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The Fragile Trust (Chapter 2)

RiaBy RiaDecember 22, 2016Updated:January 18, 201754 Comments4 Mins Read
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The Fragile Trust
Chapter 2

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously. But are you all sure that you want me to continue with this story? Because the response doesn’t convey so.

In case if someone missed out on the previous update, here’s the link below:

Chapter 1

• • • • •

(TWINKLE)

I changed myself into a loose top and shorts and dumped the dress I had been wearing into the laundry bag. I pulled out my phone and texted Naina. I didn’t want her to be annoyed the rest of the night for disturbing her romantic and intimate moment.

Me: Naina, don’t forget to get the clothes from the laundry. It’s your responsibility today.

Naina couldn’t remember the infinitesimal things. I’d to remind her about all her responsibilities which we’d divided among ourselves. ‘God knows what she’ll do after getting married’, I thought and let out a sigh of relief. Suddenly, my phone vibrated and I checked it to find Naina’s text.

Naina: Okay.

It seemed harmless enough which meant I didn’t have to fear any of our arguments. I placed my phone on the table and took out my books from the cupboard. I switched on the room conditioner and settled down on the bed to study, but who is ever in the mood to study!

I got up and walked towards the kitchen. I searched up the shelves and drawers and found a pack of ready-to-eat white sauce pasta. I would’ve jumped on seeing my favourite pasta which I could’ve without sharing, but I feared Naina to come back really soon and quickly emptied the pack in a vessel and adding some water, let it boil.

___

I settled down on my bed again with my laptop open in front of me. I clicked on the ‘Downloads’ folder to search for a movie which I could watch while eating. I was searching through the folder when my phone vibrated. I pulled it out and saw the sender. It was an unknown number. I ignored the messaged. These random texts!

My phone vibrated again and I pulled it out thinking it to be Naina, but it was again the same number. I opened the messages to block the number and just glanced over the texts.

Sender: Hey! It’s Kunj.
Wassup!
Me: Hey!

I was elated to see his message. I had stalked him everywhere, but his number wasn’t to be found anywhere. But wait! How does he know my number! Is it there on any of the social networking sites?

I quickly checked all my accounts and found that I hadn’t given my number anywhere. I didn’t want any random person to text me. Surely I was happy with Kunj texting me, but I needed to know from where did he get my number.

Kunj: Can you come out to your patio?

What the hell! Why now?

Me: At this hour of the night?
Kunj: There’s nothing to fear about.

Who told him I’m afraid? Certainly I wasn’t. But I don’t want him to see how flushed I am. Already.

Me: Actually I’m having my dinner. If you could possibly continue texting me?
Kunj: Okay. Are you still home alone?
Me: Yes. Naina and Tushar went for dinner.
Kunj: Shall I come over till then?

God! I feel the colour on my cheeks rising. I felt great seeing Kunj’s concern towards me, but I didn’t know what to do! I was flustered. I wanted him not to come because I was completely flushed by now and I did want him to come on the other side.

Me: Okay.

I don’t know why I typed that, but I did. I smiled looking at the conversation and saved his number by the contact name ‘Love’.

• • • • •

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    54 Comments

    1. Ayu on December 22, 2016 12:40 am

      Awwewwee❤️❤️??
      Mujhe pta tha!!! Love is in the air??
      Loved it dear! Cont soon!
      Love u?

      • Ria on December 24, 2016 3:14 pm

        Hey Ayu,
        Love is in the air. Haha.. looks like the prologue didn’t prove that. It’s like a continuation from the prologue. Well, thank you so much darling! I’m glad you liked it.
        The next chapter is coming up soon.

        Love,
        Ria.

    2. Anam_sidhant on December 22, 2016 1:21 am

      Hey Ria,first of all sorry for not commenting on previous one was out of town and there’s no signal (not at all) so I couldn’t comment!❤️ And of course we want you to continue the ff, I literally wait for your update❤️ You’re a amazing writer, I truly adore your writing! And this episode was epitome of cuteness. Just loved it!❤️ Post soon❤️ Loves!❤️❤️

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:23 pm

        Hey Anam,
        Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked the update and found it cute. Don’t be so sorry you chudail?

        Love,
        Ria.

      • Anam_sidhant on December 27, 2016 12:01 am

        I hate you too!?

      • Anam_sidhant on December 26, 2016 6:33 pm

        Now I m cursing my self for being so sorry!?

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 10:06 pm

        I hate you Anam!?

    3. Sohi on December 22, 2016 1:26 am

      As always good, cute I liked it
      I’ve no other things to write as you are awesome
      Do continue

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:24 pm

        Hey Sohi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out.

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

    4. Aanya_pandey on December 22, 2016 2:01 am

      That ws an awesome episode yrr..

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:25 pm

        Hey Aanya,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update. The next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out.

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

    5. SidMin23 on December 22, 2016 2:09 am

      Nice update and love twiNj text moment

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:26 pm

        Hey SidMin,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    6. Sara28 on December 22, 2016 3:40 am

      Ria,
      Girl are you good? Look at all those comments and positivity you got and you still said we don’t want you to continue? Ok if it was that unclear then let me clear it right now. PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I actually find this story line pretty interesting. I don’t know what’s coming next so it keeps me hanging at the edge of my seat. So post soon. Love you!

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:28 pm

        Hey Sara,
        Okay, don’t scold me. You know I’m already continuing. Well, well, don’t fall from your seat? thank you for this beautiful comment. I’m glad you’re liking the storyline. ?

        All my love,
        Ria.

    7. Simiyy on December 22, 2016 4:14 am

      Hey Ria
      I really enjoyed this episode and please continue writing it
      Post soon
      Love Simiyy

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:30 pm

        Hey Simiyy,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update. Well, as you know I’m already continuing.

        Love,
        Ria.

    8. Presha on December 22, 2016 7:28 am

      Hey riya its fabulous lovely

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:31 pm

        Hey Presha,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    9. Maria on December 22, 2016 7:49 am

      Hey Ria,
      Look at those who have commented on this not the ones who just ignored it.

      Okay so coming to the episode, it was simply superb! Just amazing and yeah love is in the air, eagerly waiting for the next one! So try to post soon.

      Loads of love?

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:32 pm

        Hey Maria,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update. Well, the next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

        Love,
        Ria.

    10. Aaliya on December 22, 2016 8:07 am

      It was amezing but Ria can I ask you if it was you who is the writer of ff rich or poor plz tell me I really want know bcoz I want that ff ????

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:34 pm

        Hey Aaliya,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, the author of that FF was happiness. I don’t know why she isn’t uploading her FF.

        The next chapter of this story has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

    11. Shatakshi on December 22, 2016 11:09 am

      Omg I was going to miss this!
      Ria it’s Awesome
      Seriously I m curious to read more
      Please post fast….
      Love u baby doll ???

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:35 pm

        Hey Shatakshi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, the next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

        Love,
        Ria.

    12. Chiku on December 22, 2016 1:36 pm

      Awww!! Thats soo cute!!!!
      Ahaana love is in the air !!??❤️❤️Pata thain mujhe???
      Post soon
      Love u❤️

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:36 pm

        Hey Chiku,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Love,
        Ria.

    13. rashiverma2199 on December 22, 2016 2:08 pm

      Ria it was awesome…..feeling good to be back on #TU…..love u people loads…..amazing

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:37 pm

        Hey Rashi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Love,
        Ria.

    14. Riddhi on December 22, 2016 2:56 pm

      As always u rocked loved it post soon

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:38 pm

        Hey Riddhi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    15. Zuha Fatima on December 22, 2016 7:15 pm

      Hey Ria,
      Well is it any question to ask, ‘do you want me to continue?’ Shut up, you dumbo! Of course we all want you to continue. So dare you ask it once again, and just chill, comments does not matter as far as you are enjoying writing and people are entertained through them, so write for those who love to read your writings not for those who pass a sly smile, ignoring!

      Coming to the chapter this was definitely damn cute. Twinj’s chat was nice and the name which Twinkle gave ‘Love’ was mind blowing! Good job. You seriously are amazing at writing and the person wants to read more of them so please post soon 😉 {I know it is Monica’s all time favorite dialogue but ‘Suhbat ka asar pad jata hai’ look by being her friend I am getting used to her habits 😛 }
      Loads of Love and Support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:40 pm

        Hey Zuha,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update. Haha.. thanks for appreciating my writing skills though it ain’t any good. As you know, I’m already continuing so, calm down. Hehe..

        All love,
        Ria.

    16. Monica on December 22, 2016 7:34 pm

      Firstly, I strongly believe that you should register your name in a mental asylum! Ask why? ? cause you’re so stupid to think that nobody wants you to continue this ff but what I see is completely positive response. So now, shut up and sit up straight and write the next chapters, alright?

      Anyway, talking about the chapter … It was amazing! I so loved it! Specially when Kunj texted her and their conversation! Update us soon!

      All my love,
      Your Stupid ?

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:43 pm

        Heya Cutie Pie ?,
        Well, don’t worry. I’ll take you along while registration so, that we both could be staying together. I love you nah, that’s why!

        Haha.. Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update plus, their conversation.

        All my love,
        Ria.

    17. Manvi on December 22, 2016 7:50 pm

      Hey Ria
      This was very intresting☺….
      Waiting eagerly to know why Kunj wanted to meet Twinkle…..

      Post next soon??

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:44 pm

        Hey Manvi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

    18. kruti on December 22, 2016 8:07 pm

      Ria sooooooooooo sorry I have somehow missed to read your previous epi…..all thanjs to my exams……Soo Sorry yar I hadnt read it nd commented
      Anyways d story is progressing well…..this secret admiring is d best part ……I so loved it
      Continue asap

      Love u 🙂

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:45 pm

        Hey Kruti,
        It’s alright. I do understand your part so, don’t worry.

        Well, I’m glad you liked the update and the secretly admiring idea. Thank you so much!

        Love,
        Ria.

    19. SidMinTwiNj on December 22, 2016 8:09 pm

      Hey ria
      This is so amazing… Twinkle saving Kunj number as Love is so cute… I over all love each and bit of this TwiNj conversation everything… Try posting next soon…

      Love you?

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:47 pm

        Hey di,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update and the idea of Twinkle saving Kunj’s number as ‘Love’.

        Love,
        Ria.

    20. Ramya on December 22, 2016 8:51 pm

      Lovely ria itss amazing beautiful
      Post ssoon loads of love keep smiling

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:48 pm

        Hey Ramya,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Love,
        Ria.

    21. Ashiya on December 22, 2016 9:55 pm

      Ria di it’s amazing. …..nd do u still have any doubts regarding continuing dis masterpiece. ……………pls do continue……We eagerly wait for u to post d ff nd u ask whether you should continue it or nt……Dats nt done …..If u again ask dis question den I’m nt gonna talk 2 u…..
      And d story z shaping very well………
      PoSt soon…
      Love???

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:52 pm

        Hey Ashiya,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, the next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

        Love,
        Ria.

    22. AnShIta on December 22, 2016 10:26 pm

      Hey Ria di!
      Came back from my trip a while back and now that I finally read this article, I have to say that your works are truly ‘priceless’.
      Well, how can you even imagine that there’s someone out there who wouldn’t be waiting for your updates! I mean, this is so mesmerizing! Of course, everyone who reads your FF wants you to continue. I agree that a few comments from silent readers would be great, but look at you, you already have soooo many people to read and comment on your posts! As far as I can see, not a single article written by you on TwiNj has ever received less comments. So, at the end of it, all I’d say is that yes, we sure do NEED the next chapter on our screens!
      Coming to the second chapter, it was terrific! Like, Kunj’s texts to Twinkle were so nice to read. And, the fact that Twinkle has named Kunj ‘Love’ makes me sure that there sure is love in the air!
      I am eagerly looking forward to the next one! Do post soon!
      Loads of love!?????

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:55 pm

        Hey Anshi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update. Haha.. I’m continuing this story, don’t worry. Well, since I’m officially not talking to you for thinking about ending you FF so, the next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

        All love,
        Ria.

    23. Adya on December 22, 2016 10:26 pm

      Ohk so after getting such a positive response you are asking us if we want you to continue or not ?
      So Mrs . Debosmita di … ” KINDLY CONTINUE YOUR FF “…. hope it’s clear for you now cozy I can’t make it more clear as my phone doesn’t have an option of bold..
      Is that okay with you ?

      Now the episode… well naina is the name given by me to Sara di ! So I love it already nd forgot to mention in the previous comment that I was too overwhelmed to see this name. It was like a woooaww.. I love it extremely. Nd twinj’s conversation was worth reading.

      PLSSS POST THE NEXT ONE AND DO CONTINUE ! ( hope it was clear )

      Love you!

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:57 pm

        Hey Adya,
        Okay, I’m sorry nah. I know I misunderstood everyone out here. I’m truly overwhelmed seeing your response and support.

        Anyway, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update and Twinj’s conversation too plus, plus, the name Naina. I love the name just as you do.

        All love,
        Ria.

    24. SidVee_Yashvee on December 22, 2016 11:57 pm

      Hey Ria, good to see you back again 🙂 Sorry for not commenting on ur previous epi n the intro.. I really loved your storyline and the title of ur ff.. gosh, they are always amazing ❤.. and plz do continue this ff.. See you’re getting so much of love so plz continue it 🙂

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:58 pm

        Hey Yashvee,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this update and the title too. Don’t be sorry nah. I understand that you’d been keeping busy. Well, I’ve updated the next chapter. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

    25. Anayaali on December 23, 2016 2:06 pm

      Awesome?…
      So cute? ….
      Luvd it….❤?…plzzz post next asap

      • Ria on December 26, 2016 2:59 pm

        Hey Anayaali,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, the next chapter has been updated. Try checking it out:

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/fragile-trust-chapter-3-ria/

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