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Home»Fan Fiction»I WAS ABOUT TO FALL IN LOVE EPI 23
Fan Fiction Tashan-e-Ishq

I WAS ABOUT TO FALL IN LOVE EPI 23

paavuBy paavuJune 10, 201729 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hi guys hw are all
Ty fr sweet cmmnts ty soo much guys…

Srry guys wasnt able to reply to anyone bcos m soo bzee m sooo srry pls spare ne bt each and everyone’s comment touches my heart..
Also a bada wala srry cos cant read or cmmnt anyones post….

And I do read sm of ffs only as time lack dear but cant cmmnt guys bt u guys are doing great…
But really m saying where is LIFE OF TU….
Samajh nahi aya look I ll tell…
Guys kahan ho tum log sam

Ritzi
Happiness my jaan
Arohi
Shreyu
Purvu
Thanmy
Romaisha
Maria angel
Mannat
Simiyy
Ramya(tu bhi boht late post karti hai)
Maggi di miss u
Fathima di pls cm back
Krystle
Aamna

Yrr kahan ho sabhi log sach mein yeh tu twinj tu boht khali lag raha hai none is der yrr sachi yeh udas sa tu pls mere tu ki jaans cm back yr kahan ho sab sachi u guys cm back..pls.
SAYOOO DI ap kha ho pls cm

This epi is specially on request of my lovey RITZU… Love u jaan…

Guys I know u all are craving for his past nd to know jasmin… Past will be started from this epi maybe next epi…
And guys aise mat kaho han I know kunj cries a lot its plot na…
Moreover pata hai na main kitni badi suspense queen hun hahah apni tarif nahi karte ?bt I love suspense
Ok ok bakwas toh larti rehti hun main hahha

U ll get to know by his past what importance did his LOVE hold for him in his life….
Waise bhi its nt like ki akways girls shld cry boys bhi rone chahiye he s true lover chalo chodo lets proceed …
Kitni bkbak kri maine ?

Cmmnt guys…pls
Ur comments will send an impulse for reflexes to act so more comments more impulses faster will be next post….
Haan pata hai always bio bio haha kya karun bio s my field haha leave it….

Recap:kunjs breakdown wen twi falls n he assumes her jasmin…
He takes twi to a place lets c wer they went….

I WAS ABOUT TO FALL IN LOVE….
EPI 23

Diary continues…
U r my life…
I m u
My life starts from u ends on u…
U are angry with me it is like life is angry with me…
Please stay always with me….
Please stay always with me.

Kunj makes twinki sit in the car…
Driver moves toward driver seat…

Kunj signals him n send him and himself sits on driver seat…

He starts the car furiously and leaves the bungalow with twinki….

He was driving very fast…
Twinkle was scared and she sweats….
She swifts her hand stealthily on kunj’s hand which was on gear control….

Kunj noticed her nervousness….
He smoothens the speed of car decreasing its momentum….

They reached a place far away from city… It was a countryside place a lonely beautiful place….

As soon as the car stopped innocence queen hugged her concern king as tight as she could….

Kunj kunj pls pls dun drive fast I have speed phobea…,she murmered and started to sob….

He caressed her back softly and lighten her up…. by saying;
Sh…. Bas teinkle shh dun cry look I m srry I m srry u be quiet I ll never repeat this stupidity of mine again sorry but dun cry it hurts….
He holds ger from her shoulders and brings her forward to make her face him…

Wiping tears from her soft cheeks he murmered no with rotation of his head followed.in a no state…..

??aj ka epi kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha hoga main bada hi phy chy bio bol rahi hun na …. Hahah srry srry let’s move ahead..
Twinkle stops crying n an awkwardness started to cover the space of car….
To stop it from spreading kunj spoke… Twinkle let’s go ..

Hmm where umm where kunj !!twinkle enquired…

Just come I ll tell u….
Bt ku… Twinkle speaks being interuppted by kunj..
Chhh come na twinki just come…

He comes out of car and ipens her window to let her out…

She came out n was smiling with all the 32 teeth out
??I dun knw whether she has 32 teeth or not because sm ppl dun have haha bt still ohh hoo lets proceed I m na uhh

Kunj makes a fool head face saying what!!!
Ty kunj she murmered…

For??? He asked

My name.. Twinki said smiling endlessly…

Name?? Twinkle are u ok he says checking her forehead…
U are ok u dun have fever too…

Are kunj u na u soo stupid look abhi abhi u called me twink I loved this name I loved it ty..

He smiles scratching his hair with his soft hot fingers

?soch rahe hoge fingers bhi hot ain kya han hai wo khud hi itna hot hai…

Oo mu cute twinki he said pulling her cheeks from both sides moving her head too…

Ahh kunj leave my cheeks..

No no I wont these are so soft..

Leave kunj leave I said..
No no no he stubborned…

Leave..
No…
Leave them
No
No
And fight starts cute fight…
After lil time he stops…
Aww so cute ur cheeks
Huhhh kunj u na tum na…

Srry but u luk cute..

Ok ok leave twinki said smiling..
Twinkle u are not angry with me after what I did

No why will I u r my griend and moreover I r the only one in this world who respects me cared for me supported this burden(she said to herself as burden) so why I will be ang…

Bur she gets interrupted in bw as kunj furiously jept his finger on her soft cheeky lips….

He pinned her to car and …
Teinkle this will be last time when I have heard this word burden that I said to urself next time I dun know what I ll do to myself if I said this u r my friend my best friend who is with me when I was alone who is my pain sharer…. So pls dun say this again never and soft drops formed in his eyes…

Twinkle felt bad for what she said and she hugged him…
Sorry kunj I m sooo sorry pls forgive me pls I ll never say this again I hurted u … Tumne mujhe pehli bhi kaha tha par maine phir tumhe hurt kara I m sorry pls forgive me…

Kunj brings ger in front of him breaking hug and turns away…

Twi again said sorry bt he was adamant…
Twinkle goes in front of him and makes funny faces…
She blubs up both her cheeks with air inside and then she burst them with fists….
She takes her tongue ot on side and rotated her eyes…
She mives her head cutely making cute puppy faces …

Kunj starts smiling loudly so loudly… He sits on the grass and starts smiling…..
Twinkle admires him…

His laughter fuses with sweet calm gentle sound of soft cool breeze mixing in env to make weather cool and full of emotions beautifulness…

The sweet soothing breeze plus soothing voice of sweet sea waces nearby was more than enough for more than pleasant loving weather…..
She sits down on grass bending her knees and smiled…..
Syddenly her face expression changed into a sad one as the mirthful laughter on kunjs fa e formed tears in his eyes and he started crying ..

So why is he crying?
Whats special about the place?
Most importantly whos his LOVE his life…??
Wat will happen with their lives…

To know this all u gotta commment hahaah love u all….??
Bye bye keep commenting….

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    Carefree self obsessed.. Grown up as papa princess..Love u my papa.my idol my first love. Just live my life on my terms... Kaira's fan Insta acc @kaira____goals

    29 Comments

    1. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 11, 2017 12:13 am

      Fantastic

    2. maha on June 11, 2017 12:21 am

      lovlyyyyy awsm epi

    3. SidMin23 on June 11, 2017 12:27 am

      Nice waiting for next part

    4. Presha on June 11, 2017 8:56 am

      Amazinggg…
      Loved it

    5. Harshita on June 11, 2017 11:04 am

      Nice episode

    6. Ritzi on June 11, 2017 11:46 am

      Dude! U hv no idea wht u gave me….paavu…such a nice..wonderful..apt piece of writing! Tht too dedicated to me! Me? Yaar u make me feel so special… Who says only boyfriends can make us feel good? I really don’t need a boyfriend then cuz I hv friends like u! Love u to the death yaar…love u! No one…nd I really mean no one has ever made me feel this special… Love u yaar….the epi was great

      • paavu on June 11, 2017 8:16 pm

        Hey pehle toh mujhe paavu nahi mere frnds ishu bulati hain ritzu jaan and u mu jaani my jaan love u theeeee most in this whole world yrr tum bhi ishu hi bulana ok and ya jo bhi ho jaye meri writings tumhari wrtings ke aage kuch nahi hain got it han love u to d core and listen YA I DEDICATED to U ismein hairan na ho tere ko apni jaan ko nhi toh kisko karungi dedicate haan u make me feel most special when u cmmnt on my post I feel like dancing ok I love u after death too haha aww bf wali baat is cutestttttttt really itne ache frnds ho toh kya chahiye or n I m luckiest dat u r my frnd and I m sooo happy that I became the PERSON TO MAKE U FEEL SO SPECIAL YRR loveeee u ok post ur ff now plsss

    7. Sohi on June 11, 2017 12:49 pm

      Nice episode
      Please reveal his past soon

    8. Fatimaa. on June 11, 2017 1:33 pm

      Heyyya…
      Well abhi read kiya episode…

      I m just speechless with this one yaar….it was amazing….lovedd the way you portrayed their emotions…

      I m just soo curious to know kunj’s past…..
      I love the way how kunj and twinkle care fr each other and support each other…

      Ab please jaldi se past reveal karde tabhi to hume twinj ka romance dekhne ko milega…????

      Post soon please….
      Love uh❤

    9. Ramya on June 12, 2017 11:21 am

      Suspense queen
      Kaisi hai
      I missed u alot
      Aur mai der se isiliye post kar rahi hu kyuki I’m slightly busy isiliye sry
      But aaj ka episode
      Mount caramel aaj bhi suspense nahi Kola na
      Yaar kitni wait karavogi
      Post soon
      Love you keep smiling

    10. Agni on June 12, 2017 2:55 pm

      Awesome

    11. Avni on June 12, 2017 2:56 pm

      Amazingg

    12. Avishi on June 12, 2017 2:57 pm

      Fabulous

    13. Abhigyani on June 12, 2017 2:57 pm

      Fantastic

    14. Abhigyanshi on June 12, 2017 2:59 pm

      Loved it

    15. Tara on June 12, 2017 3:00 pm

      So srry for being late..
      Got busy..
      Preshuu ne bola ki u r leaving..
      Plz dont..
      Epi was marvellous

    16. Tanya on June 12, 2017 3:01 pm

      Lovely…

    17. Dara on June 12, 2017 3:02 pm

      Felt sad for kunj…
      Post soon…

    18. Dhara on June 12, 2017 3:03 pm

      Too gooddddd…
      Love u…

    19. Dhani on June 12, 2017 3:03 pm

      Good…keep it upp

    20. Dani on June 12, 2017 3:04 pm

      Fantabulous…
      ??????

    21. Ariya on June 12, 2017 3:09 pm

      I m a silent reader of ur ff…
      But today i m cmmnting…
      U nailed it..
      Post soon
      Love u

    22. Presha on June 12, 2017 3:27 pm

      ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????☺☺☺????
      Hayeee abtoh khush well mai phir pada h now i can say…
      Its awesome.
      Amazingggg.fabulius…
      Too good…
      Loved it to death….
      Well sochna bhi mat TU chodne kiii..samjhii warna mai gussa???????
      Samjhiii…tu toh meri dhadkan h meri janeman…
      Post soon now ….
      Love u….
      Love u to death my love….
      ?????????????????????????????????????????

      • paavu on June 12, 2017 6:15 pm

        Preshu tujhe pata hai u r d best girl d best d sweetest d most caring frnd u knw i msgd u on wtsapp dekh laio ok… Der qe ll chat

    23. twinjfan.tamanna on June 12, 2017 5:03 pm

      Hey Ishu!!????
      Mujhe tho patha hi nahi tha ke I posted, yaar! I didn’t knew! Abhi presha ne bathaya ke tu TU chod degi mere comment na mila tho! I m so sorry yaar! Mujhe sacchi nahi patha tha ke I posted! I guess I missed it! so sorry yaar! I feel so guilty!????????
      Mai kuch bhi karne ko ready hun so that I can rectify my mistake!
      And missing u so much! Tu insta pe abhi bhi hai Kya?

      About the Epi:
      This was Amazing Ishu! I seriously loved it! This was just so Awesome! Beautifully written! Post Soonest can’t wait for next!

      • paavu on June 12, 2017 6:14 pm

        Meri pyari pyari behn tamu kuch nahi karna rectigy karne ke liye bcs I dun made a mistake it was just ki maine pist kiya bt cmmnts were like so kess it felt hurt na yrr ek to time nikal ke likhna bt tu srry mat mang warna warna warna main naraaz ho jaungi I lo e u ab jaldi se pist kardeaona new ff its awesomly amazing…… U r love trio queen meri tamy love u han main insta pe hun na @kaira____goals (4underscores….) mujhe apna acc bta dena ya msg me im der on insta meri bio mein hai toh… Love I missed u hope to chat wid u on insta

    24. Anayaali on June 13, 2017 11:20 am

      Hey paavu it was amazing….sorry for late cmnt…. It was fab…
      Luv the way they care for each other….

      Wanna know kunj past soon….
      Luvd it to the core….

      Post nxt asap….

      Luv u…. Tc …. Byeeee

    25. baby on June 13, 2017 7:33 pm

      Tujhe pata hai ki episode bhott achaa tha…
      Loved it…cute tha…or mera name bhuii nahi tha MATLAB u don’t want my cmnt naa it’s f9…well chadoo.. .Loved d episode…beautiful or jaldi post Karna.. ……Doctor?

    26. Aamna_2690 on June 14, 2017 7:07 am

      Ishu di???
      .
      Ufffffff???Apne meri Curiosity increase kardi hai next episode ke liye???Just can’t wait to read next Episode???Haye Allah ab mein next episode tak kese wait karungi??Plz di jaldi post karna?plz☺☺
      .
      This Episode was Fantastic di???
      Just Loved it❤❤❤
      U potrayed their emotions So well??
      Their Relationship defines the beauty of Friendship and Heart Connected Relations????
      The way they care for Eachother???Her Concern King??His Innocence Queen??Exactly Suits their Character’s ??
      Amazing di???
      .
      Bas di now I am Finally back??Fianlly Finished with Exams??Just today Only was the Last practical??Will try to post di??
      .
      Ishu di what’s Ur Insta Account? Or do U have watsapp? If U won’t mind can u give me Ur Number or May I know Ur Insta Account Name?
      .
      Plz post Soon di???
      Request From Ur chotu si Sister??
      Love U di??????
      I am Eagerly waiting???

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