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My first love shot 1

SohiBy SohiMarch 17, 201722 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello, guys thank you for your lovely comments and support. It means a lot to me.
On my first attempt I got good response
Well some of them were asking me that at the end sid will be kunj well yes he will be kunj. But as I said before he is in somewhat grey shades
So let’s see how this all will happen.
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Note :remember guys now kunj is played by naman
Shot 1
After marriage got over twinj and simraj were talking with each other when bebe came and said twinj to go in their room
B:twinkle, kunj go in ur room and take rest
Twinj :ji bebe
They went into their room. When they entered in twinkle got emotional as after 5 years she is coming back into this room with her love her husband kunj with same love which they had before
She got teary eyed by thinking this kunj saw this and went towards her and hold her hands he asked
K:what happened twinkle why are you crying?
T:no kunj after 5 years we are coming back in our room together so I got emotional. By saying this she smiled and wiped her tears
K:(in teasing way) oho when did my siyappa Queen turned into an emotional queen Haan?
T:(as complaining) kunj don’t tease me now
As they were standing somewhat closer they stare into each other’s eyes which led to an eye lock. Their eyes were conveying their love which they carry for their partners but kunjs eyes was also conveying some other emotion too which twinkle couldn’t able to understand.
(sorry guys I can’t show any romance between them as I know if I do that tum log mujhe zinda gaad doge ?)
When they were busy in eye lock they here a knock sound on their room door which brought them in their senses.
Kunj went and opened the door to find simraj standing their while arguing with one another
K:what happend why are you both fighting.?

Both entered into the room twinkle also came to them
Y: (irritated) yaar kunj ask her for the reason? Signalling towards simple
Twinkle nodded in disbelief and asked simple for the reason
T:what is the reason simple for your both fight?
S: ( furiously) twinkle I just asked him to play cards with me and also to bring you both for playing but he is saying that I have gone mad ?
Twinj in Union becoming shocked :what cards and that too at this time?
Y :haan yaar I was also shocked after listening to this,but she is arguing that in their home they play cards after any marriage happens and newly married couple also play like seriously which idiot brought this ritual he said getting annoyed and angry
S: (angrily) oye khote de puttar don’t tell my family members as idiots otherwise I will kill you
Y:(crying) see what should I do now.
K:(trying to control his laugh and sighed uv to be quite) look simple we will play cards but not now but tomorrow we will play as now everyone is tired and need rest. He said trying to make her understand. When twinkle said
T: Haan simple we will play tomorrow ok now go and take some rest she said while giving an assuring smile
S:(getting satisfied) Haan ur right as I’m very tired after this all drama (guys u remember all the drama which happened during their wedding) but we will play tomorrow pakka na
Y:Haan pakka

S:ok. but u yuvraj luthra never try to get mess up with me she said while showing her index finger.
After saying this she left from thier but not before saying good night to twinj.
After she left twinj burst out in laughter while uv glare at them
K:(trying to stop his laughter) sorry yaar but she is perfect for handling u
T:Haan kunj ur right she is perfect for uv. Yaar uv be careful with her
Y:haan haan haslo mujh per, lekin abhi mai chalta hun warna wo simple Kaur mere duniya ka daur band kar degi. Chalo now bye good night
He sid giving quick hug to kunj and side hug to twinkle
After he left kunj closed the door and turned towards twinkle and said
K:they fight on very silly things
T:yes kunj just like how we use to fight earlier she said while remembering her fights with old kunj. When kunj asked her
K:do you still miss that old kunj
T:(while lost in old thoughts) yes especially our fights. But now also I’m happy that ur with me. Face doesn’t matters to me I’m just concerned about the person and his heart which are same till now. After listening to twinkles talk kunj was in deep thoughts. His trance of thoughts was broken by twinkle who asked him where are you lost? To which he replied
K:nowhere twinkle. You go get freshen up and sleep till then I will also get fresh
Twinkle nodded in confirmation and left to take clothes from cupboard and let to the bathroom
After 15 minutes she came out till then kunj also returned and they both slept on bed

Next scenes

Both twinj woke up at same time and greeted each other
K :good morning twinkle
T:good morning kunj. I will go and take bath ok
He nodded and twinkle left to bathroom while kunj went in guest room to get freshen up.
After taking bath twinkle came out wearing light pink anarkali (same jasmin wore in dil se dil tak)
Their was no one in room as kunj didn’t come yet
She was standing in front of mirror and combing her hairs when she saw someone’s reflection.
After seeing the reflection of that person she was utterly shocked and surprised
Screen freezes on twinkles shocked face
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Hello guys how was the episode
Do tell me in comments
Hope I reached ur expectations
Keep guessing why twinkle was shocked?
Whoes reflection was on mirror?
Keep smiling

Regards

Sohi

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    22 Comments

    1. SidMin on March 17, 2017 8:14 am

      ?????????????????
      Loved it … you write so well …. Awesome…. I feel that reflection is Sid …. well … I am not sure but can hope for tbe best … I feel something suspicious about this Kunj …. (Naman ) …
      The fight between Uv and simple was so cute…
      Love you post soon ❤❤❤

    2. anshikajainn on March 17, 2017 10:49 am

      Awwww Sohi it it was so cute

    3. SidMin23 on March 17, 2017 11:00 am

      Sohi it was great and I feel reflection is sid as twinkle said she miss old kunj and he will do surgery and be twinkle old sid/Kunj waiting for next part eagerly. Keep posting soon.

    4. adeeba_zain on March 17, 2017 12:47 pm

      Hey sohi it’s just fabulous nd simraj fight was hilarious… Just loved it nd I don’t have any idea about whose reflection…
      Post soon…
      Luv u..
      Bye..

    5. ariya on March 17, 2017 12:58 pm

      loved it sohi..
      its sweet and cute..
      love u
      post soon

    6. Affaa on March 17, 2017 1:35 pm

      Sohiiiiii it’s fantastic yaar mind blowing….. Sohiiiiii I’m so excited… Keep it up… I loved it

    7. Cp on March 17, 2017 2:17 pm

      AMAZING ????sacchi mein ….Agar app inn ka romance dikhate na tohh. …..bass??? war ho jatee??????
      Post next soon ???

      • Sohi on March 17, 2017 2:28 pm

        Haan yaar mai itni young age me marna nahi chahti

    8. Aamna_2690 on March 17, 2017 3:04 pm

      Oh God Sohi…
      .
      It’s fabulous n too much mysterious??
      yaar loved the plot❤❤
      Haye simraj fight was ??
      Haye thank God tumne Twinj ka Romance nahi dikhaya ??
      warna pata nahi kya hota??
      well woh shadow n iss kunj ke peeche gehra raaz hai??
      suspicions ??suspense overloaded?
      just loved the plot❤❤
      post next one soon dear☺☺
      Loads of love ??

    9. Presha on March 17, 2017 3:18 pm

      Hey sohu its just awesome yaar…
      Loved it …
      It was kunjs ( sid ) reflection thats why twinkle was shocked… Hope so…

    10. mia12 on March 17, 2017 4:13 pm

      Saacchiii mai sohi agar tu inka romance dikati na toh sach mai tuje ab alvida kehna padhta,,???????? oh god suhagrar rat mai card’s khelna bhi ritual hota yeh to nai pata tha,,??.. and simraj fighting was funny,,???.. But mirror ki reflection mai kaun tha pata nai,,??.. But it’s to mystery hmm,,??.. I love it soo much,,❤?❤?❤?❤… Well can’t wait 4 next,,???.. Post soon OK,,???..
      LOAD’S OF LOVE,,?❤?❤?❤?…

    11. kruti on March 17, 2017 5:30 pm

      Amazing epi sohi
      Do continue asap

    12. Purvi128 on March 17, 2017 8:19 pm

      Hey sohi..!
      I m damn sure agr inka romance dikhati na toh is duniya ko bye bye karma padta..! Hum chodte nhi na tujhe.., or such me zinda gaad dete ???
      Well the episode was soooo goood..! Awesome..! Loving it..! ??
      Its so mysterious.! Something is suspicious about kunj (naman). I hope so sidmin end up together..!
      Yarrr voh reflection..! ??? I m damn sure wo Sid ka reflection hai tabhi twinkle shocked thi..! I m 100000% sure ke wo sid ka reflection hai..!
      Chalo now post soon..!
      Can’t wait..
      Love you ????❤❤??
      Post soon

    13. Purvi128 on March 17, 2017 8:20 pm

      Hey sohi..!
      I m damn sure agr inka romance dikhati na toh is duniya ko bye bye karma padta..! Hum chodte nhi na tujhe.., or such me zinda gaad dete ???
      Well the episode was soooo goood..! Awesome..! Loving it..! ??
      Its so mysterious.! Something is suspicious about kunj (naman). I hope so sidmin end up together..!
      Yarrr voh reflection..! ??? I m damn sure wo Sid ka reflection hai tabhi twinkle shocked thi..! I m 100000% sure ke wo sid ka reflection hai..!
      Chalo now post soon..!
      Can’t wait..
      Love you ????❤❤??♥♥????

      • Purvi128 on March 17, 2017 8:21 pm

        Sorry for the double comment.. it wasn’t posting so I tried again and it got posted 2 times..

      • Sohi on March 17, 2017 8:54 pm

        Shukriya apke comment k liye
        Haan mujhe pata hai agar mai unka romance dikhati tho mai gayi
        Well let’s see whose reflection was that?

    14. Ramya on March 17, 2017 9:03 pm

      Thankyou sohi for not showing any kind of romance btwn naman n twinkle if u have done mera mood off ho gaya hota
      But it’s awesome amazing
      It’s increasing my curiosity
      Love u keep smiling

    15. twinj fan on March 17, 2017 10:24 pm

      I seriously feel that the reflection must be of old kunj(Sidhant). maybe kunj (naman) thought of this as twinkle misses old kunj as she said….
      Seriously episode was fab……

    16. Shalini15 on March 18, 2017 2:47 pm

      Sohi you too have started ff good I didn’t knew that you too write very well ??????????? by the way it’s concept is interesting nd good. Loved it. Sorry for not commenting on intro ??????????????

      Well episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb jhakkas. Simraj fight was too good nd funny nd twinj scene was too good. Nd bahot bahot shukriya romance nahi dikhane ke liye warna baki sabka toh pata nahi par main pakka tumhein maar deti ?????????????????? well I think she’s saw sid or may be naman ko hi????? can’t say…but I think one is Kunj nd other is Revanth???? well post next part asap.

    17. maha on March 18, 2017 10:10 pm

      toooo.good..start
      do..continue

    18. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 19, 2017 4:25 pm

      Amazing interesting…n shayad usne sid ka reflection dekha ho….

    19. baby on March 24, 2017 11:07 pm

      Sid sid sid sid ka reflection hai vo….. 🙂
      Wow yr loving it di…. beautiful osm amazing speechless n sahi kaha noo romance btween d two hahaha zinda toh nhi gadna tha bt sad ho jana tha hahahaa……nooo ways loved it simraj fight hahahaa cards ohhh god beautiful osm marvellous yaar… 🙂
      Lods of love… 🙂
      Post soon…. 🙂
      Srrie m late…… 🙂

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