The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 40

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*After 5 days*

(Kunj’s POV)

While I was passing the hall, bebe had stopped me in the middle.

“Kunj puttar come here”


I walk to her and sit on the sofa where she was sitting with a very confused expression.

“Now quickly select a girl from these pictures”

“Why bebe? Kiski shade karwani hai ab?”

“Nothing like that! My friend needed a help for his grandson so I’m asking you”


I look over all the pictures and find a girl who seemed very pretty, like having just the perfect features and all.

“Okay bebe, I’ll take a leave now! I’ve got some work to do”

I stand up, proceed towards the door and walk off.


I was back home and all were sitting on the sofa laughing. I went to them and asked what they were so happy about?

“I’m so happy for you! You chose just the prefect girl! I wanted the same” bebe spoke.

“Yes me too! But Kunj how did you agree on this? I’m so surprised” maa said, excited.

“Wait! Can someone tell me what’s happening here?” I asked.

“Well, you’ve a girl to see for your marriage!” twinkle replied.

“What? Why?” I asked, irritated.

“I did all this cause I know you wouldn’t have agreed otherwise. So get ready! They’re coming tomorrow evening!” bebe spoke while I stood there amused.

“I’m so happy for you!!” Twinkle spoke while hugging me and I knew what she really meant.

“You guys are impossible” I said and left from there.


“OMG! What have I done? and now Twinkle is mad at me! I’m stuck so bad!” I think to myself.

Someone knocks the door and it was di. 

“Come in di! Why are you standing there?”

“Kunj, you alright?”

“Kaha se alright di? Firstly, bebe did this and then Twinkle is so mad about it!”

“Toh mana use?”

“But how?”

“Now that’s your job! I’ve done mine by helping you!”

“Okay! I got what I have to do. Thank you di”


I tip-toe towards the kitchen where I see her working. I quietly wrap my arms around her waist and she jumped in shock but before she could scream, I covered her mouth with my hand.

“What are you doing Kunj?”

“Romancing with my love! Is it a crime?”

“Well, it wasn’t before but now that you’re gonna see someone for your marriage .. romance with her isn’t it?”

“Oh c’mon dude! Do you really think I’ll marry someone else other than you? Is this how much you believe me?”

“Kunj, stop playing with words! I’m just making my point which is pretty obvious! Go romance with your would be wife and not me!”

“That’s exactly what I’m doing!”

“Shut up! I’ve got work to do! Bye!”

She pushes me away from her and I end up hitting my arm on the marble.



She leaves all her work and comes to my rescue to see if I was alright.

“Kunj will you always be a kid? Take care of yourself. See you’re bleeding so much”

I begin laughing to which I could see her face changing expressions.

“Are you psycho?”

I don’t reply instead show her the packet of ketchup that I had in my hand, hidden from here.

“What of this?”

She took another couple of seconds to understand what I meant while I still was laughing.

“Kunj, I HATE YOU” saying this she turned around and resumed the work she was doing.

“Aww, myy baby is upset? Really?”


“You wan’t me to leave?”

“Okay then! I’ll marry her only! You don’t want to stay with me right?”

“Yea bye! I’ll be so happy without you!”

“You sure?”


“Okay! Bye”



*The next day – Evening*

(Twinkle’s POV)

“Can you all hurry up? Don’t you know they can be arriving any moment”.

Bebe has been screaming at everyone present in this house to work faster with the arrangements for the guest coming shortly.

Everyone was busy with some or the other work except Kunj. He was sitting very peacefully and was busy with his phone.

“Hi? Excited to meet your would be wife?”

“Of course! Who wouldn’t be?”

“True that”

“You okay?”

“Is that a question to be asked? I always am okay!”

“Well your face says something else”

“Oh shut up! My face isn’t a mirror that it’ll tell you what I feel or not!”

Just then our conversation is put on hold as we hear the doorbell.

“Yay! She’s here” Kunj screams in excitement.

“Really? He’s excited for this?” I thought to myself.

Mahi bhabhi goes to open the door and they were there! I could see a couple, maybe the parents of the girl and yes a girl in her early 20s dressed up in a combination of grey and red suit. She had tied her in a messy ponytail with some really simple yet elegant jhumkas and very light make-up which really looked pretty on her.

Bebe called all of them in and made them comfortable. They were served with snacks and all the items prepared for them.

“Waise ji, your daughter is really pretty” bebe spoke to start up the conversation.

“Haan, bebe is absolutely right! She really is an epitome of beauty. Btw, what your name dear?” Usha aunty added.

“My name is Khyati” the girl replied.

While all this was happening I noticed that Kunj was just staring at her. No blink, no checking of his phone even after notifications. Just staring as if he has never seen a girl before in his life.

“Aisa kya hai ismein jo Kunj ise is tarah se taad raha hai? (What does she have that Kunj is staring at her?) I admit she is pretty but not more than me! You’re so doomed Mr Sarna” I talk to myself.

All the elders were talking but I could see Kunj and Khyati exchanging glances.

“Okay, let’s give these kids a little time to talk to each other” bebe spoke.

“Yea they really should. Kunj take Khyati to the garden” Usha aunty spoke.

“Ji maa” he replied and the two walked away to the garden leaving me sitting here like a mofo.

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Hey all! I know this part isn’t up-to the mark so please forgive me! Hoping all you will still support me and read this bullshit.

Love you! x

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  1. Ria

    Did Kunj just do this on her face? ??? Omg! This is so damn funny. This episode ?? I love this couple. They’re kissing in one moment and the next moment they don’t talk to each other. Absolutely loved the update and looking forward to the next one. Hope you can update soon, love.

    All my love,

    1. Kritika14

      HAHAh thank you love!

  2. Presha

    Hey it was damn funny loved twinkljealous nd awesome epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  3. Adya

    Hey kriti di,
    How are you? I know you’re perfect like me.??? And hope you’re doing well with your studies.

    Anyways, coming to the chapter. Well I already know but after reading this episode I must admit that twinj are the sweetest and cutest couple ever. They fight , they love, they care .. they do everything and I love them like anything. The episode was hilarious I must say.

    Now.. post the soonest you can and yah, don’t expect anything from my regarding my FF. I’m nowadays as busy as the prime Minister.???

    Love you!??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! and my dear, PRIME MINISTER ? I’ve posted the next part already, so take out time from your busy schedule and check it out! ? Will be looking forward to see your comment!

      Love you!

  4. Chiku

    Woaaah!!! Lovely
    Is kinj gone mad???????
    Loved it. Post soon

    1. Kritika14

      HAHAH you’ll get to know it soon!

  5. Kritika dii it was funny and superbbbb?????

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  6. Sara28

    Hey Kritika,
    Just loved it! Oh poor Kunj? He fell into Bebe’s trap! Hope he does something to lessen Twinkles anger. I loved that ” my face isn’t a mirror ” diolugue. I have a feeling that kunj and Khyati is up to something. Anyways, can’t wait for the next episode. I know ur busy so I won’t pressurize u to post soon. But I’ll be waiting. Lots of love ❤️

    1. Kritika14

      Well, your instinct turned out to be true ? Loves! x

  7. SidMin

    Loved it ….. bechara Kunj got into bebe’s trick…. ???? Angry Twinkle is so cute ??
    Love you post soon ?

    1. Kritika14

      HAHA thank you!

  8. Whatttttt…… oh god yeh kya tha.?????? is kunj gone mad yarr,?? or he is going smthng upto,?? even twnki didn react also,?? but such a hilarious episode,??? well excited 4 next update,??post next soon,☺☺
    Love you,❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      HAHHA I’m glad you liked it! The next post is already up! x

  9. SidMin23

    It was funny ? ? and nice episode kunj got into Bebe trick and twinkle jealous ? And what kunj keep looking on her do post soon

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  10. Kruti

    The epi was Amazing….I so loved d update
    Continue asap

    Loads of love?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  11. RUTU.....

    Awesome episode dear do continue soon

  12. Baby

    ohk soooooo did kunj really did dis wid twinkle hahahahaa………..
    bt well why was he staring her like anything srsly need kunjs pov on dis thing well nt plssss post nxt asap cant wait for scnd more to read further……..
    loved it soooo mch cute n sad…..
    love u lods☺♥♥☺☺☺♥♥☺

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! I’ll see upon adding Kunj’s POV soon! x

  13. Twinjfan.tamanna

    its too much awesome yaar… I mean I really loved it… hehehe twinkle jealous…

    with love,
    Urs Tamanna

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  14. Hey kriti

    Awesome amazing
    Kunj marriage wid other n twinkle jeolousy was superb
    Love u keep smiling

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  15. HEY! This chapter was so hilarious, I couldn’t stop my laughter ? and why do you say that this is bullshit? It’s really one of the best ff present in this site so stop underestimating your work! Post the next one real soon!

    Love you ?

    1. Kritika14

      Aww thank you! x

  16. Shalini15

    Hey Kritika,It was awesome amazing fabulous episode. loved twinkles jealousy nd kunj naughtiness. loved it too much.? please post next asap.

    Lots of love ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next one is already posted! x

  17. Aanya_pandey

    That was a superb update.. Twinkle k reaction.. They were well explained.. Just loved this new track u are adding

    1. Aanya_pandey

      With this shaadi ka angle

    2. Kritika14

      Really glad you’re liking it! x

  18. Romaisha

    Wow.. This twistt!!!! ????
    Damnnnn it was actuallyy very funny and yeah shocking but funny ???
    Ok.. Twinkle is being ridiculous but oh well.. Let’s see what you planned ?
    Awesome episode by the way as usual ??
    Loads of love! ?
    Post soon 😀

    1. Kritika14

      HAHAHA seems like it really was that hilarious that everyone seems to be laughing!? Anyway, thank you! And yes, so that you don’t blame me later .. informing you that the next part is already up! You can now read it! x

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