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Home»Fan Fiction»Few Things Left Unsaid….A Shivika 4S Part-2
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Few Things Left Unsaid….A Shivika 4S Part-2

MohaBy MohaJune 1, 201738 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey friends…remember me??? Ok I’m just joking…How are you all?? Oho…I am so silly…you all will be healthy and fine…right??
So I’m back with part 2 of the 4S.
Hmm…let’s end my bak bak…and go on with the part…
Happy Reading!!:-)

So let’s ignore each other
try to pretend that the
other person doesn’t
Exist. But deep down, we
both know that this
Wasn’t supposed to end
Like this…..”

Annika slept while penning down her emotions. The whole neighborhood was in deep slumber and no one saw a black Lexus car at the parking lot or a blue-eyed man coming out of it.

****

Next morning, Annika woke up yet again with soar eyes. It’s been a week since she saw Shivaay. Her heart craved for him. Her job was going well but her life, her life was incomplete without him.

“He doesn’t care about you! Then why are you thinking about him?” She questioned herself. She then went to the washroom and freshened up. She came out looking gorgeous. She was wearing a white salwaar kameez with a glittery dupatta. There was a function in her school today. She had to look okay but deep down, she was not okay. She was looking pale as her heart was piercing with pain. She somehow got ready with a little eyeliner and a light coloured lipstick.
She got out of the house, locked the door and walked through the neighborhood to go to the main road to catch a taxi. She was going absentmindedly and bumped into someone “Can’t you walk properly” She frowned which soon vanished when she saw the person standing in front of her. She was shocked to death, her breath hitched, her heart stopped! “Aap? What the hell are you
doing here?” She asked him, anger clearly visible in her voice. “Main tumhe lene aaya hun!” He said in a shaking voice. He held her hands tightly “Ghar chalo Annika…!!”.

She snatched away her hands, a disgust was in her expression….”Leave me! Main kahi nahi jaungi” She said and rolled her eyes. Shivaay became teary-eyed. He lowered his eyes in approval. He couldn’t force her, after what he had done. Annika looked at him with a hope that maybe he will again stop her but no, he backed off.
He left her way, and quietly sat on the car. Annika was furious, “Aaj bhi apne dil ki baat nahi kar paye…” She said to herself. She fumed and left from there. Shivaay saw her retreating figure. His face hung down in shame. He was ashamed of his behavior. He sat inside his car and was thinking about his condition after she left…

Fb starts…

After Annika left, Shivaay locked himself in his room. OmRu came running behind him but to their utter disappointment, the door was locked from the inside. “Shivaay/Bhaiyya, open the door!!!” OmRu shouted but didn’t got any reply. Shivaay sat on the floor with his knees touching his chin and hands tightly folded around his shivering legs. His eyes were wet with tears. His withered lips, shaky breath was the witness of his horrible state. He shut his eyes, as the thought of Annika going away from him broke his heart into millions of pieces. Why? Why I didn’t said anything when she left? I should’ve stopped her…!!” He said in a barely audible voice. He remembered all the things….from their first meet till their last..!!
He stood up and made his way to Om’s room where OmRu both were present. They ran and hugged Shivaay. Rudra started crying and Om noticed Shivaay’s condition. His bloodshot eyes, messed up hair, dried lips clearly showed how much he cried for Annika. But still, he was so stubborn that he couldn’t accept his feelings. Om thought of a plan and winked at Rudra, he too winked at Om. They started their melodrama!

Om- Waise accha hua Rudra ki Annika Bhabhi chali gayi.

Rudra- Ha O. You are right!! And Annika Bhabhi nahi… sirf Annika….she is nothing to us now!

Shivaay was still silent! So OmRu went to a higher level.

Om- Accha hua ki Shivaay ne use jaane diya. I am so happy…!!

Rudra- Sahi kaha O.

Shivaay could not take it anymore, he burst into Anger. “Annika ke khilaaf ek shabd nahi..!!” He shouted. Anger was running through his veins.

OmRu smiled hideously.

Shivaay- kyu keh raha hain ki Annika ko jaane dena chahiye? How can I let her go?

Om- kyun jaane nahi de sakta….bol…bol shivaay! Say….Aaj tujhe bolna hi hoga…!!! Bol Shivaay bol…!!!

Shivaay – PYAAR KARTA HUN MEIN USSE….!!!!

At last, OmRu were successful. Shivaay confessed his feelings. He poured his heart in front of them.

Rudra- Humne nahi…!! Aapne jaane diya hain bhabhi ko.

Om- Ab tu yahan khada rahega ya jayega bhabhi ko lene….just go!

After listening to that, Shivaay literally ran with his car keys. He drove as fast as he could and reached Annika’s house but it was locked. He asked the neighbors but they said that she didn’t came here. Shivaay was restless, he went to each street, and colony in quest of her but she was nowhere to be found. For 1 week, Shivaay tried to find Annika relentlessly until one day he spotted her. She was going to a kindergarten school. He waited there, after she left for home, he asked the principal about her whereabouts. And successfully got the information that she lives in Andheri now. At night, Shivaay reached there but he thought to wait in the car as he didn’t know the exact house she lives in. In the morning, Annika came out giving him some hope.

Fb ends…

Shivaay thought for sometime, and then decided that he can’t let her go. She was his life….he can’t afford to lose her.

**********************************

Hi guys….so that’s all! If you liked it then do tell. Your precious feedback means Everything to me…If you didn’t liked it then also tell me!!!
I’ll try to improve….

Bye guys…
Love you
Moha.

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    38 Comments

    1. Nita D on June 1, 2017 7:03 am

      Awesome chapter….Finally Shivaay realised his feelings for her….I was sad to see his condition but he deserved that….
      Plz post next part soon….

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 9:29 am

        Thank you dear…yeah!! He had to change for her….
        I will update soon…??

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:03 pm

        Thank you dear….yeah! I also became sad when I wrote this part….but he really deserved it…!!!!! ?
        I will post soon….

    2. Sneha on June 1, 2017 7:17 am

      Just Amazing….

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 9:31 am

        Thank you soooo much!!!!!!??

    3. Aashi on June 1, 2017 8:23 am

      lovely update
      update soon

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 9:32 am

        Thanks yaar….?

    4. pooja26 on June 1, 2017 8:25 am

      loved it !!!!
      post asap…….
      tc…..

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 9:34 am

        Thanks dear….??Will post soon..!!!!!

    5. sabhya on June 1, 2017 9:19 am

      Simply wow…???…loved it…waiting for next chapter desperately…?..

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:07 pm

        Thank you sweetie…will upload soon..??

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:31 pm

        Thank you dear….I will post soon

    6. gayathri.visu on June 1, 2017 9:51 am

      Just now only I read I read first part. Its Awesome…
      OMG! Shivaay’s condition…..its very difficult for me to imagine him like this. But u made it dear! Waiting for next part……

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:09 pm

        Aww!!! Thanks so much!!!?
        Hmm…I was also sad writing Shivaay’s condition…but he deserved it….
        Will update the next part soon!!!!

    7. Ahaana on June 1, 2017 10:54 am

      So cuteee?

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:10 pm

        Hehe…..thanks….!!!!??

    8. Sagithya on June 1, 2017 11:09 am

      Aww so sweet… At last shivaay realised his feeling…. Now make shivika unite na… Waiting for the next one…post it soon

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:12 pm

        Thanks dear…..yeah I’ll definitely unite them….!!!? I can’t watch them apart…
        Will post asap

    9. Shivika on June 1, 2017 11:21 am

      Awesome….
      At last Shivaay has realised his feelings…. 🙂

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:32 pm

        Thank u. Yeah he had to change for her…!!!
        ?

    10. dwet on June 1, 2017 11:42 am

      Wow! Amazing update. Please post next ASAP. ?

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:33 pm

        Thank you soooo much!!!! I will update asap

    11. madhu.r on June 1, 2017 12:00 pm

      Nice

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:33 pm

        Thanks !!!!??

    12. alekhika20 on June 1, 2017 2:30 pm

      Superb update

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:34 pm

        Thank you yaar…!!!?

    13. nikita_jai29 on June 1, 2017 5:29 pm

      It is awesome dear

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:35 pm

        Thanks a lot….!!!?

    14. Niriha on June 1, 2017 5:32 pm

      Awesome..fabulous part

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:36 pm

        Thanks a load…..❤❤

    15. CrazygirlS.P on June 1, 2017 7:05 pm

      Awesome

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 7:36 pm

        Thanks a ton dear….?

    16. Arthi on June 1, 2017 8:45 pm

      This was superb dr….just loved it…..

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 9:50 pm

        Thank you soooo much!!! I am so glad that you loved it….❤❤

      • Moha on June 1, 2017 9:52 pm

        I’m so glad you loved it…..❤

    17. Banita on June 1, 2017 11:03 pm

      Awesome epi Moha

    18. Ankita27 on June 2, 2017 1:49 pm

      superb update..

      • Moha on June 3, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thanks dear….❤❤

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