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Home»Fan Fiction»Essence of hatred [os]
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Essence of hatred [os]

Shubhangi1By Shubhangi1December 10, 201623 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hello everyone!
Thank u sooo much for ur previous response and sorry to those whom i can’t reply.
So, here goes another short os. Sorry,next time i will write bigggg one.
So here it goes.

………ESSENCE OF HATRED………

Sanskar maheshwari, a business tycoon from whom the world feared,was all broken today. He was all lost and defeated only because of his one mistake or was it a sin. Yes it was a sin. Yes he committed a sin. He destroyed the life of his most , his own love, his own life ,his own world his wife Swara. He was so blind in taking revenge from her parents. Yes, her parents, they killed Sanskar’s parents. But, was it write to take revenge from Swara , no it was not. But he never that in his revenge how this poor soul was suffering . He used her for taking revenge. He hated her. He tortured her both mentally and physically . He gave her all the pain in the world. But, this divine soul always bore all her husband’s tortures only because of one thing or of one feeling called-LOVE. Yes, she loved her from all her heart even after bearing all his tortures . Somewhere she had a hope that he will change, her sanskar will change.

He showed and made her feel the real essence of hatred but in return she always gave pure love. But for how long she could bera the hatred, she was no longer strong to bear the hatred in her love’s eyes for. Her all hopes were crushed by him, not even a single hope was left. At last, she took her LIFE! She left this cruel world, she left her love. She walked to the path of heaven leaving everyone behind. But as we know “we only know the real value of peoplewhen they leave us”. Same happened here. Soon he realised that she was the only angel who took his heart. She was his only family. He was so blind in love that he couldn’t even realise her love for him, his feelings for her, his love for her. But he realised all this but when he did it was too late because she left, she was no more here. She gave him the worst life time punishment of GUILT.

Yes guilt and regret, he was only leftwith these two things nothing else for his whole life. How much he cried, how much he regreted nothing mattered as it was too late. Nothing could be reversed. But still he had a hope that one day his angel would forgive him. One day he will confess his feelings. One day he will change this hatred into love. One day he make her feel like his princes, the queen of his heart. He will only give her love and make her forget all thepast memories. He will fill her heart with love and happiness rather than sorrow and sadness. He will remove this ESSENCE OF HATRED. This essence of pure hatred which destroyed their lives…….

………THE END………

“ALL STORIES ARE NOT MEANT TO HAVE A HAPPY ENDING”
So, how was the story. Plz coment and let me know. Plz silent readers also comment. Ur little words give me a lot of motivation. So, comment comment and comment.

HERE IS LINK TO MY PREVIOUS OS: LOVE-a blessing
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-blessing-os-2/

So, this is shubhangi sharma signing off.

………BYE………

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    23 Comments

    1. Ria on December 10, 2016 2:33 pm

      nice 🙂

    2. Shrinjal on December 10, 2016 2:35 pm

      Amazing dear keep writing

    3. rabia on December 10, 2016 2:55 pm

      Awesome dea ?

    4. anu on December 10, 2016 3:34 pm

      nyc

    5. Maryam on December 10, 2016 3:47 pm

      God it was Marvellous dear…I loved it…N I know all of the other readers will also love it…U are such a good writer dear…keep writing N stay blessed…

    6. chandu on December 10, 2016 4:00 pm

      Loved it…!!! I felt little emotional…!!

    7. Nagamanasa on December 10, 2016 4:07 pm

      Amazing os dear…

    8. maryum on December 10, 2016 4:16 pm

      Nice

    9. Chinna on December 10, 2016 4:56 pm

      Awesome

    10. s on December 10, 2016 5:02 pm

      nice..

    11. praju on December 10, 2016 5:49 pm

      beautiful

    12. pooja26 on December 10, 2016 7:06 pm

      superb dear…….

    13. Afra96 on December 10, 2016 10:49 pm

      Nice

    14. Arshaanya on December 11, 2016 12:56 am

      Nyc

    15. vyshu10 on December 11, 2016 10:07 am

      aww….emotional

    16. mynalove on December 11, 2016 10:30 am

      u made me cry
      it was so emotional

      i have a small advice
      ur both stories were amazing but pls make it a detailed one
      sorry if i hurt u

      • Shubhangi1 on December 11, 2016 12:04 pm

        No i am not at all hurt
        Next time i will give more detailings
        Thanks for ur advise

    17. Sanswa on December 11, 2016 12:16 pm

      Loved it dea

    18. deeksha on December 11, 2016 1:41 pm

      Nice dear….. Continue soon

    19. srusti on December 11, 2016 2:53 pm

      Veryyyyyyyyyyy nice dear and yeah it was emotional nd if u don’t mind can u write a OS on swasan with happy ending sorry if i hurt u dear

    20. Kakali on December 11, 2016 5:18 pm

      Shubhangi !!! great OS dear.. !! love it … !!, keep writing like this.. !! TU people would love to read ur works.. !!
      God bless u..
      Thnk u.. ;-*

    21. mariya on December 13, 2016 3:02 pm

      Very nice

    22. hemalattha on December 15, 2016 2:17 pm

      awesome.keep writing like this os or ff.

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