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The Fragile Trust (Chapter 5)

RiaBy RiaDecember 30, 2016Updated:January 18, 201745 Comments5 Mins Read
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The Fragile Trust
Chapter 5

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously. I’m still not done replying to any of the comments. I’ll do it by the weekend. Here’s an early update for you all because TU won’t allow me to update during the new year weekend. Also, don’t bash me up after this update.

Happy New Year to all of you! Hope you all will write another fantastic book of 365 pages in this year coming up ahead.

In case if someone missed out on the previous chapter, here’s the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-4-ria/

HAPPY READING!

• • • • •

(NAINA)

“Tushar, make me stand”, I complained giggling as he made his way towards our apartment with me in his arms. He looked at me and passing a cheesy smile, continued walking. “Tushar, what will Twinkle think of us?”, I asked.

“Oh, don’t worry about that. Twinkle knows how much I love this girl”, he replied. I let out a soft giggle as we stood in front of the apartment door. He turned the knob and the two of us walked inside only to see a completely alarming scene in front of us.

Twinkle and Kunj laid there on the floor hugging each other tightly and sleeping. I looked at them and slowly shifted my gaze at Tushar who had the same expression as mine.

“Naina, how did Kunj land up here? And even if he did, why are these two in such an intimate position?”, he asked as if I’m supposed to know everything. “Put me down Tushar”, I muttered and he made me stand.

We walked towards them and I pulled Twinkle up, apart from Kunj. “Twinkle!”, I called her patting her cheeks. “Kunj”, she screamed and kissed my right cheek. I looked at her hopelessly and then turned my gaze at Tushar who’d been suffering from the same situation.

“Twinkle!”, he remarked and kissed his cheek. I laughed and he turned to look at me helplessly rubbing his cheek while Kunj wrapped his arms around him and moved closer to him. “Kunj, I’m not gay”, he shouted trying to free himself from his grip.

“These two are completely inebriated. Let me get them some lemon which they could bite into”, I said making Twinkle sit on the sofa.

___

“Quick Naina”, Tushar shouted as I hurriedly exited the kitchen. I handed a slice of lemon to Kunj as he thrust it inside his mouth. “Is he gay or what!”, Tushar asked as I tried to make Twinkle get a bite into the lemon.

“Tushar, make her bite this”, I said giving up. “Naina, I’m holding her face straight. You make her bite into it, okay?”, he asked as I nodded my head in agreement.

___

I changed into a short frock for the night and remembered that I’d forgotten to bring the clothes from the laundry even though Twinkle had reminded me. I hate Tushar for always romancing with me that I forget what I’ve to do. I tied up my hair in a bun and switched off the lights. I was about to go to my room when someone rang the doorbell.

“Who’s it at this hour of the night!”, I mumbled under my breath glancing at my phone. I opened the door and I was soon pushed against the wall. “What the hell!”, I remarked while Tushar turned around the knob to lock the door.

“Tushar, you scared me”, I complained. He walked closer to me as I asked, “What the hell are you even trying to do at this hour of the night? Go back to your room. I’m damn sleepy, I need to sleep plus, I forgot to get back the clothes from the laundry so, I need to wake up early tomorrow.” “Seduce you, baby”, he replied and I gave him a fed up look.

“Good night Tushar!”, I was about to walk away when he held my wrist and pushed me back against the wall. He nuzzled into my neck and muttered, “You broke your promise darling.”

I quizzically furrowed my eyebrows and asked, “What promise now?” “My good bye kiss”, he replied. “Shut up Tushar. Go back to your room now. I’m damn sleepy and moreover, I’m in no mood to kiss you now”, I replied and turned around the knob of the door. He kicked the door to close it.

“I’m going to kiss you then”, he replied. “Tushar, look there’s a cockroach”, I remarked squeaking. He turned around to look at the direction as I slowly opened the door and pushed him outside. “Good night Tushar!”, I greeted and closed the door before he could come inside again.

‘I love you!’, I messaged him and walked back to my room. I pulled the blanket over myself while my phone vibrated. ‘More..’, Tushar texted back as I kissed his name on the screen and drifted to sleep.

• • • • •

A/N: I know Naina’s voice was unexpected plus, I apologise for a chapter without any TwiNj moments.

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    45 Comments

    1. Aamna_2690 on December 30, 2016 6:45 pm

      Ria!!
      It was fab dear…
      sorry for not being able to comment on each shot…
      I luved it dear…..
      Do post the Next one soon…..

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 9:53 pm

        Hey,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Please don’t be sorry. I completely understand that you must’ve been busy. I’ll try posting tomorrow probably. ?

    2. Sohi on December 30, 2016 6:54 pm

      Hey even tushar and naina are cute and awesome
      Who are playing the characters of naina and tushar do tell us
      But plz don’t tell us to imagine yuvi and mahi ok
      Tell someone other than them do continue bye

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 9:55 pm

        Hey Sohi,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, as I told before that since I’m writing this fan fiction as a story, I haven’t assigned any actors/actresses to the characters. You’re free to imagine whomever you want, but ofcourse not YuHi because they’re included in the story and will be added later on. ?

    3. RUTU..... on December 30, 2016 6:57 pm

      Cute episode dear an amazing one too missed twinjs seen but it’s OK ???

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 9:56 pm

        Hey Rutu,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this update. TwiNj scenes coming up ahead. ?

    4. adeebarizwan on December 30, 2016 6:59 pm

      hey ria di….u rocked i just loved it

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 9:57 pm

        Thank you so much Adeeba! I’m glad you liked the chapter. ?

    5. Ashiya on December 30, 2016 7:35 pm

      Heya di,
      Happy new year in advance.naina’s pov was good.post soon.Loads of love???

      – Ashiya

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 9:59 pm

        Hey Ashiya,
        Thank you so much dearie! I’m glad you liked the update. I’ll try posting the next chapter probably tomorrow. ?

        Love,
        Ria.

    6. Chiku on December 30, 2016 7:41 pm

      Hey ria
      That was cute??lovely. I loved it. No problem if no twinj scenes but it is veryyyyy cute???
      Post soon
      Loads of love

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 10:00 pm

        Thank you Chiku! I’m glad you liked the update despite no Twinj scenes. I’ll probably be able to post tomorrow and if not, then day after for sure. ?

        Love,
        Ria.

    7. Presha on December 30, 2016 7:53 pm

      Hey ria awesome yaar just loved it

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 10:01 pm

        Thank you so much Presha! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    8. Romaisha on December 30, 2016 8:28 pm

      Damnnnn ❤❤❤❤????????????????????

      I just read 5 chapters together and damn i hate you! Why did it end yaar?? ?????

      Oh god now i gotta wait till next yr for next episode ???

      Anyway…. A very welll Happy new year!! Since i wouldnt get to wish you

      Loads of love dii and i enjoyed this episode so damn much!! ?????

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 10:03 pm

        Hey Romaisha,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update. Aow! Now I feel like I should’ve written the entire story and told you? Anyway, patience bears a sweet fruit. Probably, the next one is coming up tomorrow.?

        Well, happy new year to you too! Also, post your SS and FF both soon. I’m also waiting.?

        All love,
        Ria.

    9. Zuha Fatima on December 30, 2016 9:12 pm

      Hey Ria,
      Well no need to apologize as this chapter was equally amazing and enjoyable. Naina and Tushar are quite cute. Also, the way Kunj acted when he was woken up made me burst into laughter!

      Loads of Love and Support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      “Happy New Year in Advance!”

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 10:31 pm

        Hey Zuha,
        Thank you so much baby! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, when I wrote that Kunj scene even I was laughing, but fortunately no one stared at me because they know I write. ?

        Happy New Year to you too! ??

        All love,
        Ria.

    10. Riddhi on December 30, 2016 9:14 pm

      Missed twinj scene but still it was superb

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 10:32 pm

        Thank you Riddhi! TwiNj scenes coming up ahead. ?

    11. Monica on December 30, 2016 9:25 pm

      Heya love!
      Dude I miss you! 🙁 its been so long since we’ve had a proper conversation! I HATE YOUR COLLEGE!

      Anyway … talking about the chapter, although I missed twinj scenes but naishar (Tushar and Naina …. I know it sounds funny but its fine ?) scenes were too romantic and I loved them too!

      Will be waiting for the next chapter!

      Love you! x

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 10:59 pm

        Heya love,
        Aww .. I miss you too!? Well, did you just say you hate my college? Hi5! Even I do. Yay! I mean you already know this, but yeah?

        Also, glad that you liked this chapter. Well, Naishar is a really nice name. I wanted one, but I wasn’t getting a proper one so, yay! My bae suggested. TwiNj scenes coming up ahead. ?

        Probably, tomorrow. ?

        All my love,
        Ria.

    12. Sara28 on December 30, 2016 9:39 pm

      Hey Ria,
      You see, I was not disappointed. I told you it would be interesting to add Naina and Tushar. I enjoyed it! They are too cute. Yea I kinda missed Twinj, but the part you added them in was so funny. Hope that your college gives you a break and you can post soon. Love you!

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:02 pm

        Heya Sara,
        I miss you too!? Let’s catch up sometime soon.

        Well, glad you weren’t disappointed and instead liked the chapter. Thank you so much! Haha.. I burst out laughing while writing the Twinj part. Well, Twinj scenes coming up ahead.

        College : break, don’t match?

        All my love,
        Ria.

    13. Aanya_pandey on December 30, 2016 11:33 pm

      Yrrr.. naina n tushar.. they r soo cute..
      Hope to read ur further part soon??

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:04 pm

        Thank you so much Aanya! I’m glad you found Naishar (Monica suggested) cute. The next update will probably be up tomorrow. ?

    14. SidVee_Yashvee on December 31, 2016 1:26 am

      Awesomeeee.. naina n tushar are so adorable.. loved them?.. and also twinj scene was funny??.. do cont soon ❤

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:05 pm

        Thank you so much Yashvee! I’m glad you liked the update. The next chapter will probably be up by tomorrow. ?

    15. SidMin23 on December 31, 2016 3:47 am

      Good episode

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:06 pm

        Thank you! ?

    16. Adya on December 31, 2016 5:56 am

      Ok.. so how are you ? Idk why but I wanted to ask this question.
      Today’s episode was damn cute . Naina and tushar are soo sweet man! They make a sweet nd lovely couple and the way you portrayed kunj today was actually superb. I really burst into laughter.
      I’ll wait for the next one till the next year.
      HAPPY NEW YEAR.
      Love you!

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:09 pm

        Hey Adya,
        I’m fine. How’re you?

        Well, really glad you found the chapter cute. Looks like Naishar (as suggested by Monica) are famous now? the Twinj scene made me too laugh while writing. ?

        See, new year’s here. Yay! You’ll get to read it soon. Probably, tomorrow. ?

        Happy new year to you too!?

        Love,
        Ria.

    17. SidMinTwiNj on December 31, 2016 11:08 am

      Heya ria
      Though I missed TwiNj scenes but still I enjoyed it… Twinkle thinking naina as Kunj and kissing her cheek n Kunj thinking tushar as Twinkle n kissing on his cheek and going close to him and tushar saying Kunj I’m not a gay is so?????? waiting for next… Post soon…

      Happy New Year in advance…

      Love you?

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:13 pm

        Hey di,
        Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed through the chapter and found the friendly scene funny. The next update would probably be up tomorrow. ?

        Happy New Year you too! ?

        Love,
        Ria.

    18. Manvi on December 31, 2016 3:49 pm

      Hey Ria
      The episode was cute☺
      Well i like Naina and Tushar’s chemistry too☺

      N ya Happy New Year??

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:15 pm

        Thank you so much Manvi! I’m glad you liked the chapter as well as Naishar (as suggested by Monica).

        Happy New Year to you too!?

    19. Ramya on December 31, 2016 7:17 pm

      Awesome amazing
      Superb episode
      TWINJ to think tushar n naina as der parts
      Was so cute n funny
      Loads of love keep smiling

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:16 pm

        Hey Ramya,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the chapter and enjoyed throughout.

        Love,
        Ria

    20. Purnima.agrawal30 on January 1, 2017 7:26 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:17 pm

        Thank you Purnima! ?

    21. kruti on January 2, 2017 1:36 am

      Nice one ria
      Continue asap

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:18 pm

        Thank you Kruti! The next one would probably be up tomorrow. ?

    22. shreya098 on January 2, 2017 12:09 pm

      Tushar and naina are sooo cute??…
      Looved it❤

      • Ria on January 2, 2017 11:19 pm

        Thank you Shreya! Glad you found Naishar (as suggested by Monica) cute. ??

    23. baby on January 7, 2017 2:47 am

      ria…………ria…………..ria……….. 😀
      mera bas chale toh mein abhi bas yehi naam japlun
      hahhaaa ohk ohk sry bt srsly yr kya likha hai……..
      hhahaa becharee tushar n naina halat dekhi thi n gay hhahaaa
      kissed on dere faces fabulous yr still laughing
      luv u lods osm dear♥♥♥♥

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