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Forbidden love (Four and Tris) Chapter 9: Dangerous game!

Charms22By Charms22June 22, 20184 Comments6 Mins Read
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Chapter 9: Dangerous game!

Hiya I’m back with another chapter, which will be switching the pov’s back and forth between our lovely FourTris of course.
Are you guys ready for the next phase which will be about trust as well as some intense FourTris parts?

-Tris’ pov-
The game Tobias is playing is dangerous, but he doesn’t know that I love playing a game like this. “I don’t know why he hates me so much, however I will make him fall for me. I will find the truth out. I need to know his reasons and I surely will.” I was talking to myself and I didn’t notice that I walked into someone, when I looked up I saw that it was Nita, ugh great and now I have to deal with this weirdo.

“What are you doing here?” She asked me, but uncle Max answered back: “Tris has come to meet me as I need to know about the rumor!”
“Which rumor?” Nita couriously asked and I replied back: “the one about my brother getting two girls pregnant at the same time!”
“Wait what? Is Caleb your brother?” Will asked while I answered back: “yeah he is!”
“That blo*dy idiot got my sister pregnant!” Will said while the gang was shocked as well as I was.

“He can never do the things right, because he got a girl from my faction pregnant!”
“Who?” Tobias asked so I answered back by saying: “Susan Black, his long time girlfriend!”
“Like brother like sister!” Tobias said under his breath and I glared at him, before I angrilly said: I’m so gonna kill the idiot brother of mine!” Then uncle Max said: “Tris, you cannot kill him, because Jeanine will!”

“I won’t let that witch kill that jerk, because if she kills another person then I won’t hesitate to kill her!” I shouted furiously, I tried to steady my breath but before I could do that everything was swirling around until I fell unconscious. When I woke up I was in the infirmary and uncle Max was looking angrilly at me like the rest of the gang excluding Four, who was smirking at me. “What happened while I was unconscious?”
“The doctor said that you haven’t eaten for days!” Zeke answered back and then I remembered the past few days, lonely tears dropped from my eyes, before I could wipe them away someone else did and it had to be Tobias.

“Why didn’t you eat anything Tris?” Christina asked me with concern written all over her face.
“Because I stabbed my heart while breaking someone else’s.”
End of her pov

-Meanwhile Tobias’ pov after Tris left his apartment-
“Why does she affect me so much?” I asked myself out loudly while Lynn answered back: “Because you love her!”
“No, I don’t!”
“Oh really then why did you let her kiss your naked chest brother? Or why did you kiss her neck?” She asked me with a smirk.

“I didn’t kiss her because I love her, however I kissed her to make her suffer!”
“Why do you wanna make her suffer?” Eric asked me, so I told them about letter and she may have killed my father, but they didn’t believe me. I wore a shirt, while I met with the rest of the gang and Zeke asked me: “where’s Tris?”
“I think that she has gone home!” I replied back, so we were walking and heard the conversation.
“Tris has come to meet me as I need to know about the rumor!”
“Which rumor?” Nita couriously asked and Tris replied back: “the one about my brother getting two girls pregnant at the same time!”

“Wait what? Is Caleb your brother?” Will asked while she answered back: “yeah he is!”
“That blo*dy idiot got my sister pregnant!” Will said while the rest of us was shocked and even Tris.
“He can never do the things right, because he got a girl from my faction pregnant!”
“Who?” I asked so she answered back by saying: “Susan Black, his long time girlfriend!”
“Like brother like sister!” I said under my breath and Tris glared at me, before she angrilly said: I’m so gonna kill the idiot brother of mine!” Then Max said while trying to control the situation: “Tris, you cannot kill him, because Jeanine will!”

“I won’t let that witch kill that jerk, because if she kills another person then I won’t hesitate to kill her!” She shouted furiously, she tried to steady her breath but before she could do that she fell unconscious. I scooped her up into my arms, took her to the infirmary while the rest followed me excluding Nita. After we reached the infirmary, a nurse called the doctor, who started to check her up. “Is she alright?” I asked and the doctor replied back: “she will be fine, if she starts to eat again, she hasn’t eaten since a few days.”
“Really this girl doesn’t even care about her health, if she would have then she wouldn’t be in this situation!” Max said while he was worried about her just like my friends were. 10 minutes later she woke up, the other looked at her angrilly while I smirked at her. “What happened while I was unconscious?”
“The doctor said that you haven’t eaten for days!” Zeke answered back and then she remembered something, because lonely tears dropped from her eyes, before she could wipe them away I did, because I can’t stand seeing tears in her eyes.

“Why didn’t you eat anything Tris?” Christina asked het with concern written all over her face.
“Because I stabbed my heart while breaking someone else’s.” When she answered back to Christina, her words were directed to someone else, but I don’t who she meant by that. My heart was aching to know, who she meant and then she said: “can I please be left alone for sometime.”
“Sure princess and please take care of yourself, because I cannot loose you.” Max said to her with a soft voice. We all went outside, closed the door behing us and then Uriah asked the rest: “why can’t she just tell him that she’s breaking? Why can’t she tell him that she loves him?”
“Because she is scared that she will loose him!” Max said.
“Loose who?” I asked, because I was confused so Christina answered back: “You! She can’t loose you that’s why she is hurting herself.”

“Why would she hurt herself when she is the reason that my father is dead!”
“No, she was trying to save your father and not kill him!” Max said with anger in his voice.
“Why was she trying to save him?”
“Because Jeanine was the one who killed him. Oh and Will, Caleb didn’t get your sister pregnant as he is her fake boyfriend while her real boyfriend is Fernando. Caleb got his girfriend Susan Black pregnant and Tris is pretty pissed with him.”
He said while dropping a bomb as we all were trying to diggest the truth.
End of his pov

Disclaimer: I am weird and I know it!

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    4 Comments

    1. Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 1:35 pm

      nice one Sam Jaanejaan..loved it 🙂 🙂 🙂

      • AMkideewani on June 24, 2018 3:56 pm

        Thanks a lot Adi Jaana???

    2. fenil on June 26, 2018 11:56 am

      nice one

      • AMkideewani on June 26, 2018 1:39 pm

        Thank you so much bhai?

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