your views on this version and please leave a comment as a token of encouragement. Appreciation is welcome and criticism is more welcome. It starts from Avni – Neel’s marriage.
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Neel (shouting) : Ananya, do you even know what have you done? We have got married. We have taken seven rounds of fire and this means that we need to stay together for seven births. I cant tolerate you for even a day how will I stay with you for seven births.
Why? Why did you do this, Ananya?
Avni: Neel,you dont love Riya and didnt want to get married to her and she doesnt love you either. So why did you want to get married to her and ruin your life?
Neel: I dont love you either. My life has been ruined more by getting married to you than it would have been by marrying Riya. I dont want to listen to this nonsense. Come to the point and tell me why did you do this?
Avni: Neel, Riya was going to run away. She had already run away so I came to the mandap to save the respect of your family by marrying you.
Neel: Oh Really ! You came to save the respect of my family. The girl who doesnt have her own self- respect is talking about family’s respect and that too saving it. Unbelievable!
Avni: What are you saying Neel?
Neel: You destroyed your best friend’s wedding rituals by changing the kangans and did what not to destroy the rituals. You got insulted by Dayawanti Mehta, you got slapped by Riya and still you are staying in this house.
Avni: You are no one to question my self- respect or why I am staying in Mehta house. Its none of ypur business. I dont owe you any explanation of my actions.
Neel: Leave the Mehta house aside. Tell me why did you do THIS?? Tell me why Ananya, or should I say Avni?
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This is all for the first time. I know it was short but I couldnt help it. The next update may be delayed but keep yourselves glued to the page.
Keep smiling and watching Naamkaran.
16 Comments
its awesome , so here neil reveals that he knows the truth after marriage itself . eagerly waiting for next epi . update soon
Thank u Varshini. Yes and it is gonna be followed by loads of drama. Will surely update soon ??
Hii your ff seems nice and all the best for it..
Hii
Thank u ?
Interesting one ?
Thank u ?
It seems interesting, it hurts me when Neil insulted Avni. I liked how you kept it short for the suspense. But do post regularly, if you want ppl reading this. Because, ppl can forget. Anyways best of luck.
One Request – Add many Avneil Romance
Thank u . Even i dont like when Avni is insulted. I ll try my best to post soon.
Its awesome
Thank u ?
Omg Pui?
I really love it…I was waiting for this uptade for so long and you finally did it.
Its amazing..the way you wrote it all.
I just love it❤
Keep updating and yaa your readers love you?
Thank u so much Pihu??. Thank u for encouraging me all d time to keep on n on ??
Nice dr
Thank u ?
Excuse me
Sry 4 changing d topic
I cud not find avniel ffs here vich used 2 b here vil someone tell me y dey had removed it from TU
I hope it is removed
Sry if i had hurt any1 and talkd nonsense
U can check the Naamkaran page for more ffs or search for them in the search box.