Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……based upon the response on this Teaser/Prologue, i will be uploading the next episodes……
TAM : Thought At the Moment………
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Mamta ”what’s your problem Anika?”
Anika ”my legs are still under fracture…i am not able to do any of my works myself…my tutions have stopped , so does my income and..”
Madhuri ”ok enough…i know you are being sarcastic”
Anika ”ohh you understood i was being sarcastic…good…”
Rajni ”Why are not talking to anyone of us? ”
Anika ”you are asking as if you don’t know the reason…you all are my friends …to be particular my best friends…but you hid from me that the internals were preponed…why did you do this?”
Mamta ”Anika…did you imagine and understand in what stage you were when you were in hospital..we are your best friends , we couldn’t see you suffering and above that if we would have informed you about internals you would have felt the mental pain …i know physical pain goes away with time but mental pain stays forever…and we don’t want you to undergo that…what would have happened…you would have missed the internals…that wouldn’t effect as we know you still can top the exams….but had you known there were internals you would have cried more and we didn’t want that to happen”
Madhuri ”this is why we said we will not meet you for a week…and we will let you know everything after a week”
Rajni ”if you still feel , we did wrong then …you can continue to stop talking with us”
Anika realised they really thought good for her….she didn’t waste a minute after realising her mistake….she held her ears and said ”Sorry…i am really sorry for being so rude…i am sorry for not realising your intentions and felt bad for hiding it from me…i am sorry for not trusting you though i said i would trust you…i am sorry for being the imperfect among you perfects…i am really sorry” her voice choked with every passing sentence, and finally her tears bursted
Anika went silent for a while, realising and thinking…..how big mistake she did…how rude she was….how imperfect she was….what she was and what she became….how an incident made her become an arrogant , insensitive girl….how she started building a wall of untrust with everyone she talks and speaks to…she forgot she was once the most beautiful, innocent yet funniest and jovial girl with whom everyone wished to do friendship …..and all this was destroyed, just because of one incident in the past….and now she understood that there are still people who are good , really good from heart and trustworthy, and not everyone rich kid is spoilt and brat……..
MMR came near her , wiping her tears said ”enough of rona-dhona…we are friends…no , we are best friends and like you we are also not perfect….” They all hugged each other….
Mamta ”Anika…i think you must tha…”
Anika ”Mamta…can you take me to Shivaay once”
MMR ”whaaaaaaaaaaat?”
Anika ”please take me to Shivaay once…”
MMR ”are you sure or are we imagining things”
Anika ”enough of your drama girls…now take me to him before that Mr. Ritchie Rich shows his arrogance ”
MMR ”Okk fine…by the way..”
Anika ”Rajni…you can update me while we move on”
They all smiled
Rajni ”see…i can’t keep anything as secret from you , so let me spill you …we made friendship with Shivaay…i mean ”
Anika ”see i am your friend , this doesn’t mean you should not do friendship with the person i don’t like…you have to have your own opinion too…”
Madhuri ”like …seriously are you not upset with us”
Anika ”pagal ho kya? i am not so bad yaar”
They all laughed and were looking for Shivaay……when Madhuri saw Shivaay and called ”Hey Shivaay”
Shivaay smiled looking at Madhuri and came near her…
Shivaay ”everything fine? why did you call me?”
Anika ”not she …i wanted to talk to you Mr.Ritchie Rich” she spoke loudly
Before shivaay could say something everyone looked at Anika as if some miracle has taken place…
Anika ”Ohh hello…what? why is everyone looking at me as if i am an alien and as if i said something which i shouldn’t have said…now please go ahead and do your work ” she screamed
Shivaay ”i can’t believe you are screaming being sick”
Anika ”Hey Mr.Ritchie Rich…my leg has fracture not my mouth”
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka…come straight to the point…what did you want to talk?”
Anika ”Why did you make me write the internals…you could have easily came first had i not written”
Shivaay dragged the professors chair and sat infront of her …
Shivaay ”i like your confidence Ms.Surpanaka….but I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi…and i don’t like to win challenges without a proper competition…that’s why i insisted you to come with me to college and write the exam…”
Anika smiled at his words turning sideways…Shivaay looked at her with a slight smile adorning his lips…he composed himself when Anika turned towards him
Shivaay”are you fine today?”
Anika ”why? why are you asking so?”
Shivaay ”for the first time you are smiling …that too when i spoke something that really irritates you”
Anika ”Shivaay …THANK YOU….” She took a pauze and then again spoke ”I mean Mr.Ritchie Rich …THANK YOU….”
Shivaay ”Ohh God…today you are giving me shocks after shocks …first you smiled ..then you took my name properly, though corrected yourself later…then said thank you…am asking you again are you okay?”
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich…i want to say truth about you to the media about my accident… as going back to hospital hiding myself is getting difficult for me…this is what i actually wanted to talk to you…”
Shivaay ”sure…you want to say the truth…i wouldn’t stop you…will talk to bade papa and ask to arrange the press meet”
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Precap : Anika’s media statement to shock Shivaay….shocking result of Second internal…Anika’s life to take a turn
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This was the Ninth episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
39 Comments
Amazing chappy Miss.Arrogant Behna ???
Hey Bro…thank you so much …thanks a lot…waise you are the first person to call me arrogant since past 12 years…..
How r you doing harika?. Superb episode. I loved it. Anika’s progrss towards Shivay gives a good pace in story. I think Anika had a bad experience in the past. Eagerly waiting for the past story also. I loved this (collegemates) version of Shivay and Anika. Precap is interesting. Waiting for the next episode dear. Bye and take care of yourself and your little angel.
Hey Katz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i just uploaded…hope you would like it…loads of best wishes to you and your two twinkling stars…keep smiling and take care
Awesome chapter. The conversation between Shivaay and Anika is beautifully crafted, full of attitude yet sweet. I think finally they are going to be friends???
Excited???? for the next.
Hey Pakhi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am glad you liked it…next episode i just uploaded , hope it appears soon in the portal…keep smiling and take care…loads of best wishes to you
Must say Anika is giving shock after shock. The precap is interesting. Anika and her gang scene was beautiful. Do update soon and take care ?
Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…am happy you liked those particular scenes…next episode i just uploaded…hope it appears soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
It was way beyond amazing… Jusz nailed it… Dialogues were super awesome… Hell desperate to read nxt one especially looking forward for Anika’s statement.. do post next asap.. di..
Love uhh dii…
Shreya..
Hey Shreya,,,thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…awee i am so glad to know you liked the episode….next episode i just uploaded…hope it gets published soon…loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care
Diii…….episode is soo cute and lovely….convo BTW shivay and anika …❤❤❤❤??.
Waitting for next part dii….luv u loads.
Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee i am so happy to know you liked the conversation between shivika…next episode i just uploaded….hope it appears soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Awesome di??amazing update loved it to the core precap was interesting can’t wait for next part di..update soon
Love you ?? Take care and stay safe
Hey Harini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…how sweet of you dear…next episode i just uplaoded…hope it appears soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hi harika nice update
Finally annika said thank you to shivay …
Hope annika statement about shivay is positive ..
Hey Chaithu….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah finally a thank you from Anika…let’s see what’s the statement turns out to be…loads of best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Amazing Update. Loving the way the story is progressing!
Finally Anika has started to consider Shivaay’s help though I don’t blame her for her rude behaviour earlier 🙂
Truly Anika gave Shivaay shock after shock. Waiting for Anika’s shocking media statement ?
Update Soon!
Lots of love ? ❤
Hey Shivika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to let me know your thoughts…next episode i just uploaded…hope it appears soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
hello akka.. actually naa net problem icchindhi..soo andhuke last epi ki comment cheyyaleka poya sorry.. rendu ippude chadhiva trust me everything is just awesome????????…last epi lo my fav. dialogue aithe rudy dhi..exams gurinchi even naakukda alane anipinchedhi??.. now coming to todays epi billu aiythe chala sweet avuthunnadu ??..kaani eroju glimpse of sweet annika di is soo nice??..nijamga annika di shock meedha shock icchindhi… precap lo asalu shock kosam wait chesthu vunta…so thwara thwaraga post chesayi..take care and bye for now..?????and haa keep smiling…????..love you loads????…
Hey Prabha….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…no problem dear…i can understand the net issues…i am glad you took time to read and post your opinion which makes me feel so happy and overwhelmed…next episode ippude upload chesa…hopefully tvaraga publish avuthundani aasa tho unna…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Amazing awesome fantastic superb…..
Love u di….
Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
episode is so cute but little as well
Hey Pritika…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…hope you and Riyanshi both are doing good…yeah episode was not lengthy..i am just trying to practice writing medium length episodes and this was the first trial…..love you and riyanshi both loads…keep smiling and take care
It is nice… Eagerly waiting for the next update dii
Hey Nikki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i just uploaded…hope it appears soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hey akka… Awesome update
Loved it to the core …
PS: can’t believe myself that I finished reading the update!!!!!! was the update short or what????
Hey Ashwinee….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…hmm…just trying to write medium length episodes as usually my updates are lengthy…this was the first trial so you might have felt short as short update…..love you loadsdear…keep smiling and take care
Mind blowin chp di !! Like srsly… whtever u write it’s always amazing… and u write with such dedication ☺. And this stry is somethin ur tryin for the first time and it’s totally different frm ur other stories and it’s the reality as well…. i knw u’ll try ur best to keep it like tht only ?.
Aftr hearin MMR’s concern for her health and studies…. she understood their situation and realised her mistake. She apologised as soon as she realised how much she might have hurt them…. Tht’s the best part abt her, once she realised her mistake she apologised without hesitating for a moment. She saw a mirror of her old jolly self and this new arrogant anika ?. Because of one person/incident…. she shut the doors of her heart…. she saw how much she hurt everyone around her by shuttin herself away and behavin rudely with everyone especially the guys. Today she’s full on givin shocks to everyone especially shivay.
MMR were shocked to knw anika wants to talk to shivay and were surprised tht she didn’t mind them being friends with him…. Tht’s anthr nice quality in her which most of us don’t have these days. The whole class were shocked to the core knwin tht anika wants to talk to shivay ?.
Shivay stated tht he likes a fair competition and tht’s why he got her to school and also to lessen his guilt. Anika smiled listenin to this and shivay smiled seein her smile ?. She called him shivay and even apologised to him…. 440 volt ka jhatka laga shivay ko ?. But she corrected herself right aftr tht.
Anika asked him to arrange media as she wants to give statement and he agreed…. the best thing abt shivay is, he didn’t try to knw her decision or try to make her give the statement in his favour…. Tht’s very rare with the rich kids nowadays.
Precap seems very intresting… looks like their friendship is gonna begin soon. Anika’s statement would surprise shivay…. anthr 440 volt ka jhatka ??. Anyways, take care di and love u loads ❤❤❤❤❤.
Hey Maryam…i always feel so happy and glad to read your perfect analysis of the episode…today is also no different…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot…so happy to have you by my side for every write up….next episode i just uploaded…hope it appears soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hiii Akka,
Awesome update?
Everything was superb ??
Love you…..
Hi Nila…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…how sweet of you dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Amazing update
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot…
Hiiiii Di, how r u? first of all a big sorry for not commenting for so long.Was stuck with my exams.But I promise I will try 2 comment regularly.Coming 2 this story, I always loved off track stories. Imagining a different story with ur favorite characters is amazing. So thank u soo much 4 this beautiful story. Eagerly waiting 2 experience shivika’s budding relationship through ur words…..
Hey Ammu…am doing good dear…how are you? happy to see you back….no problem dear…exams, studies and personal life is way more important than everything else…so , i and this ff both can wait….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i must thank you for supporting me through thick and thin…am glad you are liking this ff….next episode i just uploaded..hope it appears soon in the portal….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Akka…sirry for late comments ,comment cheyyaleka poya…epi chala ante chala bagundi..waiting for the next one…!!
Haiiiiii harika didi…i am commenting only in 9th part after teaser?????reallly veryyyyyyy sorrryyyyyy for that??????This ff is reallly more awesome than teri meri love story…i always love ff’s on college and school life??????Mamta,rajni,madhuri are really great????anika is blessed to hav friends like them..They dont want anika to suffer..so they hided internal preponement??But anika behaved rude with them..And then asked them to forgive her..how sweet????Anika and Mr.Ritchie rich convo was brilliant?????kudos didi..i think this ff is receiving very good response then old one..Its really nice didi..Update soon and read 19th part of my ff “Gauri Aur Omkara “.and comment please???Take care didi..
Amazing chappy mumma………….So sorry for this much late response…………………..Really I am feeling I have missed the most important parts……..But don’t worry……..I am here there to complete my assignments…….These assignments r just adorable….I am loving it!!
Wow…….Atlast anika realised that she was rude not to herself but to everyone……….MMRA GALS…Rocked wid their beautiful convo!Best part was Anika’s THANK YOU confession to Shivaay……….Asking him to come there…in front of all…..N telling THANK YOU……Was really shocking one………I thought that they will again start fighting as MR.RITCHIE RICH n MS.SURPANAKA…….But that sweet twist made the highlight of this chappy……Keep smiling mumma..!!!