Hi everyone…. I m back with the first epi of my ff I know that I m early than expected but I couldn’t control myself I wanna know that if u all like my story or not. And if not then I don’t waste time on writing this…..so plz do comment each n every readers plz its my first time I m writing a story so I hope u guys like it…. Fingers crossed……
One fine day:
It was a beautiful morning and our three princesses were sleeping. Then another girl come and says;
Girl: C’mon guys get up…..we r getting late for the college…..hurry up
She snatches their blanket…one of the girl replies
Girl 2:arey yarr niyati di sone do na (yes guys it’s our very own ws aka niyati….)
Niyati: uth jao maharaniyon warna tsaunami express a jaye gi……ufaaq, neeti, maro……uthoooooo
Niyati thinks to herself:ye log to uth hi nahi rahy hain kuch to karna parhy ga
She gets an idea and she starts screaming: guys utho wo a gayi ha uth jao warna sab ki khair nahi wo pani le k a rahi ha……..
Hearing all three of them woke up and said at once:where is she? Where is she? Kahan ha naina api????
They looked at niyati and she was laughing like hell and said: jab ma ne kaha tab to nahi uthy aur naina ka sirf nam liya aur maharaniyan uth k beth gi …….wah g wah….
Maro: niyati di u know na that u r so polite ap itny pyaar se humy uthati ho k lagta ha k lori de k sula rahi ho …….but naina api
Ufaaq: Naina api to eik dum hila k rakh deti……..aise uthati hain k
Neeti: k humy dobara neend hi nahi aati……
A voice comes from behind: acha bachu…..aise uthati hon ma abhi batati hn ma tum sab ko…….
And they all shout: Naina apiiiiiii………(here am I ) And hug her and says: we were just kiding api…..u know us na……
Naina: ok ok enough of ur flattering lets get ready u know we have cultural function today and we have to get ready and reach asap….so c’mon hurry up
Ufaaq: api u wait outside we will be ready in five mins
Niyati: five mins means five mins….no more than that ok
Ufaaq,maro.neeti :okkkkk
After half hour…..
Neeti: lets go guys we r ready
Niyati: neeti u r ready but what about others….un k bagair hi chaly jaen kya(she says this out loud so that maro and ufaq can hear her and signs naina)
Naina:han yar chalo waise b kisi ko time ki qadar hi nahi ha to hum kyun apna time waste karen…….
Maro and ufaaq rushes to them:nooooooooooooooooooo we r ready lets go….and they start leaving naina and niyati looks at them and gives “in ka kuch nahi ho sakta “ and leaves…neeti being the younger one follows them silently……..
After an hour
They enter the college and our drama queen’s(maro) phone ring but she is busy in taking selfies with ufaaq so Naina hits her on head and says: phone to utha le
Maro: oh han dheyan hi nahi raha…..
And she talk with some one and disconnects the call
Maro: guys they r coming
Neeti:haww maro api ur bf is coming…..
Maro gives an angry look to neeti and says: duffer mera bf nahi balky frnds gang a raha ha
And there enters our frnds gang ( which includes nikita, khushi,ariana,preetypreeti,angel pari,sharmanangel aka riya)
Gang: hey guys whats up????
Niyati:so u all r finally here
Riya:OMG guys u all r looking fab
Naina:thanx honey u all are also looking stunning
Ufaaq:oh hello……lets go inside otherwise I’ll get tan
Khushi: han yarr same here I don’t wanna get tan
Pari :uffff……in ka kuch nahi ho sakta…..
Nikita: right pari di lets go inside
They all went inside the college building and started their chit chat. After sometime there is an announcement about the performances. All friends go to the auditorium and Naina and niyati go to back stage. Yarr niyati I m so wooried he didn’t come yet we r about to began the show………….
Ok so I m done with it I know its kinda short but I wanna post the next part after ur reviews so plz do tell me how’s it plz it’s a huge and humble request……
Love u all <3 <3 <3
Bye everyone
16 Comments
It was fab dear u should continue pls post nxt asps
sure sweety and thanks for the comment
Look who is back pari is back finallyyyy miss u shooooo muchh and see i,m holding my ears for not commenting on previous part forgive me….
And coming to this part i loved ittttttttt full of dosti yari so how it can be boring and u include all TU frnds soooo i really enjoyed it…….
When will be next part up post it soon na…..
And how r u all good how is life nd studies going??????
So finally u r back glad to see u and no need hold ears i forgave u and thanx for commenting everything is fine and studies bus ups and down k sath chal rai ha. Actually i need to talk to u so can u plz msg me in the inbox
Ahhhh!!! Actually my TU dm dont work…. R u at twitter or fb???? If yes then let me know we can talk there…or mail will also work….
Take care!
Naina….u writing an ff???
Bataya kyu nhi
I was missing u yr
And this piece of writing is superb
How’s u???
How is life going
Mujhe bhool toh nhi gyi
Where were u from so many days
I have so many ques nainu and I want the answer for all
PM me if possible darling
Urs
Khushi….❤❤
khushi kahan ghum ho ma ne bataya to tha k ma ff post karny waly hon tum ne parha hi nahi aur comment b nahi kiya 🙁 🙁 but thats fine. everything is good n me too….nah tumhy kaise bhool sakti hon tumhy bhool gai hoti to tumhy add kyun karti ff ma…..actually i am really busy in studies u know na i m senior so meetings, functions, projects, assignments and alot of other stuff time hi nahi milta that comment karny ka but as i m a bit free now bcz the marking period is ending and plus thanksgiving break also so i will post the ff and try to comment too……and yes u can msg me in the inbox i will surely reply u
hey di
this is balamirra, i have been writing ff’s from a few months, do read mine
coming to the epi, it was too good. loved it .
love
yb
Hi yb how r u…yeah i m reading ur ff since start but didn’t get time to comment sorry for that but ur ffs are amazing and thanx for commenting
Awwwwwww u r back!!! I thought u went all fuuussshhhh but u r here!!
Wonderful start
brilliant!!! Go ahead. Eager to know wht’ll happen onwards
pls post asap
loads of love sweetheart
tc
thats not fair aru u call me friend and u didnt answer my ques plz come to my inbox if u r free i wanna talk to u
anyways thanx for the reply but i think no body liked it so i am not sure about posting the next part
Ruks It was superbbbbbbb toooo cooll thnku I m soooo happyyy.
U did great job.
Sooo gooddd writer.
Too nice.
Post soonnn
Love u
Thanks my sweet preeti…..love u ❤❤❤
oh ho, mai to bari, alshi aur bari ho gyi hu (alshi phlese thi bt bari kb hui?)………. sry ha, xms ki wajahse mai par nh pti ffs, so pls maf kr do…….. mujhe mra prt bra accha lga, bt ap humpe dadagiri krti hai, hw rude! :P…. jst joking, bt ap bari acchi ho, hume ff me dal diya, bki sb ko diya to diya mujhe v de diya! thank u………. ab ye bnda kn hai? Maro di ka bf nhi to kya hsbnd :P???? pst soon… luv u, bye- Neeti
Thanks for commenting dear i m gonna post my next chap day after tom. So do read and tell me. How’s it