EK NAYI SHURUVAATH …..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHQBAAZ ff by phanikiran) Episode 1

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Hai all readers and writers… I am new writer but not a new reader. I usually reading d ff of different writers who r very talented in d writing. After reading their ffs…a little inspiration was passed from them to me….so I thought as I also start writing of an ff on dis Ishqbaaz bcz I like dis show very much. …so I am waiting to say welcome to ur comments wtever they may be…they help me in writing dis ff …and also welcomimg ur advices for its moving to another episodes. …plz….plz…if any grammatical mistakes r there plz excuse me as I am poor in both languages….so plz plz comment

…shall I continue r stop it here…after reading it….thank u.
There is no introduction …..i am just going to start its first episode….plz cooperate with me. Haan meri ye story starts after Shivaay was saved by Mahi.

Episode: 1

The pleasant blue light spreads its pleasantness throughout the room. In that room, a girl who is sleeping under a soft woolen quilt turned to another side. The bed lamps lighting focused on her face. In that lighting, her lips turned into a small curve which shows a cute smile indicating peacefulness of her mind and soul like a small baby. It was almost crossed the midnight.
At that time, her beautiful sleep disturbed by the ring tone of her phone which was kept on the side table.

She opened her eyes and looked at the wall clock which is showing time as 1:30 am with its radium digital letters.

Girl: (with an angry she picked the phone nd without seeing the display she shouted as) ‘whose the hell r u? is this the time to make a call?”
Otherside: KAALAGJNA

By hearing her name from otherside , through an old lady….her drowsyness completely vanished….she got up with a jerk nd sat in the mid of the bed by shouting as “NAANI”.

Hey readers how is dis …plz comment me …if any advices r there plz give me…waiting.

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  1. Superb start dr and who is tat lady and I guess that girl is Anika right?????

    1. Phanikiran

      thnx dr for ur warm welcome to my ff.the girl is not anika……….plz wait fr coming episodes……..
      keep reading then u may know who is she.

  2. Awesome

  3. It is
    Nice one dear

  4. Awesome start dear…..isn’t the girl anika? So much of suspense

    1. Phanikiran

      thanx dear..nd s ur guess is right …she is not annika….wait nd watch to know her identity.

  5. Kriti249

    Awesome but please longer episode

  6. Seem intersting dear…. but if she is not anika then who is she & d old lady???? Eagerly waiting 4 d suspence……

    1. Phanikiran

      thank u dears for warm welcome..stay tuned here to know d suspence..thank you

  7. Phanikiran… What an awesome start… And a very intriguing hint of suspense.!!!
    Please keep writing & also please let the episodes be a little longer… else the suspense will be difficult to handle…

    1. Phanikiran

      thank u Firooza.i will try my level best in giving long ones.

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