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Home»Fan Fiction»Eloped- A Swasan os
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Eloped- A Swasan os

Mariyam123By Mariyam123November 12, 2016Updated:November 12, 201663 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello lovely people? I m Mariyam aka Louella.. I m a fan of Swasan as well as Raglak.. Only a few people know me as I comment on the serial IKRS only, but today I thought to give it a try for Swasan also.. I m sorry if there are any mistakes or if it is boring.. So lets go..

A girl and boy are seen running away from some goons who are behind them.. They somehow escape and sit in the bus which is going to Mumbai.. (The girl is Swara and the boy is Sanskaar)
The goons enter the same bus in which Swasan are hiding.. Swara puts ghungat from her dupatta while Sanskaar puts on the moustache and sunglasses which he had kept in his pocket..
The goons check each and every person there, they see Swasan and stare at them..
Goon 1- Hey girl, take out your ghungat, we want to see your face..
Sanskaar(in a different voice)- How dare u tell my wife to take out her ghungat? Its a sin for a woman to show her face to any man..
Goon 2- Ok ok..(shows him Swasan’s photo) Have u seen these two anywhere?
Sanskaar- No.. Who they are to us that we will see them?
The goons leave..
Swara takes out her ghungat while Sanskaar removes his moustache and sunglasses and they both sigh in relief..
Swara(smiles)- Arey wah! What an acting..
Sanskaar(smiles)- After all I m Sanskaar Maheshwari..
They both laugh..
The bus leaves.. Soon they reach Mumbai.. They both get down of the bus..

(Okay so till now u must have understood what has happened, Swasan love each other but their families are against this as Swara belongs to a rich family while Sanskaar belongs to a poor family. So they run away and marry in a temple and now they are set to go to Mumbai to live a happy life but Swara’s father has sent his goons to kill both of them as he loves his respect more than his daughter.. Will Swasan be able to overcome all hurdles and lead a happily married life?)

Swara(gets tensed)- Sanskaar, where will we go now? We don’t have anyone who can help us. And my father will do anything to find us..
Sanskaar(caresses her face)- Shh, don’t worry, first we will have food, then we will find a place for us to live, okay?
(Swasan have bought some money and jewellery with them, so that they can make up for their daily expenses)
They both go in a nearby restaurant and have lunch.. Now they go to the jewellers shop. Swara sells her gold ring and necklace and they get some money..
Swasan reach in a village where there are only huts. A man helps them get a hut where they can stay.. The hut is very dirty but Swasan together clean the hut..
Swara(sighs in relief)- Thank God! Its cleaned now..
Sanskaar laughs at her..
Swara- Am I looking like a joker that u are laughing like this?
Sanskaar(controls his laugh)- See ur face, the dust is on ur nose(rubs her nose) now gone..
Swara- Accha Sanskaar, I’ll call maa and tell her that we both are safe here..
Sanskaar- Okay, but take care, till then I’ll bring something for us to eat in the night..
And they both leave in different ways..

Swara goes to a shop where there is a telephone, she puts the coin in it and then dials the number of her home..
Her mother takes up the call…
Sharmishta- Hello..
Swara(says emotionally)- Hello Maa..
Sharmishta- Hello Swara, where r u beta? Are u fine?
Swara- Ha maa I m fine, and I m Mumbai with Sanskaar..
Sharmishta(has tears in her eyes)- Swara, beta, please come back.. Ur papa is so much tensed about u, he is searching u everywhere..
Swara- No maa, I will not come back, if u could have accepted Sanskaar before, I would be with u all there, but now its too late maa, Bye…
She cuts the call..
Shekhar, who heard it was Swara, comes to Sharmishta..
Shekhar- Sharmishta, to whom were u talking to?
Sharmishta- Woh I was talking to Ragini..
Shekhar slaps her tightly..
Shekhar(shouts)- I know u were talking to Swara.. Where is she? Tell me fast, or u will not be saved today..
Sharmishta(cries)- She is in Mumbai…
Shekhar calls someone and asks him to check every corner of Mumbai and if they find Swasan, kill them…

Days passed and Swasan spent romantic moments with each other, they tried to adjust in the small hut with love, while the goons were checking every corner of Mumbai.. Shekhar’s anger was increasing day by day, he used to remove all his anger on Sharmishta by beating her..

One day,
Swara and Sanskaar were spending some romantic moments when the goons reached there, Swasan were shocked to see them..
One of the goon removes his gun and points at Swara, but Sanskaar comes in between and takes the bullet..

Swara wakes up with a jerk.. Yes it was her dream..
Sanskaar(caresses her face)- Shona, what happened?
Swara doesn’t say anything but hugs him tightly and cries..
Swara(breaks the hug and cries)- Sanskaar, those goons, they had come here.. They were going to…
Sanskaar(keeps his finger on hers)- Shh, calm down(hugs her) nothing has happened, it was a dream, just a dream..
In this way Swara always used to get such dreams but Sanskaar was always there to calm her down.. Swara now stitches clothes to earn money, while Sanskaar has opened a tea stall.. They both work very hard to earn money..

One day,
Shekhar’s goons see Sanskaar selling tea.. But they wonder where is Swara…
So one of the goon calls Shekhar and tell him about it..
Shekhar- Keep a watch at him, where he goes, what he does and find out where is Swara and where they live..

For a few days the goon keeps a watch on Sanskaar. And while keeping a watch at him, he comes to know that Swasan live in a hut and that Swara stitches clothes to earn money while Sanskaar has opened a tea stall..
When they tell this to Shekhar, he orders him to kill them!

So one day when both Swasan were at home, two goons came in diguise of guests..
Swara went to the kitchen to get something for them to drink, but when she came out she saw Sanskaar in pool of blood, and the goons have gone because the villagers had seen them with a gun and threatened them to call the police, so they could not kill Swara…
Swara goes to Sanskaar and makes his head rest on her lap..
Sanskaar(breathes heavily)- Swa..Swara..gi..give..mee a..pro..promise…th..that..u..wi..will..no..not..be..become.. wea..weak..but..stay..stro..strong..and..fulf..fulfill..ur…dre…dreams..pro..promise..mee.
Swara(gets teary eyed)- Yes Sanskaar.. I will do it for u.. I will live for u.. But plz don’t leave me.. Please..
Sanskaar(smiles)- I..lo..love..uu..Swa..Swara..
And he breathed his last..
Swara cried out loud to him but now he had already left him..
Today Swara is a great fashion designer, but still she has not forgotten her Sanskaar who taught her to live… She loves him still the way she used to before…
THE END…

I hope u liked it.. Sorry if it was boring, all comments are welcomed? Sorry if I wasted ur time.. Meet u in the comments sections…

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Mariyam123

    Hey guys! Myself Mariyam or u can say Louella.. I m a die hard fan of the serial IKRS?

    63 Comments

    1. Simin on November 12, 2016 5:42 pm

      Its not boring dear but sad ending
      Gosh why all are ready to make us cry

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 5:53 pm

        Thanks dear.. Sorry for making u cry?

    2. Sanswa on November 12, 2016 5:46 pm

      Hey u made me cry, y sad ending..?? Anyways u rocked dear..

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 5:54 pm

        Thanks dear? Sorry for making u cry? Next time will try to give a happy ending..

    3. Shrinjal on November 12, 2016 5:46 pm

      Louella… This was really really amazing dear?????
      Emotianal too??????

      Keep writing them!

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 5:55 pm

        Thanks a lot Shrinjal di??

    4. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on November 12, 2016 6:01 pm

      Aaaaa,it’s so emotional and heart touching os*crying….loved it dear*still sobbing… Keep writing like this…
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 6:14 pm

        Thanks a lot dear?? Sorry for making u cry?

    5. Swasan on November 12, 2016 6:15 pm

      Nice…..you punish this shekar also

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:01 pm

        Thanks Swasan?

    6. maha016 on November 12, 2016 6:22 pm

      Awesome dear loved it…

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:02 pm

        Thanks a lot Maha016?

    7. ameera on November 12, 2016 6:27 pm

      it was an awesome os! short and sweet.. loved it. awesome os! keep smiling. πŸ™‚

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:03 pm

        Thank u so much Ameera??

    8. Kakali on November 12, 2016 6:39 pm

      Waaaa Mariyummmm !!! love it…
      .. m a die heart fan of sad ending !!!
      but but but if at d end my SWASAN r together…
      whether they die or alive…
      haaaa i just want them together…
      but Destiny is sooo crural naa !!
      huhhh !!!

      but i loved it… beautifully written dear !! …
      Thnk u… πŸ™‚

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:04 pm

        Thank u so much Kakali dear??

    9. rabia0032 on November 12, 2016 6:48 pm

      Its not boring but sad youuuu Killed sanskar whyyyyy nooo?????but awsome os

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:06 pm

        Thanks Rabia0032? Aww! Not me those goons killed him?

      • rabia0032 on November 12, 2016 10:33 pm

        But ypu told goons to kill him you are Killer you separat two lover veryyyy nad

      • Mariyam123 on November 13, 2016 9:05 am

        Okay baba I m the killer?

    10. mica on November 12, 2016 6:48 pm

      waaa.. you are killer.. you killed Swara’s Sanskar… huhuhuhu
      but i love it…

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:09 pm

        Nahi!! I m not killer?? Those goons killed him not me?? well thanks a lot for reading and commenting?

    11. pooja26 on November 12, 2016 7:26 pm

      u r so bad yr,,,, πŸ™ πŸ™
      my sanky is dead nooooo……..

      superb os,………
      keep writing…….

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:10 pm

        Oh, at last someone told I m bad? Well thanks for commenting?

    12. Arshaanya on November 12, 2016 7:26 pm

      Loved it…
      It was emotional
      Write more stories on swasan
      From now no more sad endings only happy wala ok…

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:14 pm

        Thanks a lot dear? Yes will write more stories with happy endings?

    13. Jannatul.Nayma09 on November 12, 2016 7:28 pm

      Nice

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:15 pm

        Thanks dear?

    14. Dharshini on November 12, 2016 7:35 pm

      Wonderful

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:16 pm

        Thanks Dharshini?

    15. myna on November 12, 2016 7:55 pm

      it was heart breaking i’m crying but amazing

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:17 pm

        Thanks Myna? Sorry for making u cry?

    16. Afra96 on November 12, 2016 8:10 pm

      Nice

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:18 pm

        Thanks a lot dear?

    17. chandu on November 12, 2016 8:21 pm

      I am crying…!! I It’s soo emotional…!!

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:21 pm

        Thanks a lot dear? Sorry for making u cry?

    18. Soujanya on November 12, 2016 8:22 pm

      Awesome… Emotional…??

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:20 pm

        Thanks a lot dear?

    19. Navi on November 12, 2016 8:36 pm

      Everthing went bt end u gave me thud.. bt i love sanskar and swara living with his love words.. brave swara.. emotional but superb maryam…

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:18 pm

        Thanks a lot dear?

    20. Zeestum2 on November 12, 2016 8:43 pm

      Nice but a sad ending made me ? ?????

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 9:47 pm

        Thanks dear? So sorry for making u cry?

    21. NDSG on November 12, 2016 8:57 pm

      U killed sanky????????? but overall it’s nice…

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 9:46 pm

        Thanks dear? Sorry for making u cry?

      • NDSG on November 12, 2016 10:07 pm

        Actually big fan.. Of sanky.. can’t digest his death… But I like the story…?

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:12 pm

        This was just my first story… More stories on the way, so in those I will pakka give u a happy ending?

      • NDSG on November 12, 2016 10:13 pm

        Okie I’m waiting???

    22. Zeestum2 on November 12, 2016 9:52 pm

      No problem ? just try to have happy endings from now on…

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:13 pm

        Yes definitely?

    23. Manjula20 on November 12, 2016 9:56 pm

      Heart touching yaar

      • Mariyam123 on November 12, 2016 10:13 pm

        Thanks Manjula20

    24. Maria on November 12, 2016 10:24 pm

      Hey princess…
      This was so awesome, amazing, I loved it very much! But yes it was really sad! But still I loved it.

      Loads of love
      Maria

      • Mariyam123 on November 13, 2016 9:03 am

        Thank u so much Maria di?

    25. haya malik on November 12, 2016 11:14 pm

      Wow….awesome… Loved the ending …the start of eternal love

      • Mariyam123 on November 13, 2016 9:02 am

        Thanks dear?

    26. deeksha on November 13, 2016 10:01 am

      Loved it dear….!!!!!!!

      • Mariyam123 on November 13, 2016 10:07 am

        Thanks a lot Deeksha?

    27. chanu on November 13, 2016 10:20 am

      Hawww..
      Mariyam!!!!!!!
      U killed my sanky!!!! Huhuhuh… bad grl.. πŸ™ πŸ™ πŸ™
      Bt I lv dis os..
      it ws soo lvly os dr..
      swasans lv is eternal! No1 cnt separate them.. nt even death. Awwww..
      I lv dat concept!! U write it soo well.. and im hpy dat swara is successful wmn nw.. πŸ™‚
      Nice os dr..
      keep writing
      bt write hpy ending and dnt kill my sanku.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
      be happy always
      β™₯β™₯β™₯

      • Mariyam123 on November 13, 2016 11:01 am

        Thank u so much dear? I didn’t kill him. Those goons did it? Next time pakka I will give happy ending?

    28. Vidhi on November 13, 2016 12:52 pm

      Wow… Loved it… Bt its too emotional dear… ?????

    29. vyshu10 on November 13, 2016 1:51 pm

      nice…aww sanky died. Plz next time give happy endings

    30. ansa on November 13, 2016 9:52 pm

      U nailed it rey !!! Sad ending πŸ™ I cried a lot but u know it is the 1st sad ending os which I like the most and I had read ur ikrs working also bcoz my sis maha api is really big fan of that drama … Wish u happy journey in swasan heavenly couple world … :-* :*

    31. tani on November 18, 2016 10:47 pm

      Wonderful

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