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Home»Fan Fiction»This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 33
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This is when the feeling sinks in…..twinj episode 33

RitziBy RitziOctober 10, 201628 Comments5 Mins Read
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Helllloooooo guys…accha aapko koi aawaz sunai de rhi hai kya
Smthing dhak dhak..dhak dhak…dhak dhak types… Hehe itni curiosity bhi acchi nhi hai…heart attack bhi aa sakti hai…chlo then let’s start the epi……

#kunj’s POV
@ sameer’s cabin

We both spoke together “3”
“Tw….” Knock knock
We heard “come in” shouted sameer “sir..its tym for the meeting to start” Jennie said coming in

“Oh ya… We will be there” said sameer “shall I lead the way” he continued “sure” I blurted nd we went to the presentation hall

…………………..End of Kunj’s POV…………….

#Twinkle’s POV
@ taneja mansion…room
“Thaaaaanqqqqqqqqqqqqq soooooo much babaji” I said jumping nd bouncing on my bed. .y first india’s concert turned out to be a successful one….yipppe…every1 congratulated me except tht idiot Sam…not even a phonecall! Aaj toh usse face to face daant padegi…let me just go to his office… Dekhu toh sahi kis kaam mei itna busy hai voh

Saying this is stood up frm my bed ….nd got engrossed in selection of my dress “maaaahiiii” again I called for her.

………………..end of twinkle’s POV………………..

#Kunj’s POV
@sameer’s office

#Aftr abt 30 minutes

Uff…finally the meeting got over….aftr sm formalities nd all ….we left the room “okay… So I will take me leave” I said “oh pls….don’t u dare…wait..u busy?” He asked “umm…not actually but….” I said “but wht…come with me to my cabin…our talk is not over yet” sameer said

I want to meet my twinkle… Arghh…”oh..k…a..as u wish sameer” I said “its Sam” he said “Sam!” I dubbed nd we went to his cabin.

…………………..End of Kunj’s POV……………….

#third person’s POV

Kunj and sameer again got engrossed in sm random talks on the other hand a Mercedes is shown stopping in front of the big S&T company (name of sameer’s company) a girl is shown stepping out of the car…her legs r visible… So shiny nd perfect….she took off her glares…her cat eyes r visible… She is wearing a floral designed one piece with a hot red lipstick… Light blush nd smoky eyes….now her clear view is shown…she is our star….I mean sameer’s star nd kunj’s universe…. Twinkle!
“Sam ke bacche im not gonna leave u today” she said walking inside the extravagant office. Aa soon as she entered the office she was surrounded by huge crowd asking for autographs nd selfies

Aftr attending her fans she made her way towards the lift

At cabin
“Accha Sam….u didn’t told me abt yr star’s name” I asked

On the other hand twinkle got out of the lift ….every1 greeted her good morning. The receptionist called Sam

At cabin
Sam was abt to speak her name but was stopped by the call “sir twinkle mam is here to meet u…she is on her way nd seems a bit angry…all the best” the receptionist says. It brought a smile on Sam’s face “its okay purvi…ik how to handle her” saying this he kept the phone

“So kunj…I will kunj tell u her name…u directly meet her” sam said to which kunj smiled

(Kunj was facing his back towards the door)

And the thunderstorm entered the cabin…yup…twinkle opened the door with full anger
There kunj’s phone fell down ….he bent to pick it up
…………….End of third person’s POV………………

#kunj’s POV
I bent down to take my phone “Sam ke bacche aaj mai tujhe nhi chodungi!” I heard a voice…her voice? Was it her voice? It sounded like the same voice jisse sunne ke liye mai itna tarsa hu…my eyes too couldn’t help but responded getting wider…I was there still bent under the table….
I got up with a thud nd turned towards the voice………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………twi..twinkle.. My twinkle…. I saw her….I m seeing her….oh my God… Is it…is it a dream…she is standing infront of me…still the same…no changes…her dressing style still the same…her attitude still the same…her eyes still the same….her grace…………still the same….my eyes too responded again…becoming teary…nd her eyes too….I could feel again the same connection took place between mine nd her eyes…..we both were there …….still..

“Twin…..kle” finally….. Aftr great efforts a voice came.out of my throat.
“U knw her?” I heard a voice…..donno who spoke it “ye…s….of..ofcource” I replied.
“Oh silly me how can any1 not knw her” I heard again the same voice….this tym I came to my senses nd with a lots nd lots of difficulties took my eyes frm her…..towards the voice…oh it was of Sam

“So basically kunj….u knw her as twinkle… Twinkle Taneja…the female sensation… The great singer…..right?” He said….no ofcource not…I knw her as my girl…who is mine nd only mine …..I wanted to answer him back…but my throat …my larynx it was not allowing me to do so
Before I could utter a word he continued

“But now…let me introduce her to u” he said moving towards her…..twinkle was still…no response …..she was staring me like a lifeless body.
Sam went near her nd turned towards me…”meet twinkle… To be Mrs.Twinkle Sameer Singhania” he said pulling her towards him by her waist.
Listening the last few lines it was like the bird has stopped chirping…. The sun stopped shining… The clouds stopped moving…nd my life…oh…it had already stopped. The frown on my forehead got cleared up bcus of the unbearable shock…I could sense my eyes turning more nd more teary nd eventually red. My hands could stop but they tightened the grip in anger. I was shaking badly.

“Hey kunj…ru….ru there” he said still holding her by her waist. “Leave her waist” I whispered
“Sorry!” He said pardoning me….should I curse my voice box….or his ears for not able to hear my last line…..but she heard it….ya I could make it by her expressions…”I said leave her….”

To be continued…

So…how was it?

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    28 Comments

    1. Saira on October 10, 2016 1:37 am

      ??oh my gosh
      I’m speechless
      I’d only say please please please please post the next episode pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    2. SidVee on October 10, 2016 1:46 am

      Amazingggggg epii.. was waiting for your ff to end my curiosity ??.. my heart was really doing dhak dhak??.. U know what.. when u weren’t posting ut ff in the middle I was wondering how will twinj meet in ur ff.. n then same situation had crossed my mind.. heheh.. can’t wait for the next one.. do cont soon ??

    3. thanmy on October 10, 2016 6:00 am

      Ritzi yrrrrrrrrr i am speechless finally twinj mil gaye yeah!!!!! Vaise im angry wid u gussa hoon main tujse huh!!!! Anyways episode was a blast it was fantastic yrrr n take care of urself
      Love u n

      • Ritzi on October 10, 2016 11:46 am

        First of all….HAPPPPPPYYYYYYYYY BIRTHDAY THANMAY……may ur all the wishes r fulfilled …sorry yaar…I didn’t opened TU yesterday… So I was unaware of yr birthday…. My apologizes dear…accha now tell me y r u soooooo angly wid me

    4. thanmy on October 10, 2016 6:00 am

      Ritzi yrrrrrrrrr i am speechless finally twinj mil gaye yeah!!!!! Vaise im angry wid u gussa hoon main tujse huh!!!! Anyways episode was a blast it was fantastic yrrr n take care of urself
      Love u n miffed wid u too!!!!

    5. Sidhanshi on October 10, 2016 7:14 am

      Dhamakedar epi… Super exited for the next epi…

    6. Shikha on October 10, 2016 7:28 am

      once again an amazing part
      just loved it in the last episode they were just going to say her name together and here they having her as one (I mean sam’star and Kunj’s universe) in front of them
      ohhhh Kunj’s anger oooooppppsss he is always so possessive about her Yr
      it’s damn interesting
      with every episode of your am just starting to love it more n more
      and my curiosity is just on its peak now
      plzzzzzz Yr try to give us somehow long parts plzzzz

    7. ranabulbul on October 10, 2016 7:37 am

      Post soon bas or nhi kahingi kuch …

    8. Maggi on October 10, 2016 7:43 am

      At last……I luvd it yaaaar?????
      CNT soon

    9. dreamer...arundhati on October 10, 2016 9:15 am

      Ritzi… Omg… My gosh…. Its unbelievable.. Its really happening… Ctd soon

    10. Anayaali on October 10, 2016 9:43 am

      Luvd it …….
      Superb……
      Amazing………
      Emotional…….
      Sad…….
      Heart touching…….
      Cant tell how i am feeling now plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post nxt asap plzzzzzzz

    11. Ayeshakhanum11 on October 10, 2016 10:38 am

      it was fabulous

    12. loveleen on October 10, 2016 11:05 am

      finally they both met….m exctd wat wl happen nxt…

      • Ritzi on October 10, 2016 1:51 pm

        Mera ff toh thik hai…tu apne ff likhne ka muhrat kab nikalegi…jaldi post karna g…m waiting!

    13. Fan on October 10, 2016 11:26 am

      Awesome epi yaar!!!..it was too good..i think i will die of curiosity…plz dont kill me with ur suspense n post the next epi soon!!

    14. shreya098 on October 10, 2016 11:59 am

      Oh my god..
      What a dhaamakedaar epi..
      I can’t wait for the next one… Plz post it asap

    15. Sana(sanu) on October 10, 2016 12:49 pm

      Loved it… Post soon ….

    16. Payal .... on October 10, 2016 1:27 pm

      Loved it yr
      ab jaldi post kr do

    17. Purnima.agrawal30 on October 10, 2016 1:40 pm

      awesome amazing shocking epi…..eagerly waiting for next part

    18. kruti on October 10, 2016 2:03 pm

      Omggggggg……I am thinking of third world war…..Kunj ka anger….uffff

      U just nailed it…..superb…..amazing ……fantastic
      Loved it
      Post d nxt one soon

    19. TwinjSidMin on October 10, 2016 5:25 pm

      Oh my gosh…finally twinj face off…Kunj anger tho on peak…desperate to know twinkle’s reaction…ritzi episode by episode I’m falling more and more for your ff…damn desperate to know how the story will shape up…

    20. Adya on October 10, 2016 9:19 pm

      Wooowwww……….ritzi……..I loved twinj face off………it was aweeessssooooommmmmeeeee…….. U rocked

    21. Dheemahee on October 11, 2016 1:02 am

      these is now known as a speechless and dhamakedar episode hehehe. post next one soon u know na curiosity problem hehehehe… bye now gn.

    22. rashiverma2199 on October 11, 2016 9:50 am

      Wow…..ritzi awesome episode…..

    23. twinjfan.tamanna on October 11, 2016 11:24 am

      aaj kuch nahi plz…I m nt able to say anything….bus…plz plz plz post asap…yaar…plz..

    24. SidMin on October 11, 2016 12:51 pm

      Loved it the part was so emotional 🙂 Sorry yar oh ekh swath comment kar rahe the na tho last episode meh iss episode ka comment likh diya 🙂 Sorry 🙂 Loved the episode so emotional 🙂 Post soon can’t wait for the next part 🙂

    25. baby on October 23, 2016 6:48 pm

      Ohhh myy gosh srsly m late bt dis shock me re I toh jaan nikli jaa rhi thi or abhi bhi nikal rhi hai ab kya hoga cant w8 luvd it yr luv u u r amazing. .

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