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End less love story (part 19)

AstraBy AstraJune 23, 201729 Comments6 Mins Read
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Previous: All Parts here

Friendship vs love

Part 19

Laksh and Sanskar are standing at the cliff.

Laksh: what is your problem Sanskar..?

Sanskar: you..!! you are my problem Laksh..!!

Laksh: that was all bcz of you sanky..!!

San: what..? getting engaged to Ragini..?? Lucky, if you have said me, that you loved Ragini.. I would have scarified her to you..!!

Laksh laughs sarcastically now. Sanskar looks on. Laksh laughs and sits on the front of car.

Lak: so, mr. sacrificing soul..!! sacrifice her to me now, and see your own way..!!

Now, Sanskar laughs and looks at Laksh.

San: I said about past lucky..!! now, you have done so much to me..! why will I leave you..??

Laksh looks at him.

San: you would have begged me to give Ragini to you. I would have taken pity on you being a friend..! but, you snatched her from me lucky..!!

Laksh looks at him through the spects.

Lak: I have inspired from you sanky. It’s you who said me once to fight and gain love and everything is fair in love and war..!!

Sanskar remembers that sometime he said those words.

Lak: how would I reject my friend’s words..?

San: so, the friend said you to follow such ways..? to spoil your friend’s name..?

Laksh gets off from car,
“Friendship means that Sanky..! you have to become a prey for your friend..!!”

Sanskar gives a sarcastic smirk,
“that’s why Lucky, I’m using your name now, as you used mine once..!!”

Laksh tights his fists glaring at him.

San: I’m teaching your lessons to you..!

Lak: but Ragini is loving me now Sanskar..!!

San: what Ragini..? who just said you hate you..!!

Laksh looks shocked.

San: now Ragini neither loves me nor you..!! it’s ok, if I don’t get her. but, I won’t let you to get her..!!

Laksh anger touches peaks and he gives a blow to Sanskar on face. Sanskar keeps his face aside and looks at the blood mark from his lips edge. He rubs it, and moves near Laksh.
Then Sanskar hits Laksh in the face.
Laksh falls on the car. He glares at Sanskar looking back.

White flashes appear on both their faces. Laksh removes his over coat and keeps it on the car.

Now, Laksh blows his hand on Sanskar. But, Sanskar holds his hand. Both are glaring at each other.

The sky becomes cloudy…

The scene shifts to Ragini who is coming to that area with Sujatha, Ap and Dp.

Here, SanLak continues their war.

Laksh hits Sanskar in tummy, he shouts in pain.

“I wanted to kill you like this whenever Ragini took your name sanskar..!!” shouts Laksh.

Now, Sanskar pushes him and beats him in his tummy with his elbow.

Laksh falls down, Sanskar keeps leg on him and presses,

“Even I wanted to kill you like this, when you married the girl who actually has to be mine..!!”

Laksh pushes his feet back.

Both hold each other’s collar.

Laksh beats him on head and finally both falls on opposite sides. Both look at the gun which has fallen down.

Both runs to grab it, but Sanskar takes it to hand. He points it to Laksh.

“Not only you Laksh..! Even, I can do anything for love..!!” Sanskar is about to press the trigger.

Suddenly a flash appears before his eyes,
In their childhood when laksh has hugged him.. their sanky-Lucky friendship.. and, Laksh saves him from an accident.

Sanskar removes his finger from the trigger.

Lak: shoot me, why did you stop..??

San: this soon..? let’s put an exciting end for this game..!!

Laksh looks on..

Sanskar removes all the bullets from the gun except one. Sanskar looks at Laksh. He remembers Laksh saying in childhood,

“If I love something, it should be mine..!”

But, that lesson is thought by Sanskar to him. “lucky, if you love anything, you should fight to get it..!!”

Sanskar understands his lesson back fired to him.

San: let’s put an end for this game Laksh..!!

Lak: what’s the deal..?

San: there is one bullet in this. let’s shoot ourselves. Who survives, they get Ragini..!

Laksh soon grabs gun from Sanskar and points to his head. Sanskar looks shocked.

Laksh keeps gun to his head temple and about to press trigger, but he soon starts laughing.

Sanskar confuses.

Lak: what did you think Sanskar..? I’m that fool..??

Then Laksh points gun to Sanskar shocking him.

“Anything for Ragini..!!” says Laksh and about to press trigger. Sanky looks at him in red eyes.

A small flash appears before Laksh’s eyes. Their childhood, ‘Sanky’ was only his bestie. Who supported him when he was weak.

Laksh was holding the gun, but the finger can’t reach the trigger.

Laksh and Sanskar both look at each other, while the wind is blowing strong.

A tiny flash back…

A five years boy is shouting for help who’s leg is stuck in between stones and a lorry is about to hit him. Other same age boy just comes and throws those stones aside. He saves him.
The 2nd boy cleans wound on his leg.
“My name is Laksh, what is your name..?” 2nd boy asks cleaning his wound.

“Sanskar..!” 1st boy says.

‘friends..?’ laksh asks..

Sanskar gives shake hand,
‘friends..!” he says.
That was the place they met 1st time.
Fb end…

Laksh and Sanskar keep looking at each other and sanky is at the edge of his gun.

They again go into other fb,

The same place…

“Happy friendship day Sanky..!!” Laksh hugs him.

“On this friendship day, the start of our new company..!!” Says Sanskar and opens the beer bottle.

Both shouts in joy which reflects in that valley..

Fb end…

A tear drops and falls down from Laksh’s eye. Sanskar was looking at him in red eyes.

Suddenly Ragini’s face appears before Laksh’s eyes.

“I love you Laksh” he remembers her words. and at same time,
“I hate you..!!” her words.

Laksh tights his grip on gun as soon as remembering it. he is about to press trigger, Sanskar grabs his hand and beats him in tummy. The gun falls.

Sanskar and Laksh are fighting again.

A girl hand is shown who takes that gun from ground.

Then, they suddenly they hear the sound of the bullet. They look aside.

Ragini is standing with the gun.

Laksh and Sanskar frees each other from their clutches.

Ragini’s eyes are red enough to burn them together in anger. Her eyes are showing disgust, hurt and anger.

Three are standing looking at each other.

The screen fades.

Precap: Ragini’s big lesson to both of them. What’s her ultimate decision..?

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    29 Comments

    1. abi on June 23, 2017 11:25 pm

      Will ragini shot herself??
      It’s going to be endless ??
      Don’t know

    2. Asw on June 23, 2017 11:33 pm

      Superb their friendship, love war for ragini it’s amazing​ update fast for epilogue Dr keep going

    3. Rakhi on June 24, 2017 12:13 am

      Interesting. Can’t wait for the next part

    4. thicksha on June 24, 2017 2:39 am

      Plz give happy ending dr I want raglak

    5. avika on June 24, 2017 6:21 am

      amazingg… waiting for next part

    6. Mitra on June 24, 2017 6:28 am

      Awesome

    7. teitokUn1718 on June 24, 2017 6:49 am

      Loved it…

    8. teitokUn1718 on June 24, 2017 6:52 am

      Superb Dp?

    9. Soumya on June 24, 2017 10:33 am

      Simply superb di….post next soon

    10. Arjuna on June 24, 2017 10:48 am

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    11. Anju on June 24, 2017 11:01 am

      Awesome update

    12. naina- on June 24, 2017 1:22 pm

      Awesome dude what a suspense dying to read next epi

    13. Vennila on June 24, 2017 1:33 pm

      Awesome

    14. DivzS on June 24, 2017 2:10 pm

      Superb.. Lovely story.. If possible, extend it…. Waiting for next

    15. Elizebathlovely on June 24, 2017 2:33 pm

      Awesome

    16. Laashya on June 24, 2017 2:50 pm

      Wonderful story and loved it

    17. Aamy on June 24, 2017 3:41 pm

      Awesome

    18. Malu on June 24, 2017 3:42 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    19. Ashly on June 24, 2017 4:57 pm

      Awesome fantastic

    20. Monu on June 24, 2017 5:34 pm

      Awesome episode

    21. nymisha281 on June 24, 2017 7:23 pm

      akka asalu intha baga nuvu elaa raastav
      awesome episode…..
      waiting for ragu decision….
      waiting for next part…

    22. Megha on June 24, 2017 7:27 pm

      Amazing

    23. Vini on June 24, 2017 7:36 pm

      Interesting

    24. Pearly on June 24, 2017 8:34 pm

      Awesome

    25. Jiyani on June 24, 2017 8:44 pm

      Awesome episode…what will happen next

    26. Sherin on June 24, 2017 9:23 pm

      Awesome dear

    27. Ammu on June 24, 2017 10:02 pm

      WOW it’s interesting episode dear ??? sanlak friendship scenes are beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP ???????????

    28. Monisha on June 24, 2017 10:15 pm

      Awesome

    29. hemalattha on June 29, 2017 9:04 pm

      Nice

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