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My first love vs. My true love (OS)

Moonlight25By Moonlight25September 11, 201733 Comments16 Mins Read
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        Hello my lovely readers! I am back with an OS
Hope you all like it.

Sanchi’s point of view

Life is not a bed of roses there are also thorns in it,everyone has to experience both roses and thorns and I also have  experienced both. Four years earlier my life was a bed of roses but then everything changed.I loved Kunal a lot and our life was pretty good it felt like we were living in paradise but he turned out to be a jerk,who just loved my beauty but not my inner self.

4 Years back–
Flashback
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I was studying fashion designing in Mumbai’s no.1 fashion college and Kunal was my classmate and we were best of  friends. We were inseparable,the other students just admired our friendship and some believed that we were a couple….when we were in our last year of college both of us realised that we love each other.

      One day kunal called me and requested me to meet him in the  rose park.That day kunal  confessed his feelings in a romantic way and I was just shocked and happy at the same time  I too confessed my  feelings and we were in  a relationship.After our graduation we married with our parents consent. We were really happy and our life was so beautiful.I loved him to the core of my heart ,the first year of our marriage went really well I always thanked god for giving me such a loving husband but one incident changed everything and his true colours came into light.
     
After one year of our marriage I suddenly noticed some physical changes in my body.One day,while I was bathing I noticed some white patches on my neck but I ignored them and thought that it was due to some allergy again after some days I saw white patches on my back now I was really scared and decided to visit a doctor.I didn’t tell kunal about the patches so, I alone went to the doctor.The doctor did some tests and said that I was suffering from Vitiligo,its a disease where white patches of skin appear on the body and this disease is not curable but it is not infectious.I was literally broken after hearing this there was no one to console me but I was also confident that kunal  would understand me and would support me because he loves me such.Later when I went home I saw that kunal  had returned and he was decorating our room. When he saw me he smiled and said  

Kunal– “Sanchi  do you remember this day ??”

Sanchi –” kunal  listen, I want to tell you something important.”

Kunal – “Offo Sanchi we will talk later but first tell me  do you remember this day ??”

Sanchi  – “kunal…”

Kunal – “Sanchi…how can you forget Today is the day when we became friends so,today we will celebrate it in our way.”

Sanchi – “But kunal…”

Kunal– “Urghhh….please Sanchi  we will talk later but for now come here “and he held my hand and pulled  me and started kissing me but I was least interested in this suddenly Kunal pushed me

Kunal (making a horrified face) – ” Sanchi what are these white patches on your neck ??”

Sanchi  – “kunal this is what I was trying to tell you that  I am suffering from Vitiligo”

Kunal – “Now what is Vitiligo?”

Sanchi  – “kunal  its a disease where white patches appear on skin but “….(she is interupted by Kunal )

Kunal  – “umm…did you go to the doctor ?? What did she say is it curable ?”

Sanchi – “yes, I did go to the doctor  and she said that its not curable.”

Kunal– “Whaat…..ummm…Sanchi  I think for so me days you have to go to your family.”

Sanchi  –” kunal what are you saying?”

Kunal – “Hmm…Sanchi  don’t take me wrong but I don’t want to get infected with this disease.”

Sanchi  (crying) – “KUNAL……but this disease is not infectious.”

kunal –” Disease is infectious or not but I don’t care….i don’t want to leave with you..”

Sanchi – “But Kunal  I thought you will support me and will understand me but I was so wrong.
..you just loved my physical beauty but not my inner self..shame on you Kunal”

Kunal–”  Haan I love your beauty so what can I do  ?? Yes i love  your physical beauty and if you don’t have that beauty then you don’t deserve to be in my life.”
    Now I was completely broken and shattered I saw that kunal  packed my clothes and said, “Sanchi  take your stuff and LEAVE !! “. I had no other choice,I cann’t stay with a man who has such small mentality so,I mentally prepared myself and left  for my mother’s house.

So this is my story and I am now living with my parents,I am totally alone and heartbroken but a ray of hope has come  in my life.I am pregnant after hearing this news I was so happy I had immediately called kunal  and told him this news but he clearly said that he does not want me or this baby in his life.I was again heartbroken but I had made up my mind that now I will only live for this child so,I decided to find a job to give financial support to my child.Today I saw in the newspaper that there is a job vacancy in Kapoor  Industries and decided to go for the interview but little did I know  that this interview will completely change my life.

Sanchi’s point of view Point Ends.

When Sanchi  enterted Kapoor  Industries she was suprised to see such a hardworking staff and beautiful office everyone was working on their own,Sanchi was literally confused she didn’t know where to go suddenly she saw the receptionist and she went there.There she was told that the interveiw was delayed for one hour so Sanchi sat down with the other candidates,while she was waiting she heard that the other candidates were making fun of her disease.She was so much hurt that she decided to go home while she was going out she collided with a guy and both fell down,all the documents of Sanchi were scattered on the floor the guy helped her  to get up

Guy – Sorry

Sanchi  (crying) – Its okay and she  bends down to pick up her documents.

Guy – please can I help you ??

Sanchi  – Hmm…okay and the guy helps her  to collect her documents.   She was going away when the guy said, “Hello Miss Mishra you will be glad to know that you are selected to be my secretary ”

Sanchi – Excuse me who are you to  appoint me  ??
Guy – I can appoint you because I am your boss Kabir Kapoor.

She was shocked

Sanchi  Oh…I am Sorry

Kabir  – Its okay now come with me and collect your appointment letter.

Sanchi  – But sir you have not interveiwed me.

Kabir – Don’t worry when I was picking up your papers…from there I saw that you are dealt qualified.. and you are very much capable to be my secretary.

Sanchi  – But sir have you seen me I am suffering from Vitiligo how am I capable of being your  secretary position?

Kabir  – See this job requires some qualifications which you have  and these are not related with beauty.I want someone who can help me with my projects,appointments and not someone who is busy in admiring her beauty.

Sanchi  was shocked as well as touched by kabir’s words.

Kabir – waise why are you crying and why were you going without giving your interview  ??

Sanchi  – Oh…nothing sir…

Kabir – Listen I am your sir so, its my command that you answer my question.

Sanchi  – Oh…sir the other candidates were making fun of me….

Kabir suddenly held her hand and took her infront of the candidates.

Kabir  – Hello !! Everyone you would be glad to know that I have selected my secretary and you all are free to go.

Candidates – But sir you have not taken our interveiw?

Kabir  (yelled) – Aur mein lunga bhi nehi because I don’t want to talk to such people who make fun someone’s health problem. Small mentality people.Idiots (and he goes inside with Sanchi).

After this Sanchi  was appointed as Kabir’s secretary she did her job well and kabir  was really impressed slowly slowly as months pass they  became good friends,he  also got to know about Sanchi’s pregnancy and her past he was very angry after hearing about Kunal’s behaviour but was also impressed with Sanchi’s determination. He   was touched by Sanchi’s lovely nature,her intelligence,her bubbly and friendly behaviour whereas Sanchi  was also impressed by kabir’s behaviour. Kabir  always took her side he understood her better than anyone else and he also pampered her during her pregnancy. Whenever Sanchi  wanted something Kabir  immediately fulfilled her wish,Sanchi  was literally blown by Kabir’s good nature,understanding behaviour but she considered Him  as a friend only.

Earlier Kabir  also considered her as a friend but slowly he fell in love with her, he wanted to confess his feelings but he was well aware of her past he was afraid that she  will reject him.One day,they went for a meeting with Malhotra  Industries, Riya Malhotra  was the head of this company and she had a deep liking for  kabir but she couldn’t bear Sanchi a moment she was jealous of their friendship she always wanted to go close to Kabir  but some how Sanchi always came in between so this time Riya decided to insult Sanchi  infront of everyone in the meeting.Everyone had came inside the conference room and kabir  was talking with Sanchi about something when
Riya – Sanchi ….

Sanchi – yes Riya say …

Riya – Sanchi do you remember that there are white patches on your body.

Sanchi (was a bit broken after hearing this) – Haan I remember.

Riya – so why do you wear sleeveless dresses ? Wear covered dresses na ! Shayad tumhe yeh gandha na lage par dekhnewalo ko yeh acha nehi lagta.( maybe to you it doesn’t look dirty but whoever sees it …it doesn’t look nice )

Samchi  (crying) – You are right Riya  from tomorrow I will wear covered dresses.

Suddenly Kabir  shouts.

Kabir (angry) – ENOUGH ! Of your non-sense Riya .I never expected this type of behaviour from you.

Riya – But kabir what did I say wrong?

Kabir – Tum ne galat kya kaha ? Khud socho…( what did you say wrong…..think by yourself)

Sanchi  – Kabir …forget it na

Kabir – Nehi Sanchi  tum chup raho.( No, Sanchi..you don’t talk)

Riya – Lekin Kabir why do you always take Sanchi’s side ?? Rishta kya hain tum dono ka ?( what kind of relationship do you have with her? )

Kabir  (now was furious) – Because I LOVE HER….

Sanchi was hell shocked after hearing this,her mind just blocked away she could not understand anything when Kabir realised what he had said he looked at Sanchi  and saw that she was going outside,he  followed her.

Kabir  – Sanchi listen to me…

Sanchi  – what should I hear Kabir?….

Kabir  – Sanchi …

Sanchi – kabir you know my past after kunal’s betrayal I cannot love anyone.Mein kisi aur ki zindagi kharab nehi kar sakti aur tumhe toh mein sirf aapna acha dost samjti hoon.I cann’t trust anyone after kunal ,he has broken my heart into several pieces which cann’t be mended.( I can’t destroy anyone’s life…and you i always took you as my friends)

Kabir  – Sanchi  I know you have suffered a lot in the past but trust me I love you not your face.Your disease doesnot matter to me.Please Sanchi  I Love You,please accept my love and marry me.

Sanchi  – What are you saying Kabir ,I cannot marry you..ok  my disease might not  matter to you but it matters to me Kabir . I can’t destroy someone else’s life  and i think you forgot I am pregnant with kunal’s child.

Kabir – Sanchi I know  you are pregnant with kunal’s child but I cannot control my feelings,I Love You Sanchi please marry me and think after our marriage this child will get a father’s name…he will be my own child..I will love him like my own child please Sanchi marry me.

Sanchi  – Stop it Kabir what are you saying ? Are you crazy ?? I can take care of my child and i dont need your help and she walks away from there whereas kabir stands and keeps staring at her while she walks away.

Next day Sanchi  goes to office and hands over her resignation letter to kabir.

Kabir  – What is this?

Sanchi  – My resignation letter.

Kabir – you don’t have to resign..I am leaving.

Sanchi – Leaving as in ??

Kabir  – I am leaving India and going to London and this office will be handled by my brother Veer and you will be his secretary.
Sanchi  – But kabir why are you leaving ??

Kabir  – Because Sanchi  I cannot stay like this !! I love you and can’t keep a friendship with you  thats why I am going.Hope you have a bright future with your child.

Sanchi – Lekin Kabir suddenly she feels pain in her stomach and understands her labour pain started

Sanchi  (shouting) – Ah ….a…..a…

Kabir (worried) – What happened Sanchi  ??

Sanchi – Kabir …my water broke !! Hearing this Kabir takes her to hospital and calls Sanchi’s parents on the way.At the hospital Sanchi  delivers a cute little Princess,everyone was happy specially Kabir .

When Sanchi  was shifted to her room everyone came to see her suddenly she heard a familiar voice…

Sanchi  (tensed) – KUNAL…

Kunal – Hi Sanchi.

Sanchi (angry) – Tum !! What are you doing here ??

Kunal – Sanchi  pls forgive me mujhe maaf kardo mujse bohat bari galti ho gayi now I want you and my daughter back in my life.

Sanchi  – Pls kunal  go from here waise who gave you the news.

Kabir  – Woh Sanchi your mom called kunal .

Kunal – Haan Sanchi  pls mujhe mere galti ka eshaas ho gaya haan pls mere zindagi mein bapas ajao.

Kabir (broken inside) – Haan Sanchi you should go back to him.
Sanchi  – Kabir   what are you saying ??

Kabir  – Haan Sanchi  I know you will stay happy with him  because maybe you still love  kunal.

Kunal – Haan Sanchi  pls forgive me aur ghar chalo…

Sanchi  (thinks for sometime) – Thik hai…

After two days Kunal  decides to discharge Sanchi  and take her  and his daughter home.Sanchi calls Kabir and requests him to meet her,outside the hospital Sanchi was waiting when she sees Kabir  coming out from his car with his luggage and Sanchi  goes to him.

Kabir  – Sanchi you alone  ?? Where is kunal  ?

Sanchi  – Woh kunal has gone to the doctor to talk about something.

Kabir  – oh…toh all set to start your new life with kunal

Sanchi – Haan….and now she notices the luggage.

Sanchi  – Kabir  yeh luggage ??

Kabir – I told you na Sanchi that I am going….

Sanchi  – Are you going today  ??

Kabir – Haan….

Sanchi – But  Kabir  how can you go like this ??

Sanchi – Why can not I go Sanchi  ?? You don’t love him..you only take me as your friend right?

Sanchi – Lekin   ….

Kabir – Lekin kuch nehi…ab waise bhi you have decided to go with kunal so,in this way hamare raaste alag he hoye na.

Sanchi – Kabir ….

Kabir – Pls Sanchi plz dont stop me.I cann’t see you with anyone else.Bye Sanchi  and I will always Love You.Have a great future ahead and pls mere choti princess ko mere bare mein zaroor baata na,bye and he goes towards his car.Sanchi recalls Kabir  and her moments,his understanding,his friendliness and most importantly his love and she realises that she too loves him.

Sanchi  (happily) – Kabir stop

Kabir  stops in his way and Sanchi  runs to him and hugs him.
Sanchi – Kabir don’t go…i can’t stay without you .Yes I have realised it late but better late than never yes Kabir  yes and she loudly says I Love You Kabir.

Kabir  was so happy that he felt like dancing he picked up Sanchi and started taking rounds with her.

Kabir – Really Sanchi !! I Love You too and keeps her down and kisses her forehead.

Sanchi – Yes kabir I Love You.

Kabir  – Samchi then lets gets married.

Sanchi – Yes kabir .

At that time kunal enters the scene.

Kunal –  Sanchi!! Whats going on ??

Sanchi – kunal you go home I am not coming with you.I don’t love you you have broken my heart and kabir has mended it I love Kabir

Kunal  – yeh tum kya kehe rahi hoon Sanchi  ?? This can’t happen..come with me  and he starts pulling Sanchi .

Kabir  (holds Sanchi’s hand) – kunal …leave her hand nehi toh…

Kunal – Nehi toh kya ?? And he gets a punch on his face

Kunal – How dare you ??

Kabir  – Ek aur khana chahte ho agar nehi toh leave Sanchi ’s hand.

Kunal  – Haan…waise bhi is bimar aur badsurat larki ka haat koun pakar na chahega.Mein toh yeha sirf aapni bachi ke liye aaya tha and he gets a slap on his face.

Sanchi  slapped Kunal .

Sanchi  – How dare you ?? Acha hoya that I realised I love Kabir  varna mein toh tum jase gandhe insaan ke saath rahnewali thi. Thank you Kunal for showing your true colours nehi toh true love kya hota hain,mein toh jaan hi nehi pati. Kabir  loves me truely he loves me and not my beauty so, kunal get out of my sight and never come back in my life and he  goes away from there.After one week Sanchi  gets married with Kabir and they live happily ever after.

Sanchi  Point Of View Starts

So from here my real love story starts. kunal  had given me a bed of thorns but with the entry of Kabir  in my life the bed of thorns turned into bed of roses.Hum hamari duniya mein bohat khush haan.Hamari choti si duniya – Mein,kabir aur hamari pyaari beti….

Sanchi’s Point Of Veiw Ends.
That was it
Hope you all liked it
Love you all
Take care ,
Moonlight Tania

                        

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    33 Comments

    1. Ashnita on September 11, 2017 11:58 pm

      wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:09 pm

        Thank you so much Ashnita….

    2. riyarocks on September 12, 2017 12:25 am

      Tania dear, kya ho tum yaar………now I’m in a doubt kya tum sirf tu par updates likhti ho ya phir u also write novels?????? koi itna acha kaise likh sakta hai??????? I was just awestruck………..such a splendid, ravishing, out of the world story…………luv u a lot sweetie……….u r just amazing……….

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:15 pm

        Aww thank you so much Riya…i was on cloud 9 reading your comments…..i am so happy you liked it….you are amazing….love you a lot sweet heart

    3. Premamohan on September 12, 2017 12:35 am

      Wow a totally different and truly great is thank u Dr for the os

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:17 pm

        Thank you so much Premamohan..the honour is mine to get lovely readers

    4. Dhruti on September 12, 2017 1:15 am

      sweet and superb and also heart touching story
      thank you for writing this
      and keep writing.

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:18 pm

        Thank you so much Dhruti..love you dear?

    5. Khamoshi on September 12, 2017 8:52 am

      Tania…… u made me speechless.
      It was so much interesting that i was not able to moves my eyes from it.
      Brilliant job dear

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:18 pm

        Thanks lot Mitali…i am so happy that you liked it..love you sweetie ??

    6. Palak.Sharma on September 12, 2017 10:37 am

      Such a great OS with a meaningful plot!! Thank you so much for creating this!!

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:19 pm

        Thank you so much Palak dear….

    7. Anee on September 12, 2017 10:56 am

      Wow tanu really you made me speechless less dear.great work dear.

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:20 pm

        Thanks a lot Anee dear…i am happy to know you liked it ??

    8. RANdomfANCreationz on September 12, 2017 12:43 pm

      Wow this story is really interesting and unique. I loved it a lot. And yes beauty doesn’t describe what is love ? I love this concept one of the best Kanchi os I ever read

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:21 pm

        Thank you so much Jo…i am so glad you liked it and thanks for commenting…it means a lot

      • RANdomfANCreationz on September 12, 2017 9:01 pm

        Hey I do read urs and others story too I was busy that’s why I don’t comment much hope u all don’t mind

    9. Abhilasha on September 12, 2017 12:47 pm

      Wowww yr u r seriously os diva and this was the epitome of perfection and the story is really realistic too as its cruel truth of our society that people love physical appearance and not dinner beauty…. I m surely going to tell this story to my friends who are not on tu!! Love this to infinity of infinity!!

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:22 pm

        Thank you so much Abhi dear…and yes you are right that’s why I wrote this….love you dear and thank you for commenting

    10. Abhilasha on September 12, 2017 12:47 pm

      Wowww yr u r seriously os diva and this was the epitome of perfection and the story is really realistic too as its cruel truth of our society that people love physical appearance and not inner beauty…. I m surely going to tell this story to my friends who are not on tu!! Love this to infinity of infinity!!

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:25 pm

        ?????????

    11. Neha7873 on September 12, 2017 3:23 pm

      It was fabulous Tania ! I really liked it and update soon

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:25 pm

        Thank you so much Neha and it’s one shot…

    12. Trisha139 on September 12, 2017 4:48 pm

      Omg I have no words for this Tanya you rocked it nailed it totally spell bound ! Just amazing dear
      Luv uh loads u r amazing

      • Moonlight25 on September 12, 2017 7:27 pm

        Sweetie thank you so much and thanks a lot for commenting…my OS is nothing on front of yours….love you too Yogita ( I just love your name )

    13. Jessicca on September 13, 2017 1:42 am

      Sweetie you just NAILED IT…Seriously i can’t explain how much your story has touched my heart… Thank you so much for writing this … Loved it yaar…

      • Moonlight25 on September 13, 2017 2:54 am

        Aww thank you so much Jessie…i am so glad to hear..love you

    14. Divya on September 13, 2017 6:59 am

      Tania it amazing totally different from all

      • Moonlight25 on September 13, 2017 12:25 pm

        Thanks Divya

    15. AnahitaAnnie on September 13, 2017 8:43 am

      That was a very sweet OS moon. I don’t know from where u bring was stupendous ideas but they are just fantastic. I want to give u a tight hug from being such a fantastic author, reader and friend. It feels really great to read ur articles. Keep posting more.. I love u writing skills and plots a lot. Lots of love from my side for giving such a meaningful story.. I think we have another OS queen

    16. Moonlight25 on September 13, 2017 12:28 pm

      Aww thank you so much Annie..that was such a huge compliment…thanks a lot for commenting…love you loads and OS I don’t think so because I have to Learn a lot from you guys

    17. Sanjukta on September 14, 2017 11:31 pm

      This on was so simple bt awsmmmm…loved the plot…grt writing…

      • Moonlight25 on September 15, 2017 12:08 am

        Thank you dear

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