AN : This story featuring Poornima, Rajneesh from ‘Qayamat se Qayamat Tak ‘ show and Sarthak, Srishti from ‘Luka Chupi’ is inspired from the movie “Guruvayoorambala Nadayil” which was a wonderful entertainer in theartres. This movie also had a reference from Nandanam movie in climax sequence and that’s what made me to think about writing on one of my favourite show Luka Chupi along with Qayamat se Qayamat tak. This story has no connection with the original plot of both shows. Now let’s move to the story.
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Rajneesh : Paapa, ,Maa how are the preparations going on ?
Sharda : They are going good .
Suresh : Beta just now we have met the astrologer and he said next month is good for marriage . We have talked with Poornima’s parents also.
Sharda : Beta muhurat is been fixed on next month .
Rajneesh : Oh no!! I have very less time …It’s okay I will apply leave soon and come home..By the way Maa what about booking of hall ?
Sharda : Poornima’s bade bhai Sarthak has booked auditorium near Mandir . After marriage reception will be held there .
Rajneesh : Nice. Sarthak Bhaiya is so caring towards me.By the way what’s the name of auditorium ?
Sharda : Srishti auditorium.
Rajneesh ; No Paapa…That’s name irritates me a lot. Please cancel it.
Sharda : What’s your problem with a name ? See Sarthak has given advance payement and at last moment we can’t tell them to cancel it . Only two weeks are left and there are so many work. You better come soon beta .
Rajneesh ;But Maa that name is a bad luck for me … Please tell them to change the venue.
Suresh : Sarthak don’t tell stupidity …. What will they think if we tell them our son doesn’t like the name of the auditorium ….They willl think you as mad….Raj, We have no time to hear these kind of silly things… …You are coming home that’s it.
Rajneesh : Okay Paapa …
At Poornima’s house
Anupama : Poornima aur kitne cards chahiye ?
Vanraj : You invite your friends also .
Poornima : Paapa – Maa they have already planned to enjoy at marriage…I guess the list has been completed now….We can send invitation cards to relatives…..
Meanwhile Poornima’s phone rings….
Anupama ; Rajneesh ka call hein kya beta ?
Poornima :No it’s Sarthak Bhaiya …
Vanraj : Put phone in speaker..
Poornima puts the call in speaker.
Poornima : Hello Bhaiya …
Sarthak : Poornima ….What are you doing there ?
Poornima ; I was arranging wedding invitation cards . Bhejna hein naa relatives ko…
Sarthak : I will handle all those things. Why you are not taking to Rajneesh ?
Poornima : Did Raj said like that ?
Sarthak : No..But yeah I felt in his voice so…. I mean his mood is upset….Better you talk with him and one more thing talk with so much of love …..He is like my chotu sa bhai….And always remember it…
Poornima : Okay I understood bhaiya…
Poornima cuts the call…
Anupama : First time I am seeing these much love between two brother -in laws..Saale saab bol bolke Raj na puri tarah se Sarthak ke deewane ho chuke hein..
Poornima : Some times I feel shaadi meri ho rahi hein Raj se yaa phir bhaiya se Raj ki shaadi ho rahi hein…..Raat ke do baje bhi call karun naa tab bhi engaged hote hein Raj ka phone….Keh rahe the kee Sarthak bhaiya unke jeevan ka taranhar hein ..Maano kee Krishna bhagwan jaise Arjun ji ko sambhalte the bilkul waise….
Vanraj and Anupama laughs …
Vanraj : Bas Srishti bhi aa jaati toh accha hota….Lekin saare problems toh khud hamare bete ne hi khada kar dee…
Anupama : Srishti bechari par ilzam lagate gaye lagate gaye…..Khair abb Sarthak bhi alag rehta hein aur Srishti bhi alag….Kya hi kare hum log ?
Poornima : Mere saare friends poochenge bhabhi kahan hein ? Almost kayi log toh bhaiya bhabhi kee shaadi mein bhi aaye the….
Vanraj : Poorna , Sarthak is staying alone in a flat and Srishti is living in her maayka. Legally both are not divorced but they are seperated now . One more thing I really don’t like the suspicious behaviour of Sarthak though he is my son …He put so much allegations on my bahu Srishti and she was helpless to leave this home.That’s why I asked Saarthak also to leave this home . Because he should realize his mistake….
Anupama : We need to invite Srishti’s parents also….
Vanraj : True.. Par kis mooh se jawun wahan ? Kya sochenge weh hamare baare mein ? Ek shaqi bete ke nikamme maa -baap…. Anupama we can talk later…
That night Poornima gets a call from Rajneesh.
Poornima : Sorry I was busy in organizing cards….That’s why I didn’t called you…
Rajneesh : But whole day I was busy with official meetings….And why are you sayinng sorry ? Today day time even if you have called also I wouldn’t have attended it….My schedule was hectic..
Poornima : Is it ? But bhaiya was telling you have an upset mood …..
Rajneesh : Sarthak bhaiya said like that …..Bhaiya toh bhaiya hote hein….Mere man ki baat jaanne waale Saale saab…….How is he ?
Poornima : 24 X 7 you both calle each other and talk with each other naa …Ask him directly….You love to talk with my brother only, not with me…Right ?
Rajneesh :No Poorna….It’s not like that. Actually bhaiya only bought your proposal to me naa and I respect him a lot….
Poornima : Mmmhh true…..I wish bhabhi also would join us at our marriage…
Rajneesh ; Actually I want to ask the same why they are living seperately ? What happened between them ?
Poornima : Even I don’t understand the reason….But I miss bhabi so much..
Rajneesh : Don’t worry ….Your bhabhi will come back…It’s Raj’s promise…I am arriving at this weekend…And everything will be alright….
Poornima : Really !!
Rajneesh : Yes..But I need a gift from you …
Poornima : Gift ? Kaisa gift ?
Rajneesh : A small kiss…Promise me you will kiss at my cheek if bhaiya himself bring bhabhi back to home…
Poornima : Done…Promise…
Rajneesh ; Sweet heart now wait and watch Raj’s magic…
At Sarthak’s flat
Sarthak gets a call from Rajneesh
Sarthak : Arrey chotu just now I was thinking about you…
Rajneesh : Saale saab….I havea request….
Sarthak : Bol chotu…
Rajneesh ; Please bring bhabhi back to home…Every problem has a solution.
Sarthak : Raj you don’t understand it….Better don’t talk about it..
Rajneesh : I won’t enquire what happened between you both. But Sarthak bhaiya …just imagine at marriage our friends, relatives all will ask about bhabhi…..How long you keep avoiding them ? Bhaiya I went almost on depression when my lover ditched me . Almost four years I didn’t thought about love , marriage and life….My life was mechanical. But bhaiya you only came to my home with your Paapa and asked my hand for your sister Poornima….That time also I was confused. But your motivating words made me to re think myself and I agreed for it. You are the mentor of my life and now it’s my turn to do something for you….Please bring bhabhi back..
Sarthak : Raj…I guess it won’t work …
Rajneesh : It will work ….Bhaiya you just set bhabi’s photo as your mobile’s wall paper and start sending messages …Sorry dear fault was mine ….Sorry.
Sarthak : But Raj..
Rajneesh : Do what I say….And see the magic of Raj..
Sarthak : Okay…
Sarthak looked at the wall and made a glance on his and Srishti’s photo frame
At Srishti’s home
Srishti ; Hey Kanhaji !! When will I get relief from problems ?
Srishti receives a message from Sarthak
Sorry for everything ” Sarthak ka message …. Kanhaji kya sach mein Sarthak badal chuke hein ? Mujhe lene aayenege kya ?
Suddenly she hears a flute music and she saw a little child dressed up like Baal Krishna . She smiled seeing the child….
She goes near the child and hugs the child with full of love….
If Sarthak was with me perhaps I would also get a Chotu Kahnaji at my lap….But in my fate only sadness is written….
That child : Maiya ….Kanha ghar pe aaye hein…Aur app roti rahogi kya har pal ?Mujhe kuch khilayiye na…
Srishti : Haan Kanhaiya….Mein bhi kaisi pagal…..
She holds the child’s hand and started walking…
Aaya nandlaal kanhaiya aaya gopal kanhaiya
Chit maakhan chor hein
Jake Maathe seer Mor hein
Maati se mukh saja
Makhan ki palki
Heere moti see laage
Akhiyan gopal kee
Aaj bhi har balak mein dikhti chavi nandlaal kee
Haathi ghoda palki Jai Kanhaiya Laal Kee
Srishti : Jai Kanhaiya laal kee !! Jai Kanha ji….
Beti !!
Srishti turned and sees her Paapa
Srishti ; Paapa dekhiye naa Chota saa Kanha Ji aaye hein…..Maine makhan khila dee, usse godhi mein bithayi…..
Maneesh : Srishti sambhalo beti….Koyi nahin hein wahan….
Srishti turned back and realized no one was there.
Srishti : Paapa sach mein Kanha ji aaye the….
Maneesh : Kaash Sarthak ke saath teri zindagi khushiyon se bhari hoti toh iss Janmashtami mein zarur tum donon ke saath tumhare bete yaa beti hote…
Srishti cries…
Maneesh : Dil chota na karo beta…Sab theek hoga…Sarthak zarur aayenge …..Take care…
Srishti nods her head…
To be continued….
9 Comments
Cover page is beautiful. Though I have not seen qayamat se I have seen some of the scenes and I really liked the couple.so i am happy to read a ff on them.i am surprised that this ff is based on guruvayoor ambalanadayil. I really like that movie.
Reference to nandanam in the climax made you feel like writing a ff on it means?I didn’t understand.
I was mentionting about Aravind’s entry in climax. Prithviraj thinking he have seen him somewhere it was funny to watch. Also after the marriage of Anaswara with Basil he saw the drone camera moving towards the temple and he saying Only I saw it reminded me Nandanam where Navya sees Unni entering inside Guruvayoor temple and telling Only I saw was so heart melting . While wathcing the climax of Guruvayoorambala nadayil it reminded me that scene from Nandanam. That particular scene made me to think about writing this one.
Rajneesh asking his parents to change the hall saying that the name of the hall is a bad luck for him was funny.surprised to see anuraj as poornima’s parents.like they said rajneesh and sarthak share a very special bond.sarthak telling poornima to call rajneesh was cute.rajneesh promising poornima to unite sarthak shrishti was nice.asking for a kiss in return was romantic. Shocking that vanraj didn’t allow sarthak to stay in their house after he asked shrishti to leave because of his suspicion.the scene of shrishti and the child who dressed up as krishna was cute.was it lord krishna who came in disguise of a child to meet shrishti as she is a worshipper of Krishna?her father consoling her was emotional. Nice pics.
Was shrishti a devotee of Lord krishna in the show too?
I liked the changes you made in this story.
I wish you had written nandanam also on gohem as gopi was a devotee of Krishna.
Nandanam is cult classic and it’s very difficult to recreate the original emotion which we get while watching it. You suggested me for writing Nandanam and I find it very tough. But after watching Guruvayoorambala Nadayil I thought to write story by adding some sort of changes which is not exactly like Nandanam but some moments where we can feel Lord Krishna’s presence. Srishti was not a devotee of Lord Krishna in Luka Chuppi. Those pics are taken from Aparna’s new show Tulsi hamari badi sayani ” which is currently airing on Dangal TV . She is in search of her lost daughter and during Janmashtami specialepisode her daughter dresses up like Lord Krishna and she gets united with her child with the blessings of Kanhaji. Just few days back that was aired on TV and I loved it very much. And I added those pics only. Thanks a lot.
Ha ha.Yes..I also found it very funny.How did u choose these 2 couples 4 this FF?
U r underestimating yourself.U r writing on a classic movie now(gandharva kshethram).It’s so beautiful.I am hundred percent sure that u can give full justice to Nandanam.That’s why I requested u.Bcz ur ffs r poetic and beautiful.
Thank you. But too difficult to write for Nandanam. I can’t even imagine any other actress as Navya did it whole heartedly…
That’s okay.how did you choose these 2 couples for this ff?
Luka Chupi was already in mind as I have watched it earlier. Was thinking about writing any story for Sarthak and Srishti but didn’t get idea. Later this movie made me to write for them. Poornima and Rajneesh are so cutest ones and I find they willl be suiting Basil and Anaswara’s roles…
Plz try to write 4 shots on Kushal Tandon Shivangi Joshi(Reyansh Aradhana)on Oru indian pranayakatha.Story is there in wiki.nausheen sardar played her mother in barsatein.but her real father was not shown.