Hey guys I am true ishqbaazian I am die hard fan of shivika and I am gonno write an os and this os has a sad ending really sad ending I always want to write a sad ending story instead of happy ending.pls read and share u r views so lets start
Shivay’s room
Anika stands near balcony(I don’t know if shivays room has balcony)
Anika watches moon while shivay works on his laptop
Anika pov
Shivay I know u never said me “I cannot live without u” but I know u cannot live without, I can read u r feelings,u love me and I really love u I don’t know how will u live without me
Anika gets tears in her eyes
Shivay comes and anika wipes her tears and think shivay didn’t notice
Shivay:mujhe lagta he ki tum bhul gayi ki tum do aakhon se roti ho(I think u forgot that u cry with 2 eyes)
Anika: kya matlab(what do u mean)
shivay:dikh raha he tum ro rahi hoon(its visible that u were crying)
Anika: I am not crying
Shivay:toh kya rone ki practice kar rahi ho(then were u practicing to cry)
Anika: rone ki practice ki mujhse zyada aapko zarrorat he, aapme toh feelings hi nahi he na tik se smile karte ho na kabhi rote ho(I think u need practice more than me,u don’t have feelings,u cant even smile and u cant even cry)
Shivay: who said I cant smile arre meri smile pe ladkiyan pagal ho gati he(girls become mad by seeing my smile)
Anika: yah I always become mad seeing u r smile ek baar toh itni pagal ho gayi thi ki main bhul gayi ki aap mere pati ho ek dam security officer lag rahe the(yah once I became so mad that I thought u as my security guard not hubby)
Anika pov:anika don’t fight with him today leave him for today, shall I say to shivay, no I cant afford to see him cry
Shivay: u r mad u r totally mad jab se aayi ho mere zindagi ko..
Anika interrupts and says
Anika:dinchak I know I made u r life dinchack
Shivay: tumse na baat karna hi bekar he have u seen my file(its of no use talking to u )
Anika: aapki file kya movie he jise main dekhungi khud dundlijiye agar nahi mila tih mere paas hana haath felate huye(is u r file a movie that I shold see it search it u r own if u don’t get it then u come to me )
Shivay: dekha he toh bata do tumare pehle zindagi bahut sukoon thi(if u have seen it then say me, before u my life was filled with peace)
Anika: aise bol rahe ho jaisi aapki zindagi main raita phel gaya ho
Shivay: ha phel gaya raita
Anika pov: I am sorry shivay I have to do this
Anika: prove that u can live without me for a day no messages no call no talking no meeting u have to go somewhere and have to come after 24hrs and u will see me and u r time starts now
Shivay: I can live without u for whole life
Anika gets teary eyes
Shivay: see now u got senti I will prove u cant live without and will come to me
Shivay hugs anika and leaves
Anika: shivay I cant live without u
Shivay goes to rudy room
Rudra: bhaiyya bhabhi is not here
Shivay: I know
Rudy:still u came love life me problem then pls consult baba rudy
Shivay: sare ghar me pagal bare pade huye
Shivay goes out in car
He plays radio
He remember anika and recalls his old moment
Shivay: anika says I don’t know singing I will learn a song for her
Shivay goes to music teacher who is famous in whole Mumbai and that is none other tia
Shivay: hey I want to learn a song from u
She turns and finds shivay
Tia: shivay
Shivay in shocking tone: universe
He remember anika teasing shivay and recalls old moment
Shivay: tia its u
Tia:comein shivay
He goes
Tia: why do u want to learn song shivay
Shivay: for anika
Tia: aww ok just sing any song which u know
Shivay sings ek hazaraon me meri behna without tune
Tia: shivay keep some tune in it and u cant learn this will u sing sister song for u r lover and its too late night I have to go
Shivay: let us meet tomorrow
Shivay goes to hotel
Shivay pov : yes I cant live without anika yes I love her I love her, I want to spend each and everysecond with her I will meet her morning and will confess that I cant stay without her
ANika: if shivay donno how to live without me then he has to learn how to live, I love u shivay
Next day
SHivay goes to his room and says see I lived alone without u for a night see I proved u wrong
He finds anika lying unconscious
He finds a letter in her hand
He reads
Shivay,
I know u lived without me for one night learn to live like that for whole life as those were my last 12hrs
I am a cancer patient and that was my last night, I love u shivay, take care I hope u learnt how to live without me and ha don’t cry bcoz u r my tadibazz bagad billa
Love u shivay
From billu ki billi
Shivay cries whole heartedly findind his love died
He shouts Anikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I know many of u didn’t like my story I am sorry If my story hasn’t impressed u
Pls do share u r views
Criticism is always welcomed
91 Comments
Superb
thank u so much i hope u liked my story and u r comment means a lot to me
That was so touchy and you wrote it well but I have read the letter part which is the concept in Instagram but your idea is good one . Loved it dear
thank u for taking time to read and yes i took the concept from instagram hope u liked it
C’mon yaar I loved it , I said it too !
thnx for it
emotional os
thank u so much hope u liked it
Its really nice..
thank u so much
Loved it dear but the letter part was too short
sorry i was falling short of time so couldnt write big letter hope u liked it
It’s so touch of love with sadness…. But I like it….
Have a pleasant journey
u r comment means a lot thank u for reading it
NYC dear
thank u so much for u comment
Very emotional dr….
thank u arthi it means a lot to me
That was really emotional dear… very well portrayed….
thank u so much i was abt to send u link and u commented thanx u so much
Wow yar it was soo emotional ??loved it…it was heart touching
thank u yaar hope u liked it
sad one….but very happy that you sent me the link…..I would have missed it……really sad one Annika dying and Shivaay crying were the best as well as the worst parts dear…..I loved it…go on and give us some amazing stories like this one love you… :-)))))
thank u soooooooooo much u r comment means lot to me thanks for taking time to read and will surely give good stories
OMG neeti it was so heart touching………..I loved it!!!!
i am not neeti pls i am trolls.ib not trolls.nets thnx for u r comment hope u liked it
It was so emotional…… Loved it
thank u vanisha for taking time to read my os it means a lot to me
too good yaar!!! I loved it….eventhough it was a sad ending , I liked it..
thank u diiiiii i love sad ending stories hope liked it
Loved it
thank u jyoti for u r appreciation
Very touching OS.
Awesome…
It was differ from usual. Too too good
thank u parvathi u r comment made my day hope u liked it
very good superb hope u would write another one. i am not so familiar with ib but now by reading this i get attracted thank u for this ff
this is not ff dear it is an os thank u for u r comment and i will surely write another os
K SRY I THOUGHT IT AS AN FF WHATS THE DIFFRENCE??
ff means like serial daily epi and os is one shot like a movie one part
it was goood
thnx u nehaa
hi dear it was very good
your starting didint give me any clue and i started thinking so many problems..
but cancer it didint came into my mind
but i have a suggestion you should not have said that it had a bad ending…
but story and plot was nice…and i had tears in my eyes…thats a great think…
its a great think if u could make someone have tears in their eyes by reading your OS
brilliant dear….
try to write OS verity like this
but next time no so much emotional…..i cant handle this..
and next time you should keep your ending as a secret
should not open it up in the begening itself… ok
and once more its a supurb OS loved it a lot
u r comment really made my day and sorry for making u cry really thanx u soooooooooo much for reading and for u r love and comment and i will suely write another os
Wow yar it was soo emotional
loved it…it was heart touching
Impressed wid your work Neeti Dii. I liked it.
Send me links also from now on.
now i will cry i am not neeti she is trolls.nets and i am trolls.ib but i hope all the appreciation is mine, thank u bhai
Amazing loved it
thank u so much arni
AWESOME!!
Loved it!!
Write another one!!
love u
take care
byee
thnx donnnnnnn i will surely write another one
Awesome…so emotional
thank u for the comment hope u liked it
Awww romantic n emotional…n ya love the edits on ur walwall
thank u so much anu
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i understood
??????????? I am listening to Abhi mujhme kahi. Imagine if I have some disease and I have only few days, I will never tell you all. Because I know that it will hurt more when u already know that ur dear ones don’t will leave you forever. I know I should not say senti things but you made me cry. Shivaay, his besure song, Ani couldn’t listen to them. They… they??????????? I am not able to write.
I can’t live without you guys. You all are my life. Promise me you all will never ever leave me.?????? bhula dena playing now??????????????????????
i will never leave u and sorry for making u cry now stop crying and u dont have any such disease and u wont get also disesase tere paas ane se pehle mar jaye suicide karle panke se latake mar gaye
No sorry and thank u di, u remember na?????? if u forgot then I will consider that ap mujhe bhi bhool gayi????????????????
awwwwwwwww ok no thank u love u
its awsome
thank u
Awesome awesome awesome awesomeeeeeee. Mind blowinggggg diiii. I just loved it????????
????????the ending was really sad. My aniku died of cancer???????????? and that too before shivay’s confession. Anika ne bhi shivay ko khud se door rakh ke acha nhi kiya?????. U made me teary eyed di. Kash shiv ko real show me bhi ahsaas ho jaye ki woh ani se pyaar karta h
But kuch bhi ho overall the concept and the way u represented the OS di was just awesome di. Loved it to the core??????
thnx u thnx u thnx u soory tere aniku ko mar diya thank u deepu
u write really gud this was awesome and ha i hope u didnt forget the challenge i know u r gonno to lose it anyways os is amazing really well written and bit emotional
thanks and i never forget anything i wont lose
Candy awesome yaar n the number of comments is too good i don’t have these much readers.its really a awesome feeling when u get good response.but anika cancer????????????????I didn’t cry but I am sad
aww u r sad and ha i really got a good response i hope u will also get
It was a awesome episode …… sorry I have not comment on your os before even though I have read it three times …. but it was an emotional story and sad ending plz write another os soon.
thank u so much rhea it means a lot to me
Sorry for commenting so late dear……
Actually my net stopped working n the comment wasn’t getting published….
Bt anyways…. The os was superb dear…
N it’s really heart touching ….
U should write a ff too…..
Hatts off dear???
its ok dear and thank u so much for taking time and i dont like to write ff as i have to submit it daily but dont worry i will write os
I can understand dear….
Even I’m a bit lazy about updating daily…
Awesom loved it…….
thank u so much
Wow! Emotional one!!
Loved it!!
thnx dear wait for another one
Emotional os
thank u
i was busy today so couldnt comment wen u asked actually i dont like sad endings but ts ok an emotional os keep writing
thank u saidha
I loved it!
It was emotional
thank u dear thank u so much for u r support and comment
Ending soooo sad…I can picturize the whole story. Tears in my eyes awesome story!!
thank u so much dear actually i love sad ending but next os will be happy ending
Emotional os…You have nicely written it… Loved it…
thank u dii sorry no thank u but love u
love u dii
Very heart touching!! It is emotional!! I am crying yaar. Just awesome!!!??
thnx u darling
Nice story dear.. but you could’ve made it bit lengthy.. in short update also you’ve beautifully weaved their love & emotions.. you made it longer it would’ve been more beautiful..
i dont like long stories dear but still i will try
thank u
Candy you rocked it dear..It was so emotionally appealing and holding me to read more..Continue the journey of your OS! Totally fantabulosly fabulous! Love ya dear!
thnx u so much dii love u take care