Fanfiction of Tashan e Ishq (Epi 1)

whi guys..this is my first fan fiction.I had been a silent reader but now i am inspired by some of your works.So i thought to frame my imagination a bit.I would like to continue the story of tashan a ishq from the current track,but i have made few changes…..whether u like it or not plzzz comment..

Sarna house(after lohri party)
twinj’s room:
Twinkle is thinking about how Anita insulted Leela and is upset.Kunj comes and asks her what happened? she says nothing.
k: jhoot mat bol..tu maa ke bare mein soch rahi hain na?
t: nahi..kuch nehi..tum batao aaj tum late kyun huye??
k: hey bhagwan iss ladki ka mein kya karu? matlab jab dekho typical biwi o wale sawal puchhti rahti hain…
t:(making face) mein a aisa kya puchha..sirf yehi na ki kunj tum late kyun huye?
k: tujhe to bas mujhse jhagar ne ka mauka chahiye..
t: jaise ki tum to mujhse jhagar te hi nehi ho…
the scene shifts
anita and cherry are plotting a plan against leela..anita wishes to dispose leela in front of everyone..cherry is confused.

taneja house:
leela is tensed thinking about what had happened. she wishes to apply sindoor but controls her emotions thinking what happend in lohri party should not be repeated.she prays to god.

sarna house:
Twinkle is making preparations to sleep.kunj’s phone rings…
t: kunj tumhara phone baj raha hain..kunj…(turning back she finds kunj is not in the room) are yeh kunj kaha chala gaya??
she goes near the phone and sees the name “maya” and thinks y is she calling up kunj so late. Twinkle is about to take the call when……..
k: kya kar rahi hain? mere phone se dur reh samjhi?..jab dekho jasoos bani firti hain!!
twinkle is about to say something but kunj leaves angrily..
she sits down on the bed and sobs..”baba ji yeh kya ho raha hain?”
SCENE FREEZES

PRECAP: Twinkle hears kunj speaking to someone over phone. k: tumne itni raat ko phone kyun kiya? agar twinkle utth jati toh?
twinkle is shocked.

Credit to: tara

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