Hy guys…
Priya here
Hope you liked the introduction
Thanks for your comments everyone
Its a raglak and swasan ff 🙂
In this ff Ragini is the main lead.
Delhi, mayuri college boys hostel.
A girl in baby pimk top and white jeans with her hair in a high poni tail came into the room, which was fully messed up. Books here and there. Pillows on the floor. And a boy was sleeping on the bed with his shirt on the floor.
“laksh wake up!!” She shouted
He was still sleeping
She is going near him, she kept hand on his baree shoulder
He felt a girl touching him.
He grabbed her into his bed
“ek kiss milgi??” He
He was on her and he was filled in the bed sheet
“laksh are you still dreaming??” She asked
“no my dear Ragini, you are my best friend Na then give me”
“yeah bf” saying this she gets up freeing herself from his bf
“yaar kavya”
“phir se song??”
“haan ragini, she is beauty, she is too s**y”
“come on laksh, get up and get ready we are late”
“ok meri gf coming”
“gf??”
“you are my friend and you are a girl simple gf”
After some time he came out of the wash room
wearing a shit t shirt and blue jeans
“Ragini how many times should I have to tell you, you look v bad in this pony” saying this he takes out the elastics from her hair”
“see how good are you looking now”
She smiled
“come lucky we will go”
They both leave in luckys bullet
Ragini was driving it laksh was sitting back
Laksh was busy uploading his photos in fb
“driving crazy with my gf”
“Ragini see who’s coming??”
“who??” Ragini asked
“kavyaaaaa” laksh shouted in her ears.
“again competition???”
“why do you see her as competition???, she will Be your bf’s lover”
“she might, but now she is my competitor”
Saying this she rises the accelerator.
Kavya and Ragini were driving towards the college steps.
“Ragini… See kava she is so cute”
“cute my foot see how will I win now”
Laksh kept his hand on the accelerator.
Ragini missed her target and she fell down along with Ragini.
“laksh what is this???”
“sorry Ragini”
Ragini left that place in anger.
Laksh took the bike and went to parking.
Hope you liked it
I think there are so many typos please forgive me for this
38 Comments
stop writing ……….u nd ur ff is boring
Thank you so much rishika for your views, i will try making it interesting. And if you find it boring then please don’t read it 🙂
Cute epi… Raglak moments were too gud loved it a lot.. Plz update the nxt part soon
Thanks ruhani 🙂 will update the next part tonight 🙂
Awesome update…Loved RagLak bond..Waiting for the next update 🙂
Thank you dafsi 🙂 will update next part tonight 🙂
It is not at all boring Priya, you don’t have to mind about the nagative comments you get just think about the positive comments and keep writing and rocking…loved your story line
thank u so much dafsi 🙂 loved your comment too 🙂 <3
It s absolutely not boring!!!its nyc….bt pls try to make it a bit longer
Thanks rhea 🙂 wil definitely make longer ones from the next time
priya never stop your ff, consider negative comments like compliment,
nice part
I will never stop it lovely 🙂 thanks and i did the same taking her comments as compliments:)
nice one… 🙂
ignore negativity and be positive.
we r here to read ur ff and dont forget abt silent readers.
Keep smiling and update soon.
i am waiting 🙂
Thank you so much rakshasa it gives me so much positivity reading ur comments thanks dear! 🙂
Nice
Thanks akriti 🙂
dont bash her rishita atleast she tried writing an ff u cant even imagine how much stress is there for it to write an ff and dear u plz continue with your ff as it is very interesting and plz do not stop it
Thank you so much for making a stand for me angel ? 🙂 i will definitely continue this ff till the end 🙂
see many of ur freinds are encouraging u priya dont forget if one is against u u will get many other with u and ya nor u r boring nor ur ff continue i was a silent reader but now i have started commenting and believe me priya ur ff is the first one in which i commented
Thank you angel 🙂
Many of my friends are encouraging me and i can’t disappoint them. And i never felt bad with her comment. I will definitely continue this ff 🙂 thank you Sm dear <3
obviously u will always find ur wellwishers standing by ur side love u and ur ff is very nice actually i get bore when it takes thirty to forty episodes just to realise their love for each other but must urs is different
yeah! angel I too get bore sometimes thats why i will not drag it much. 🙂
thanks fo your support 🙂
awesome
thanks aarti 🙂
I seriously dono wat she s…ignore her dr…I already told u I’m reading both ur ff’s….raglak rocked…waiting fr nxt episode..
ignored priya 🙂 thanks for reading dear 🙂
It’s very interesting dear and Raglak scenes superb. Please continue. We all loved it
thank u so much ammu 🙂
This is a good one.. Keep going dear. Never mind negative comments. Therr are many readers who appreciates ur work so juz give importance to them.. 🙂
thank u so much nitu 🙂
thanks fo commenting 🙂
awesome dear….update soon…waiting for swasan…and plz don’t stop writing…
next one is for swasan soujanya 🙂 i will never stop it 🙂
It’s very interesting
thanks ani 🙂
Nice one.. raglak bond is soo gooood nd don’t mind negative comments… keep writing
thank u piya 🙂
It’s really awesome and different. Please ignore the negative comments. We all who have commented are with you. Please continue. Waiting eagerly for next episode ☺
what problem do u all have ??? who r u to tell me what i have to say about this priyas ff…its my choice…….
idiots….senseless people…..its my choice what opinion i have to give about this ff…FOOLS……..
who r u to decide what my opinion should be …….just give ur comments nd get lost …….no need to give
ur opinions on others comments …..i hope i have slammed all of urs comments ….nd even if this doesnt effect
u then u people r SHAMELESS !!!! keep ur eye on ur work ……dont interfere in other’s…today i have a complete
list of idiots-
dafsi(whatsoever her name is …lol)
rhea
lovely (or UGLY)
akshata (lecture queen)
angel (queen of idiots)
piya
sounjan…
nituuuuuuuu
ammu (sabki ammaa)
s priya (does that “S” stand for stupid)
all idiots r making mess by being together…….
Go to hell!!!!!!!