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ek duje ke vaaste reloaded (part 10)

Heres my ff previous links
https://www.tellyupdates.com/ek-duje-ke-vaaste-reloaded-part-9/

Hey I am lily. thanks all of you for your love and support..acha there’s question for you all written below…but first read the ff..i want you all to reply to it………..as it’s important for me…………….and don’t forget to tell your thoughts about this epi……….
Recap:shraman friendship…
Shravu:ohh! yaar mai bhi naa gadha hoon, sumo se uska phone number hi nahi liya…
I can do one thing, I Can go and meet her…………….
Shravu comes to tiwari house…
Sumo is gardening….
Sumo smiles seeing shravu………….
Shravu:oho ,gardening…….
Sumo:haan,I love it…aur batao,how are you?
Shravan also helps sumo in planting a plant……both smiles looking at each other…
Shravu:mai toh thik hoon,aur tum bhi thik lagti ho,toh aaj chale bahar?
Sumo:kaha?
Shravu:kahi bhi,tum batao kaha jaana chaahti ho…
Sumo:but,tum jaana chaahte ho…………..
Shravu(in anger):it means,you don’t want to come with me….
Shravu starts to leave…
Sumo:shravan!
Shravu smiles and turns………….
Sumo:shravan,one second,I want to give you something……….but you have to close your eyes….
Shravu closes his eyes …
Sumo smiles and puts mud on his face….
Shravu realises this(shouts):sumo!
Sumo starts laughing and says : shravan, itne bade hokar bhi mitti mein khelto ho!!
(acha , I am reminding you to reply to the question written below..i want you all to reply to that question)
Shravu:sumo,ab toh tu gayi…….
Sumo starts running and shravu starts chasing her……….
Shravu finally grabs her…..
Shravu pulls sumo close and sweetly smears mud on her face…
Sumo(annoyed):yeh kya shravan, maine bahot thoda sa mitti lagaya tha… aur tumne.!
Shravu: tit for tat…………vaise,I think ek picture toh banti hai..and you like taking your pic..right?
Sumo:hoh!,shravan you can’t do this…
Shravu hold his phone in hand………..and clicks her pic..
Sumo takes pipe in her hand..
Sumo: pic delete kar,nahi toh yeh paani tujh par aur tere phone dono pe jaayega…
Shravu silently takes a screenshot of that pic…and deletes the original pic infront of her…………
(smart move by shravan lol)
Shravu:lo ,delete kar diya…
Shravu places his phone at a safe place……………
Sumo throws away the pipe………….
Sumo:I am going to clean my face…………
Shravu silently takes the pipe and hides it behind him….shravan comes close to her..
Shravu:jaane ki kya jarurat hai, lo mai saaf kar deta hoon…
Shravu splashes water on her face..
Sumo(screams):shravan!
Some dirt was still left on her face..sumo’s eyes are closed due to force of the water….
He comes close and caresses her face ..he cleans the left over dirt on her face…………..
He is very close to her ……she can feels his touch ……….he directs the pipe upwards……the water is coming on both of them like rain……sumo opens her eyes and both have an eyelock…………………….
Sumo and shravan becomes conscious of their closeness and feels awkward…
Sumo closes the tap.
sumo:dekho hum gile ho gaye,ab hum bahar kaise jaayenge…saara mood spoil ho gaya…
shravan:but tumhe toh jaana nah i tha…………..
sumo:majak kar rahi thi …of course I wanted to go with you……………………
shravan smiles………..
shravan : no problem,we can still go…
sumo:aise?chalo mera toh yehi par ghar hai,I have my clothes..i can change and come. but what about you?
Shravan:no fear ,when I am here……….
Sumo:tum kya jaadugar ho! Jo ek sec mein ready ho jaoge……..
Shravan shows his extra clothes………..
Sumo:vah! Tum toh badi tayari ke saath chalte ho…..
Shravan:jab tumhaari jaisi dost ho toh karna padta hai…
Sumo hits him……shravu smiles..
They both go and change…………………and are ready to go for a drive..
Shravu:ms suman tiwari aap iss mud facial ke baad bahot chamak rahi hai…
Sumo:mr shravan malhotra ,toh aap hamesha mud facial karate hai! kyunki aap toh normal jaise dikhte the vaise hi lag rahe hai…
Shravu:tumse baato mein koi nahi jeet nahi sakta………….
Sumo(smiles):toh hum kaha jaa rahe hai……….
Shravan smiles and hums:vahi jaha koi aata jaata nahi…………………………………………………………..(it’s a song…………)
Sumo playfully hits him……………………

Precap:shraman moments.. ……………………

Hey guys actually now I have to end my ff in almost 7- 8 epis…so to proceed it I have to think what twist I have to give it in the end..
There are two options…
1.a melo dramatic one…with full of twists..but at last we will get to see full on shraman romantic scenes…………..
2.shraman spend whole night with each other ..they made a mistake unconsciously(I hope you all understand what I mean )…the story will proceed like how they will deal with it………….there will be a very big twist in it…………( you can’t even imagine it)……
So guys choose one……………………the one with higher majority will be my twist……….
Thanks for reading ………………………….
Please comment……………… don’t forget to answer this………………….

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