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Home»Fan Fiction»Eternal Love Story # Our Riansh (Chapter-23)
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Eternal Love Story # Our Riansh (Chapter-23)

Niyati12By Niyati12May 16, 202148 Comments8 Mins Read
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So @Ayesha Happy Birthday to you …… 🎂🎂🎂🎉🎉🎉🎂🎂🎉🎉💖💖…..Many Many happy returns of the day……….. May all your wish comes true….. Have a fantastic day and a fantastic year to come…………🎉🎉🎉🎉

So before we start I want to ask something that when I will start flashback what do you guys want me to do detailed one or a short chapter over it…..Please tell I am confused


Chapter-23

While driving:-

Riddhima- Btw Vansh where is my phone….?

Vansh saw Angre’s face who was trying to hold on his laughter….. Vansh then saw Riddhima who was continuously looking at him with a question mark look

Aryan- Yaaa….. Bhai tell btw Riddhima why do you wanna know about your phone …… It must had

Riddhima- How can you say like that Aryan it wasn’t just my phone it was my lucky charm……. I got that from my own salary

Vansh- Salary? You do a job

Riddhima- No actually In Paris, I and Ishani, Sejal and Siya owns a small café “Day dream Café”

Aryan, Kabir and Angre (shocked) – “Day dream Café”

Riddhima- Yaa….. But why you guys gave that reaction

Angre- Who named that café?

Riddhima- I did……why?

Aryan- No but may we know why?

Riddhima- Even I don’t know I was just thinking then it came across my mind so we kept…..

Vansh- Guys stop your questionnaire and you continue

Riddhima- Yaa…. So after working there we gained our first month income I bought that phone using my pocket money and Ishani bought a watch Sejal a novel and Siya a guitar….

Vansh- That’s good

Riddhima- Vansh….. Where is my phone?

Vansh (scared) – Actually I threw it……

Riddhima- Ok…..wait…. What…… Where you threw my phone…….It was my lucky charm….Yaa…. That’s different thing that it was on a verge of being on its pyre….but why you threw my phone

Vansh (scared) – I not only threw it ….. Act….Actually I burnt it also…. Sorry

Riddhima (shouted) – Whaaaaaaaaattttttttt?

Due to such a loud voice, Vansh stops the car with a jerk and all kept their hands on their ears and Siya clutched Angre’s hand tightly

Vansh- What was that?

Aryan- Yaa………Riddhima you could have shouted a bit low….

Vansh- Aryan…. Forget it…… You are already dumb

Ishani (whispering to Aryan, Sejal and Kabir) – See Even Vansh bhai knows that you are dumb and idiot

Aryan (whispering back) – Really let me ask……

Aryan- Bhai, I want to ask something it’s too important

Vansh- Ask

Aryan- Do you really think I’m idiot actually I want to prove this to someone

Vansh- Then just say to that someone that’s already proofed

Aryan- What do you mean?

Vansh- That you are ………

Riddhima (shouting) – Shut up Vansh! Shut up Aryan!……..

Aryan (whispering to Ishani) – See he was saying that I’m not an idiot

Ishani (whispering to Aryan) – Oh Hello Mr. Aryan….First go to school then talk to me ….. Mr. Idiot Aryan

Aryan (whispering to Ishani) – Now If I ever went to Paris I will definitely search that school from where you learn this dialogue and even want to do my admission there

Ishani (whispering to Aryan) – Shut up Mr.

Riddhima- Mr. Vansh, You tell me why you burnt my phone

Vansh- Galti hogyi bhul jao (By Mistake Forget it)

Riddhima- Forget it……… that easily now you listen as we reach Darjeeling I swear that I’m gonna empty your whole bank balance I’m telling you…..

Vansh- Let’s see you won’t be able to

Aryan- Don’t underestimate girls bhai….. I have faced it….. Now I don’t have anything in my bank balance…. Ouch…..

Vansh- Again that mosquito

Aryan- Yaa…. Bhai she loves me a lot…

Riddhima- How do you know her gender…. That you are again and again saying “she”

Vansh- Ohh…..Hosiyaar Sirf female mosquito he hum insaan ke khoon chusti hai…. (Ohh….. Intelligent Only female mosquito sucks human blood)

Riddhima (anger) – What do you mean to say that I suck your blood

Vansh- Exactly…… See now how you are sucking my bank balance………But I challenge you, you won’t be able to do that

Riddhima- Don’t underestimate me….. You won’t be able to win

Vansh- Vansh never loses

Riddhima- See Aryan and then say

Vansh- But I’m different….. You will definitely lose

Riddhima- Ok I even challenge you

Vansh- Yaa….. But you can buy anything except phone, laptop or iPad or any communication device

Riddhima- Done…. I won’t (coming closure to him) Deal?

Vansh (coming closure to her) – Deal…..

Angre- Ok…. So you guys do your challenge and we will have fun

Kabir- Exactly, we will watch a live movie

Aryan- with Popcorn and cold drinks

Riddhima- Popcorn and Cold drinks…… Vansh… Stop somewhere I’m too hungry……

Vansh- Yaa Sweetheart wait….

Aryan- Bhai When it happened?

Vansh- What?

Aryan- You are calling her sweetheart…..

Vansh- Shut up Aryan….Angre….

Angre- Haan Vansh…..

Vansh- Search on net the nearest restaurant…..

Angre- Vansh, It is near, just 20-25 minutes from here

Riddhima- Drive fast as our challenge had began

Vansh- Let’s see even at last of all this there will be enough money in my bank account

Riddhima- Done

Vansh starts driving and soon they reached there

At 5:30 am:-

They were about to reach near the restaurant and

Aryan- Bhai, What do you think till when we will reach Indore……?

Vansh- Why? Why are you too eager to reach Indore?

Aryan- Like that only….eager to reach there so that we can take rest tired of seating on this seat…..

Riddhima- Exactly……Don’t you have a good Car

Vansh (to himself) – God…. How can anyone talk this much when they know that she is kidnapped…? If this is the state now then how will I handle her for damn 2 months…..?

Riddhima- Mr. Vansh comeback earth is calling you back

Vansh- I’m here only…. Let’s see Aryan as fixed we should reach by 12 pm, but now because of this Riddhima’s hungriness….

Riddhima (shouting) – Whhhhaaaaatttttt?

Vansh stops his car

Riddhima- What do you mean by my hungriness?

Vansh- Shut up….. You are hungry accept that

Riddhima- As if you aren’t hungry….. That’s the reason from last half an hour just by my one shout you have stopped this car twice

Vansh- Don’t give too much importance to yourself …. See outside restaurant is here

Riddhima saw outside and turned back to him

Riddhima- but Angre said that we will reach there in 20 minutes how you reached within 10 minutes

Vansh- Nothing is impossible for Vansh…..

Riddhima- Really…. Kya tum toothpaste ko wapas se tube mein dal sakte ho (Can you put back the toothpaste back in the tube)

Vansh- What? Why will I do that?

Riddhima- I do that….

Aryan- Riddhima di…. Even I do that…. That’s a real fun available for younger only Bhai can’t do that he has turned older now

Riddhima (giggling) – Truly felt so….

Vansh- Shut up both of you…….

Riddhima- Don’t want to move inside

Vansh- Come out and you guys wait here

Riddhima- Mr. Vansh, Be a gentlemen

Vansh- I’m but in your case how to be a gentlemen?

Riddhima- Simple…. Open the door

Vansh- Being too demanding can’t you do this much

Riddhima- No….. Not in a mood

Vansh- Really…..

Riddhima- Yes…

Vansh- Fine

He goes and open her door

Vansh- Come

Riddhima- Good boy

They moved to go inside

Ishani- Are you idiot?

Aryan- Now what I did….

Ishani- I’m hungry

Sejal- Even I’m Kabir

Siya- Ask me….. I want to have something

Aryan- What will we say?

Ishani- I don’t know do something before they move inside or

Sejal- or Kabir I’m going to sue you up for sure

Angre- Ok fine, what will you have?

Siya- Anything

Kabir- Aryan, Stop Vansh

Aryan- Why me?

Kabir- because he knows you are a dumb

Aryan- What’s that logic?

Ishani- I’m gonna make your life illogical….

Aryan- Ok fine (shouts) Vansh Bhaiiiiiiii………… Riddhimmmmaaaaaaa Diiiii…….

Vansh and Riddhima comes towards their car and stands in the middle and they open there car glass pane

Vansh- Now What do you want to have

Aryan- Bhai we are hungry

Vansh- Are you guys fine?

Kabir- Yaa…. Why??

Vansh- I mean just before three- four hour you have those many things and now again

Riddhima- Vansh it has been three- four hours I can’t live hungry for more than 1 hour

Vansh- Shut up….

Riddhima- Tumhara kya jaa raha hai? (What’s you going in that?

Vansh- Money…. Ok fine… I’m bringing and you will help me

They moved inside

Precap- Vansh’s jealousy

Do comments guys and tell me when I will start flashback what do you guys want me to do detailed one or a short chapter over it…..Please tell I am confused and that’s the reason I can’t move from here

Sorry for any grammatical mistake………..

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    48 Comments

    1. frozen hidden on May 16, 2021 7:51 pm

      1st

      • frozen hidden on May 16, 2021 8:02 pm

        amazing episode di
        Eagerly waiting for next episode
        Bichara aryan

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:31 pm

        Congratulations Pragya………🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉💖

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:32 pm

        Thank you so much Pragya……….I’m glad you liked it.…💖💖💖

    2. Mennahussein55 on May 16, 2021 7:59 pm

      Lovely and amazing episode

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:35 pm

        Thank You Meenu di…..I’m Glad you liked it……..💖💖💖💖

    3. Ayesha on May 16, 2021 8:05 pm

      Thanks niyati ji for your warm wishes 🙏.
      Love u ❤.
      One lonh bit chapter of flashback.

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:35 pm

        Thank you so much Ayesha….I’m glad you liked it.…Will depend on suggestions💖💖

    4. Yashi on May 16, 2021 8:06 pm

      👌

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:34 pm

        Thanks dear…………Keep Supporting me dear💖💖💖💖

    5. Akirti on May 16, 2021 8:06 pm

      ❤

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:36 pm

        Thanks You dear…………❤❤❤

    6. Attractiveuser on May 16, 2021 8:09 pm

      Amazing ❤️❤️! Riddhima kitna bolti hai🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂! Loved it ❤️❤️! Precap 😍😍😍😍😂!

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:36 pm

        Thanks You Gauri……I’m glad you liked it……❤❤❤

    7. prapti0809 on May 16, 2021 8:18 pm

      aryan or ridhimma kya khate hain . itni energy aati kahan se hai. awesome post soon. pls send aryan to school

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:40 pm

        Kissi episode me puchte hai……..Thank you so much di.…Keep supporting me💖💖

    8. Diya on May 16, 2021 8:45 pm

      Awesome

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:41 pm

        Thank you so much………I’m glad you are liking it….💖💖

    9. Ravneet on May 16, 2021 9:34 pm

      I really enjoyed reading it nice episide

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:41 pm

        Thank you so much Ravneet…. i’m glad you are enjoying it.…😀

    10. Aisha08 on May 16, 2021 10:08 pm

      Amazing

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:42 pm

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    11. Jayashree on May 16, 2021 11:07 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️😍. It’s really super 👌😍😍❤️. Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️.

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:42 pm

        Thank you so much Jayashree……….💖💖💖……….Keep Supporting me ……..

    12. Priyadharshini on May 16, 2021 11:07 pm

      So nice updates 😊😍❤️

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:43 pm

        Thank You so much Priyadharshini………….I’m Glad you liked it………..💖💖💖💖.

    13. JJ on May 16, 2021 11:08 pm

      It’s really super and awesome 💖😊
      Wonderful ❣️❣️😍❤️😍❤️

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:45 pm

        Thank You JJ…..I’m Glad you liked it……….💖💖

    14. Vkjhp on May 16, 2021 11:08 pm

      Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️😍

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:45 pm

        Thank you so much 💖💖……….Keep Supporting me dear

    15. Sree on May 16, 2021 11:08 pm

      Fantastic episode 👌😍😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:46 pm

        Thank you so much Sree 💖💖……….Keep Supporting me dear

    16. Parita on May 16, 2021 11:23 pm

      Awesome one!! Burnt the phone😂😂😂 she mosquito hi kun chusti hai😂😂 Pls post soon

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 2:48 pm

        Thank you Parita 💖💖……😂😂😂😂….Will be here soon

    17. RiansHLoveR on May 17, 2021 8:06 am

      Amazing❤post soon precap is fun😂😂😂😂😂

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:05 pm

        Thank you Radhika 💖💖……😂😂😂😂….Will be here soon

    18. AarushiSoni on May 17, 2021 8:10 am

      Wow vansh jealousy!!!! Amazing…. He burnt her phone god damn!!, 😂😂😂… And that was 3 idiots dialogue! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂Superb…. Pls post soon 🙏🏻

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:08 pm

        Thank you so much Aarushi 💖💖……😂😂😂😂I’m Glad you liked it……….💖💖….Will be here soon

    19. Neetu on May 17, 2021 12:43 pm

      Awesome episode.waiting for your next episode

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:28 pm

        Thank you so much………💖💖💖💖……Keep Supporting me dear

    20. Niyati fan @siri 😍 on May 17, 2021 3:12 pm

      Super episode 😍niyati ridhimma tho awesome 😂😂if flashback is very imp thing in ff then it would be detailed if it’s not so imp it can be short 😊…waiting for next niyati because of vansh jealous 😆

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:35 pm

        Thank you so much Siri…I’m glad you liked it……Important hai isliye detailed mein denge……💖💖💖💖……Keep Supporting me dear😀

    21. Pomu on May 17, 2021 8:44 pm

      Amazing episode Niyu❤️Want to see Vansh’s jealousy soon. If u have no problem then i want a detailed flashback and please mention Riddhu’s bf ‘s relation too.

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:36 pm

        Thank you so much…… 😀😀😀😀😀💖💖💖💖..I’m glad you liked it…… Sure it will be a detailed one as now fb is important

    22. Pragya on May 17, 2021 9:23 pm

      Next episode……Vansh’s jealousy

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:38 pm

        Thank you so much……………will be here soon

    23. Rashi on May 18, 2021 10:58 am

      Hi niyati di , yesterday u had not posted😔😔 I am eagerly waiting and ya do a detailed flashback 😁🙏

      • Niyati12 on May 18, 2021 3:40 pm

        Sorry Rashi actually wasn’t well yesterday I have posted will be here soon……….. Sure it will be a detailed one……… Thank you so much…… 💖💖💖💖..I’m glad you liked it………

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