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when I fall in love (ragsan nd raglak) epi 4~pavani

pavaniBy pavaniJuly 11, 201645 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hiiii darlings iam really sorry for not replying actually its Sunday naa soo busy in kitchen nd ir jijuuu was also there sooo nd ya lovely nd megha darlings ur guess is right

Sanky:you…
Rag don’t know wt to say her heart started beating fastly
Sanky:I was searching for u from yesterday
Rag gave a questioning look
Sanky:actually to say thank you but u suddenly ran away from there soo
Rag gave a fake smilee
Sanky:ok iam sanskarr .
Rag:ragini
Sanky:nice namee .ok I want to ask u something ?
Rag was tensed
Sanky:y u ran away that day
Rag:voo …actually…I remembered that I have to attend an operation soo
Sanky:soo u r doctor
Rag gave a sweet smile
Sanky turned to boy
Sanky:ok wt u studied
Boy:I did mba sir
Sanky:if u r ok u can join my office it is a marriage buero u can handle account section
Boy:tnk u very much sirr
Rag:thank u ..
Sanky:u r always welcome
Rag:ok I need to goo .tnk u nd nice meeting u sanskar .byeee
she left
Sanky:she is different
Suddenly his phone rings
Sanky:haa swara tell mee
Swara:how boaring u r .u don’t call mee nd if I call u are asking y I called
Sanky:iam happy now plzz don’t argue nd spoil it
Swara:happy ??
Sanky:I met her??
Swara:who??
Sanky:the mall girll
Swara was frustrated
Swara:if half of the imp have given to mee of which u r giving to her then I would bee the happiest person in the world
Sanky:iam sorry
Swara:wt ever will talk to u later.
She cutted the call
Sanky:cut the call nd remembered about rag

Scene shifts
Swara:do he really love mee meeleatleastdont care about mee mee should call me to convconvence atleast but noo

Scene shifts
Rag was sitting in her room by holding a photo .
Rag:I can feel ur presence .I know u r near mee nd will always bee .a tear escaped from her eyes she closed her eyes

A boy comes to her nd wipes her tears she opens her eyes and saw him nd a broad smile appears in her face
Rag:I know u r hear nd watching mee
boy:y not u r my wifee naa
Rag gave a sweet smile
Boy:u are breaking my promise .
Rag looks confusingly
Boy:u promised that u will never cry nd see now u broked it
Rag:u will come infrount of mee only if I cry that’s y Iam crying
Boy:soo u r cheating
Rag:hold his hand nd say
Rag:plzz don’t goo
Boy moves away from her she tries to hold him but he went

Rag woke up with a jerk by saying
Rag:plzzz don’t goo away lakshhh !!!
She opened her eyes nd sees that its her dream
Rag wiped her tears
Rag hold his photo tightly
Rag:I can hear ur heart beat when Iam with himm .he is different nd he is not like u .he don’t know how to enjoy life how can he keep u happy when ever iam with him I feel iam with u.
Door was knocked
Rag:haa maa coming
Janaki:u r not going to hospital today
Rag:is there any work
Dayal:u r going to meet the groom
Rag:I already….
Janaki:enough I don’t want to listen anything we have listened a lot now I won’t .we also lost our son but we didn’t stop living we r living for u nd I promised my son that I will keep u happy always .
Rag:maa iam happy with his memories maa.I love him nd can’t love any one else .
Janaki:if u love him soo much then y r u not listening him .do u think he will be happy to see u alone for ur whole life .nd I can’t see my son like that nd I don’t listen to u now.a boy will come to meet u today at coffee shop I will give his no go nd meet him

Rag:maa..
Janaki left from there
Dayal followed her
Rag was stunned
Dayal nd Janaki room
Janaki was crying
Dayal:y r u forcing her
Janaki:I can’t be selfish if she is not ready to accept the truth then it is our responsibility to make her move on I know it id difficult for her to forget him but she should .he is no more .
Dayal consoled her

Rag knocked the door
Janaki wiped her tears
Rag:if u r felling iam burden then ok iam ready to marry but listen maa I am ready only for u nd I can’t love him nd I will marry only after he completly knows my truth Nd if he is ready

Janaki came near her
Janaki:do u feel u r burden for us ?
Rag was numb nd she turned her head
Janaki turned her towards her
Janaki:see in my eyes nd say it
Rag hugged her nd stared crying
Janaki console her
Janaki:I know he will accept u heartfully
Rag released the hug nd gave a fake smile

Scene shifts
A boy is waiting for someone his back is shown
Rag came to coffee shop
Rag(in mind):now I should think how to spoil this match nd firstly wr is this duffer

Rag was irritated as she is not intrested in this

Rag saw a boy sitting there nd went to meet him
Rag:hii iam raginii
Boy turned his face nd both were shocked seeing each other
Epi ends
Screen freezes with shocking faces of rag nd the boy

I know its small nd boaring too but sorry

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pavani

    Fun loving .like to communicate with people will be happy with wt I get .

    45 Comments

    1. SPP on July 11, 2016 5:17 pm

      Awesome Superb
      It is Sanskar
      Waiting for the next one……..

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 6:49 pm

        Tnk u spp darling

    2. lovely on July 11, 2016 5:25 pm

      awesome Akka

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 6:50 pm

        Tnk u lovely darling

    3. Fairy on July 11, 2016 5:27 pm

      Intereatng….loved it?

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 6:51 pm

        Tnk u fairy darling

    4. Ragz_teju on July 11, 2016 5:37 pm

      Awesome

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 6:52 pm

        Tnk u teju darling

    5. hemalattha on July 11, 2016 5:51 pm

      nice sis pls go ahead

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:38 pm

        Tnk u hema darling yep I will

    6. lisa on July 11, 2016 6:01 pm

      wow
      superb ff
      love rags

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:39 pm

        Tnk I lisa darling

    7. dharani on July 11, 2016 6:06 pm

      awesome

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:41 pm

        Tnk u dharani darling

    8. rafeee on July 11, 2016 6:06 pm

      superb

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:41 pm

        Tnk u rafee darling

    9. Piya on July 11, 2016 6:23 pm

      Awesome

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:41 pm

        Tnk u piya darling

    10. Ashrita.S on July 11, 2016 6:31 pm

      Interesting dear ☺

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:43 pm

        Tnk u ashrita darling

    11. sherin on July 11, 2016 6:38 pm

      Awesome epi di…

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:43 pm

        Tnk u sherin darling

    12. Ankita on July 11, 2016 7:25 pm

      Oh my god sanskar has laksh heart awesome story

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:45 pm

        Yep he has Laksh heart

    13. megha123 on July 11, 2016 7:34 pm

      Yeah I guessed it true at last ????
      Anyways awsm part akka eagerly waiting for nxt part

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:45 pm

        Yep ur guess is right

    14. Sanam on July 11, 2016 7:41 pm

      Itz sanskar

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:46 pm

        May bee

    15. nitu on July 11, 2016 7:48 pm

      Does sanskara has laksh heart??? Awww. I really love ur ffs Di…

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:48 pm

        Tnk u nitu darling yep he have Laksh heart

    16. Azure on July 11, 2016 7:51 pm

      I guess that is Sanskar. She is going to mistake him for the Groom I guess.

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 8:56 pm

        May bee ur guess is rightt

    17. ammy on July 11, 2016 9:26 pm

      Superb episode dear

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 11:05 pm

        Tnk u ammy darling

    18. Astha on July 11, 2016 9:57 pm

      1st of all sry for not cmnting in last epi. akka this epi is not boring at all. ya u r ri8 akka. this ff is emotional. when lak leaved her then i was melted. waiting for next epi. after very long time seeing that green colour symbol. i too thinks that is sanky. sanky has laksh heart n that too beating for oue rag only. i liked swa’s jealous.

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 11:08 pm

        Noo need of sorry sanku darling nd tnk u for ur comment don’t know y that green symbol came nd yep Sanky’s heart beats for rag he he he nd next epi swaras jelousy will reach peaks

    19. Yashal on July 11, 2016 10:06 pm

      Lovely ??

      • pavani on July 11, 2016 11:08 pm

        Tnk u yashu darling

    20. Nami on July 11, 2016 11:29 pm

      It was awesome Di

      • pavani on July 12, 2016 7:09 am

        Tnk u nami darling

    21. Akshata on July 12, 2016 12:32 am

      awesome and emotional too.

      • pavani on July 12, 2016 7:10 am

        Tnk u akshata darling

    22. cute girl on July 12, 2016 9:20 am

      superbb..mindblowing …i love it …

    23. Crazygirl on July 12, 2016 12:36 pm

      Superb

    24. Saanvi on July 13, 2016 3:20 pm

      Akka heart transplantation ah..laksh heart to sanky..superb..keep going… 😀
      Sorry for not commenting on previous epi..OS rasthu unde..so didn’t have time..hope you understand 🙁

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