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Home»Fan Fiction»ETERNAL LOVE (EP-5)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

ETERNAL LOVE (EP-5)

Suma123By Suma123September 28, 201736 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys back wid new episode…..
Typo errors pls ignore….
If u love this episode do vote ….
Really overwhelmed by Ur response and thank u so much guys for supporting me…I never thought I will write a story…thanks to u all…love u guys.?
Coming to episode….
Sanky and d girl left to his home (hope u understand)……
Few months passed….
Ragini became close to lucky …that she never felt alone …but somewhere she is confused about her feelings towards lucky…
Lucky never confessed his feelings to her….and he wants to tell her about his love,so he planned dinner in his home….
Lucky invited her to dinner tonight,she accepted and came…
Lucky arranged everything like heart shaped (imagine guys ..I dono how to explain)….
Ragini loved all the arrangements And both had dinner…after sometime both went to lawn and talking there sitting side-by-side ….lucky is trying to get courage to confess ….at last he tried to say but it’s late…she fell asleep and fell on his shoulder and sleeping like kid…..he didnt want disturbing her sleep so let her like that…
Sanky came to home and saw all the arrangements and thought may be lucky loves her and he confessed his feelings to her…but did she accepted his proposal??? How would I know???
By moving to his room he saw lucky and ragini are sitting in lawn and saw their position and got hurt…and then he left to room ….
Ragini, I LOVE U  but I can’t say to u …I don’t want to ruin my brothers love ….but I can’t live here by seeing u beside my brother…….then fell on his bed …his wallet from his pocket fall on bed ….he saw a pic wid his past love and said I don’t love u anymore….keeping Ur pic wid me is waste ….my love towards u gone…long gone…it’s nothing there….if iam staying here then I can’t be able to forget ragini…..and remembered ragini

RAGSAN(2ND MEETING) :
Sanky came to ragini’s room with out her knowledge ,she is sleeping…he came to her sat beside her by caressing her hair ,he took her into his embrace and kissed her forehead ,he said  I dono y I came here…but I can’t stop myself to see u…bcz u locked my heart and kept the keys wid u…what shall I do…so I came here…from d first meet of ours I don’t know a weird feeling that ur connected someway to my heart…may be it’s love ??or not I dono…his thoughts are disturbed by ragini…she unknowingly hold his waist and slept in his embrace…he loved the feeling that she holded..so he let her…at early morning she moved a side and then he left from there by kissing her….
End fb …

He then slept by her thoughts…
Here lucky took her into her arms and dropped her in her home and make her comfortable in her bed…and left her…..
One person is watching this all and thinking love btwn them is unbreakable….but love towards u is also unbreakable and unstoppable…I can’t stop loving u…and left the place( same person who watching lucky and ragini)….

Next day
Ragini is coming to college in her car, suddenly a truck is coming opposite to her car got to hit ,but missed …ragini turns her steering …..took her breathing heavily….
Truck driver in call – sorry boss just missed…..
Caller – can’t u do it properly…if next time u miss to kill…then I will do it properly…
T.d – don’t take risk boss I will do it…
Caller – iam not talking about d girl…about u…
T.d – sorry boss…next time it won’t miss…for sure…
Caller – ok…then after work will give balance amount…
T.d – ok sir…
Call ends..

T.d – by seeing dat girl from far he said…”lucky u for this time ” next time no one gonna save u …god also…mark my words…
Scene shifts to lucky – sanky home…
Lucky got a call from India
Lucky – hi mom…how  r u ??
Ap – iam fine ..beta…how is sanskar??
Lucky – ” what do I say mom,?  Bhai is not like before he failed in love and failing in life ”
Ap- lucky ??? What happened???
Lucky – ntg mom…
Ap- how is sanskar??
Lucky – yea mom he is good…all good here…how abt there ???
Ap – (doubted that he is lying) beta it’s a urgent so I called u now…catch d next flight to India and come home…will have to talk..
Lucky – what happened mom??any thing serious??
Ap – come beta will say…but don’t tell sanskar …tell him dat have to go to India …that’s it…
Lucky – ok mom…
Call ends…

Lucky packed bag and told sanky that he is leaving now and will come soon there …
Lucky – Bhai take care….
Sanky – “I thought to leave this place but he is leaving …after he comes I will go to India…”
Lucky – Bhai????
Sanky – ha lucky …u too take care….
Both go to airport and said bye by hugging eo….
Lucky tried to call ragini to inform this matter but her phone is not reachable….
I didn’t get a chance to meet ragini….
Lucky called sanky
Lucky – Bhai…..come in once..
Sanky came to him…
Lucky – Bhai …I didn’t say ragini dat iam going  to India..iam calling her but her cell is not reaching…I will call her once I get to India…pls tell her dat iam sry and miss u..
Sanky – got hurted and said ok lucky don’t worry
Lucky – take care of her Bhai…
Sanky – ok lucky ….
Hugs eo and left…
Sanky while driving car he is thinking …
” I thought to be far from her,but destiny made her to be with me…”
Suddenly he put a brake to his car and see opposite that ragini is standing(wid injuries,she missed hit from truck but she hit a tree) …
He went to her fastly and asked before that she fell on him, her head is injuried and bleeding…
He lift her in his arms and crying
He runs to car and took her to hospital ,she is getting unconscious
He said hold on to that pls ragini….I don’t let anything happen to u….
Then he admitted in hospital …

After an hour …doctor came out and said nothing danger …she is resting now …but take care of her….don’t let her to take  stress …and come to my cabin…sign some papers and will discharge her now…
Sanky – thank u soo much doctor…
He went inside to  see ragini ….by seeing her in that state he totally felt numb and tears flowing from his eyes continuously….
By caressing her hair he said I don’t let anything happen to u ragini….
She is unconscious but she heard some words ‘i don’t let anything happen to u ragini ‘ …tears falling from her eyes (in unconscious state)….
Then he kissed her forehead and went to doctor ….
After that he took her from hospital to his home….

To be continued…..

I know its boring …..but from next episodes more Ragsan scenes will be there…
Who is d caller??who is d person watching lucky and ragini ??? Some more twists…will be there…keep reading this will get to know…
Any feedback accepted…
Mention which scene u like /enjoyed/loved…
Thank u for supporting…
Love u guys….
Dedicated to all teju fans….

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    36 Comments

    1. A12345 on September 28, 2017 11:29 am

      Awesome

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:24 pm

        Thank u dear

    2. shalini on September 28, 2017 12:03 pm

      Awesome

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:24 pm

        Thank u shalini

    3. maha on September 28, 2017 12:48 pm

      Superb

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:25 pm

        Thank u dear

    4. PriyaS on September 28, 2017 12:51 pm

      Nice

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:25 pm

        Thank u dear

    5. Rehna on September 28, 2017 1:06 pm

      Amazing dear

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:25 pm

        Thank u dear

    6. RAGSANIAN on September 28, 2017 1:09 pm

      Amazingggg now no one to disturb our sanskar to express his love. Happy

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:26 pm

        Thank u so much dear….haha …

    7. mk on September 28, 2017 1:36 pm

      Amazing dr

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:26 pm

        Thank u so much dear???

    8. Rikashini on September 28, 2017 1:41 pm

      Fabulous

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:27 pm

        Thank u so much dear??

    9. aditi on September 28, 2017 2:15 pm

      Awesome yaar. Show much more ragsan scenes

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:27 pm

        Thank u so much dear

    10. IQRA222 on September 28, 2017 2:27 pm

      didu its awesome!!

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:28 pm

        Thank u iqu….????

      • Polly on September 29, 2017 11:20 am

        Iqu reading a ragsan story , oh my maata , anyways good that u accepted even ragsan !!!!!!!!!!

    11. keerthi on September 28, 2017 2:56 pm

      Awesomeee

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:28 pm

        Thank u keerthi

    12. vini on September 28, 2017 3:26 pm

      awesome

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:29 pm

        Thank u dear

    13. vani on September 28, 2017 3:43 pm

      Superb dear

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:29 pm

        Thank u dear

    14. geet on September 28, 2017 4:25 pm

      wonderful

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:29 pm

        Thank u dear

    15. sug on September 28, 2017 6:00 pm

      Ossommmmmm

      • Suma123 on September 28, 2017 11:30 pm

        Thank u so much dear????

    16. Tani on September 29, 2017 12:25 am

      Amazing

      • Suma123 on September 29, 2017 7:42 am

        Thank u dear

    17. Polly on September 29, 2017 7:16 pm

      Hey dear I loved ur story well I recommend u sm ragsan stories u cn easily google them , they r love tedha hai , dil ye bekarar kyu hai ( my personal fav.) , dil vil pyaar vyaar , baabul (again my fav.) , her side story ( my fav!!!!!!!!!!!) , naadan dil , etc . etc. etc. the list is endless but believe me these r the best ones , u wud surely enjoy them

      • Suma123 on September 29, 2017 8:40 pm

        Thank u so much Polly….I love to read ….is that FF are on watty

      • Kuheli_Banerjee on September 30, 2017 12:36 am

        Hello dear polly , can u please give the links of these ff’s ???????????

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