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ETERNAL LOVE (EP-9)

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Recap : swa___san and rag__lak …..

Both couples are going to celebrate their first outing as couple…
Both swa__san & rag__lak entered into pub…

Swara and sanky went to one side …while ragini is staring at sanky ….

Ragini
Though I sacrificed my love for swara….but I can’t able to see sanky wid anyone …if it’s swara or who ever …..
No ragini u have done it for swara…for Ur best friend….but he is my love…he is my life…I can’t see him wid anyone…

Her chain of thoughts were disturbed by lucky…

Lucky – Hey rags ….two shots of vodka for u….

Rags – No lucky …I quit drinking…

Lucky – Whatttttt? Y?????

Rags – (Some one I love don’t like me drinking….)

Lucky – Ragini ???why u quit?

Rags – Nothing lucky, I don’t like to drink…thats it…leave na…

Lucky – Ok …rags can I ask u something???

Rags – ha lucky …

Lucky – did u miss me Wen I went to India???

Rags – yes lucky…

Lucky – how much ?

Rags – in clg I felt like loner widout u…

Lucky – what about d other time??

Rags – sanky accompanied me….so not so much…

Lucky – ( sadly ) ok …

After some time…
Lucky – shall we dance ??

Rags – no ,not interested lucky…

Lucky – can I ask u something?

Rags – yes..(she is staring at sanky and answering Lucky’s questions)

Lucky – do u love me ?

Rags – (unknowingly)…no lucky …..

It hurted him so much….but then she realised her answer and said sorry lucky iam not interested in answering Ur questions…

Scene shifts to swara and sanky…

Sanky is drinking too much and swara tried to stop…but he is not listening….

At last swara asked him to stop and she took him on her arms…and started to walk out….

Ragini saw them going out and she asks lucky to leave….

Raglak came out and saw swara and sanky were struggling to get into car…

Swara tried to make sanky sit in car…suddenly she slipped and sanky about to fell..
But ragini came fast and held him……lucky saw her concern in her eyes towards him, make him feel hurt…but he composes himself and helped ragini to get sanky in car…

There in back seat sanky and ragini in front seat lucky was driving and swara sit beside him…

Sanky slept on ragini ‘s lap….she is caressing his hair …

Lucky saw this from mirror….but he never spoke about his thoughts as he trust her so much….

#home…

Swaragini and lucky made sanky to sleep in his bed….
And after sometime swaragini left to home..

Lucky was not getting sleep…..then he got a call….

He talked to that caller

Who r u? What r u saying ??? No it’s me not him…who r u to say this??? How can I believe u ??? But who r u???? Helloooo hello…
Call ended..

He thinks about the call and he couldn’t sleep ….

Then he called ragini….

But she is not lifting…may be she slept….

Then he dozed off….

#sanky room…

Sanky took swara in his arms and make her to lie on bed slowly he came towards her…she blushed….
He then slowly kissed her near earlobe…and then moved to neck and slowly undressed her and slowly covers with blanket…

Ragini -nooooooooooooooo

Ah ragini what a bad dream u had…ah …. seriously…..y did I get such a bad dream….ufff….

What d time now…5-30am…

Ufff …..such a bad dream….I can never imagine anyone wid my sanskar….

Ok chill ….it’s just a dream….and then I went to drink water…but I just want to check swara is in room or not…and then I opened her room door that shocked me a lot and God iam sweating….she is not in room….where did she went on this time…..I then checked all over home but she nowhere to be found…

Suddenly I remembered the dream…and i just want to recheck but wat to do…can I go to him??? What did he think??? Oh f*** I will go ….I can’t able to resist my anger or anything…and took my car keys and drove off to his home…

I opened the door as it was not locked ……then I ran towards sanskar room….but I was hell shocked that swara is coming from washroom….

Sanky pov

Today me, ragini and swara lucky went to pub….there I know I have to prove ragini that I love her not swara…but what to do no idea is hitting me…so asusual I drank….swara tried her best to stop….but what can I do…I love my ragini…but she accepted to marry my brother…….soon after I drank …I fell unconscious…I don’t remember anything….after some hrs I got conscious….I came to know that iam I’m my room….it’s nearly 2am…I can’t able to sleep…that I can’t hurt swara by keeping her false hopes…and I called her and asked her that will she come to home…she happily said yes to me…I said not to inform ragini about coming…..I know her well …she is such a sweet person…but what to do…iam not in love with her…..after some time she came…..i opened door she suddenly hugged me…I don’t feel anything…and I can’t able to hug her back then she dragged me and made me sit …but then I came to senses and took her to room…and said ….

Swara I will say something…pls don’t take me wrong…I know It may hurt u….but I can’t hurt u by keeping false hopes on me…coming to point….I don’t love u….and I can’t love u….

She is hell shocked and broke down…it’s nearly 4am…she is crying….I dono what to do…but I took her into my embrace and said sorry and explained everything….and at last I said I love ragini….I don’t know y ….may be Wen iam lost everything…she just came with a ray of hope in my life…then the next minute I fell for her…I dono y…sorry ….I don’t know wat to say…

After that she cried for an hour….I can’t stop her cry…bcz she want to let me out of her tears….then slowly she understood that she can’t be happy wid me…bcz I love ragini….then she asked did ragini know u love her…I said yes she know and she loves me too…then y did she accepted laksh proposal???
She asked while crying….I said that yea it’s Becz she thought I still love u and she left me for u…as u love me very much….

After sometime she understood everything and I know she hurted …but I can’t hurt her more…

She asked that what should I do now??

I can’t ask her to help me to get ragini…bcz I broke her heart into pieces…

She is such a sweetheart she understood everything and said I help u to get her…really. I didn’t expect this from her…I suddenly hugged her tight and said thank u…

And she brk d hug and said friends ???

I then said yeah friends….

Then i asked her to have some coffee…she said she will make it…but iam happy that she understood and helping me …iam happy …so that I said I will make a special one…she said ok…

Then I went to make coffee….then came to my room…she standing near window…I suddenly moved to her to give coffee she then suddenly turned towards me coffee spilled on her dress…I said sorry and told her to clean it in washroom…and then she came from wash room…

Pov ends…

Swara pov –

I dono what iam doing sanskar called me and asked meet me at his home at this time…but I trust him more so I said ok…I came to his home and I dono y I hugged him…may be I missed him…but sad he didn’t hug me back….I dragged him to hall…then he took me to his room and said …I dono what iam listening….is he making me fool…suddenly I realized that by looking into his eyes that he has left no love for me…I can’t able to bear this….I felt like run away from him….I didn’t even speak to him bcz I cried a lot…that my fear of losing him is getting out through my tears….but it’s late…I lost him…then I realized he love my bf ragini…
I dono whether to feel sad or happy…bcz she got sanky…she is lucky…but then I asked him that she loves u?? I thought it had not happen…but it’s in my fate…both are in love…then I next heard the shocking answer for my question….she left sanky for me….for me…me…she valued me , my feelings more than her…it’s enough that I can give him to her…I can’t able to stop my cry and cried for sometime…at last I asked him for friendship….one can never be friend whom u love…but in my case I don’t wanna lose him as frnd too…so accepted…I made my word that I will help him…yes bcz of my frnd…I love her that much…….

End of POV.

#morning

Ragini stood numb that she saw swara in sanky room…
By then swara and sanky are talking….

Swara – u idiot …where is my coffee…I thought u will be wid another one…

Sanky – o my lady i was waiting for u…

Swara – awwwwww then come let’s go…

Sanky – called her swara….
She turned I love u swara I don’t know wat to say u doing for me…thanks a lot…

By listening to the 3 words from his mouth ragini ran away…

Swara – oh sentiiii ….no thanks btwn frnds…and remember Iam not only doing this for u….mainly it’s for my bestie….

And keep that love to her….

Sanky – iam I hurting u ???

Swara – may be little….but iam happy u said it before anything happen…she hugged him (frndly hug) and both went to kitchen…

Then lucky came there..

Bhai are u awake this much early???

Hey swara u here????? Where is rags???

Swara – she is in home and I came here to meet sanky…I was missing him (she winked at sanky and give a look like mission on)

Lucky – Bhai u lucky …..See mine uff!!!!!

He remembered last night call and felt some weird feeling ….

Ragini is crying in her room like hell….

# afternoon

Swara came home
Ragini asked where did u went swara??
She said sanky home rags…I know I have to tell u…but It just happened Yaar…sorry…I will tell next time…really I had nice time wid sanky…

Ragini felt sad and asked what r ur plans today??

Swara – going out wid sanky…..urs???

Ragini – where Ur going???

Sanky – dono …sanky said surprise….

Ragini – he loves me and y he giving surprise to swara…he said he don’t love swara…

Swara – ragini…what are u thinking…

Ragini – nothing…ok iam going to clg…

Swara – yeah lucky asked me to tell u that he will pick u to clg…

Ragini – ok…

# evg

Both swara and sanky came to sanky home …

There they saw raglak …

Sanky was going to room..but stopped by lucky

Bhai how was Ur date???

It’s fine lucky ….

What fine…it’s awesome lucky ….do u know he surprised me his love towards me…swara said..

How swara??? Ragini asked

She pulled him towards raglak and unbuttoned his shirt and show a tattoo on his heart that swara….

This got hurt by ragini a lot…she can’t able to hold her tears…but she hides it…

Lucky – Bhai how romantic!!!!!

Sanky – all for my love….she is my love….she is my life…I can even write with my blood…

This words seriously hurting ragini…pls stop it sanky…swara said which is audible to sanky…

Sanky – ok lucky enough we have some work so don’t disturb us for some hours….

Come swara…

Both went to sanky room and here raglak are shocked…more than that ragini is shocked…she asked him to drop her in home..

He dropped then he got some unknown call…

Caller – hello laskh

Lucky – who r u?? Y r u calling me??

Caller – I know u r waiting for my call?? Wat about my words about last night…

Lucky – I don’t believe u..

Caller – u should Mr maheswari….bcz it’s true…by d way u should have noticed things…..

Lucky (yea I noticed …but I can’t tell u) – no…
Caller – don’t lie to me…and Ur lying to urself…

Lucky – shut up…she loves me…

Caller – big joke go and say to anyone they will laugh their lungs out…

Lucky – shut up …just shut up….

Caller – yes I know u love her…but she loves Ur Brother and Ur brother also loves her…this true…..believe it or not…Ur wish…and cuts d call

Lucky – helloooooooo…..who is she ?? Y is she saying this to me…I have to know it…is it real or not???

But how???

I have to wait for the time…

#after some days….

Ragini can’t able to get over that tattoo incident ….she wants him badly….

Here swara and sanky are trying to solve another prblm of ragini that is Adharsh prblm…so they r not even talking to raglak as it is important..

Lucky is trying to get about the details that caller said…but he failed in trying…

#some place

Adharsh called someone and said…

Is everything okay??

Caller – yes sir

A – nowadays  some thing is fishy….I think someone is following us …be careful….

Caller – ok sir…now noone is  going to save her this time…

Call ends….

Ragini is going to college ….she stopped the car suddenly bcz someone is fell on road wid pool of blood….she went to them and that guys suddenly smiles evilly …..suddenly one car came…they dragged her into car….and left…..

Caller – sir work done…

A – good…where is she ???

Caller – at xyz old villa….none knows this place..as it’s far from city…

A – ok don’t call me again and again…I will send some papers make her to sign on that and kill her after that…

Caller – ok sir…

A – what she is doing now ?

Caller – she is in  unconscious state sir…and we tied her…

A – good…let her be…don’t take silly steps…careful may sanskar get there…

Caller – no if he comes, he will also be killed…

A – good…ok

Caller – ok sir…

Call ends…

Lucky calls ragini and she is not lifting her call….he traced her address and reached there…but there is only car ….where did she went in this middle of no where….y did she even stopped here…then he moved some far…he saw blood there…he was shocked and called sanky and swara….and informed them…

Sanky and swara wid in no time reached there..

There sanky saw all things and stamped his foot to ground strongly and loudly screamed raginiiiiiiiii….

Lucky pov
That makes i cleared this doubt about the mystery caller things…
Bhai loves ragini….it’s confirmed…then what about ragini ???
My chain of thoughts were disturbed by swara….

She asked me to take d car ….but I don’t know how she feel when she knows Bhai doesn’t love her….I don’t know y I feel d pain about her….I don’t want her to take any pain ….she had been through this….but what can I do???
Pov ends

Swara u go take ragini car and inform to police…me and Bhai will search ….lucky said…

Swara listened him…

Sanky was worried then he got the call and said lucky to go some place…

Both reached the place ….there they met a person and person said common there is no time left….we have go fast….

#xyz villa

Ragini is getting consious…and tried to getup…but she came to know that she has been tied with some ropes….but she is screaming who r u ??? Y did u did this ???? Sanskarrrrrrrrrrr

Some goon came in and asked her to shut up and he tightly slapped her….she is crying in pain…pls leave me….who r u??? Why are  u doing this to me??? Pls let me go….

Goon – i asked u to keep quite …u………..again slapped her…she started crying….he again slapped her…..
Then she fell unconscious….

He called Adharsh and said everything…
A – u….fool….Y did u do that….now iam sending papers…how could she sign on it….

Goon – sorry sir…send me the papers I will wake her up and make her sign…

A – if anything happens wrong I will kill u…

Goon – no , nothing happen send me …

A – ok…
Call ends…

Hey u….hey….getup…getup….u….

Hey sprinkle some water on  her face…

She is slowly getting consious….

Sanky lucky and d person came to that villa…and they slowly enter into villa from diff places…..

Sanky saw ragini in one room….and then he saw a goon near her…he slowly moves towards the room and kicked him slowly and make him fall slowly…without any noise…then he reached ragini….

There he went to her and untied every rope….she hugs him tight….he too hugged her tight….she then brk d hug and kissed him as she is missing him madly……he too reciprocated and kissed her madly….both brk d kiss…due to lack of oxygen…and she kissed her cheeks and forehead and again kissed his lips….she suddenly fell on his chest and then she saw tattoo on his chest swara…and fell unconscious….

He lifted in his arms and take her out and made her sleep in car …and came to the goons who are handling wid lucky and person….
Then some goon came with papers and sanky got him and made all d goons Locked in room….

Swara came with police and they arrested them…..and they said whom is behind it…police went to Adharsh and arrested  him tooo…..

All went to hospital

Ragini is admitted….after sometime doc came and she is alright some rest is needed….

They all thanked…but sanky hugged him…

Lucky – I know bhai u both love each other….I saw ragini kissing u….I know how much she loves u…

Lucky – Bhai will go and see …..

Swara – let him see first….

Lucky – ok …he doubted her …dat she know???

Sanky went inside….

Sanky – held his hand ….do u think u can leave me??? No …its not gonna happen….give me some time …will get things clear out….

Slowly she is gaining conscious and saw sanky there…then lucky came inside and swara too….

How r u Jaan ??? Lucky asked…

By that words sanky left her hand….and went out…

Iam fine lucky …. listening this…swara said take care of her lucky will come…she followed him…

Ragini saw that and felt hurt…

Lucky – I have a surprise for u….

Ragini – what ???

Lucky – calls the person…rithik( played by Arjun bijlani)…

Ragini – saw him….Bhai…..

Lucky – ha rithik….who helped us to reach u…

Rithik – sorry rags , it’s my dad who made this to u…he is after Ur property….

Ragini – it’s ok Bhai….no need to say sorry…

Both hugs…

#after some days….

All things going set….btwn all…

But lucky knows Bhai and ragini loves each other….
Swara is helping them….
But Bhai didn’t even say to me that he loves ragini….

But he is friendly with ragini….

Swara and sanky both become good friends….

Rithik and ragini share a good bonding….

But Ragsan both are suffering their separation….but one day sanky asked swara that he want to meet her madly…and missing her badly…
Sanky how now??? It’s already 11pm….

Pls swara pls……

Ok ….come home I make u meet her….swara said
.Im outside Ur home..
Whatttttt???
Yep come out…
She shocked to see him….
Are u drunk????
He shows his two fingers like little with pout face….
Aww sanky ….what u did ….
I don’t know how I accepted to let u in…
I want to see her…sanky said…

Ragini heard some sounds and came out and shocked to see them both but she didn’t heard their convo …and went inside and locked her room….

Sanky go home it’s not right time bcz u drunk…..pls…

No swara no …. Iam missing her badly…

Ok come…and both went up…and tried to open but it’s locked…then she said locked from inside….

Ok I will go from window….
Whatttttt
Yup….bye

He then enters from window….she slept there….

He then slowly making cat moves towards her….and tapped her shoulder…
She looked at him…and shocked….

Tum????she said

Ha mein….u expected Siddharth malhothra….here….

Wat r u doing here ??? Go pls….if anyone see u here…it will be prblm…swara and Bhai is also here….

No way ….iam not going anywhere….I missed u…I came to see u…

He then hold her hands….and pin her to d wall and hold her waist in one hand and one hand on wall….and kissed her lips….
She don’t know what’s happening …bcz it happened in fraction of seconds…

She didn’t want to go back bcz she loved his love….she stood silent….
He then brk d kiss…and said I love u…

She cupped his face and she didn’t try to explain anything bcz he is drunk…and he will not listen….

I love u too sanskar….

He then looked at her lovingly and kissed her near neck….she held her dress tightly….and then he lift her in his arms and placed her on bed …..

She tried to say no….but she couldn’t bcz she misses him badly…and she wants him by her side……

He kissed her neck and he undressed himself and kissed her passionately…..he then undressed her and and took her inside the blanket and ……for disappointment he fell unconscious…..(nothing happened there)…..she caressing his hair kissed his forehead….and she came to sleep in his embrace….but she saw swara name and dressed herself and slept on couch….

To be continued ….

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