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when I fall in love (ragsan nd raglak) epi 10~pavani

Hiiii darlings Tnk u very much for ur love nd support sorry for not able to reply for ur comments nd don’t worry darlings swara won’t be negative

Morning
Sumi was in phone
SumI: haa shekar tell me fast y u called this early
Shekar:is ragini awake ?
Sumi:if she is awake will she allow me to talk with u
Shekar feels bad nd a tear escaped from his eyes
Shekar:when will she excose her father .
Sumi:don’t worry she will understand it soon
Shekar:I hope the day comes soon
Sumi:k tell mee y u called
Shekar:voo I have seen a boy for ragini he is son of my friend dayal nd he will come to see ragini
Sumi:what??but if she comes to know that he was sent by u ..
Suddenly some one grabbed phone from sumi nd sumi is shocked to rag
Rag:if he left us for them then there is noo need to bother about us nd she saw phone nd cutted the call
Sumi:wt is this rag.
Rag:this is his punishment for his deeds
Sumi:he married her to save her from society who misunderstood their friend ship as affair
Rag:how can u take his side maa he cheated u by marriying her nd he left u for her
Sumi:he never left mee I send him as I tought he have her responsibility too
Rag:soo he went with her not tought about u once also
Sumi:he never leave his responsibility he always cares about us nd he still loves mee
Rag:then y he didn’t came when I told him to choose any one of us
Sumi:as sakshi needs him more .she has no family to support her I have our family nd ur dads family to support mee
Rag:iam not mahan like u I can’t tollerate him nd I don’t want any of them to talk about him in this house
Sumi was about to say something bell rang
Dadi opened the door
A boy entered the house with a huge smile
Rag was shocked to see him
Sumi:u r…
Boy:laksh son of dayal nd Janaki
Sumi:ohh yaa shekar told about u come in
Laksh was rags shocking face nd blinked his eye to her
Rag came to senses
Rag :get lost .y u came hear
Laksh:ur dad send me
Dadi nd sumi hold their heads
Rag:what?? She eyed sumi angrily
Sumi:he is son of dayal uncle .u have seen him in ur chaild hood
Rag:soo y he came now
Sumi was about to say something
Laksh:to irritate u..
Sumi(in mind):now iam gon
Rag gave a deadly glare to sumi
Laksh:ok if u want to say me any thing u can tell me directly y r u staring aunty like a hungry lioness
Rag:gave an irritated smile ok then u get lost nd tell that man to stop thinking about us
Laksh:that mann..who is that mann??
Rag:the man who send u hear ..
LAKSH:who??
Rag:my dad..
She realises wt she said nd a tear escaped from her eyes nd left from there
Sumi was crying
Laksh came near sumi nd cuped her face
Laksh:don’t worry maa very soon she will start loving her dad like before
Sumi:thank u beta
Laksh:ok no more cryings maa iam soo hungry plzz give me something to eat
Sumi:ohh iam sorry I forgot about that nd she left
Laksh looked around nd saw rags photos nd smiled

Evening
Rag returned nd saw laksh who is laughing with his mom nd dadi
Rag:won’t u leave now ?
Sumi:shut up rag
Rag:what wrong I asked?
Laksh hold sumi hand
Laksh:its ok aunty I don’t mind nd turned to rag
Laksh:I came to enjoy my vaccation so I won’t leave that early so better get habituated to mee
Rag:noo way I can’t bare him that much longer
Sumi:then go to ur room nd sleep quite with out making noise
Rag left from there with irritation .
Sumi:soo do u like her ?
Laksh gave a sweet smile
Laksh:not only like I just love her .
Sumi:she.will be very lucky to have u in.her life
Laksh gave a sweet smile

Morning
Rag woke up an went to wash room nd came out
Rag(in mind):wt is he doing .waitttt y am I thinking about him nd went to kitchen to have coffee nd saw laksh helping sumi nd stared him lovingly she heared a sound nd turned back nd found nothing nd again turned to see Laksh nd didn’t found him

Voice:searching for mee??rag saw laksh near her nd jerked him
Rag:y will I search for u??
Laksh:I know u started feeling for mee
Rag:wt rubbish?
Laksh:I can’t understand y u girl always likes when boy helps any poor or help any one who is in need or he makes her family happy .really u will not change

Rag :shit up
Nd she left from angrily
Epi ends screen freezes with angry face of rag nd smiling face of laksh

pavani

Fun loving .like to communicate with people will be happy with wt I get .

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