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Ek galti…(Twinj os)

TopsecretBy TopsecretMarch 3, 201725 Comments12 Mins Read
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Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hu
Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan maanta hu
Ek aakhri mauka de mujhe
Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan manta hu..

{A boy is seen singing. His face is seen and he is none other than Kunj. His eyes are looking moist as he is about to cry. He looks sad while there were a numerous of people who are standing and cheering for him.}

Sirf saanse hi to baaki hai
Jab teri yaad aati hai
Yaad me teri saath ye bhi chod jaati hai

{Kunj p.o.v.
I made the mistake. I only left her. She wasn’t at fault but I never tried to understand her. I know I did so bad Infact worsen her life. But still I hope I will be able to meet you for once. I want to ask forgivness from you.

As he was thinking a tear drop from his eyes…

Fb shows…

A girl and a boy getting married. They are none other than Twinj. Twinkle is seen cherishing the marriage and happiness can be seen in her eyes. While Kunj is seen Sad.

Twinkle is seen sitting on a decorated room waiting for kunj.

Kunj came and…

Kunj:Twinkle I know you’re my friend but still I don’t love you. I just love Alisha. She is my love.
Twinkle is seen heart broken. And composing herself she speaks.

Twinkle :(said twinkle stammering)  Ku..nj th..e..n wh…y y…ou had..n’t cla..ri…f.i.ed… a…ll thi..s bef….or..e mar…riag…e?

Fb ends..

Kunj is seen continuing the song. He seems to be in grief.
}

Galti to sabse hoti hai
Galti mujhse bhi ho gayi
Ab maaf bhi krde mujhe
Kyu dur itna ho gayi

Ek galti ke liye
Kyu sath chod gayi
Tu kyu muh mord gayi
Tu kyu be nishaan sa
Nishaan chod gayi tu

{
Kunj was again getting lost when he closes his eyes. A face came to her mind which is none other than Twinkle.

As he opened his eyes he found twinkle with him Holding his hands. But Twinkle is seen slowly getting away from Kunj. It was just his imagination.

A drop of tear fell from his eyes.}

Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hu
Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan manta hu
Jaan maanta hu..

Ek aakhri mauka de mujhe
Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan maanta hu
Shaan manta hu..

{
Fb shows heart broken Kunj. He is seen drinking wine. His clothes were messed and he eyes were dark red like he had cried.
Fb ends..

Kunj is seen continuing the song..
}

Socha kuch pee kar tujhe bhula dunga
Par pee kar bhi yaad aayi tu
Itni si baat par chod gayi..
Jaana hi tha to aayi kyu
Jeena mera asaan kar
Tu milke ye ehsaan kar
Yaad teri satati hai
Ab aaja baat maan kar..

Jab jab tu chali jati hai
Aisi nami chha jaati hai
Jaise gir pade ho badal mujh par
Ek aanch dil pe aa jati hai..

Jab aankhein band hoti hai
Bas tu sath hoti hai
Tere yaadon ke takiye pe
Bas raat meri soti hai, soti hai..

{
Fb continues..
Kunj is seen crying while drinking when some stops him.

S.o.: Kunj. Have you gone nuts? How much you’ll drink?
Kunj: Leave me alone Mahi. I don’t want to live. I want to die.
Mahi: Kunj stop blaming yourself. You’re not at fault. Sometimes situation made us do the things but it doesn’t mean you’re at fault.

And Mahi hugs Kunj to console her..

Move on Kunj… She said.

Fb ends
}

Tu kyu door hai yun mujhse
Tujhe chahta hu pure dil se
Sun le meri aarzoo..
Tu hi meri jaan hai
Tu hi mera jahaan hai
Tu hi hai sab kuch mera
Adhoora tere bin dil ye mera
Kyu tu samajhti nahi
Ye dil hai sirf tera..

Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hu
Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan maanta hu
Ek aakhri mauka de mujhe
Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan manta hu..
Shaan maanta hu..
Shaan maanta hu..
Jaan maanta hu..
Jaan maanta hu…

{Kunj is seen leaving the stage while his fan is seen cheering and clapping his name.
}

Next scene,

The place is dark. A girl is seen crying endlessly listening to same song. Her face isn’t shown.

Kunj is again seen. He was engrossed in his own chain of thoughts.

Again First Fb continues…
{In Kunj p.o.v.}

I was very guilty after saying her all that but what can I do I love Alisha. But instead of blaming me or asking me answers of her untold questions. Twinkle use to take care of me. I know we both use to be friends but I thought she will start hating me after all that. But no.

And the days started to pass. Once she had went out for some work.

Flash back..
Twinkle is not at home. While Kunj returned from office he found that she is not at home.

Kunj went to kitchen to boil some water as its cold. But mistakenly he stumbles and the hot water falls on his feet.

This all was noticed by Twinkle. She hurriedly runs to him and washed his feet with cold water. And took him to the room. Tension and pain can be clearly sensed in her face.

Twinkle is about to apply ointment when kunj spoke..
Kunj: Twinkle, Your nail polish will astonished. Give I will do it by myself.

Twinkle: It’s just a nail paint Kunj. (She answered with painful voice)

They shared an eyelock.

Again we are back to Kunj p.o.v.

She is so pure that anyone will easily fall for her. She doesn’t care for nail polish but I remembered once I asked Alisha to apply ointment. And she answered me to apply it by own na Kunj. You know how much difficulty it is to apply nail polish and this it will ruin it…

And like this days started to fly. I know I don’t love her but I am getting attracted towards her because of her selfless behavior.
But that day changed everything.

Fb shows..

Kunj telling harsh words to twinkle.
Kunj: Wow… Twinkle what a girl you’re. So politely you have made your place in your heart. If you wanted money then you should have tell before. Why you did all this drama?
Twinkle: Ku…..(shocked)
Kunj: Don’t you dare to speak my name from your dirty mouth… You’re cheater and I hate cheater.
Twinkle: Kunj.. Believe me I hadn’t done anything..
Kunj without listening to her hold her wrist and took him out of the house.  While twinkle was crying badly…
Kunj: Never try to show your face again to me. Get that in your mind..
Twinkle:  But Kunj where I will go?
Kunj:(without looking at her)Go to hell..
It echoes…

But after that incident when I get to know the truth that it was planned by Maya. I tried every possible ways to find her, my twinkle, my love…
But she never meets. I curse myself for not believe her, for telling her all these harsh words…
And after realizing all this i broke but Mahi consoles me. She acted like my sister.

Fb ends..

Kunj P.o.v.

I was so bad. I did wrong with her. I don’t want to live but I also don’t wanna die as a loser. Don’t know how and where she will be… I know she started hating me but I can’t even able to find her. I thought in this one year i will be able to find her. But no i never meet her till now.

I came out from my chain of thoughts when I found someone saying..

Do laafzon mein jo na ho sake bayan..
Kuch toh tha tere mere daarmiyaan..
Chah kar bhi na kar ho sake tujhse juda…
Kuch toh tha tera mere daarmiyaan….
Ek ankaha sa ehsaas hai aab bhi mujhme jawan…
Kuch toh tha tere mere daarmiyaan….
Durr rahke bhi teri yaadon ke sahare rahe zinda…
Kuch toh tha tere mere daarmiyaan…
Aaj bhi nahi miti thi tujhse dubara milne ki chah…
Kuch toh tha tere mere daarmiyaan….

Yes it was her. And her lines were just showing her true feelings. But I thought is it is true or I was again dreaming like I use to do…

Having confused I went to her but as I reached I found it to be real. Yes she is my twinkle and she is standing near me. My mind is not able to think anything but I was on cloud nine. I just hugged her so tightly and she responded back to it.
But after a few minutes I came in senses and all my doings came infront of my eyes. Tears started flowing and I broke the hug.

I can sense she is confused but I don’t want her to believe a loser person like me again. I once broke her trust and heart. So I know she deserves some one much better than me. And moreover I don’t deserves a person like her.

So having applause to my thought I spoke, ” Twinkle, I am sorry that I hugged you. I know I have lost all the rights or may be I never had any. I always cheated you. I didn’t believed you. And if it was possible please forgive me for all my mistakes. And I will send you divorce papers. You can move on in your life.

I said all this to her with a heavy heart.

But I found she started crying listening to it. When I went to her. She spoke…

Don’t even Dare…. Don’t even dare Mr. Sarna. She said consoling herself.

I was shocked to see her like that when she continued…
“What you’ve thought of yourself? Jab chaha aaya. Aur jab chaha utha kar phek diya. Jab chaha galti kiya aur jab chaha maafi maang liya. Saabit kya karna chahte ho tum? Haan..Kya saabit karna chahte ho? Ki tum mahan ho? Apne pyar ka gurbani karke yehi saabit karna chahte ho na… Kunj inn sab cheezo se kuch nahi hota agar kuch karna hi hai toh apni galti ko sahi karo…

I looks on confused at her when again she continued….

Sahi suna tumne.. Galti ka pachtawa hai toh galti ko theek karo. Usse apnao jo sirf tumse pyar karti hai sirf aaj se kal se ya uss dinn se nahi balki shuru se. Yes Kunj you’ve heard it right. I loved you, love you and will always do.. Mera pyaar inn choti choti baaton ka mohtaaz nahi hai jo kaam ho jayega. Bas thoda late ho gaya yeh janne mein lekin aab I won’t let you go… Suna tumne I will never let you go chahe tum kuch bhi bolo…. Kyunki main janti hun tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karte ho….
Janti thi mein Bahut ziddi ho tum lekin tumne meri zid kaha dekhi hai? I know aab tum yeh bologe you don’t love me and all right? Toh thik kehdo ki tumhe nahi lagta ki hum dono ek doosre ke liye bane hain, kehdo ki jab main tumse door jati hun, tum mujhe palat kar nahi dekhte, kehdo ki jab main itne dinn nahi thi tab tum koi phadk nahi pada, kehdo ki tumne mujhse miss nahi kiya, kehdo ki tum mujhse divorce lena chahte ho bas ek bar kehdo….Kunj… Bas ek bar meri aankhon me dekho aur aakhri baar kehdo ki tum mujhse pyar nahi karte…Kehdo…
(She said while tears started flowing through her eyes.)

I can’t see her crying moreover I was shocked to hear the words she said. Nothing else came in my mind as I know hugging isn’t going to work. So I kissed her on lips showing my love guilt and passion for her. She also responded back with equal passion and pain… It lasted almost for 10 minutes.

After that I found her blushing hardly staring at ground. While Her cheeks had turned crimson red. So I just made her look into my eyes with  palm.

I:- You know twinkle I love you too . I love more than my life. You know my love will stay till the time….

Twinkle:- Till the time what?

I:- Let me think na….

Twinkle: You…..

She stopped in middle as I  continued;

“You know what twinkle, I love you till the time a bunny has tail.”

Twinkle:-seriously bunny??

I:- Yes bunny because I know as long as bunny has a tail my love for you will never fail….

And we both started laughing hardly.

And lastly we both touched our head with each other…

While she speaks…

“Mohabbat bhi zindagi ki tarah hoti hai Kunj, har mod aasan nahi hota, har mod par khushi nahi milti…. Par jab hum zindagi ka saath nahi chodte to mohabbat ka saath kyon chode….”

THE END……

Hii friends.. So must be thinking who is this person that had bored you all. Right? Its me only…. Your unknown friend. Whom nobody is able to identify. Am I write that bad ? I am asking because you didn’t even remembered who I am… Actually I have also losted my memory. So I also don’t have any idea who I am? So do continue guess last time…

So guys liked it or it bored you all? Do comment…. And tell me your views. Less comment=no more os.

Bye..
Loads of love..
Unknown friend…

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Topsecret

    Unknown... Try to guess who I am?

    25 Comments

    1. Aamna_2690 on March 3, 2017 8:24 pm

      Hey!
      .
      Just a guess.. u r lover.. who wrote a ff before ‘AS LONG AS A BUNNY HAS A TAIL, MY LOVE FOR U WILL NEVER FAIL’…
      .
      Am I right??but the OS was too good??loved it ❤❤❤u wrote it fabulously ???
      .
      Do tell me.. Is my guess right?
      .
      Loads of love ??

      • kruti on March 3, 2017 9:47 pm

        No its not her….she left TU

    2. Simiyy on March 3, 2017 8:25 pm

      Hey Topsecret
      Your OS was really good
      I enjoyed it a lot so dont call it boring
      Please give a hint of who you are…

    3. Purvi128 on March 3, 2017 8:56 pm

      Yarr meri jaan meri cutie meri darling…!, that was awesome..!,!!!!,
      Tu to chaa gayi..! That was the best os..,!!
      Loved it.,! You penned down the emotions very well..!,
      U nailed it darling..,!!,
      And let me tell you I have guessed you,,!! The name which I PM you..!,,
      Okk so don’t think ki kisi ne bhi guess nahi kiya..! Me ker chuki hun samjhi..! Or kesy na karti after all you r my best friend..!,
      Love you darling

    4. Cp on March 3, 2017 9:06 pm

      You are Queen …. Aarohi….. ?? yes or noo but I am 99.9% surrre …Abb toh secret khol Doo pleasee??…..Andd haaa bore main bilkul bhi nahi huyee …App bura nahi balki bahut accha likhte hoo?? it is a fabulous piece of writing ??????
      Please don’t stop writing ?no ….
      Post nexttt soon???????
      If by chance I am wronggg?? MAAF kar deenaa??????

    5. mia12 on March 3, 2017 9:36 pm

      Lovely aka shreya my bhuggu baby m i r8….plzzz if r8 then plzz tell me yarr i missed u soooo much….n if ur lovely then ur wrong ki everyone forget u so but know i missed u coz didnt come TU coz ur xm…. N can u recognized me m ur priya di bby…Plzzz tell me na…m very rest less r8 now… N tumne koi hint bhi nai dia isliye koi shayad peh chan nai paya…plzzz dil chota mat karo…ek hint dedo shayad sab ko thora clue mill jaye… N if ur lovely or damini or adya then Jo bhi ho we all love you got it…now plzz tell plzzz..???

      • mia12 on March 3, 2017 10:01 pm

        Sry kya tu arohi hai ha lover plzz bata de mene nai read kia tha os pehle….sun ab toh muje pakka yakin sa ho gaya ki tu lover aka arohi hai.. My siyappa queen… My shyeri queen.??..Sry yrr bina read kiye cmnt kardia??. Accha sun tu toh bol rai thi ki tu kabhi nai writing karegi toh ab achanak..ok Jo bhi ho m happy yarr ki tu phirse write kar rai hai☺☺…I missed u yrr…sun again sry…
        Love you yarr..????

      • baby on March 6, 2017 1:18 am

        Noo priya it cant b aarohi or lover coz she is in 11th class….

      • baby on March 6, 2017 1:24 am

        Ohhhh topsecret plss tell everyone dat itd nt survi aarohi lover siyappa queen or jiya ani…..plss in ur nxt stry 🙂
        N ho sake toh mujhe yeh bhi batadena who r u hehhee…jst kidding bt vih toh bata hi do clear d confusion plsss…

        Well srsly dis stry was soooo touching emotional I cried alot jst luvd it ♥♡★☆♥♡★☆♥♡★☆♥♡★☆♥♡★☆♥♡♡☆♥♡★☆
        Lods of love it was beautiful adorable……..love u….topsecret. .. 🙂

      • baby on March 6, 2017 1:20 am

        Or yeh wala guess bhi galat hai voh toh abhi 10th mein aayegi shayad humse bhi chotii hai…. 🙂
        Pata nhi kon hai topsecret uhhnnuhnnmmmm…..bt m sure her name is from A B or D or C or E coz her roll no was 7 🙂

    6. Cp on March 3, 2017 9:38 pm

      Pata nahi mera commentt kyuu post anhii huaa????????????agar hua hai tohh it’s okayy….

      Btw I am suree 99.9% sure you are Queen.., Aarohi …??? …..Please abb toh reveal kar do secret koo?……And this os was a fabulous piece of writing ?? and Mai bore nahi hui and you are a amazing writer ???..Don’t stop writing?????

    7. kruti on March 3, 2017 9:48 pm

      Hey dear
      The Os was Amazing….Loved it

    8. Aashiya on March 3, 2017 10:01 pm

      This is survi di aka lover aka arohi…I’m damn sure…I never commented on any of her writings as I was silent reader…
      I remember she wrote a ff AS LONG AS A BUNNY HAS A TAIL,MY LOVE FOR U WILL NEVER FAIL….
      I hope I ain’t wrong…fingers crossed. …
      Anyways the os was fabulous. …to good …amazing….awsm…lacking words…..
      its always good to read ur stories TOP SECRET as they remind me of the awsm stories of my survi di…I know she doesn’t know me…bt I really miss her writings. ..

      Continue writing….
      Love u loads
      – Aashiya ?

    9. Sameera on March 3, 2017 10:02 pm

      Anyone could be easily guessed u dear sissy ????my lover cum arohi cum siyappa queen and now miss top secret wow soooo happy too see ur come back yaar loved the OS to the core each m every thing was perfect yaar loved it …
      Love u soo much too ?????

    10. lovey on March 3, 2017 10:13 pm

      It is very amazing
      i love it your os

    11. adeeba_zain on March 3, 2017 10:38 pm

      Now i m sure r my survi…anyways this os was amazing

    12. Sohi on March 3, 2017 11:12 pm

      Lovely

    13. Amaya Bhardwaj on March 3, 2017 11:39 pm

      Heyyy darling this is was amazing superb lovely….I loved it…Twinj were together at the end….
      I guess u are lover aka siyappa Queen….
      Tell me if I’m right….

    14. Affaa on March 3, 2017 11:40 pm

      Yaar os was outstanding…. Seriously mind blowing…. I’m confused survi is this u… Bcoz the way ur write… But I don’t… May be it’s saby

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 4, 2017 12:15 am

      Amazing awesome fabulous

    16. Ritzi on March 4, 2017 12:42 am

      1001000% sure its my lover…my arohi….missed u darlo….wht an os!

    17. Presha on March 4, 2017 1:03 am

      hey …its u survi..i think so.. plz do tell m.i right or not….
      this os is just so beautifull i loved it

    18. SidMin on March 4, 2017 1:44 am

      Loved it … Awesome… yaar why are you doing this naam he tho batana hai bol do na pls …
      Love you Keep writing ❤❤❤❤❤

    19. SidMin23 on March 4, 2017 11:18 am

      It was awesome and it arohi+ SiyappaQueen right ????

    20. Ramya on March 5, 2017 9:30 am

      Hey
      Awesome amazing Superb
      Vo bunny wala dialogue bhi na superb that
      Bada pyaara that
      I tjink u r jiya-ani
      May be ffinggercrossed
      Awesome episode
      Love u keep smiling

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