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Forever love of AsYa (chap 10)

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Zoya cries vigorously and leaves the house.
Dil:I m ashamed of you asad.u slapped her.how could you??she is just a poor girl.where will she go at this time of night??
Asad:she will go to the man whom she gave money to spend a night with him.how disgusting she is..
Dil:how can u be so sure??she is not that kind of girl.I know her.
Asad:ammi plz its just been few weeks that she is here how can u be so sure??
Dil:smtimes only a single moment is enough to know how a person is and I know her well.she cant be like this.
Asad:she is like this.a cheap characterless girl.

Najma no longer is able to control I and shouts Enough bhaijan.not even a single word against her plz.she is not at fault.she saved me.
Asad and dil are shocked.
Dil:najma!!!wt happened??
Najma bursts out crying and collapses on floor.
Asad:tamatar??wt happened
Dil hugs her and she tells everything.
They are super shocked.

Najma:she saved me.she helped me bhaijan.she is not characterless.she is the best.
She cries badly while dil is also in tears.
Asad reminisces wt he did to her and tries calling her but her whole luggage and phone is at home.he gets concerned.
Asad:zoya!!!

Zoya is walking on road and reminisces wt happened and esp asad’s slap
SAD MITWA.
zoya:it shouldn’t have happened.but thanks to Allah who saved najma’s respect.
The same goon is following her.zoya is oblivious and reaches a railway station.

Asad searches for her at the railway stations.the man comes from behind and holds zoya.she screams for help.
Man:respect respect respect.how much u care for it.i will tell u wt happens when it is maligned.
Zoya is shocked to see his fellows with him who forcefully take her to the quarter at railway station.

Asad:only andheri station is left.i hope she is there.
They take zoya to the room and try to rape her.she screams for help and pushes the men.they are three and she is alone.one man tears her shirt form arm and she shouts no.two men pin her against the wall and the third man is moving near to her to kiss her.she screams.

Just then Asad makes a heroic entry and pushes the man.he hits two men holding zoya and fights heroically.zoya collapses on floor and weeps badly.she keeps her hands on her face.asad finishes the fight and comes to her.

He has tears in his eyes.he calls out to her but she cries badly,he sees her clothes torn and covers her with his coat.she sees him remembers the slap.she instantly moves away as she gets afraid of him.

Asad:miss farooqui.leyts go home.
She look at him
SAD MITWA plays.
She stands up and he takes her home.
Dil and najma are sitting tensed,
Najma:Ya Allah plz don’t give punishment to zoya for my mistake.
Dil:no najam its no ones mistake.sje saved u.we are indebted to her.

They hear the knoch and instantly open the door and are relieved to see zoya.
Zoya hugs dilshad and bursts into tears.she gets concerned.
Dil:wt happened beta??
Najma hugs her.
Dil:asad’s coat.
A fearsome thought clicks fil’s mind.
Dil stealthily removes coat and sees zoya’s clothes torn.she is shocked and so is najma.
Najma:zoya..did sm1
Asad:its nothing like that.sm1 tried but I came.
Both are relieved.
Zoya:Phuphi.i am not characterless.plz trust me.
Dil:shh.we know.najma told us.
Zoya look at najma and hugs her.they take her to room.

Asad reprimands himself and says why asad??couldn’t u see truth in her eyes?couldn’t u see the innocent face of hers??

Zoya is asleep.asad goes to her room and sits by her side.
Asad caresses her hair.then her face.he holds her hand.
Asad:I m sorry.how couldn’t I trust you.i m so naive.i even slapped u.
He reminisces the slap and feels guilty.
He then gently plants a KISS on zoya’s cheek where he slapped her.
ROMANTIC MITWA TUNE plays…….

Next epi:asad apologizes to zoya.Rashid and dil moments….

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25 Comments

  1. Zoya on December 7, 2015 11:12 pm

    Wow just feeling like asad and zoya are back(surbhi-karan)

    • angel on December 7, 2015 11:32 pm

      Hey thnx…u too zoya…?

  2. Sh on December 7, 2015 11:13 pm

    Plz written update qubool hai

    • angel on December 7, 2015 11:32 pm

      I didn’t get ur point

  3. Eespee on December 8, 2015 1:18 am

    Wow … Angel yhu d best .. I jst feel like m watching d series whyle reading it … Nycc //Aluta continua//

    • angel on December 8, 2015 1:40 am

      Thnx

  4. fatarajo on December 8, 2015 9:18 am

    I wish instead of continuing Qubool Hai, Zee tv should have off-air the show, and let Qubool Hai come with another season but with the same leads (Karan-Surbhi).instead of changing the lead actors everytime. Miss the fabulous dialogues and the music a lot.
    Btw, your fan fiction is fabulous.

    • angel on December 8, 2015 3:25 pm

      Thnx….i 2 agree wth u
      I miss AsYa a loooooot

  5. Roma on December 8, 2015 11:02 am

    Awesome episode, it’s superb, mind blowing. ..last scene was very emotional. ..asya rocks…keep it up buddyyy, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

    • angel on December 8, 2015 3:24 pm

      Thnk u?

  6. starlight on December 8, 2015 1:10 pm

    Nice epi. Hey did u finish ur exams ??

    • angel on December 8, 2015 3:23 pm

      Yeah….today was last finally free

  7. Sahima on December 8, 2015 2:49 pm

    Fantastic. Keep it up angel. Ur all d ff z amazing. Can anybody tell me how to write ff.

    • angel on December 8, 2015 11:47 pm

      Thnx….just go to contact us and write ff …. They will post it after sometime

  8. Maha on December 8, 2015 3:58 pm

    Lvly lv as ya scenes aspecially cheek kiss

    • angel on December 8, 2015 11:47 pm

      Thnx?

    • Sahima on December 9, 2015 3:33 pm

      I had went to tellyupdates there I saw contact us in da menu. Will it come in swaragini page Bcoz I wrote it on tellyupdates page.

    • angel on December 9, 2015 6:37 pm

      Yeah it will

  9. Kavi on December 8, 2015 5:30 pm

    Too good angel. I love this episode. I am also miss asya…….

    • angel on December 8, 2015 11:47 pm

      Thnx…me 2 veryyy much

    • Sahima on December 9, 2015 2:22 pm

      Angel but where z contact us.can u plz tell in full detail.

    • angel on December 9, 2015 6:40 pm

      Go to menu and click contact us or submit your article and post it….they will publish it after sometime….i suggest u to chose submit your article….its more nice and next time go to tellyupdates of the serial of whom u have to post the story and then post it…..

  10. ahana on December 9, 2015 4:11 pm

    nice.. pls update nxt part

    • angel on December 9, 2015 6:40 pm

      Thnx

  11. starlight on December 9, 2015 9:42 pm

    Angel plzz write next episode???????

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