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Everlasting Love – Avneil Os

nikitansxBy nikitansxSeptember 30, 20175 Comments10 Mins Read
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Everlasting Love – Avneil Os

——–

The scene starts with a girl trying to cross the road. Her tears ruined her makeup. She tries her best to tell the cars to stop but they wouldn’t listen to her. She fell on the ground on her knees, she decided to give up.

“Please stop Dayawanti, don’t even try to touch my sister” she screamed, hoping that she won’t kill Rhea.

“Didi, run away!” Rhea said. “This is your chance, don’t worry about me, I don’t want you to die, don’t come here” she said crying.

“I can’t give up, I have to somehow cross this road, there are so many cars here” she said, standing up.

“Please don’t, it’s dangerous as many cars are not stopping and also because of this evil Dayawant, think about Aman and leave” said Rhea.

As Dayawanti heard Rhea calling her evil, she decided to end her life by shooting a bullet in her heart.

“Ahhhh” she screamed as the bullet went through her heart. That was her last scream. She had died, she fell on the ground.  

“Hahahah” laughed the evil Dayawanti.

“Noooo” she screamed, as she heard Rhea screaming in pain, when the bullet went through her.

“This is enough, I will end your life now too” she screamed.

Dayawanti smiled and went away.

She didn’t care about the cars on the road, she ran on the road and she fell down.

“Ahh” she screamed, as a car’s tyre ran over her foot.

She felt as she couldn’t breathe, she fainted. She was lying there in the middle of the road. Before someone else could run over her body, a boy came and carried her in his arms.

“Oh God, I can’t believe this” he said looking at her.

—–

The driver opened the back door for him. The boy sat at the backseat and the girl was lying down and her head was in his lap.

“I won’t let anything happen to you” he said, while rubbing her forehead.

“Go to the city hospital” the boy told driver.

—–

Hospital Scene:

The boy is sitting wiping his tears

Doctor comes and says: You can meet her now, but there is a problem which we can’t cure.

“What is it? ” He asked the doctor.

Doctor: She has lost one leg!

He was shocked. He stood there with no expression, he was just completely shook that she couldn’t walk. He felt so damn sorry for her.

He didn’t know what to do but he ran to the room where she was.

——-

The room:

The girl rubbed her eyes and slowly opened them. She got shocked to see him and sat up.

“Who are you and why are you crying?” She asked him.

“Avni” he said and immediately hugged her.

She pushed him and said “I don’t know you and how do you know my name.”

“It’s not the time to talk about this, please recall what happened” he asked.

“You don’t have a leg” he said crying.

She cries and says: What are you saying?

She removed her blanket and got shocked seeing that she didn’t had the leg. Her heart started to beat faster in shock.

She got dizzy and fainted.

The doctor comes in and says: Leave her alone for a couple of hours, she is shocked knowing that she does not have a leg anymore.

The boy: Ok

——–

3 hours later, he entered the room and there she was lying down and looking at the ceiling.

He came and sat beside her.

“Who are you?” Avni asked, as she looked at him.

He held her hand.

He: I am Rambha’s cousin brother. Remember at Aman and Rambha’s wedding, I was there too, we danced a lot together that time because our names got called out because of the chit game. When I started dancing with I realised that I loved you. The first time when I visited your house, I couldn’t believe my eyes. You were so beautiful that I couldn’t even stop thinking about you. I was a chicken and I couldn’t even express my love to you. I really love you. My heart stopped beating that second when I saw you lying on the road in pain, I quickly got you here to the hospital.

Avni: Ohh, I think I remember you now? You are Neil right? Neil Khanna?

Neil: Yes I am.

Avni smiles at him

——————

5 Years Later…

Dayawanti is in jail.

The scene shifts with Neil and Avni in hospital crying in happiness.

Neil: Thanks Avni, you have given me the best gift in life, we are so blessed to have a daughter in our life.

Avni: Thanks Neil, for giving me the best gift in life. That moment when I found out that I had lost one leg, I thought that I will never be loved and no one will ever marry me. I can’t believe that you accepted me, I thought I would be a embarrassment to everyone who knows me.

Neil: Don’t ever say anything like that, you are the most special person for me in this whole universe. And you don’t have any rights to say anything about my wife, Avni.

Avni: What should we name out daughter?

Neil: You decide

Avni: No you decide!

Neil: No you!

Avni: OK let’s say it together in 3..2..1

Avneil says together: Christina

Neil: We are one soul, we have one thinking. We are connected.

Avni nods and says: Yes, we are!

Neil: This is called EVERLASTING LOVE.

The scene ends with Avni kissing Christina on her right cheek and Neil kissing Christina on her left cheek.

————

– Nikita

Everlasting Love – Avneil Os

——–

The scene starts with a girl trying to cross the road. Her tears ruined her makeup. She tries her best to tell the cars to stop but they wouldn’t listen to her. She fell on the ground on her knees, she decided to give up.

“Please stop Dayawanti, don’t even try to touch my sister” she screamed, hoping that she won’t kill Rhea.

“Didi, run away!” Rhea said. “This is your chance, don’t worry about me, I don’t want you to die, don’t come here” she said crying.

“I can’t give up, I have to somehow cross this road, there are so many cars here” she said, standing up.

“Please don’t, it’s dangerous as many cars are not stopping and also because of this evil Dayawant, think about Aman and leave” said Rhea.

As Dayawanti heard Rhea calling her evil, she decided to end her life by shooting a bullet in her heart.

“Ahhhh” she screamed as the bullet went through her heart. That was her last scream. She had died, she fell on the ground.  

“Hahahah” laughed the evil Dayawanti.

“Noooo” she screamed, as she heard Rhea screaming in pain, when the bullet went through her.

“This is enough, I will end your life now too” she screamed.

Dayawanti smiled and went away.

She didn’t care about the cars on the road, she ran on the road and she fell down.

“Ahh” she screamed, as a car’s tyre ran over her foot.

She felt as she couldn’t breathe, she fainted. She was lying there in the middle of the road. Before someone else could run over her body, a boy came and carried her in his arms.

“Oh God, I can’t believe this” he said looking at her.

—–

The driver opened the back door for him. The boy sat at the backseat and the girl was lying down and her head was in his lap.

“I won’t let anything happen to you” he said, while rubbing her forehead.

“Go to the city hospital” the boy told driver.

—–

Hospital Scene:

The boy is sitting wiping his tears

Doctor comes and says: You can meet her now, but there is a problem which we can’t cure.

“What is it? ” He asked the doctor.

Doctor: She has lost one leg!

He was shocked. He stood there with no expression, he was just completely shook that she couldn’t walk. He felt so damn sorry for her.

He didn’t know what to do but he ran to the room where she was.

——-

The room:

The girl rubbed her eyes and slowly opened them. She got shocked to see him and sat up.

“Who are you and why are you crying?” She asked him.

“Avni” he said and immediately hugged her.

She pushed him and said “I don’t know you and how do you know my name.”

“It’s not the time to talk about this, please recall what happened” he asked.

“You don’t have a leg” he said crying.

She cries and says: What are you saying?

She removed her blanket and got shocked seeing that she didn’t had the leg. Her heart started to beat faster in shock.

She got dizzy and fainted.

The doctor comes in and says: Leave her alone for a couple of hours, she is shocked knowing that she does not have a leg anymore.

The boy: Ok

——–

3 hours later, he entered the room and there she was lying down and looking at the ceiling.

He came and sat beside her.

“Who are you?” Avni asked, as she looked at him.

He held her hand.

He: I am Rambha’s cousin brother. Remember at Aman and Rambha’s wedding, I was there too, we danced a lot together that time because our names got called out because of the chit game. When I started dancing with I realised that I loved you. The first time when I visited your house, I couldn’t believe my eyes. You were so beautiful that I couldn’t even stop thinking about you. I was a chicken and I couldn’t even express my love to you. I really love you. My heart stopped beating that second when I saw you lying on the road in pain, I quickly got you here to the hospital.

Avni: Ohh, I think I remember you now? You are Neil right? Neil Khanna?

Neil: Yes I am.

Avni smiles at him

——————

5 Years Later…

Dayawanti is in jail.

The scene shifts with Neil and Avni in hospital crying in happiness.

Neil: Thanks Avni, you have given me the best gift in life, we are so blessed to have a daughter in our life.

Avni: Thanks Neil, for giving me the best gift in life. That moment when I found out that I had lost one leg, I thought that I will never be loved and no one will ever marry me. I can’t believe that you accepted me, I thought I would be a embarrassment to everyone who knows me.

Neil: Don’t ever say anything like that, you are the most special person for me in this whole universe. And you don’t have any rights to say anything about my wife, Avni.

Avni: What should we name out daughter?

Neil: You decide

Avni: No you decide!

Neil: No you!

Avni: OK let’s say it together in 3..2..1

Avneil says together: Christina

Neil: We are one soul, we have one thinking. We are connected.

Avni nods and says: Yes, we are!

Neil: This is called EVERLASTING LOVE.

The scene ends with Avni kissing Christina on her right cheek and Neil kissing Christina on her left cheek.

————

– Nikita

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    5 Comments

    1. anilv on September 30, 2017 9:57 am

      That’s a complete story! Nice.

      • nikitansx on September 30, 2017 1:22 pm

        Thanks

    2. Barun on September 30, 2017 6:34 pm

      It’s really wonderful. Truly speaking, It’s too good to interesting. Your storyline can able to touches my mind. My eyes get teary at the starting of your episode. But at last I can’t stay without enjoying these beautiful episode. Really I am just loving it. Please Carry on in these way. All the best Nikita.

      • nikitansx on October 1, 2017 9:14 am

        You have legit made my day ♥ thanks so much! I can’t express how happy I am, getting wonderful response from you, once again thank you so much dear.

    3. fenil on October 7, 2017 9:53 pm

      Superb

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