When ever i try to come closer. Why u try to run away from me SHIVIKA,GAURIKA,RUMYA OS SHOT -1 BY SAKASH…

“INDEPENDENCE DAY SPECIAL OS”
Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.This is the first
time i am writing OS.

Hi Friends, Sisters & Brothers.Glad to meet u all.If u like my OS,Please give ur valuable comments.A warm welcome to my OS.U can share ur feelings.U can give ur suggestions & opinions.I promise i make u feel glad when u read my OS.

Please read full part and comment.It will end in three shots.I will post next shot on next sunday or “Independence day”.

The story starts :
One day,Shivay went to London for business deal.He crack the deal.He didn’t
come back.His phone is switched off.

And in T.V. they showed a shocking news that,

“The great SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI the main pillar of oberoi family”.

Who have acheieved a great name in whole world that too in very young age with his Brilliance,Hard working nature, Dignity and Great Business skills is no more.

Actually Mr.Shivay Singh Oberoi went to London for business deal.He cracked the deal.When he was returning to Mumbai! Due to climatic changes,
MR.SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI’S chopper has blasted.

The Whole Oberoi’s were in shock.
All collapsed at once listening this news.

Anika falls down with teary eyes.Her world become up and down for a second.

Pinky starts taunting Anika.Ragini too supports Pinky.

Asusual Dadi,Om,Rudra,Gauri&Bhavya stands beside Anika to support her.

Pinky : OH MY MAATA.Jab sae aayi ho meri bacchi ki zindagi mae grahan laga kar bhaiti ho.
(Pinky : OH MY MAATA.In which time u entered in my child life?All bad is happening to him.)

Anika : Pinky aunty ji.Please stop for now.
U want to taunt me na then taunt?But not now?Please for god sake stop this?And think about Shivay?

Pinky : Now u will tell me?Which time i must taunt?And what i must do?
SADAK CHAP LADKI.KAHA MERA HEERA BETA SHIVAY AUR KAHA TUM?TUM USKI JOOTHI KI BHI LAYAK NAHI HO?

AAB ISS LADKI NAE DOOSRI LADKAE KO PHASAYA?NAAM KYA HAI USKI?

(U road side low girl.Where my diamond beta Shivay and Where were u?U don’t deserve his shoe place also.Now this girl trap other rich boy.What is his name?)

Ragini : His name is Vikram Aunty.

Pinky : Haa.Yes his name is Vikram.This time she catch very big fish from rich family.

Om,Rudra,Gauri&Bhavya’s blood is boiling listening this words from Pinky’s mouth.

Anika stop them uttering a single word.

Anika to Pinky :
Yes i am from middle class family.
I know i am not correct to a person like Shivay.I don’t deserve him.

But i am Independent girl.

I know how much i suffered in my child hood for me and for my brother Sahil?Yes i am middle class girl from middle class family.I am not afraid of saying this?

Before raising ur finger towards others think about other four fingers showing u from other side.

But u Pinky Aunty ji?Tell me in which family u born from?U too a middle class girl?U afraid of joining ur name with ur surname?Always u show ur richness,ur luxury life by mentioning ur name with
“PINKY SINGH OBEROI”.

But i never or ever join OBEROI’S name with my name.Because for me my self-respect and self satisfaction is important and it is every thing to me.I am just “ANIKA”.

Taunt me how much u want?But don’t try to point ur finger on my character.How u even think i am going to marry Vikram?
Whom i don’t know properly?Yes i lied Shivay?To make him jealous i said i have boy friend.

Only one person has place in my heart that is “SHIVAY”.Till my last breath he only My Love,My happiness and every thing to me.I can bear whole world hatred but not shivay’s.He is my weakness and strength.

Yes i am listening to u with much patience without uttering single word means,
Because i always imagine u as my own mother.Never i consider u as shivay’s mother.For keeping u happy i left Shivay 3 months back.I know i can’t live without him.

I did such a big mistake in my life leaving Shivay?How fool i am?How can i even think he will be happy without me?

Being his mother,What u did for him?
He lost his Tadibaazi?He stop speaking to others?He stop talking to his brothers?
He was fear to take responsibilities of others?

He got every thing with him but nothing become medicine for him at that time?

Tell me at that time ur ideology of NAAM,KHOON & KANDAN helps him to come out of that situation.

How can u even think he is no more?If any thing happens to Shivay?First my heart and breath will stop automatically. He is a alive.Nothing can happen to Shivay.

Pinky got 1000 volt current shock seeing this shade of Anika.

Ragini : Pinky Aunty.Yes it is confirmed that Shivay is dead in helicopter blast.He is no more.

Pinky : No.They all r giving wrong information.My son is alive.

Pinky is going to fall down.Anika holds her.Pinky hugs Anika and cries.After some time pinky left to her room.
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Precap : Pinky’s truth out.Ragini’s real shade and her motive comes out.

Shivika rejoins.Shivika unites Gaurika.
Saumya is back from Australia seeing Shivay’s news.
Bhavya’s mission of killing Sultan completed.In this mission she lost her life.At her last breath she unites Rumya.

So this is my Os…I hope u all like it.Who ever read this?Give ur valuable comments.

Did u all like OS?Whoever read this please comment me.Silent readers u too please give ur comments.

Please give ur valuable comments.U can share ur feelings & u can give your own opinions & suggestions on FF.Any doubt just comment me.
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45 Comments
  1. Continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz fast I can’t wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Krishna.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  2. Plzzzzzzzz updated fast waiting for your next update

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Khushi.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  3. Tremendous Shot Bhaiyya.Anika’s feelings and emotions very well expressed.I love ur shot and i love the precap.Post next part ASAP.Waiting eagerly for ur OS Sakash bhai come back fast.

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Ashwa.I am glad u like my Shot-1.
      Thank u so much for ur support and love.
      Actually this is not OS.It’s error.

      When ever i try to come closer.Why u try to run away from me SHIVIKA,GAURIKA,RUMYA(SHOT – 1 BY SAKASH)…

  4. Aashi9

    awesome story bhaiyu but OS are supposed to be completed in one go naa?
    its wonderful
    update soon

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Aashi9.I am glad u like my shot-1.
      Thank u so much dear.

      Actually this is not OS.It’s error.

      When ever i try to come closer.Why u try to run away from me SHIVIKA,GAURIKA,RUMYA(SHOT – 1 BY SAKASH)…

  5. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Alekhika 20.I am glad u like my Shot-1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  6. Its amazing…..Plzzz update soooon

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Sonu.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  7. Awsm..pls update soon.
    Can’t wait..

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Shivika.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  8. pls continue how will anika react knowing bhavya is her sister and dead

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Swetakannan.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  9. Dhar

    Bhaii where were u……. U just forgot us….. Loved it to the coreeeee….. U just rocked it

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Dhar.I never forgot a person like u.I love u my sissy.I missed u a lot.Thanks for ur support and love.Thank u so much dear.

  10. ShailajaBanthia

    Can’t wait superb awesome

    1. Sakash.

      Hi ShailajaBanthia.I am glad u like my Shot-1.
      Thank u so much dear.

  11. AWESOME FANTASTIC INTERSTING SUPERB??????

    Dear Sakash
    Story Is Going Intersting.Anika Heart Out Tallk To Pinky Is Awesome???

    Take Care And Stay Safe?

    1. Sakash.

      Hi UF.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much for ur support and love.
      Thank u so much dear.

  12. Ashwinee

    Hello bhai, how are you, I know I was not in touch since a long time . So sorry for that.
    Coming to the update ,
    Bhai kya tha yeh?????????
    Like really …aapne sirf ek update me mera oh my Mata kardiya?. Mujhe toh sach mein samaj nahi aaraha hai kya bataon . It’s just awesome and perfect.???
    Next time se Bhai precap ko chota likho kyon ki aapne Itna likh diya hai ki Sab kuch pehele hi pata chal gaya ki kya kya hone wala hai. Agar aapko yeh sahi laga toh karo nahi toh chod do☺ And yeah please consider other’s opinions also ☺

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Vennie.I am fine.No need to say sorry dear.We will be in touch in ur free time.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much for ur support and love.
      Thank u so much dear.
      Ok.I will take care about Precap.And i will made some changes in precap.
      Thank u so much for telling ur opinion.

      1. Ashwinee

        Bhai by mistake I have blocked you . Please suggest me a way to unblock it

  13. Aastha_Reddy

    You are one emotionally strong flowing writer Sakash. You did this job very confidentally and I just love this part.
    I am not suggeting any thing because I want to see your talent blooming naturally with progress of this story as you are attaching basic of ishqbaaz.
    Very good job..keep it up.

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Aastha-Reddy.I am glad u like shot-1.
      Thank u so much dear.It’s ur greatness and my pleasure to see ur comment.Thank u thank u so much.I will try my best to mould story and give u all a happy smile on ur faces.

  14. Fabulous shot Sakash….. D way Anika stand for herself….. I just luv it….. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…. Plzzzz post d nxt part Independence day only….

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Banita.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.Thanks for ur support and love.I am glad u like daring shade of Anika.Ok i will post next part on Independence day.

  15. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous mind blowing the way anika stand for herself was awesome…I loved it to the core.u rocked it bro..eagerly waiting for next part update soon Take care

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Niriha.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.Thanks for ur support and love.I am glad u like daring shade of Anika.Take care dear.

  16. bhaiyaa……….superb…….fantastic…….loved the way anika answered pinky confidently and without disrespecting her , this is what I like the most about u never ever leave ur sweetness , humbleness and caring nature… ur saashi loves u bhaiyaa i’ll be waiting for the next shot

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Saashi.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      I am glad to see ur comment Saashi dear.
      I am glad u like this shade of Anika.
      Thank u so much dear.It means a lot.
      Bhaiyya too loves Saashi so much.Take care dear.

  17. Nithu

    u satisfy both RUMYA AND RUVYA fans to say a very nice move……

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Nithu.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.Rumya has their own story and Ruvya has their own story.
      So i don’t want to hurt any one.

  18. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Nikita-jai29.I am glad u like my Shot-1.
      Thank u so much dear.Thank u so much for ur Support and love.Thank u.

  19. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast eagerly waiting

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Krishna dear.I am glad u like my Shot-1.
      very much.Thank u so much dear.I will continue story. Tommorrow i will post it dear.

  20. Gayathri.visu

    Bro, its wow…..wow….wow!! Fantastic. OMG, I loved it! Shivika, Rikara n Rumya’s reunion……its Rumya!(I can’t control bro bcz I m missing Sowmya sooooooooo much). Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update next part bro!
    Take care n keep smiling. Love u lots bro!!

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Gayu.I am glad u like my Shot – 1.
      Thank u so much dear.I am so glad u liked it Gayu.Me too missing Rumya dear.Ok dear.Tommorrow i will update gayu dear.
      Take care dear.

  21. Fffan1234

    Superb. Looking forward to next part

    1. Sakash.

      Hi FFFAN1234.I am glad u like Shot – 1…
      Thank u so much dear.I will post it…

  22. Zaveesha

    Very good…

    1. Sakash.

      Hi Zaveesha.I am glad u like my Shot-1.
      Thank u so much dear.

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