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Episode No: 173
Episode Date: 2nd November 2016
Scene 1: Train
The episode begins with Suman waking up as she finds that she slept resting her head on Shravan’s shoulder the entire night.
Sumo: (in her mind) I was lying down on his shoulder the entire night and he didn’t even wake me up.
Shravan wakes up and is moving his neck, due to slight pain.
Sumo: Shravan are you okay?
Shravan: Yes, yes I am fine just a bit pain. It is because of your head’s weight.
Sumo: So now all the blame is on me! You could have waked me up.
Shravan: Look I am not in mood to fight with you.
Sumo: Yes, yes all the blame is on me.
Shravan: You are just impossible.
Sumo: Who told you not to wake me up when I was sleeping?
Shravan is silent.
Sumo: Say, say.
Shravan: Good I didn’t wake you up, if not I would have been forced to listen to your nonsense whole night!
Sumo: You could have read another book.
Shravan: Why are we even fighting?
Sumo: Right. Anyways let’s play board games.
Later,
Suman and Shravan play board games in the train, and Suman realises that they are nearby.
Sumo: Shravan, we are going to reach Goa very soon.
Shravan: Is it?
Later, after they finish playing the game, by then they reach Goa.
Scene 2: Goa Station
After alighting to Goa,
Shravan: Finally, after a very very long journey we are finally at Goa.
Sumo: So how was the journey by train?
Shravan: Oh god, I will never forget that. Thank god we are returning by flight.
Sumo: I don’t care what you say, but I enjoyed a lot.
Shravan: Okay, okay let’s continue walking.
Scene 3: Goa
They are walking, and then they see beaches and they smile.
Sumo: Wow Goa, is much more beautiful than I expected.
Shravan: You never came here?
Sumo: What to do, after all I promised you 10 years back, that I won’t go Goa without you?
Music plays and they look at each other.
Sumo: I feel like dipping my legs into the water.
Suman is about to go,
Shravan: Sumo, we just came from a very long journey. I don’t know about you, but I am really very tired. Let’s take rest and we are here for 3-4 days anyways.
Sumo: Okay fine, let’s go.
They go to the hotel to take rest.
Scene 4: Restaurant
Here Ramnath comes to restaurant.
Ramnath: I wonder where she is.
Ramnath looks at the watch.
Kamini is shopping with Vandy is a nearby mall where the restaurant is.
Vandy: Mummyji, you check out sarees while I check out some dress.
They go to different shops.
Kamini sees Ramnath and gets surprised.
Kamini: What is Ramnath Bhaisaab doing here? Let me find this out.
Kamini goes to the restaurant and as she was about to call him,
Kamini: Ramnath Bhaisa..
Kamini is surprised as she finds Nirmala coming to the restaurant.
Kamini: Nirmala Bhabi?
Kamini sits at another table and make sure they don’t see here.
Ramnath and Nirmala sit down.
Nirmala: Ram, you know very well I came here only on Suman’s request.
Ramnath: Thank you so much Nirmala for coming here. I just needed to talk to you.
Nirmala: What do you want to say?
Ramnath: Nirmala, please come back home.
Nirmala: You just said like that and I will come back?
Ramnath: I am sorry. I am sorry for what I did 10 years back with you!
Nirmala: 10 years! It took you 10 years to realise your mistake!
Ramnath nods.
Ramnath: Yes. As I said, I shouldn’t have done so, but Suman, she made me realise, that it’s not necessary that an independent woman will break a house, in fact they can build a house, and also she taught me that one can manage home and family at the same time. I wish I got to realise this earlier it is entirely my fault.
Nirmala: As for Suman, I am very proud that my Shravan got a wife like Suman, but what he did was it right?
Ramnath gets surprised.
Ramnath: What did Shravan did?
Nirmala: Your son is like you. He insulted Suman and do you even have any idea what he told Aditya?
Nirmala tells him and Ramnath gets stunned.
Kamini is stunned as she listens to the entire conversation.
Ramnath: Shravan did like this? Really I have spoiled my son. I have failed as a father, but Nirmala you are his mother, please comeback for him.
Nirmala: Does Shravan know about all these?
Ramnath nods no.
Nirmala: If you are really feeling sorry, why don’t you go and tell Shravan all the truth? And I know my son. He blindly trusts you and no one else. It is impossible that he will believe me. Can you tell him the truth?
Ramnath is silent.
Nirmala: Why are you silent? I think I got the answer. I knew it.
Nirmala gets up.
Nirmala: I think I should leave now. I just came here to tell you that I am going back Mumbai forever with Aditya tomorrow. Tomorrow 12pm is my flight.
Ramnath is shocked. Kamini smirks.
And as Nirmala is about to go,
Nirmala: And as for Suman don’t worry I will manage her, and she will understand. Shravan will never know about all these, because I can’t spoil my son and daughter-in-law’s life, after so many days I saw a smile on my son’s face on his wedding.
Nirmala leaves. Ramnath gets thinking. Kamini quickly goes away from there.
Vandy: Mummy ji, where were you? I couldn’t find you.
Kamini: I was just roaming around. I didn’t like any saree, now let’s go back home.
Vandy: But..
Kamini and Vandy goes back home.
Kamini: (in her mind) Now very soon, the fun will begin.
At night,
Scene 5: Goa
Shravan and Suman go downstairs.
Shravan: Now let’s go and have dinner.
Sumo: Shravan, I don’t want to eat in a restaurant. I am not hungry.
Shravan: Then?
Sumo: I want to dip my legs in the shores and eat corn. I hope you are fine with?
Shravan: Sumo, seriously?
Sumo: Yeah, if you want to eat in restaurant, you can eat there; I will come back to the hotel soon.
Shravan: I would love to, but I can’t leave you alone also. What if you get lost?
Sumo: Shravan, I won’t.
Shravan: Never mind, for now we will have corn and then if we are hungry then I will order food in the room.
Sumo: That’s better.
Scene 6: Beach
Suman and Shravan are in the beach, and they look at the sky, and are eating corn.
Sumo: There are so many stars on the sky. This view is so pretty.
Shravan: Hmm.
Sumo: Shravan, you know for a long time, I have always dreamt of dipping my legs in the water shores of Goa and then lovingly stare at the sky, with the love of my life.
Shravan looks at Suman, and Suman realizes what she said. Title track Music plays.
Sumo: Anyways, where was I? Oh yes, thank you so much for bringing me here in Goa.
Shravan: It was you who wanted to come here.
Sumo: So you came here just for me?
Shravan: At least that brought a smile on your face.
They look at each other smiling and then Suman takes her phone.
Sumo: Come, let’s take a picture, and then let me send it to Preeti if not she will complain that we didn’t take any picture.
Suman and Shravan take a selfie.
Sumo: You are very tall, do one thing you take selfie for us.
Shravan takes the phone, and they take a selfie.
Shravan: Here it is.
Suman smile as she sees the picture.
Sumo: Not bad.
Suman and Shravan are talking with each other. Suman smiles as she looks at the sky, Shravan smiles looking at her and then he gets into a flashback,
Scene 7: Tiwari Residence
Teenager Suman and Shravan are looking at the sky,
Shravan: Such a nice view, right Sumo.
Sumo: Yes completely right!
Suman is looking for something very carefully, Shravan realises this.
Shravan: Sumo what are you looking for?
Sumo: A shooting star.
Shravan: Shooting star?
Sumo: Yes, it is said that if one looks at the shooting star and closes his/her eyes and makes a wish by saying it three times, their wish gets fulfilled.
Shravan: From when did you believe in all this rumours?
Sumo: It is not a rumour, it’s true.
Shravan: Okay fine I admit it is true. Then what will you do if you really get a shooting star? You will make wish and say three times. Do you even have any idea how fast passes by?
Sumo: Areh Buddhu, at least we can try for it.
Suman is looking at the star for the long time, and still searching for a shooting star.
Shravan: Sumo, it is rare for a shooting star to pass by, so I will say that there is no use of sitting here and wasting your time.
Sumo: You do what you want, you can leave. I will sit here.
Shravan: Sumo, why are you so stubborn?
Sumo: This is how I am.
Shravan: She will not agree like this.
Just then Shravan gets an idea and he smiles,
Shravan: I heard that Nanu was telling Mamaji to order pizza for tonight’s dinner.
Sumo’s mouth starts to water.
Shravan: Never mind, I will tell them that Sumo is busy, I will have the pizza on behalf on her.
Shravan is about to go, Suman stops him.
Sumo: You won’t go anywhere without me?
Just then Nanu comes,
Sumo: Nanu when is the pizza coming?
Nanu: Pizza, what Pizza?
Sumo: You told Mamaji to order Pizza right?
Nanu: No I didn’t.
Sumo: Oh is it?
Nanu: And yes, no one will eat Pizza, it is very unhealthy.
Sumo: But Shravan told me…
Shravan fears a bit as Suman looks at him,
Sumo: Shravan, Chasmish I won’t spare you.
Shravan hides behind Nanu.
Shravan: You should thank me that I saved you from wasting your time on useless shooting stars.
Sumo: See, what I do!
Nanu: What happened?
Suman chases Shravan and he runs around the room.
Nanu: Relax, both of you!
They don’t listen and continues.
Scene 8: Beach
Shravan gets out of the flashback and smiles.
Shravan: Sumo, you remember?
Shravan finds tears in Suman’s eyes as she is crying. Shravan pats Suman’s shoulder.
Shravan: What happened? Why are you crying?
Sumo: No, no I am not crying.
Shravan: You can’t hide your tears from me.
Sumo: Shravan, it has been so many years. 10 years ago we were teenagers that time, and now we are married. And things have changed so much drastically over these years. But these stars will always make an effort to be seen in the sky.
Shravan looks upstairs.
Sumo: As a kid, after my parents left I always used to find condolence whenever I wanted to talk to them, I will always talk to the stars and assume any of them to be my parents. As I was told that my parents were now stars on the sky. Even today, I feel maybe, maybe any of these stars may be my parents. I don’t know why today I am missing my Mummy-Papa so much.
Suman starts crying, and she rests her head on Shravan’s chest. Music plays. Later she moves away.
Sumo: I wish I was with them.
Shravan closes her mouth with his hand. EDKV title track music plays.
Shravan: Don’t say like this. Say you wish they were with you.
Shravan removes his hand from her mouth. Suman is still crying.
Shravan wipes her tears.
Shravan: Don’t cry, do you think your parents will like it if they were here?
Suman nods no.
Shravan: Then smile,
Shravan makes her smile, she tries to smile,
Shravan: If not I will tickle you,
Shravan is about to tickle her and she smiles.
Shravan: This is it!
Suman finally smiles.
Shravan: (in his mind) Sumo, you look so nice when you smile. I promise I will always try to make sure these tears won’t fall from your eyes so easily. I can’t see you in pain.
Shravan: I am bored now. Just sitting down is so boring. Let’s have a stroll.
Shravan gets up, and makes Suman get up, and they go for a stroll. The episode ends.
Precap: Suman and Shravan are in western get up. Shravan is stunned to see Suman in western getup. Later, they have fun where Shravan falls over Suman and they share an eyelock.
Hey all, sorry for the late update yesterday once again and ya some mistakes also ? actually I came from job yesterday and on TOP of that was busy so couldn’t even edit the episode properly ???and I tried to update earlier today. But tomorrow and day after tomorrow, I will possibly publish the episode earlier cause I don’t have a shift before Saturday this week. And yeah as for my job , my second day of job was so much better but yeah still a bit tiring. And yeah, actually I am enjoying writing this ff a lot and probably this is the longest ff I wrote so far ? if not I end my ff within 20 episodes, but since I miss EDKV like anything I am writing more episodes than usual , but yeah the sole and main purpose of this fan fiction will still be giving the story a proper ending. Hope you all will love the upcoming episodes too. Keep supporting me like this ?. Love u all ??? And yes u can always feel free to criticise my ff ???