everything is fair in lovee ARDIKA and NESAM

Hello guys ..I’m miss x from kerla …
I just thought of writing a fan fiction . please do tell your views in the comment section. Wheter it is positive or negative I don’t care . but I just need your comments lovlies 🙂
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This story is about nesam..and ardika my fav couple ……….I will introduce u the characters as I move on to the story …
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OK so the story begins like ,

The beach was filled brightness. The brightness which seemed like the sun has achieved it’s success and is smiling with its all its might. The sun was happy and so was NEIL, The creative writter of the famous BIRDSONG. He was enjoying his holiday In so called beach of Goa. It was like he absorbed the happiness of the sun.

He grasped the glass bottle near by. With his hard hands. He could see the mango juice in that glassed which also had the same colour of the sun. Basically every living creature or even non living creature was happy in there. He pulled the straw apart towards his mouth he sipped a drop from the glass. He could feel the heal that it made to his thirsty throat.

He wished his life was like this.
Wherein he would just lie in those comfy chairs all day and sip the juice . wearing a hat that would make him feel young ( or maybe just for him).
There he lied being intoxicated with the happiness that nature provided. Just then a blonde lady with a heart shaped face walked by and and and. She just dashed him …banggg his juice fell down onto the sand and spread all over beneath. All he could do was stare at that person who interrupted his happiness.

The face of the lady..oh yes he could recognize her. He felt he had seen her somewhere. Just then that lady who was wearing a red coulored strapless dress which made her more beautiful called out “IDIOT WAKE UPPP , ITS ALDREADY TIME. WE SHOULD NOT BE LATE TODAY ALSO”

“Uh what Sam , weren’t u there in that beach. Omg u looked so pretty in that attire u know what I could just stop staring at you ”

“Offo don’t prove me more that you are idiot . come on get ready we r getting later” “hurry up ” said Sam in a hurry ” I thought u would be ready by this time. But no u r still sleeping idiot ” she pushed neil out of his sofa ……

“Samudra singhh…wait yaar . why do you want to hurry . why do you want to go there so early come on ” said Neil with a face that made him look so innocent

“Bass’s !!!! Chal ready ho jayoo””” “no more arguments ” …so Neil went to his bathroom brushed his teath and went and started sleeping in the bed again .

BANNNGGGGGGGGG
Sammmm!!! I’m so tired y r u breaking my bones and making me more tired come on. Sam I love you u love me . so plz stop this …
BANNGGGGGGGGGGG
okie yaar I ll get ready….n so he wore a suit a black and white one with a red coloured tie .which made him soo formal .
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Heyyy please do comment and let me know if it is good .
Should I continue writing .? It is my first ff …. !!!! I’m impatiently waiting for ur reviews guys ..
Sorry for the grammatical mistakes