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Home»Fan Fiction»End less love story (part 20) last part
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End less love story (part 20) last part

AstraBy AstraJune 28, 201731 Comments9 Mins Read
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Previous part: Part 19
Part 20: last part

Laksh and Sanskar are shocked to look at Ragini. She was holding the gun.

Ragini looks at Laksh and remembers his words.

“Ragini, you have to see in all directions before you think.. once, you took the step, you can’t take it back..!!”

Ragini: yes Laksh, you are right. But you know, blind trust makes us not to see all the ways. Bcz, we trust them. And, who knows, they are cheating like this?

Laksh looks on…

Ragini: I have defeated you in chess game, but.. you have defeated me in this love game..!! Not you both, it’s me who has lost..!!

Laksh and Sanskar looks on…

Ragini takes deep breath.

Ragini: Laksh, Sanskar… you both were good friends. But.. just for me, you have turned enemies.

Lak san looks at each other.

Ragini smiles painfully,
“I don’t know, a girl do this much..?? all this war, this hatred was just for me..!!”

Laksan looks on…

Ragini: Laksh, you have cheated each and everyone to portrait Sanskar bad in everyone’s eyes.. it was your mistake. And Sanskar, you have blamed me for the mistake which I haven’t done..!! that’s your mistake. And, the harsh truth is, I’m hurt because of you both of them..!!

Laksh and Sanskar keeps looking at Ragini.

Ragini: now, it’s all over. For what you are fighting now..??

Ragini looks at Sanskar,
“Sanskar, it was truth that I had liked you once. It was not my mistake to like my to be husband, because every girl does this. but, the minute when you said those things about me, in that minute only I have destroyed the dream palace I constructed for you..! Not only me Sanskar, no girl will accept a boy who blames her character..!! this is mean..!!!

Sanskar bends his head. Now, Ragini shifts her gaze at Laksh. Her eyes turn teared as soon as she looked at Laksh.

Ragini: but Laksh, you are different from him. Apart from the cheating you did, I loved you many things in you.. Laksh, you have entered into my life as a caring friend. That day, when you proved my innocence, I felt why Sanskar was not like you..??

Laksh looks at her in tears. Sanskar looks at Laksh.

Ragini: I forgot all my misery, all my sadness in your friendship. In your love. I got a second chance to restart my life. I was getting happy just because of you Laksh. And, I have fall for you. I wouldn’t have loved if that was other guy. But, it’s you..!! How can’t I love a guy like you..??

Laksh smiles in tears.. Ragini continues,

“It was all… it was all only bcz the concern you showed on me. I can clearly see what you felt for me..!! that Love has made me to love you Laksh…”

Laksh gets a smile.. sanskar looks on…

Ragini: if you have at least said me, that you have done these things, I may have excused you. But, still you have tried to cover everything..!!

Laksh: Ragini…

Ragini shows her hand to stop them.

Ragini: today, sirf, I will talk..!!

Laksan looks at her.

Ragini: you were fighting for me all these days. I will give the final judgment of this endless tale..

Ragini points gun towards LakSan.

Laksh and Sanskar looks at her expressionless.

Ragini: no.. no. it was not you. It was me, who has leave the world..!!

Ragini points gun to herself.

“If I will leave, there won’t be any problem..!!” she is about to press trigger.

Then Laksh starts speaking,
“Ragini, you have talked till now. give me chance also to speak..! yeah, it was true that I have cheated your family in case of Sanskar. But, not you..!! Look at that sky Ragini, it has never changed. look at those mountains.. they have never changed..!! my love is also same Ragini. It has never changed. Ragini… you are the first and last person I love..! kill me.., but don’t harm yourself..!!”

Ragini was looking at Laksh…

And..

Sanskar laughs suddenly, Ragini looks at him confused.

Laksh too looks at Sanskar confused.

San: those gun doesn’t have bullets. Why you guys are so emotional..?
Sanskar is trying to control laugh.

Then Laksh remembers Sanskar taking out all bullets and putting only one. That one was fired by Ragini into sky.

Laksh remembers it and he too laughs. {yeah, then she was threatening all with empty gun know}

Ragini still looks confused. She looks at gun innocently. Looking at her LakSan laughs.. Laksh goes near Sanky and gives him hifi.

Ragini keeps looking at them.

Laksh: I’m sorry Sanky..

Sanskar: I’m sorry Lucky..!

Both gets tears and hugs each other. Ragini’s eyes get wet looking at them. She smiles.

Ap, sujatha smiles in tears who saw all the scene and hugs each other.

{Guys, I know.. you might be amazing why they have changed suddenly..? bcz, there might be years of anger.. but, one minute is enough to excuse everything. Bcz, they are bond by friendship.}

Ragini leaves the gun in her hand and wipes her tears. She turns back and about to step away.

“Ragini” calls Sanskar.

She stops, but.. doesn’t turn back.

San: let’s forget everything. I wish, you and lucky should start a new life. Whatever I did was being angry on Laksh. But, I won’t disturb you ever. Let’s be friends.

Ragini facing other side itself,
“Sanskar, you can excuse your friend very easily. But.. I’m his wife. I can’t excuse him.”

Laksh looks confused at her. he comes forward to her.

“Ragini, please. See, even our villain Sanskar has changed..!”

Sanskar on other side makes his eyes big. Laksh winks eye to him.

“Everything is set now. let’s start new life…”
Laksh says, but Ragini is silent.

Finally, Laksh kneel downs before her.

“Ragini, one chance Ragini. One chance..!! please take my hand..” Laksh says.

Sanskar is looking at them in smile.

But, Ragini silently walks away… Laksh bends his head sadly. Sanskar comes and makes Laksh stand.

Ragini keeps going away……

=============================

After two months,

A mansion is decorated very grandly. All people are busy. Laksh and Sanskar are in a room. Laksh is making Sanskar ready.

“Man, you look perfect..!!” says Laksh setting his sherwani buttons.

“everything is ok, but.. is Ragini talking to you..?” Sanskar asks.

“haaannnnn..!!” Laksh bends his head sadly.

“go and talk with her now. go..!!” Sanskar pushes Laksh out.

Laksh comes out and searches for Ragini.

Ragini was arranging everything and instructing maids to decorate everything. Meanwhile, she is talking with Ap, Sujatha and swara.

Ragini was taking a tray of flowers and suddenly she is dragged aside by a strong hand. She leaves the tray. Before she could realize who’s it, she was pinned to wall and her mouth is covered by a hand.

Ragini makes her eyes big.. Laksh was looking at her intensely.

“Enough Ragini. You have given me good punishment. You didn’t talk to me since two months. I can’t wait anymore.” Laksh says.

Ragini was just looking at him. Laksh removes his hand slowly. Her lips are in a slight smile. But, she makes them normal soon.

Laksh places his hand on wall and bends to her,
“Hey, I know you are acting. Please stop it now..!!”

Ragini holds her hands on her tummy and looks at him in, ‘what will you do..??” look.

Laksh: Ragini, if you don’t talk to me now.. I’m going to…

Ragini looks at him for the answer… Laksh looks at her.

Ragini was trying to control her smile. Laksh cups her face. Ragini frees her hand.

Laksh: Ragini, final chance. Talk to me. Otherwise..!!

Ragini is just looking at him silently.

Laksh moves closer to her and soon smashes his lips on hers. Ragini shocks initially. But, while his lips are moving sensually on her’s, she closes her eyes and wraps her hands around his neck and back and responds him.

Both are kissing each other lost, as it was 60 days they talked with each other. Yes, Ragini was angry on him. But, it doesn’t mean she lost love on him. She only know how she missed him. But, he deserve that punishment. And, she know very well how she hurt him all these days ignoring him. She was talking with everyone around her, but rejected only him. Now, it’s enough. He has bore his punishment. Now, it’s time to patch up everything.

Both Raglak are pulling each other into them to make it a deep and deeper kiss.

Finally, they apart as they hear the pandit ji’s announcement to bride and bridegroom to come.

Thank god, no one watched them.

RagLak goes into hall hand in hand. Sanskar was sitting on planks, and beside him Kavitha, the bride chosen by his parents and Ragini. Swara and Sahil are also standing hand in hand. Family has excused and excepted them.

Sanskar looks at RagLak hands together and he shows thumbs up to Laksh. Laksh too nods his head happily.

“Laksh, it’s true I have missed Ragini. But, more than me.. she deserves you. Let’s be like good friends as before..!!” Sanskar word’s reflects in Laksh’s mind. He holds Ragini’s hand.

“Ragini, I promise I will take care of you. Forever and ever..!!” he says. Ragini places her head on his shoulder, “I know Laksh”

Later, Sanskar holds Kavitha’s hand.

“Kavitha, I promise.. I will trust you always and be a good husband..” he says. She smiles.

SanKav marriage completes. All are happy.

At night, sankav are in their room.

Raglak are sitting on terrace.

“Ragini, look at those starts.. they have never changed. same is my love, it never changes..!!” says LAskh.

Ragini was putting her head in his lap.

“Really?” she asks.

Laksh who was rubbing her head, ‘don’t you know?’

‘Hmmm..? I don’t know..!’ she asks..

“See now..!!” he says and bends to her. Ragini closes her eyes and that night looks at the lovely love making of those honey couple.

>>>>>>>>>>>> THE END <<<<<<<<<<<<<

Guys, you know very well Astra never separates RagLak, whatever. Now, that’s the end of story.

And don’t miss epilogue.. bcz.. it will be..

‘Ang laga de ree…’ of RagLak..!!

From Astra’s creation box.

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    31 Comments

    1. Sindhura on June 28, 2017 4:08 pm

      Awesome

    2. nymisha281 on June 28, 2017 4:30 pm

      awesome diiii….
      tnx dii …for not separating raglak.
      u gave it a perfect ending..
      gonna miss this ff very badly….
      want more ff from u
      keep writing….tack care
      lv u..bye

    3. Asw on June 28, 2017 4:35 pm

      Nice sanskar said these have no bullet ? lol keep going ?

    4. Pearly on June 28, 2017 4:41 pm

      Awesome

    5. Ann on June 28, 2017 4:54 pm

      Amazing…….. Cute Ragu…… Awesome friendship…….

    6. Arjuna on June 28, 2017 5:03 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    7. Sherin on June 28, 2017 5:33 pm

      Awesome dear

    8. Elizabethlovely on June 28, 2017 5:41 pm

      Lovely episode

    9. Laashya on June 28, 2017 6:07 pm

      Awesome episode and can’t wait for next

    10. DivzS on June 28, 2017 6:14 pm

      Nice one

    11. Follybraverl on June 28, 2017 6:28 pm

      Awesome astra waiting for ang Laga de re

    12. Naagin on June 28, 2017 6:40 pm

      Nice ending

    13. Vennila on June 28, 2017 6:41 pm

      Awesome

    14. Soumya on June 28, 2017 6:45 pm

      Simply superb di…post next soon

    15. abi on June 28, 2017 7:12 pm

      Amazing
      I know you will never separate RAGLAK
      Waiting for epilogue

    16. Aamy on June 28, 2017 7:18 pm

      Awesome end

    17. Ankita on June 28, 2017 7:49 pm

      Superb waiting for epiloge

    18. avika on June 28, 2017 8:05 pm

      Awesome

    19. Akshata on June 28, 2017 8:54 pm

      eeehahaha evil laugh…. u know y ??? becoz i knew it already ragini will never hurt him or leave him or stop loving him, Astra devi ji ki kripa jo hai laksh ke upar, unka hath humesha laksh ke sir par rahta hai. Ragini kya jayegi use chhodkar. Astra will never do it…. hai na Astra…..??
      awesome chappy with humor, poor ragu both made fun of her. waiting for the next

    20. Mitra on June 28, 2017 9:20 pm

      Awesome awesome awesome

    21. Anju on June 28, 2017 9:21 pm

      Awesome update

    22. Jiyani on June 28, 2017 9:47 pm

      Awesome dear….thanks for not separating raglak

    23. Malu on June 29, 2017 4:36 pm

      Amazing part

    24. Ashly on June 29, 2017 4:58 pm

      Awesome superb

    25. Monu on June 29, 2017 5:01 pm

      Interesting

    26. Monisha on June 29, 2017 5:03 pm

      Awesome

    27. Vini on June 29, 2017 5:08 pm

      Loved it

    28. Ammu on June 29, 2017 7:15 pm

      It’s interesting episode dear ???? loved Raglak scenes ???

    29. Thahseem on June 29, 2017 7:34 pm

      Awesome

    30. hemalattha on June 29, 2017 9:12 pm

      Awesome. Going to miss this ff.

    31. teitokUn1718 on June 30, 2017 9:30 am

      Loved it….
      Hahaha no bullets ?…
      Missed the​ FF…

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