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Home»Fan Fiction»Fragile Heart (Part 1) (A frail girl)
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Fragile Heart (Part 1) (A frail girl)

meghsBy meghsAugust 13, 201713 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi frnds here we go. The first part of Fragile Heart

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“My heart is fragile. It’s not built for the pain you inflict on it.”

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The massive cricket ground is shown. A match is going on. Everyone concentration is towards the batsman. Last ball, but 6 more runs to win, it’s really do or die a situation.

A small girl is shown cheering, “chachu ..chachu? “, its little Sanvi.

The ball thrown spinning, a boy bats the ball with full force. There goes ball and it is a six. They  won the match at last moment. Lucky hugs him and says “congrats Sanky. ”

Sanskar smiles. Sanvi runs to Sanskar and says “hurray! chachu won the match. ” he takes her in arm and twirls her.

“Princess come let’s go home or otherwise your dadu will kill me for sure.” he said making Sanvi giggle.

They reach home. Then slowly enter without making any sound or you can say by hiding. Pari who saw it moves towards them. Sanskar, Laksh and Sanvi are walking like thief. Pari unable to control laugh. She laughs holding her stomach.

“What you trio trying to do. Sanskar, Laksh where were you guys ?” Before they could reply she understands from where they came by seeing their dress covered with mud.

She holds the ear of Sanvi “Sannu how many times I told to inform me where you go.”

“I’m sorry mom.” She said with pout making Pari leave her ear.

“Ok, you guys come and have dinner.” saying she leaves with Sanvi.

“Sanky yaar, tomorrow college is re -opening. It’s our final year so we have to enjoy this year as possible let’s rag tomorrow freshers.” Laksh says with excitement.

Sanky agrees and says, “it will be fun.”

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One girl is shown tensed. She prays god to help her tomorrow is first day of college and she is really scared. Unlike her previous school a college, it’s coeducational. Where as she only studied in girls school till now. It’s out of her comfortable zone. A voice called Shona.

She goes running, she stood before him with head bowed “papa did you called me?”

Shekar looks at her “tomorrow is first day of college and your first time in co educational. If any boy troubled you or even try to talk you inform Adi or me. And don’t talk to boys. Boys misuse your innocence. Be careful.” he warned her.

Swara quiver in fear hearing all this. She thinks all boys are bad in college  (except Adi, her bro)maybe so papa saying this to her. She leaves to her room tensed.

Adi who heard all this and shouts at Shekar to scare Swara.

“Shona is already scared dad and your scaring her more unbelievable!” he leaves to his room angrily.

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Morning

Swara readying for college, she wore a white mixture azure kurtha and sky blue legging. She left her hair open and looking like angel.

“Shona are you ready.” Swara goes to Shekar running. He drop her to college, again warns to careful of boys. Swara nods her head agreeing him.

Sanskar leaving college in hurry, Sujatha stops him.

“Beta, have something and leave.”

Sanskar smiles and hugs Sujatha.  “Sorry mom getting late I will have breakfast at college.” saying he leaves for college in his bike..

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Gadodia residence

“Mom where is Shona ? Say her to get ready. It is her first day of college na..” said Adi searching whole house for Swara.

“Adi beta your dad already dropped her to college.” Adi gets shocked to hear it.

“Dad seriously, oh god! its only 9 now college starts on 10. She went college early now there will be no one in college. Moreover its her first day there maybe ragging too.”

He looks worried for his bay sis and leaves college immediately.

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GFGC College

Swara is alone in college she sees college building, start shivering to see no-one there. She goes to office room there is no-one except clerk.

She ask him “where is classroom of 1st B. Com?”

“It is on second floor.” She thanks him and leaves.

Swara started walking on stairs and reached first floor. She sees a gang of boys there and started to panic.

Sanskar was standing near the steps with a bunch of people. He had his one hand in his jeans pocket and the other rested on guy’s shoulder. Swara noticed they are ragging and got to know he is senior.

While ragging freshers, Sanskar eyes caught Swara. Her eyes are a little brown, filled with mascara. Her eyes are  twinkling, there is something in this girl which is attracting him. He devoured her with his eyes. Her eyes reflect her innocence, she hiding herself in world. 

She hurriedly runs to her classroom which is second floor and reaches her classroom. She is breathing heavily as she ascended stairs running, she was tired too.

She looks classroom which is empty. She is forlorn, this all seen by Sanskar. He thinks what’s wrong with this girl why she behaving so weird. He looks her more carefully. “She is angel, but something is wrong” thinking, he  fondle his hair as he moves towards Swara.

Swara seeing him and panics more. It’s first time she seeing boy except her bro and she is alone in class make her more tense.

He just stared at her, not knowing what to say. “Hey! What is your name?” He asks giving her warm smile.

She seems to hesitate for answer him. She fumbles for words, then ask “Why?”

“I’m just asking your name. What’s big deal in it?” He was astonished seeing her reaction.

Her eyes met his, she felt secure around him which she never felt around boys except her brother and dad. He was harmless, good guy, she thought. She contemplating replied “Swara.”

He repeated it. She liked the way he said her name. She start getting afraid of newer feelings in her. How can she forget her father words so soon, he is one of such guy her dad said who only need reason to talk to girls. She need to keep distance between him.

Sanskar noticed her hesitation and understands she scared of boys. Sanskar asks ” Are you 1st year B. Com student?” Swara nods her head tensely.

He asks a piece of paper from her. Instantly Swara takes a book from bag and tears page, gives him.  He notices her worry so leaves from there.

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Did you liked it or not.

Pls share your views.

With love❤
Meghs

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    13 Comments

    1. Kumu on August 13, 2017 4:50 pm

      Nice..

    2. Divya on August 13, 2017 4:53 pm

      Wow awesome meghs

    3. Soujanya on August 13, 2017 5:46 pm

      Nice

    4. Stg on August 13, 2017 6:57 pm

      awesome ??

    5. Simi on August 13, 2017 7:08 pm

      Amazing dear

    6. independent on August 13, 2017 8:13 pm

      Beautiful

    7. Aashi9 on August 13, 2017 8:31 pm

      good one

    8. Pramudi on August 13, 2017 10:59 pm

      Liked it?? Naah.. Loved it dear. Amazing.
      Eagerly waiting for the next part.

    9. Tani on August 14, 2017 9:23 am

      Niceee

    10. Milestone on August 15, 2017 12:47 am

      Nice….

    11. vyshu10 on August 15, 2017 9:58 am

      nice

    12. anu on August 16, 2017 5:42 pm

      nyc

    13. Neptune on August 18, 2017 5:08 pm

      awesome part…

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