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Home»Fan Fiction»This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 4 (by ritzi)
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This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 4 (by ritzi)

RitziBy RitziJuly 5, 201633 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hehelooooo guys….luckily a bit early today
So let the fun begin baby

Fb continues
The day of tripppppppp

Railway station
Again the same thing…..mahi calling twinkle…kunj getting worried nd UV consoling him

K: be yaar ye twinkle ne let ane ki kasam kha rakhi hai kya (has this twinkle swore to get late)

UV: kunj……shall I ask u 1 thing….no no actually 2

K: wht if I say no

UV: OK my first question

Mahi nd kunj give a I knew it wala look

UV: R u going to wear books in the journey

Mahi: what!

UV: (in a serious tone) look kunj if u need cloths then tell me not to wear books….tujh pe suite nhi karta yaar

K: what do u mean

UV: arre I m able to see books books nd only books in yr bag…..where r cloths buddy

M: UV itni si baat ke life tune intna lamba chalaya…wht WS the need to beat around the bush

UV: arre….leave it….kunj…u answer me…..wht r u going to wear

Kunj ws abt to speak just then he saw…..

K: twinkle

Yuhi looked at so

Yuhi: twinkle!

She hold kunj by his hand nd grabbing his attention

M: no no kunj u cannot play with my twinkle…..u cannot wear her….no noo

K: shut up mahi

Nd he made her turn backward

There yuhi saw twinkle cmng….in a full too filmy style. ..with r black sunglasses on….white high low t shirt nd a denim jeans….looking simple but adorable

UV: ooooo to ye baat this

Twinkle came to them
me: kya baat thi?

UV: arre nothing twinkle….voh kunj just wanted to wear u.

K: what!

Nd he looked towards twinkle scaringly

K: lo…look twinkle..kle he is…li

T: I don’t mind kunj!

Listening this Kunj’s mouth just widened up
Twinkle was heading towards him nd in no tym she wrapped her arms around his neck

……………kunj’s POV…………

she had wrapped her arms around my neck….nd was looking continuously towards me with her deep sea blue eyes…..ya this means she wore a blue lens….if I would hv been dying nd I would hv been left with 1 wish then I will ask god to show me twinkle’s real eyes….as no1 knows that…” When do u want to wear me?” She asked seriously….nd I immediately pulled her away from me….god knows why do I get sooooo nervous wen she is around me ” let’s move in” I replied nd ran inside the train as fast as I could. The whole blocks of train were booked by our college….so we had a freedom to sit anywhere….I quickly sat beside rohit nd rashi…as I wanted to stay away from her….but as soon as twinkle came nd stood there ” the place is full” I replied as if I won the match….I don’t know twinkle was making a different type of emotions with her eyes nd was continously looking at rohit ” come on jaan we will sit smwhere else” replied rohit to rashi….what! How can they do that to me….to twinkle gave a sarcastic smile to me as if the winner of the match changed…..she sat opposite to me…near window…. Actually we both were sitting near the opposite windows …..” So…..u ignoring me ri8!” She asked….yes yes….I want to ignore u but I m not able to do so ” umm….n..nothing lyk tht ” i told her hell nervously….. Oh thank god they came….” Where were u both” is asked to mahi nd UV…..” Ah….we were giving u the opportunity to wear twinkle nothing else” replied UV….I just don’t understand why is he elongating that incident….of course I was speechless ” no kunj….how can u wear me in public place….in yr room baby…..oh it can be my also” said twinkle winking at me nd just adding the salt…..how can a girl be like this….she is such a big flirt….moreover she always flirts with me…..I think just to pull my legs….but must say she is the beauty princess of the college….WHAT! Did I just said…..control kunj control….but ya she is very different from mahi….I mean ya she too is beautiful but not at all a flirt…..she is a 1 man girl ofcourse …….moreover SHE IS SO SILENT how I wish twinkle to be like her…but Neva mind…I lyk the way she is……..no no….I dont like her ….its just….OK jst forget it……my thoughts were broken by the whistle if train…nd in smtym we started moving…..actually the train….” Ye ye yipeeee…..train started UV” saying this she hugged him as he was the nearest 1 to her…..thank god I was not there at uv’s place ” twinkle are u a kid” I replied…” Ya exactly” mahi said supporting me ” well its good to becm a kid smtymes” she replied still jumping in her place…oh god! Does she know every answer!

Whatever……. I opened my bag nd was searching for my chemistry book….while searching my eyes went up towards twinkle nd UV…..they were staring me as if they r watching a porn movie….with their jaws open ……as mahi was sitting beside me I was not able to see her…so I just moved my eyeball to the tip just to see her. …….nd ya….seems that she was watching the same movie…… But wait! Did I just said…..a porn film….kunj this is just bcus of twinkle uh….otherwise I m very sidha sidha…..I never watched that kind of movie……ya OK I admit I saw it just once….but that too was bcus twinkle nd UV were forcing me to do so…I again stopped the forming polynomial chain if thoughts nd again started searching it…….oh yes I found it……I took it out….nd ” WHAT THE HELL” is shouted

To be continued…

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    33 Comments

    1. SidMin on July 5, 2016 7:40 pm

      Loved the episode and Kunj being afraid of bold aTwinkle was awesome waiting for the next episode

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 12:55 pm

        I m reallllly glad tht u liked it yaar

    2. Sayeeda on July 5, 2016 7:44 pm

      Ritziiiiiii…….fab dear …..amazing episode….
      Seriously u r doing a marvelous job ….the way u rocked in ur previous ff the same trend u r carrying with this one also….
      Loved it….

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 12:57 pm

        Sayeeda this means a lot to me …..ty yaar nd when r u posting ur ff….m waiting for it

    3. Fan on July 5, 2016 7:58 pm

      Awesome epi..loved the nerdy behaviour oh kunj..

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 12:58 pm

        Thank u so so soooooo much fan…..I m really delighted to know tht ur liking it

    4. Sneha on July 5, 2016 8:21 pm

      Very nice episode!!! Love ur ff!!!!Cant wait for the next one…..Love ya!

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 12:59 pm

        Ye tu hi hai na Sneha……so finally u commented….tere muh se meri tarif sunna ….ahahaaa kitna accha lagta hai yaar

    5. AYESHA KHANUM on July 5, 2016 8:40 pm

      amazing awsome episode by the way missing ur romance

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:00 pm

        Oh ayesha ur missing my romance…. Srsly….do u want me to add romance once again…..I mean think about it

    6. Lovely on July 5, 2016 9:41 pm

      Ritzi darling… soooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry…seriously.. I mean I din commented on YOUR EPISODE!!… It slipped off my mind….so sorry dear ..well if there is any confusion then Let me tell u that I am ur buddy Shreya… Missed me?..do you remember me?…
      Chalo yeh sab chodo…comments for each epi..
      Epi1- Awesome tha…mazaa agya…muaaaaah??
      Epi2- Jhakaaaaas…mindblowing??
      Epi3- aaaye haye…love this flirt and padhakuuu…(iski entry pe toh mere dil ki ghantiyan…tan tan tan…)
      Epi4- Kya likha yaar…today’s epi…muaaah..haan kuch baare samajh nahi aayi..but chodo…???????????????

      Muaaaaah..
      Love you dear..

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:03 pm

        Oh shreyani…..how can I forget u… Look I remeber yr real name too….thank u soon mu……wait wait ty se pehle….TERI FF KIDHAR HAI….JALDI POST KAR! Nd now tysm…..hehe nd pls tell me wht u didn’t understood

      • Lovely on July 6, 2016 2:37 pm

        Awww ritzi so sweet of you..Roz badaam khati hai kya??..lolz..chalo chod ..I will post next epi today at night.. Do read and comment… And yes Don’t laugh at me..but what did UV meant saying kunj to wear Twinkle!!!?..and what us a porn?….mujhe pata nahi…

    7. Lama on July 5, 2016 9:48 pm

      wooooow Ritzi…what an episode..sooooo awesomeeeee…loved it fom the core

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:03 pm

        Oh lama srsly yaar THANK U no other words to thank u yaar

    8. twinjfan-(tamanna) on July 5, 2016 10:04 pm

      awesome…loved it….it was too funny….is it ur pic in ur dp???if it is then ur too cute…

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:04 pm

        Tamanna baby…..thank u yaar thank u from the core nd ya that’s me

    9. Purnima.agrawal30 on July 5, 2016 10:06 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous funny epi…..

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:05 pm

        Ty tysm tysmmmmm purnima

    10. dreamer...arundhati on July 5, 2016 10:49 pm

      Ritzi the epi was superb, fabulous
      Ctd soon

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:13 pm

        Ummm dreamer kya bolu tujhe….chalk let me not speak let me just ??? for u

    11. kruti on July 5, 2016 11:17 pm

      Fantastic ….amazing epi ritzi
      U just rocked

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:11 pm

        Tysm kruti….keep loving it

    12. rashiverma2199 on July 5, 2016 11:21 pm

      Ritzii…..the episode was fab….loved it….m

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:10 pm

        Tysmmmmmm rashi….umm ?for u

    13. Mahi on July 5, 2016 11:21 pm

      So much fany and amazing dear keep it up

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:09 pm

        Do u mean to say funny…..oh thank God tht u found it funny….I thought it bored u all…anyways ty mahi

    14. shreya098 on July 5, 2016 11:37 pm

      awesome episode..
      bold twinkle shy kunj..loving them?

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:08 pm

        Glad to hear that shreya….u keep loving twinj I will keep loving u

    15. Crazy on July 6, 2016 12:33 pm

      Abeeee oooo lo g lo I read all 4 episodes just..
      Thank god during traveling I get time to do so…
      N this 1hr f traveling to go t CLG I can do that…
      Btwn really ritzi sorry be
      U mentioned me n first episode only I read it today hehehe…
      Btwn koi ni
      Bade bade desho mein choti choti bate hoti rehti hai r8?
      Btwn really loved it to moon n back…
      Keep up…
      N will surely read further episodes as n how I get time….
      Love u !!!

      • Ritzi on July 6, 2016 1:06 pm

        Hash! Now my ff seems to be complete yaar crazy…ty re

    16. Angita on July 6, 2016 3:02 pm

      So sorry late comment.I loved the episode to death.

    17. baby on July 6, 2016 11:59 pm

      hey ritzi dear i m really vry sry fr being sooooooooooooooooooooo late 2 cmnt yr yes missing d romance in ur ff infct missing dat ff of urs it was amazing jstluvd it n u nailed it pls continue n yah if possible u rmembr u deletd an episode frm tu page pls snd it i hd misd it ughh i thnk itswiered bt still sry if its disappointing any1 bt aaj tk mene ritzi ki ek bhi episode nhi choda n jbse nhi pda hai voh tbse i m lyk u no wt 2 say on urchoice dear hahaha bt u r amazing srsly osm dear

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