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Home»Fan Fiction»My family-part 32
Fan Fiction Swaragini

My family-part 32

AstraBy AstraSeptember 4, 201664 Comments6 Mins Read
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Previous part: Part 31

Part 32: last part…

Haaa…..everything settled. Whole family is happy. They are back to their house.
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Full moon night… The sign of love of Raglak….
Ragini is in her room. She is sitting on the bed. The room is decorated with all flowers
She is blushing in herself. Suddenly she feels a warm hand on her shoulder. She smiles and turns back.

“bow….!!!” Shouts a bear…
Ragini scares and shouts.
Laksh removes the mask, “dar gaya… Lioness dar gaya…” he laughs.
Ragini starts beating him.
Laksh holds her hands strongly and looks into her eyes. She feels shy and bends her head.
Laksh keeps his hand on her chin and raises her head. She closes her eyes.
Laksh: look at me…
She is still closing her eyes.
“Ragini…” he shouts in her ears. She trembles and beats him again.
Ragini: why are you shouting….!

Laksh: I thought you can’t hear…
“I hate you…” she says and sits on bed. Laksh goes near her, places his head on her lap and sleeps.
After 5 min,
Ragini looks at him. He is closing eyes. “Laksh, are you sleeping…?” she asks. No response.
Then she starts rubbing his head smoothly. She smiles at his childish sleep….
She bends to him to kiss him. But he, suddenly opens his eyes. Ragini is about to move back. He holds her neck. They both kiss…..

Mid night,
Laksh wakes up and sees Ragini is awake. She is looking at the room.
Laksh: hmm…
Ragini: I’m just thinking. I never thought that I will share my room with you…
Laksh: hello, this is my room now.
Ragini: what…! This is mine…!
Laksh: sorry my dear, this is mine…!
Ragini: ok compromise. This is our’s

Laksh: hmm. That’s better.
Laksh: hmm…by the way Ragini…what was your first feeling when you saw me..?
Ragini: thief…
Laksh: haa…?
Ragini: you tried to rob mango right…! What was your first feeling??
Laksh: Rakshasi….
Ragini: what…??
Laksh: you are my beautiful Rakshasi…
Ragini: I won’t get convinced with your words……..

Laksh thinks for a while…
“Ok come with me….”
Ragini holds his hand.
He takes her into balcony. She is surprised to see the flower ladder. That ladder is covered with flowers.
Laksh puts his face on her shoulder from back… “you wanted to walk on a flower ladder right…!”
Ragini: oh laksh, how many did you remember still…
Laksh: hmmm…let’s go…
They get down from the ladder. Then she looks a white horse.
Laksh: we are going to have ride on that…
Ragini: but I’m afraid…
Laksh: don’t be scared. I know riding.
He makes her to sit on horse, he too sits.
He starts taking the horse slowly. Ragini leans to him…

Laksh stops the horse in one place she opens her eyes and disbelieves herself to look at the place. It is same white lotus pond place. But now, beside there is a hut, it’s a cute small hut all covered with flowers and twigs. There is a swing in front of that. That swings’s rope is covered with flowers again. Then a boat in peacock form in lake….
Ragini hugs laksh tightly. He hugs her back.
Ragini: why? Why all just for me? And nothing for you…??
Laksh: I just want your happiness. Nothing else.
Ragini doesn’t break hug at all.
Laksh: hey…! It’s ok now… let’s enjoy all them…

She kisses on his cheek.
Laksh: thank you…
She keeps kissing.
Laksh: enough now…
She makes them more….

Laksh then holds her face. She keeps looking at him. He takes her face nearer and kisses her.
They both sit on swing. They swing on it for some time. She places her head on his shoulder.
Next, they have boat ride for some time. Ragini keeps singing something.
After the boat ride, Laksh carries her into the hut. Ragini keeps looking at him.
They both hug…lots of kisses and lots of love… they spend their lovely night ending their separation and starting a new life…completing their marriage….
……………………….
It’s the finish….

Guys, my special gift to you….
A family song…. (based on characters on this story…)

The stars are so far away… but they are one sky….
The rivers are in different places, but they meet in one ocean…
We have different characters, but we are one family…

Dadaji is very busy…
Dadi maa always prayers…
Shekar papa always in duty…
Ram chacha brings sweets….

The rain drops are separate, but they meet as one flow…
The many leaves…make one tree…
Different may be ages….but we are one family…

Sumi maa always sings…
Sujatha chachi just scolds…
Ap maa always smiles…
Dp papa keeps looking her…

Many kinds of flowers….it is one garden…
Many birds fly in sky…they rest in one nest…
We are so many…. But we are one family….

Laksh is very lovely
Ragini always rocks…
Sanskar is so cool…
Swara is so sweet…
Uttara the lovely sis….

Many many love stories….happened in this family….
So many emotions…are within us….
But, we are one family….
Always together….

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Hope you have enjoyed the song…

Epilogue:

After two years, Ragini gave birth to twins. One is boy and other is girl.
Laksh: thank you Ragini…
Ragini: this is the only gift I can give for your love laksh…
Laksh: that means very much Ragini. This is more than my love…
He says and kisses on her forehead.

Swara gave birth to a boy child. Sanskar is too happy…

Now, these new two boys are other Sanskar and Laksh of the house……

***************The End******************************

Friend, I’m ending this story because, it will be boring if I extend more…
Actually, at first I have decided to end the story when Ragini is being excused for acting as letter girl and Raglak are married. But, I kept the horoscope concept to extend the story as I have seen lovely response from you all… then again, I decided to stop it till family accepting Raglak secret marriage… but again I extended sending Ragini to US.
Hmm…It will be boring if I stretch it more. That’s why I’m putting a happy end here. Hope you all will accept it… actually I’m also missing this story. I loved every moment while writing…
I love joint families. When I see Swaragini family I feel like, I should also have bade papa, bade mom, chachi, chacha, two loving sisters, two crazy bros, and lot more…. That’s why, I brought my imagination like this… and I love girls being brave. That’s why I have said Ragini as lioness… I’m happy that you all liked her as lioness… but, over braveness always avoided. We have to be brave, but we have to be careful also.

So, now it’s a bye for a while…. Friends, give me any suggestions or advices, what kind of story you want to see or you want me to write…. I will design a story line and I will come again soon…..

Love you all friends and advance happy vinayaka chavti….

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    64 Comments

    1. lisa on September 4, 2016 4:06 pm

      loved it so cute

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thanku lisa….

    2. xyzy on September 4, 2016 4:07 pm

      Such a nice ff which I have ever dreamed

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:57 pm

        Thanku so much friend….

    3. viviyen.mary on September 4, 2016 4:08 pm

      Nice pls come to another ff

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:57 pm

        Thnq…sure dear

    4. megha123 on September 4, 2016 4:10 pm

      Àwsm part loved the ending??? can’t believe that it got completed feeling lil sad for that ???bt plzz do come with another raglak ff ?? & lastly advanced happy vinayaka chavithi

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thank you very much for loving my ff dear…. Sure megha….

    5. rabia on September 4, 2016 4:11 pm

      It was a lovely lovelyyyy story ….will miss it sooo much plzz come back soon with another Raglak story ….and the song was too good …amazing????????

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:54 pm

        Thanku so much dear….i will strt another one soon… Thq so much…

    6. dharani on September 4, 2016 4:14 pm

      awesome will miss ur ff

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:53 pm

        Thanku so much dharani

    7. Anjali on September 4, 2016 4:17 pm

      Hey astra you made me cry. ????????????In this last ep you describe everything and happy to see raglak romance??????. finally dear the moment has come. I really love your imagination ??❤❤❤ . A happy ending.????
      You are absolutely right??? . I love your writing skill and the way you describe the family bonding was outstanding???????. Every one don’t get such family who love you and support you in difficulty . ?????

      Please come back with other ff. I want you to write an ff on swasan and raglak. It should be different and unique and the rest is yours. What ever story you write I will always love it and support you. You know what this ff MY FAMILY you have given an example of love
      and support. ?????

      Bye your friend anjali. You rock dear you rock. I will miss this ff yaar. Like the letter incident, ragini get electronic shock, raglak first kiss and finally their secret wedding. MISSED YOU. COME BACK AGAIN.????? And I really love the song. ???????

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 5:02 pm

        Dear anju….that was a big msg..??wow… Loved it dear. I’m so happy you liked it very much. Even, i’m gonna miss this ff… I enjoyed every moment while writing this…..☺️ and mostly, i enjoyed all of your comments… I’m gonna miss you too… Let’s meet in other ff soon dear… Take care… Keep smilimg?

    8. Akshata on September 4, 2016 4:22 pm

      hey Astra !!!!! I am sorry for yesterday, i was pretty late to comment but see today i am trying my level best to comment as fast as i can, so that i come first, keeping my fingers cross.
      coming to the update, its awesome, i am happy that you extended this ff for your frnds but little sad that its come to an end. i am definitely gonna miss this and i know you will come back soon. i am waiting…….. till then keep smiling, and keep in touch 😀

      • Akshata on September 4, 2016 4:34 pm

        i am late again……… :'(

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:51 pm

        No dear ur not late…??

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:47 pm

        Don’t tell sorry dear…. We are friends right…! And, thanku so much dear for being with me up to here…. Im so happy for getting frnd like you…. And thanku very much for liking this ff… Love u dear….. Keep smiling…. Take care….

    9. Sindhura on September 4, 2016 4:25 pm

      Awesome yar

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:51 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    10. j on September 4, 2016 4:28 pm

      superb comeback with another raglak ff

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:52 pm

        Thanku….sure….

    11. suhani on September 4, 2016 4:43 pm

      Awesome ending dear..but too short…song is super….hut scenes also super…plz back another ff…. I’m waiting…. Keep smiling… Love you…

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 4:52 pm

        Thanku so much suhani…. Sure dear.. Lv u too… Take care…

    12. Ragz_teju on September 4, 2016 5:05 pm

      awesome superb amazing

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:41 pm

        thank u so much dear

    13. Fairy on September 4, 2016 5:11 pm

      Oh goddd astra!!!!!frst of all suoerb awesome fantastic mindblownnnggggg episode dear…raglak scenes r soooo romanntic!!!!!
      Thnku so much for such a wonderfulllll ff!!!!!
      U r an amaznggg writer dear…
      Gonna miss u a lotzzz,…so plz come back sooon….
      Stay blessed n keeep rockng!!!
      Take care of urself dear..???
      Love u a lotzzzzz….!!!!??????keep smiling☺☺☺???

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:42 pm

        thank you so much for loving the ff fairy……. i will come soon… take care and keep smiling

    14. rafeee on September 4, 2016 5:27 pm

      superb ending dear… hope u cme back with another ff..take care love u

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:43 pm

        thanku so much rafee…. sure….

    15. Lucky on September 4, 2016 5:33 pm

      Amazing…awesome so nice. pls come back with ur another ff.I love ur ff.

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:43 pm

        thanku so much lucky….

    16. Teja on September 4, 2016 6:24 pm

      Nice,amazing ,superb,mindblowing come soon I m waiting for your ff ????

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:44 pm

        thanku so much teja dear

    17. fira on September 4, 2016 6:27 pm

      Amazing ending…raglak moments are superb…ur song also…..ur ff is unique…something fifferent and very interesting day by day…i am addicted to ur ff… pls come back with another ff …..I will miss ur ff badly…..u r such a lovely person and wounderful writer also…take care of ur health….

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:45 pm

        thanku so much fira…. thnx for loving my ff….take care, keep smiling…

    18. saranya on September 4, 2016 6:27 pm

      awesome…I luv everything n dis ff nd ya will miss dis ff so much pls come back with another raglak ff

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 7:46 pm

        thank you so much saranya…. sure dear….

    19. vavachi on September 4, 2016 6:33 pm

      Super??,we will miss u and ur ff plzz come back with ur next ff advance all the Best for u

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 8:10 pm

        Thanku so much dear…

    20. lovely on September 4, 2016 6:50 pm

      Superb

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 8:10 pm

        Thanku lovely…

    21. Fats on September 4, 2016 7:42 pm

      Awwwwww Astra, this update was so nice, lovely and romantic. I always find it so sweet how Laksh remembers everything Ragini wanted. He is such a caring husband. He always tries his utmost best to keep Ragini happy and I just love that a lot about him ❤️. I also loved the romantic night of RagLak, the scenery you described sounded beautiful ?. And aww it’s so sweet how RagLak got twins and SwaSan got a baby boy. After several hurdles, it’s nice RagLak got happiness and children too. Anyways, thank you so much Astra for writing this FF. I loved all the RagLak and family moments in this. And it was so kind of you to continue this story at different points to keep us readers happy. I really appreciate it ?

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 8:15 pm

        Thanku so much fats….. I always love your comments, the way you describe each scene… That really helped me a lot in writing better…thnx for being with this ff upto here…. Keep smiling…. Take care…

    22. abi on September 4, 2016 7:57 pm

      It’s awesome…
      I too love joint family
      I am a silent reader…
      But today tought to comment
      It’s a super story..
      I love raglak…and I love your writing skill
      Just awesome….

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 8:11 pm

        Thanku so much dear….. So happy with ur compliment….

    23. nitu on September 4, 2016 8:01 pm

      It was a Lovely journey… pls come back with another ff..

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 8:11 pm

        Thanku so much nitu…

    24. Mohini on September 4, 2016 8:23 pm

      Please don’t go!!! This was soo good. Truly. Please come back with another fanfiction!!
      I will wait

      Truly a work of art?

      • Astra on September 4, 2016 9:05 pm

        Thank you so much dear….. Sure dear

    25. Keerthi on September 4, 2016 8:56 pm

      I luv it dr.. I will miss ur ff.. Plz update next story..

      • Astra on September 5, 2016 6:21 am

        Thanku so much keerthi

    26. Ammu on September 4, 2016 8:58 pm

      Happy ending and loved it a lot Astra. Raglak scenes are beautiful. Miss u dear and plz come back with another Raglak ff. Love u and take care

      • Astra on September 5, 2016 6:21 am

        Thanku so much ammu…. Take care dear…

    27. rethu on September 5, 2016 12:18 am

      Nice ending dear????? .Gonna miss your ff so much . Always stay healthy .take care. Keep your good work dear. I am Eagerly waiting for your another raglak ff .Good work dear.
      I will remember My family ff till my life . Thank U So Much Dear .Come back Soon ???

      • Astra on September 5, 2016 6:22 am

        Thanku very much rethu….? happy that ur loving this ff… Keep smiling take care

    28. Sreevijayan on September 5, 2016 12:41 am

      It ws one super cute ff..wil miis it alot dear

      • Astra on September 5, 2016 12:37 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    29. nikky on September 5, 2016 1:35 pm

      nice comeback with another raglak ff

      • Astra on September 5, 2016 4:21 pm

        Thanku. Nikky….. Sure

    30. varsha on September 5, 2016 7:14 pm

      So sad dear, I was not here for a week and you finished the FF, pls cm wid another raglak OS r FF. I just luv urs a lot. Gonna miss “My Family”

      • Astra on September 6, 2016 7:45 am

        thanku so much varsha,…..

    31. hemalattha on September 5, 2016 7:38 pm

      awesome

      • Astra on September 6, 2016 7:46 am

        thanku dear

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